Messy Circle of Love Part 1&2 *COMPLETE*

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
Hi falada lots of c-j-n, v difficult 4 j 2 win c back, he hasnt been straight forward wif c! She loves him 2 much but its da last straw now! Yayas mil is testing her but i think she'll pass, mil alr like her baking skills/food! Wif her calm character it wouldnt b difficult 2 slowly warm up 2 her! s-t: shes such a brat! She meets her match, he doesnt give a damn abt her atm! I dun know abt mark! TYSM falada ! Every day i read yr update im so full of appreciation, u r so dedicated! HAK
 

bobby101

sarNie Egg
Falada, love your FF and thank you for sharing. Oh I can't wait to see how messy it going to be, great story! Wonderful what's going happen when Kim and Nadech meet again, hope he does not have a change of heart. :(
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
hi bobby i'll join u n cry if nadech had a change of heart if he reunites wif k....our poor yaya !!! absolutely love mcol so much, our falada is doing a wonderful job wif her story writing skills, gotta love her 4 tat !!!
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 15
"We're here," say Tah
Sara look at the house. It was very pretty. She got out of the car, and went inside. Tah got two of her suitcases, and follow her. 
He took the suitcases to her room.
"Hey, where is everyone?" ask Sara
"They're not home," say Tah
"Why?" ask Sara
"Probably they don't want to meet you," say Tah
"Hey, I'm not that hateable," say Sara
"Whatever," say Tah, walking out
"Hey, where are you going to?" ask Sara
"Home," say Tah
"You don't live here," say Sara
"No, I don't even want to live here," say Tah
"Why? You must have hate my cousin a lot," say Sara
"That's right," say Tah
"Why?" ask Sara
"Hey, stop asking questions," say Tah
Nadech came back, and went inside the house.
"Hello, Sara," say Nadech
"Hello, p'Nadech," say Sara
"Hello, Tah," say Nadech
"Hello," say Tah
"Thank you for getting Sara," say Nadech
"Don't need to thank me. If Yaya didn't ask I wouldn't even do it," say Tah,
"Aren't you going to stay for dinner?" ask Nadech
"No," say Tah, as he walk out
"Who is he? And why do he hate you?" ask Sara
"Let's not talk about it. You just arrive, so you're hungry, I'll tell the maid to prepare something for you," say Nadech, than he left the room.
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Yaya came home, and found Sara and Nadech sitting in the dining table waiting for her.
"Sara, this is my wife, Yaya, and Yaya, this is Sara," say Nadech
"Hello," say Yaya
"Hello," say Sara
"You must be tired," say Yaya
"No, I'm not," say Sara
"Well, welcome," say Yaya
"Thanks," say Sara
"Ok, let's eat now," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya and Sara
For the rest of the dinner time, they all remain silent.
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The next day, Yaya went to her shop.
"Hello," say Mark
"Hello," say Yaya
"How's your day?" ask Mark
"It's good and yours," say Yaya
"Mine's good, too," say Mark
"What will you like to eat today?" ask Yaya
"Nothing, I just want to talk to you," say Mark
"Oh really," say Yaya
"I want to tell you that you're a very beautiful person, I adore you very much," say Mark
"Thanks," say Yaya
"If you don't mind, may you be my girlfriend," say Mark, shyly
"I can't, sorry, I'm a married woman," say Yaya
"Oh, sorry," say Mark, suddenly embrassed
"It's ok," say Yaya
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"Chailda, my daughter, please eat." say Chailda's mother
"I'm not hungry," say Chailda
"But you still have to eat to help you live," say her mother
"I don't want to live anymore," say Chailda
"Don't say that, my dear," say her mother
"Mother," say Chailda, crying
"It's ok. Remember what you tell me when you were little. You told me that you're a strong girl," say her mother
"Yes," say Chailda
"Here now, eat, ok," say her mother, feeding her
"Yes," say Chailda, after swallowing the food.
From this day on, she promise herself to be strong and stand up for herself.
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"Mom, where are we going?" ask Margie
"To see your future husband, of course," say her mother
"What?!" say Margie
"Yes. Me and my friend want you guys to meet, and if you guys like each other than, you guys will get engage," say her mother
"Mother," say Margie
"Come on, let's go," say her mother, getting into the car
"Yes," say Margie, following her mother
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"Is everything ready?" ask Boy's mother
"Yes, madam," say the servants
"What about my son?" ask Boy's mother
"I'm ready, mom," say Boy, coming down the stairs
"That's good, come here, my son," say his mother
Boy walk to his mother, and sat next to his mother.
"I'm so happy that you decided to stay," say his mother
"I'm just doing it for you," say Boy, weakly
"Come on, smile, they're going to be here soon," say his mother
Boy smile weakly.
Than a servant walk in and announce that Margie and her mother have arrive.
Margie and her mother walk in. Margie and Boy were shock to see each other.
"Hello," say Boy's mother
"Hello," say Margie's mother
Boy and Margie only look at each other.
"Boy sit down," say his mother
"Margie sit down," say her mother
They all sat down.
"Um, this is my son, Boy," say Boy's mother
"This is my daughter, Margie," say Margie's mother 
"Hello," say Boy
"Hello," say Margie
"Wow, so humble," say Boy's mother
"Thanks," say Margie
"Your welcome. I like it," say Boy's mother
"Thanks," say Margie
And for the rest of the time, their mothers talk about them, while they stare at each other speechless.
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 "Marie, get some rest," say Kim
"No, I'm going to wait for him," say Marie
"Come on, Marie, he promise already. I know Boy won't go back on his words," say Kim
"But I want to wait for him," say Marie
"Get your rest first," say Kim
"Kim, don't you worry what he is doing now? It has been almost 2 months since he have been gone," say Marie
"It's nothing, don't think too much," say Kim, as she turn her lamp light off, and went to sleep.
Marie stare at Kim. 
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It has been 3 months, since the separation, and Noona haven't find a job yet. She's low on money. She needs to find a job fast. But she still haven't give up.
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"Let's go have fun." The words echo in Bie's head, while he was looking at the pictures of him, Mark, and Noona.
His parents keeps on telling him to do something, and he have finally decide to move on. He wants to enjoy the new world.
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Natwara and James look at each other. Still not brave enough to look at each other in the eyes.
"I'm sorry," say James
"I'm also sorry," say Natwara
"But this is not apologizing time," say James
"Yes. The person that have to recieve the sorry is not us, it's Chailda," say Natwara
"I don't think, I can face her, I have hurt her so much," say James
"Me, too," say Natwara
"She was right. We two are selfish, selfish enough to not care that we are hurting the people around us," say James
"Yes. We owe her a big apology and thank you," say Natwara
"From now on, let's not fight," say James
"Yes, we will become friends," say Natwara
"And I have something I have to do," say James
"Yes, go for it. Go prove that you love to her that you're now a pure man, and you love her," say Natwara
"Thanks for the support," say James, as he walk to his car. This time, he won't make another mistake.
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Chailda look the paper, and at the building. They match. She went inside of the company, and ask for an applying paper. She wants a job. And she wants to start a new life. She didn't want to live in pain anymore.
She got accepted to the new job.
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James went to Chailda's house. Her mother told him, than Chailda went to go look for a job. James ask her about the details, and went back. He'll look for her tomorrow.
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Yaya look at her ingredients. They were all there, except for the sugar, and she really need it. This morning, she was late, so she forgot to check if everything was there. She really need the sugar, but she can't go out of the shop. She called Tah.
"Hello, Tah," say Yaya
"Yes," say Yaya
"May you go to my house, and get my sugar. I was too busy this morning, so I didn't check," say Yaya
"Yes," say Tah
"Thanks," say Yaya, than she hang up.
Tah drive to Yaya's house, and went into the kitchen. Sara heard, and went downstairs to look at who it is. She was surprised it was Tah.
"Hey," say Sara
"What?!" say Tah
"What are you doing here?" ask Sara
"Getting something for my sister," say Tah
"Hey, where are you going now?" ask Sara
"To her shop," say Tah
"May I come along?" ask Sara
"No," say Tah
"I want to go," say Sara
"No," say Tah, walking out the door
Sara follow him, and run to his car.
"Hey, get out," say Tah
"No," say Sara
"You're not getting out, right?!" say Tah
"Right," say Sara
Tah pull her out, but she went back into the car.
Yaya was waiting, and decided to call Tah, again.
"Hello, Tah, are you almost here?" ask Yaya
"Yes," say Tah
"Ok," say Yaya
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Tah got into the car. Sara also got into the car, and Tah drive out of the driveway, and went to Yaya's shop.
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Sara and Tah got to the shop. Tah got the sugar, while, Sara stare at the shop. It was really pretty and cute in her thinking. Tah went in, and she follow.
Yaya was surprise to see Sara. Tah handed her the sugar.
"I have never known you have such a pretty shop, sister-in-law," say Sara
"Nadech didn't tell you?!" say Yaya
"No, we don't really talk to each other," say Sara
"Oh. But well, you can look around and enjoy," say Yaya
"Yes," say Sara, studying all the stuffs
"I'm going back," say Tah
"Yes," say Yaya
"Come on, let's go," say Tah, as he pull Sara out of the shop.
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Enjoy! :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
hi falada as yr story progresses it gets more interesting, i love how u develop it ! om m is interested in yaya, nadech watch out ! b-margie r luckiest, arranged marriage ! like tahs tough attitude, a challenge 4 s ! thank u falada, im always looking forward 2 read more esp abt yadech, if nadech will hurt yaya alot :=( ps : nice poster u hv...but ill b frank i like yadech but its yr preference, no offense okie ! wif appreciation !
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
keylargo said:
hi falada as yr story progresses it gets more interesting, i love how u develop it ! om m is interested in yaya, nadech watch out ! b-margie r luckiest, arranged marriage ! like tahs tough attitude, a challenge 4 s ! thank u falada, im always looking forward 2 read more esp abt yadech, if nadech will hurt yaya alot :=( ps : nice poster u hv...but ill b frank i like yadech but its yr preference, no offense okie ! wif appreciation !
 
Thanks, Key! :D And your welcome. 
It's ok. LOL I like Yadech alot, too. And Key, do you want me to make you a sigge? I can make it for you if you want. You just need to find a video shorter than 9:00. And just choose 10 seconds of it. :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
oh tat will b great falada cos i hv no idea how 2 do it ! wat wud i need 2 forward 2 u ?
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
keylargo said:
oh tat will b great falada cos i hv no idea how 2 do it ! wat wud i need 2 forward 2 u ?
 
You just need to find a video shorter than 9:00. And just choose 10 seconds of it.
 
 
You can give me the link, or just the title from youtube. :D
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 16
"Yaya, I'm coming to pick you up for lunch," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"Wait for me, ok," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
Nadech left with a kiss on Yaya's forehead. After that, Yaya left to go to her shop.
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"Your mother and Boy's mother have an arrange marriage for you and him?!" say Yaya
"Yes. I don't want to marry him, though, Yaya, please come up with a plan," say Margie
"If you don't want to marry him, than don't," say Margie
"I'm can't do that," say Margie
"Why not?" ask Yaya
"I don't want to dispoint her mom. Ever since my brother died, my parents only have me left," say Margie
"Well, than be a good daughter and marry him," say Yaya
"Yaya," say Margie
"I was just kidding. Choose what ever you want. This is your life, and your parents love you, they'll understand," say Yaya
"Thanks, Yaya. You're always there for me," say Margie
"Your welcome," say Yaya
"Good morning, khun Yaya," say Mark, entering the shop
"Good morning, khun Mark," say Yaya
"This is?" ask Mark
"Margie, my friend," say Yaya
"Hello, Khun Margie," say Mark
"Hello," say Margie
"I come to help for today," say Mark
"Yes, you can go ahead and start" say Yaya
"Yes," say Mark
Margie lean on Yaya and whisper to her.
"Why are you cheating on Khun Nadech?!" tease Margie
"Margie," say Yaya
"Haha, got you back," say Margie, laughing
"Are you going to get going now?" ask Yaya
"I'm am. Good bye," say Margie
"Good bye," say Yaya
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Nadech was in his office, looking through all his files. He was missing one. He remember that it was in his car, so he went back to his car to go get the file.
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"Chailda. Chailda, stop there," say James
"No," say Chailda, running away
She bump into another person.
"Sorry," say Chailda, standing up to look at that person's face
"It's ok," say Nadech
"Chailda," say James
Chailda look at Nadech. He was so charming in her eyes.
"Khun. May you help me?" ask Chailda
"Yes. What do you need?" ask Nadech
"Get that dude over there away from me. I don't want to see him," say Chailda
"Yes," say Nadech, without thinking
James walk over to them, and try to take Chailda away.
"Get out of my company," say Nadech
"No, my girlfriend have to go with me," say James
"I'm not your girlfriend," say Chalida
"You heard. If you don't go, I'll call the security guards," say Nadech
"No, I'm not going," say James
"Guards," say Nadech
The guards appear.
"Take this guy out of the company," say Nadech
"No. Chailda, please forgive me," James cry, but Chailda could only turn her back to him. She didn't want to get hurt, again.
"Thanks," say Chailda
"Your welcome. Sorry to ask, but who was that guy," say Nadech
"He's my ex-boyfriend. He hurt me. And it's ok to ask, since I'm over it," say Chailda, with tears
"Ok, but let wipe your tears," say Nadech, geeting out his handkerchief, and wiping the tears off Chailda's face.
"Thanks," say Chailda
"You look stress, do you want to somewhere," say Nadech
"But my work is not done," say Chailda
"It's ok. I'll let you off the hook," say Nadech
"That means, you're the CEO?!" say Chailda
"Yes," say Nadech
"Ok, thanks," say Chailda
"Yes, come let's get in my car," say Nadech
"Yes," say Chailda
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"Hello, Sara," say her mother
"Hello, mom," say Sara
"How are you doing, honey?" ask her mother
"It's boring. Cousin and his wife always goes in and out of the house. No one is ever home," say Sara
"Do you ever misbehave?" ask her mother
"Mom, how can I misbehave. I also know my manners as well," say Sara
"Ok, put behave, ok," say her mother
"Yes," say Sara
"That's all," say her mother
"Bye," say Sara as she hung up
Sara went back to sleep. There was nothing to do, except sleep around.
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"Are you feeling better?" ask Nadech
"Yes," say Chailda
"When you are sad or mad, you should spend time at places like this. It helps calm you down," say Nadech
"Thanks," say Chailda
"It's almost lunch time. Are you ready to go back to work?" ask Nadech
"Yes," say Chailda
"Than let's get going," say Nadech
"Yes," say Chailda
Nadech drove them back to the workplace.
"Thanks for everything," say Chailda
"It's ok," say Nadech
"Um, would you mind having lunch with me?" ask Chailda
"Lunch?!" say Nadech. He finally remember that he promise to have lunch with Yaya.
"I'm sorry I can't. I promise my wife that I'll have lunch with her," say Nadech
"It's ok," say Chailda
"Good bye, than," say Nadech, getting into his car
Chailda stare after Nadech. He is so charming. She like him at once.
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Yaya look at the clock. It was already noon, but why hasn't Nadech arrive yet.
He's always early or on time, but there was no sight of car anywhere.
Nadech hurriedly drive to Yaya's shop. He have almost forgotten.
"Yaya, come on, let's go," say Nadech, opening the door
"Yes," say Yaya, getting her stuffs
They got into the car.
"Sorry I was late," say Nadech
"It's ok," say Yaya
Nadech drove to a restaurant, and they ate there.
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"Hey, I know that you don't like me. I also don't like you, too. And we both disagree on this marriage thing. Do you want to team up with me, and try to talk our parents out of it?" ask Boy
"Even though I hate you, I respect my parents decisions," say Margie
"But I have a girlfriend already," say Boy
"So?! That's your problem," say Margie
Boy put his hand on his forehead, and sigh.
"What was I doing telling this stubborn girl about my plans," say Boy to himself.
He thought it was going to work, but now he was stuck between these problems.
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Chailda walk up to her bedroom. She kept think about Nadech. About how nice it will be to have a person like him. She wanted him. 
"I don't care what risk I have to take, but I only wan you khun Nadech," say Chailda to herself.
Chailda look at herself in the mirror and smile.
"Khun Nadech, you're mine now," say Chailda
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"Only 2 years and 6 months left before we get to go home," say Kimberly
"Yes," say Marie
"You guys are sure happy about it," say Grandma On
"Yes, I want to go see my mom and dad, and ...," say Kim
"And who?" ask Grandma On
"My childhood friend," say Kim
"Oh. And you, Marie, who are hoping to see?" ask Grandma On
" My mother," say Marie
"What about Boy? He's in Thailand, isn't he?" ask Grandma On
"Yes, but I don't think he wants to see my anymore," say Marie
"Why not?" ask Kim and Grandma On
"Because ever since that day that he left, he never wrote a letter telling me how he is doing," say Marie
"Maybe he's just busy," say Grandma On
"Yes," say Kim
"Ok, Kim when we get to Thailand, promise me, that you'll help me find Boy," say Marie
"Yes, and you help me find Nadech," say Kim
"Promise," say Marie
They all smile at each other.
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"Chailda won't listen," say James, sadly
"Well, don't give up. I also have to do the same thing too. We can't give up until she forgives," say Natwara
"Yes," say James
"Let's have a new start," say Natwara
"Yes," say James
"We can do it," say Natwara and James together
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"Khun Yaya, I don't think that I'll be able to work here anymore. I got accepted to a job," say Mark
"That's ok. I wish you good luck," say Yaya
"Thanks," say Mark giving her a hug.
Nadech walk right in, and see them. He stood there, and look at them. Yaya saw him, and went over to him.
"Mark, this is Nadech my husband," say Yaya, holding Nadech's hands. 
Nadech smile, while Mark frown.
"And Nadech, this is Mark, my friend," say Yaya
"Hello," say Nadech
"Hello," say Mark
"You guys can talk while I go back to work," say Yaya
"No, it's ok, Yaya. That's all I have to tell you. And I don't think that I can come to this shop often like before. I think that I can only come 2 or 3 times a week" say Mark
"It's ok," say Yaya
"Ok, than good bye," say Mark
"Good bye," say Yaya
Mark walk out of the shop.
"What are you here for?" ask Yaya
"To watch you, since I don't want to work," say Nadech
"You can't. You have to work, so our life can go on," say Yaya
"Please. Please," say Nadech in a whining voice
"No," say Yaya, laughing at him
"Ok, I'll go, but you have to kiss me," say Nadech
"Nadech," say Yaya
Nadech stare at her with cute puppy eyes.
"Ok," say Yaya
Nadech bent down, and Yaya gently kiss him on the cheek.
"Ok, go now," say Yaya
"Yes," say Nadech, leaving
Yaya stare after him, laughing and smiling to herself.
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Bie look around the audition room. There was a lot of people. He was getting nervous again. He waited until his number was call. A guy lead him into the room. He got on the stage, and the judges look at him. He stare back nervous.
"You may start," say one of the judges
Bie start singing. No thing went out. He try again. A small voice came out. He try again, and finally his beautiful voice came out. The judges were amazed. They love his voice, and the way he sing. They knew exactly who to pick. It was him. They close up audition, and told Bie, he was chosen. And that he will come sing a few songs for the others ot hear.
Bie was excited. He have fulfill his dream.
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Noona look at the beautiful front shop in front of her. She enter and saw a beautiful woman.
"Welcome, what will you like?" ask Yaya
"Sorry, but are you taking workers. I would like to apply," say Noona
"I'm sorry, but I don't," say Yaya
"It's ok," say Noona
Yaya felt bad and sorry for Noona.
"But, if you want to work, and have salary, than it's fine," say Yaya
"Really. Thanks," say Noona
"Your welcome," say Yaya
"So do you know how to make sweets?" ask Yaya
"Yes, especially chocolate," say Noona
"That's great," say Yaya
"Yes, so when will I begin working?" ask Noona
"Anytime you feel right," say Yaya
"Thanks. May I start right now?" ask Noona
"Of course," say Yaya
Yaya show Noona around before they make the sweets.
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Continue Part 2...
 
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