Messy Circle of Love Part 1&2 *COMPLETE*

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
Hi falada i admire u alot! ure so discipline n have alot of drive, trying so many different tasks n all turn up so well!!! So proud of u im n i have a v soft spot 4 u!!! Writing yadech ff 4 our njoyment n wif v good story da least i can do is give u my love n support!!! Peronally ure a v sweet well-mannered but firm girl, these r v good qualities n will bring u far n success! O
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Thanks, I also admire you, a lot, too. You're always so kind, and I love all of your comments. :D I always smile when I read your comments, especially about me and Yadech. You're a very good friend(Can I also call you sister?) to me. I couldn't like all your nice comments, since I always run out of the like thing. But yeah, just want to tell you that I like everything about you, too. :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
Thank u 4 yr kind words, its my pleasure 2 b a siz 2 u!!! If only i was near u ill meet up, hug n tlc u always! ull always hv a special place in my heart just like wat nangfah told siachon!!! Whenever i type a reply 2 u im calm n smiling! I hope i dun overdo my cmns 2 make u feel cheezy or yucks!!!
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Your welcome. LOL I would do the same things, too. And yes, you'll always have a special place in my heart, too. :D Me, too. I like writing to you.  And no you're not overdoing anything. LOL I thought I was the one who is doing that. But yeah. :D
 

vorleak

sarNie Hatchling
Thanks falada :),,, this chapter so sweet, I like nadech he treat yaya very well. But u make me scare abt Kim, anyway pls don't let nadech hard yaya Na
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
@Key LOL yeah. A big thanks go to Yadech
 
@Vorlek your welcome. Nadech doesn't hurt anyone purposely or phyiscaly. But I'll try my best. All are going to get hurt. :D
 

Xiongurl26

sarNie Oldmaid
Lol Falada! I am a silent reader but when I saw your post about the questions I just had to comment. I mean I wonder the same thing about Nadech's Parents. They drive me crazy! Lol everytime i read about his parents I just want to hit something. (Not literally). I also wonder about James and Chalida too because I just feel like there's a BIG mystery or should I say answer to why James is like that towards Chalida. And i was so anxious when Boy told Marie to come with him to the wedding too and take Kim with her if she wanted. I was scared that they were actually going to go with him!! But *whew* they didnt. But dont Falada I always question about alot of things when I read this Amazing FanFic of yours! Keep updating us readers because the more I wonder the more I want too read and find answers to my questions!! Sorry if this was long but i just wanted to amswer your question too! Haha <3
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Thanks. LOL me, too. Whenever I read a FF, I have lots of questions to ask. And yes, even though some characters seem rough, deep inside them, they still have some kindness.
And yes the reason why Marie and Kim didn't go is because Nadech. Kim wanted to impress Nadech, when she goes back, and Marie wants to give her support.
And about Nadech's parents, you'll just have to wait and see. :D
 
It's ok. I like long comments. They keep me accompany. :D
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 13
"Today, you look the most beautiful-est," say Nadech, kissing Yaya on the forehead
"Thanks," say Yaya, looking at the mirror at both of their faces.
"Here," say Nadech, putting a necklace on Yaya
Yaya stare at the necklace, and thank him again.
They both stand there, Yaya in Nadech's arms, and stare at themselves in the mirror for a very long time before returning to the wedding.
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"Have a wonderful night together," say Margie
"Margie," say Yaya
"Well, congratulations," say Boy
"Thanks," say Nadech and Yaya
"I want you to be happy today, since today is a good day for you. I'll get going now," say Tah to Yaya. Than he went to his car.
"Well, I'll get going," say Margie, and Boy repeat what she say.
Margie and Boy left.
Margie walk to the parking lot, and remember that somebody told her that her parents have left early to go do some buisness. She won't have a ride. Boy saw Margie talking to herself, so he went over and talk to Margie.
"Do you need a ride?" ask Boy
"No," say Margie
"Come on, we're friends," say Boy
"How are we even friends?" say Margie, with her hands cross
"Well, your friend and my friend got marry, so that makes, us, friends," say Boy
"I'm not your friend," say Margie
"OK, whatever, let's go," say Boy, dragging Margie to his car
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After all the guest left, Nadech and Yaya got into their car, and Nadech drove them to their new house. They arrive, and Nadech open the door for Yaya. They both went inside. The house was cold and silent. Nadech turn on the lights, and lead Yaya to their room. 
"You can a shower first," say Yaya
"It's ok, you can go first," say Nadech
"No, you," say Yaya
"Than let just sleep," say Nadech, as he sat ob the bed, and pull Yaya on top of him
"Nadech, don't do this," say Yaya, getting off
"Why? We're married," say Nadech
"Not now," say Yaya
"Come on don't be shy," say Nadech, pulling her on him again
They stare at each other's eye, and than Nadech give her a kiss on the mouth.
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"Why are you leaving?" ask Mark's oldest brother
"I want to go and search for a job," say Mark
"Why?" ask Mark's second oldest brother
"Because, I don't want to like a life full of laziness like this anymore," say Mark, getting up, and taking his suitcase with him.
"Than we won't stop you. Good luck, little brother," say his two brothers
"Thanks," say Mark
Mark got out of the house, and got into his car. He didn't know what or why he wants to go away, but he really wants to take a break from everything.
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Chailda pick up her phone. She have 20 miss calls from Natwara. She called Natwara back.
"Hello, Chailda?" say Natwara
"Hello, it's me," say Chailda
"Oh Chailda, are you ok? I'm sorry that I say all of those things to you," say Natwara
"It's ok, I'm not mad," say Chailda
"That's good. Do you want to go shopping with me, today?" ask Natwara
"Sure," say Chailda
"Ok, than. Oh, and you can also ask James to come along if he can" say Natwara
"Yes, thanks, Natwara" say Chailda
"Yes," say Natwara smiling on the other end.
They both hung up, and Natwara call one of James ex-girlfriends.
"Hello," say Natwara
"Hello," say Sandy, James ex-girlfriend
"I have something for you to do," say Natwara
"What is it?" ask Sandy
"I want you to take James to the mall, and make him do all the romantic things with you, I want to open up my friend's eye," say Natwara
"Yes," say Sandy
"Thanks," say Natwara, as she hung up
"This time, you're dead meat, James," say Natwara, smiling evilly to herself
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"Hello, James?" say Chailda
"Yes," say James
"Me and Natwara are going shopping, today, are you free?" ask Chailda
"Yes," say James
"Ok, than me, and Natwara will come pick you up," say Chailda
"No need, I'll wait for you guys there," say James
"Yes," say Chailda
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"Today is such a beautiful day, right," say Kim
"Yes," say Marie
"You seem happier today," say Kim, smiling 
"It's because I have a good feeling today," say Marie
"That's good," say Kim
"Kim, how many years do we need to stay here?" ask Marie
"Just only 3 more years," say Kim
"That seem so long," say Marie
"Yes, but we have stay here for 2 years already. I know that we will survive 3 more years," say Kim
"I don't know, but what if everything was too late," say Marie
"What do you mean?" ask Kim
"Do you remember, you told me that you have been having bad dreams," say Marie
"Yes. What about it?" ask Kim
"I feel that something is wrong. And that something is going to turn out wrong," say Marie
"No. It's just in your mind. Don't think too much, ok," say Kim
"Yes," say Marie, staring at the sky. Kim look at her hands. She's also getting nervous about everything.
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"Hello," say Nadech
"Hello," say Yaya, as she went back to the kitchen to go get the other foods for breakfast.
"You wake up so early," say Nadech
"Of course, I have too. A wife have to do her duty, and waking up early to cook is one of them," say Yaya
Nadech walk over to her, and hug her from behind.
"Thanks, for being a good wife to me," say Nadech
"It's ok. I always want to be a good wife," say Yaya
"Well, you're the most sweetest one," say Nadech
"Yes. Come on let's eat," say Yaya
"Yes," say Nadech, as he pull the chair for Yaya to sit. Than he sat down on his own chair.
"Feed me, ok," say Nadech
"You're not a baby anymore," say Yaya
"Please come on," say Nadech
"Fine," say Yaya. She carefully feed Nadech.
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"Mom, I'll be going back tomorrow," say Boy
"Why so early?" ask his mother
"Because I want to study more," say Boy
"Really?! But there's someone I wanted you to meet," say his mother
"Who?" ask Boy
"Her name is Margie Rasri," say his mother
"Huh?!" say Boy, the name sound so familair to him
Madame Rasri and I have decided to let you and her daughter meet. And if you guys like each other, we agree to have you guys get engaged," say his mother
"What?! Oh, come on, mom. You know I don't like arrange marriages," say Boy
"But I know that you'll like Margie. She's a sweet girl. When you were gone, she always come visit me, and help accompany me," say his mother happily
"No. Look, mom, I already have a girlfriend," say Boy, trying his hardest to make his mother understand.
"So?! If she loves you, she'll understand," say his mother
"No, I can't," say Boy
"Fine, if you consider that your girlfriend is more important, than go, go away. I'll think that my wonderful son that I love very much have died," say his mother angryily, walking away
"Mom," say Boy
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"You ready?" ask Natwara
"Yes," say Chailda
Natwara back out, and head for the mall.
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James was sitting at a restaurant waiting for them. Than his phone rang. It was Sandy.
"Hello, Sandy," say James
"Yes, James, I need your help," say Sandy, pretending to make crying noise
"What's wrong?" ask James
"My boyfriend dump me. I'm so sad right now, please come," say Sandy
"Where are you?" ask James
"I'm in the mall," say Sandy, James look around, and spotted Sandy.
"Ok, I'll be right there," say James, hanging up.
He called Chailda.
"Hello, Chailda, there's an urgent meeting, so I can't come, I'm sorry," say James
"What?! It's ok," say Chailda, sadly
"OK, bye," say James, hanging up, before Chailda can even say good bye to him.
Natwara look over at Chailda.
"What happen?" ask Natwara
"James can't go," say Chailda
"It's ok, you still have me," say Natwara
"Thanks," say Chailda with a weak smile
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Dear Journal,
               Today's the third day that I have been away. Away from everything. I miss everyone, and everything so much. I want to go back. But I want to go meet my destiny, so have to keep moving on. 
Noona re-read that part of her journal over again. She really wanted to go back. She miss Bie, and Mark. Even though Mark reject her, she wasn't mad. She was happy, and know that go through him.
She smile to herself. She was proud, but at the same time very unhappy.
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"What?! You and dad are sending me to go live with aunt and uncle?!" say Sara
"Yes," say her mother
"Why? I don't want to go. I want too stay here with you and dad," say Sara
"No, you must go," say her dad
"Why?" ask Sara
"Because I want you to go. It's much safer there than here," say Sara
"No I won't go," say Sara
"Yes, you are," say her father
"No!" say Sara, as she stormed off into her room
Her parents stare after her.
"This child. She needs to understand sometimes," say her father
"Yes. Maybe we spoiled her a little bit too much," say her mother
"But no matter what, she must go," say her father
"Yes," say her mother
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Bie sat alone in his room. He didn't want to do anything. He was so mad at himself for not being manly enough to tell Noona his feelings. And now that she isn't here, everything becomes meaningless to him. He wants to see Noona again. Just once more will be ok for him. He hug himself to sleep like when he was little.
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Natwara and Chailda walk into the mall.
"What do you want to do first?" ask Natwara
"Let's do some clothes shopping," say Chailda
"Yes," say Natwara
They walk into a clothes shop, and Natwara look around for James and Sandy. 
They shop for a while until Natwara finally spotted James and Sandy. And Sandy was doing exactly what she have wanted.
"Hey, Chailda, let's go over there," say Natwara, as she point to the shop where James and Sandy are.
"Yes," say Chailda, as she turn around and follow Natwara. They in the shop, and when Chailda saw Sandy hugging James, her heart drop. Natwara saw her face, and decided to speak up.
"It's such a coincidental to meet each other here," say Natwara
James turn around and see Chailda and Natwara.
"Chailda," say James
"This?! This is your urgent meeting," say Chailda, crying
"Chailda, it's not like that," say James
"You don't need to lie anymore, I know everything now, you're the person who wants to ruin my life," say Chailda. Than she run away.
"Good job today," say Natwara, clapping, as she turn around and follow Chailda
"You!" say James, as he stare after Natwara
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ENJOY! :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
hi falada, tyvm ! everybodys character is moving fast in chap13 ! nadech is such a darling 2 his wife n yaya such a sweet wife ! looking forward 2 b-margies meet, will be so fun, shes louder than him ! poor chailda-j, she got played by her so called friend ! n is mature in tots n s is in pic now ! looking forward 2 read more my dear falada ! this is such a v interesting story i love it ! wif much appreciation !!!
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
LOL Your welcome and thanks, key. Glad you like it. :D
 

vorleak

sarNie Hatchling
Three more year to go, so during that time nadech and yaya will have little baby lol,,,
Thank you falada mak mak mak
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
LOL I will, and I have too, anyway, since Part 1 is almost ending. :D
 
Notes:
 
*I'm skipping the 3 years of Nadech and Yaya's marriage, since I also want that to be a mystery. (Sorry)
 
*And the beginning of Part 2 might be a little confusing, but, as it goes on, you guys will get everything. :D
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 14
"It's ok, Chailda," say Natwara
"Natwara, I ,I,I'm sorry for not believing in your words," say Chailda
"It's ok. We're friends right?! Friends help friends," say Natwara
"Yes," say Chailda
"From now on, don't trust that guy anymore, ok," say Natwara
"Yes," say Chailda
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"Good morning, my daughter-in-law," say Nadech's mother as she enter Yaya's shop
"Good morning," say Yaya
"Get something for me to eat," say Nadech's mother
"Yes," say Yaya, walking to her kitchen place
She got some desserts, and walk back, and put it on table for her.
Nadech mother ate one. She loved the flavors. And wanted to eat more, but that was not what she have come for.
"Here are the papers of expections from me and Nadech's father. In order to make you a good daughter-in-law, you need to read through these papers, and remorize what we like and dislike," say Nadech's mother
"Yes," say Yaya, accepting the papers
"I'll go now," say Nadech's mother
"Good bye, have a safe drive," say Yaya
Yaya look at the pages. There were so much pages, and they letters were so small. But she is willing to do it for Nadech.
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"Chailda," say James, pounding on her door
Chailda ignore, and put her hands to her ears. She didn't want to see him or talk with him.
"Chailda, open the door. It's a misunderstanding," say James
"No, go away. I don't want to talk," say Chailda
"Please, listen to me. Natwara set me up. She's jealous of our relationship, she wants us to break apart. I have edvinene," say James
"I don't care," say Chailda
"But you have to listen," say James, opening the door
"No!" say Chailda
"Yes," say James, pulling Sandy in the room
Chailda stand up and stare at them. 
"I'm back," say Natwara as she open the door. Everyone stare at her.
"Sandy, tell us the truth right now!" say James
"Yes," say Sandy
"Why are you guys here? You already hurt my friend enough," say Natwara
"Well, you, too," say James
"What's going on?" ask Chailda, confuse
"Natwara wants us to break up, and by doing that she hire Sandy to make you think that I'm cheating on you," say James
"That's not true," say Natwara
"Is it true?!" say Chailda, staring at Natwara
"Yes, it's true. Natwara hire me to destroy James and your love life," say Sandy
"Chailda. I did it out of good intentions," say Natwara
"Like this?! It's not out of good intentions. You know that I love James, and you still do this," say Chailda
"Chailda," say Natwara
"Get out," say Chailda
Natwara and Sandy got out. James walk to Chailda and hold one of her hand.
"Chailda, in the past I was like that, but know I'm not. Please believe me. I never make you sad again," say James
Chailda remain silent. She still couldn't take anyone's sides.
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"My cousin is coming here to stay," say Nadech
"Is your cousin a boy or girl?" ask Yaya
"A girl," say Nadech
"Where will she stay?" ask Yaya
"With us. May you go get a room ready for her," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
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"Please, Sara, go," say Sara's mother
"No," say Sara
"Are you going to go nicely or do you want us to force," say her father
"Either way, I'm not going," say Sara
"You, say it nicer," say her mother to her father
"Than you can go ahead and talk with her. I have no patients for such," say his father, leaving the room
"Sara, my child, listen to me. Your father and I owe a lot of money to other companies. We don't know when they'll attack us. But your father and I love you very much, we don't want you to get hurt like us," say her mother
"But, mother, I'm willing. I only have you and dad. If I lose you guys what will I do?" say Sara
"No, you still have your uncle, aunt, and cousin. They are willing to help," say her mother
"But, I don't know them. I don't even know if they'll like me or not," say Sara
"But you have to give it a try. My daughter is strong. She'll fight her way through. Promise me that you'll go, ok," say her mother
Her mother's words touch her so much, she didn't want to make her unhappy.
"Yes, mother," say Sara
"That's my girl," say her mother
Sara smile and hug her mother.
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Mark want to go visit all the places that he, Noona, and Bie use to love so much. He still could picture all of them being there again, and he still haven't forgotten. He couldn't believe that in a flash, they have all separate to go their ways. He walk around the place, and touch everything that they have touched.
On the way back, he stop at Yaya's Sweet Shop. He wanted to go buy some sweets.
"Hello, welcome," say Yaya to her constumer
"Hello, may I have some chocolates," say Mark
"Yes," say Yaya, as she went to go get the chocolates for him
"Thanks," say Mark as he got his stuffs
"Your welcome. Please come again," say Yaya
Mark smile, and walk out of the shop. That was the first time that he have ever smile since Noona left. He really like Yaya.
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Natwara called James.
"I have something to talk to you," say Natwara
"About?" ask James
"About our matter," say Natwara
"I don't have anything to talk to you about it, since I was the winner," say James
"So?!" say Natwara
"Ok, ok, where do you want to meet?" ask James
"Our old spot," say Natwara hanging up.
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James got into his car, and drove out. Chailda was on her way to James condo, and saw him drive out. She follow him.
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James got there, and went to go find Natwara. He spotted Natwara sitting down, looking over at a photo ablum. James walk over to her. Chailda was following, and she hide somewhere nearby. She wants to know what her friend and boyfriend was up to.
"What is it?" ask James
"Do you remember our first day?" ask Natwara, her eyes still glue on the picture of her and James when they first met.
"Hurry up, and say what you want to say," say James
"Those were some good old days," say Natwara
"Yes, it was indeed," say James, looking at the picture.
"Remember that day, the day you and me broke up," say Natwara
"Yes, you hurted me so much, I still haven't forgotten," say James
"I'm sorry," say Natwara
"Sorry is just a word, it's meaningless to me," say James
"Do you remember what we promise?" ask Natwara
"Yes, that we'll destroy each other's life no matter what it takes," say James
"And how many people have we hurted?" ask Natwara
"1, and that's Chailda," say James
"Chailda was a good bait," say Natwara
"Yes, indeed," say James
Chailda couldn't believe what she's hearing. The two people that she have love have just stab her in the back. It hurts so much. She started to cry, and decided to leave. Natwara and James heard footsteps. James saw that it was her, and he ran over to stop her.
"Chailda," say James
Natwara also got up, and walk to them.
"Chailda," say Natwara
"Don't say my name. You guys have already got what you guys wanted right?! Hurting other people for your revenge," say Chailda
"Chailda, it was not like that," say James
"Than how is it than?" ask Chailda
"Chailda, listen, we're sorry," say Natwara
"You're sorry?! If you know that you're sorry than you should have never ever done this!" say Chailda
"No, Chailda," say James
"Chailda don't you remember that time I hired Sandy. It's because I want you to hate James, so that he won't get to hurt you, and the revenge will stop," say Natwara
"No, that's not true. You just want to win over James. You and James are just the same, not different. You guys are selfish, very selfish, and selfish enough to hurt an innocent person," say Chailda
"No," say James and Natwara
"You guys can leave my life now," say Chailda, walking away
Natwara and James stand there, speechless.
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"Sara is going to arrive today, but I can't go pick her up, can you?" ask Nadech
"No, I'm busy with the constumers," say Yaya
"What about Margie?" ask Nadech
"She's busy, and Boy?" ask Yaya
"He, too," say Nadech
"Than what about my brother, Tah," say Yaya
"Yes," say Nadech
"But how does she look like," say Yaya
"Here," say Nadech as he handed Yaya a picture of Sara. Yaya studied the picture.
"She's very beautiful," say Yaya
"Yes," say Nadech
"Ok, than I'll go ask Tah," say Yaya
"Yes," say Nadech
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Yaya left, and went back to her house. 
"Tah," say Yaya
"Yes," say Tah
"I have a favor to ask you," say Yaya
"What is it?" ask Tah
"Nadech's cousin, Sara, is coming to visit us, and me and him are too busy to go pick her up. Do you mind?" ask Yaya
"Why do you keeping on doing what he wants?" ask Tah
"Because I want to fit in," say Yaya
"I know, but you don't have to do every favors," say Tah
"Please Tah," say Yaya
"Fine," say Tah
Yaya handed Tah the picture and tell him the details.
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"Good bye," say Sara to her parents
"Good bye. Don't cause trouble and be good, ok," say her parents
"Yes," say Sara
Than Sara took her leave. She board the airplane, and look down. 
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Tah got to the airport, and waited. He pull out the picture  and look around.
Sara was also walking around the airport looking for the person that was send to get her. 
Tah spotted Sara and walk over to her, and grab her suitcases. 
"Hey, where are you taking my stuffs?" ask Sara
"Home," say Tah
"Help. Help. Someone is stealing my stuffs," say Sara
Tah walk back and stop her.
"Hey, stop. Your cousin Nadech send me to come get you," say Tah
Sara stop screaming and look at Tah.
"Oh, so you're the servant that my cousin send. Just this, and you're already bad. I'm going to tell me cousin to fired you," say Sara
"Hey, I'm not a servant. And I would never be a servant for such a person like your cousin," say Tah
"My cousin wouldn't even want you, too. Ok, since you're here, carry all my stuffs," say Sara, as she handed all her stuffs to Tah. 
"Hey, you. You need to help, too," say Tah
"No. You have to carry them by yourself," say Sara, walking away
Tah try to carry all the stuffs, but some keep on dropping.
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They got to the car, and Sara look at her stuffs.
"Hey, where's my other suitcase?" ask Sara
"You didn't help, and couldn't carry anymore, so I left it there. If you want it, go get it youself," say Tah
"Hey you. Go get it," say Sara
"No," say Tah
Sara push and pull Tah, but she couldn't, so she went back and got the suitcase herself.
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Enjoy! :D
 
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