Messy Circle of Love Part 1&2 *COMPLETE*

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chalidaluvprin said:
I luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv your stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can I ask something? Who ends up with who??
 
Thanks! LOL I want it to be a surprise. But I tell a bit. Not all of them end up with someone. :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
ok falada more suspense !!! cant wait but pls take your time even though im so looking forward 2 read further cos u write this ff so well tat i just 1 2 know more...and hoping 2 nice happily after 4 da right couple !!! thanks falada !
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
oh thanks falada ! u just made my lunch break a v great 1, yeah hooray yadech will stay together till da end !!! even more reason 4 me 2 heart n stay tuned !!! i know u love yadech alot, me 2, but as i said i hv lots of respect 4 writer n cant insist tat u pen yadechs happily after ! da story has 2 go according 2 yr flow !!! im v glad falada n thank u 4 taking my hints !!! so looking forward !
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
LOL Your welcome, Key. :D Thanks for staying in tune, LOL, but there's going to be some heart breaking moments, too. 
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 7
"Are you ready?" ask Yaya
"Yes," say Nadech
"Ok, than lets put on the aporn, and start," say Yaya
Yaya hand the apron
to Nadech. Nadech look at Yaya than the apron.
"Khun Yaya, may you put it on me?" ask Nadech
Yaya turn to him, and smile. She happily put it on him. After that they start. Nadech was confuse with most of it, but Yaya patiently teach him.
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Boy walk as fast as he could to the place he usually go. He doesn't want to kill time, and needs to get there fast. He doesn't want to see Marie's face, since every time he does, she'll always brag about love.
He was walking too fast, and trip. His books, and some of his things fell out of his bag. Marie saw, and walk over to help Boy.
"Are you, ok?" ask Marie
"Yes," say Boy, gathering his things.
Marie help him put his things back.
"Thanks," say Boy after they'll done. After that, he hurry to his way.
Marie stare after him. 
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"He must have hated me so much," say Marie to Kim
"Why do you think that?" ask Kim
"He avoids me," say Marie
"Than go ask him," say Kim
"I want to, but he keeps on avoiding me," say Marie
"Ok, than just try to find a good time, ok," say Kim
"Yes, let's change the subject, so how are you doing?" ask Marie
"I'm doing good in all my classes, I think that I'm going to take desining class, so when I get marry, I can design my own clothes, and room," say Kim
"Wow, you're already preparing already," say Marie
"Well, I have, too," say Kim, nervously
"That's it my friend," say Marie
"Thanks," say Kim
"Yes," say Marie
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Nadech and Yaya are the only one in the shop. Nadech stare at Yaya as she cleared out stuffs. After Yaya finish, Nadech walk over to Yaya.
"Yaya, we have known each other for 6 months already, and I really like you," say Nadech
Yaya smile.
"I really like you, too, you're a very cute and handsome guy," say Yaya
"What I mean is that I want you to be something more than a friend to me," say Nadech
"Like what?" ask Yaya
"Never mind it," say Nadech, turning away. He thought that it was going to be easy asking Yaya to be his girlfriend, but it was really difficult.
"OK, will you be my girlfriend," say Nadech
Yaya stare at him.
"You want me to be your girlfriend?!" say Yaya
"Yes, I really like you," say Nadech. After that he lean, and kiss Yaya on the cheek.
"I'll wait for you in the car," say Nadech, than he walk out of the shop. Yaya stand there for a moment, than she hurry out. And for the rest of the ride, they both remain silent.
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"Um, about that thing you ask me," say Yaya, unsure of what to say next
"Yes," say Nadech
"What if I say yes?" say Yaya
Nadech look at Yaya.
"Really," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"Thanks," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"Are you free, tomorrow?" ask Nadech
"I have to look after the shop," say Yaya
"Oh ok, I'll just come, and stay with you at the shop than," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"OK, than see you tomorrow," say Nadech
"Yes, good night," say Yaya
"Good night, bye bye," say Nadech
Yaya wave to him, than went inside her house. Yaya was so happy, she couldn't wait to tell Margie and Tah about it. Nadech was also happy, but he didn't really have anyone to tell it to.
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"Why are you trying to avoid me?" ask Marie
"I'm not, I'm just busy," say Boy
"No need to lie," say Marie
"I'm not," say Boy
"Than why do you run away from me everytime?" ask Marie
"No, I just busy," say Boy
"Busy? How are you busy?" ask Marie
"OK, I'll tell you the truth, I avoid you because everytime we meet, you always talk about love, I hate that word," say Boy
"Why?" ask Marie
"I have bad experinces with it. I always lose all the women I love," say Boy, sadly
"So," say Marie
"I don't believe that love is true, since it never happens to me," say Boy
"Not yet, but it will be soon," say Marie
"Huh?" ask Boy
"You haven't find your soulmate yet, that's why," say Marie
"There's no such thing," say Boy
"Hey, not all women are alike you know," say Marie
"So?" ask Boy
"So, I'll prove to you," say Marie
"By what?" ask Boy
Marie look at Boy, and than think.
"You and I have to date," say Marie
"What?!" say Boy
"Yes," say Marie
"That is just a crazy idea," say Boy
"No, it's not. I'm going to show you that I'm different," say Marie
"Fine," say Boy
"OK," say Marie
After that, they went their ways.
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Mark, Bie, and Noona were wandering how they will spend their day. They pass a shop. It was a costume shop. Noona really wanted to do it. She beg Mark and Bie to go with her. They all went. They tired on the costume, and took pictures. Than they owner's wife walk towards them.
"I think you guys make a good couple, and I'll love to see you guys in this outfit," say the owner's wife to Mark and Noona. She show the the costume. It was a wedding costume. 
Mark and Noona look at each other.
"Do you want to try?" ask Mark
"Sure," say Noona
She hand the wedding clothes to them, and went away. Noona and Mark went into the change into the costume. Mark was done before Noona. Bie and Mark waited patiently for Noona. When Noona got done dressing, she look at herself in the mirror. She looks just like a real bride. Before she can admire herself more, Mark and Bie call her. She came out. Bie and Mark stare at her, there mouth still open, big. 
"You guys," say Noona
"Huh?!" say both, waking from their thoughts
"Do I look ok?" ask Noona
"Yes, you look very beautiful," say Mark
"I agree," say Bie
"Thanks," say Noona
Than the photographer walk over to them, and ask if they're ready or not.
The answer yes, and went over.
The photographer tell how they should pose. He finally ask if Mark can kiss Noona.
"Are you ok with it?" ask Mark
"Sure," say Noona
Than Mark gently kiss Noona on the cheek. Bie stare at them. He was jealous, and kind of mad at Mark.
After that, they waited for a while for the pictures.
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"How are you?" ask Nadech
"I'm fine," say Yaya, shyly. She still kept thinking of Nadech's words that he say to her the night before.
"Do you need help?" ask Nadech
"Yes, of course, Yaya surely needs help, she's lucky that she have you," say Margie, entering
"Margie," say Yaya
"Well, I'm saying the truth, right khun Nadech," say Margie
"Yes," say Nadech
"You two can stop teasing me," say Yaya, nervously
"Yes, we'll stop. We haven't even tease you alot, but you're already shy," say Margie
"Yes, I'm shy," say Yaya
"Yes, my shy friend, do you need help with anything?" say Margie
"No," say Yaya
"Ok, than I guess that I have to go, since you already have your special person taking care of you," say Margie
"Hey," say Yaya
"Ok bye bye, na. Khun Nadech, please take care of Yaya, ok," say Margie
"Yes," say Nadech
"Margie," say Yaya
Margie laugh and wave at Yaya, than she went out of the shop. 
Yaya stare at Nadech and Nadech stare at her.
"Ok, do you need help?" ask Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya. Yaya give Nadech directions, and he went and do what she says.
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ENJOY! :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
Thanks v much falada! u give enough development 4 each couple! Im screaming wif delight nadech asks yaya 2 b his gf! Real liking yayas ccharacter, shes so cool n steady! Though heartache will come 2 make story touching, spicy, etc, as long as yadech r together im v happy 2 follow thru this ff wif u n i thank u 4 yr dedication in writing this awesome ff!!! wif appreciation!
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Your welcome, Key! LOL, it was kinda hard to figure out how to make them meet or feel in love. And LOL I took so long, since I have to think about each part than put them together. But, it's good that you like it. :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
I definitely love it and yr time, dedication falada! So v proud of yr sequel ff, its really v good n im staying tuned!!! Thanks alot!
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 8
"Good bye," say Nadech
"Yes, good bye," say Yaya
Nadech wave to her, than he went. His father called him, and say that there was something that he needs to talk to Nadech about. Nadech have to hurry, since his father only give him 20 minutes, and he dislike people being late.
Nadech got there, and went inside his father's big company. All the workers stop, and look at Nadech. They have never seen Nadech come into the company. Nadech went to his father's office. He have 1 minute remaining. Than he got to the door. He knock on it.
"Come in," say his father
Nadech open the door, and went in.
"Hello, dad," say Nadech
"Sit down, and let's not waste time," say his father
"Yes," say Nadech, he sat down, and wait for his father to speak.
"I want to talk about your future with you," say his father
"Yes," say Nadech
"Me and your mother have decided to let you take over the company, when you finish school, and you have," say his father
"But, dad, you know that I'm not interested in this stuff," say Nadech
"And we have decided that you will work with your full strength, and not fail our company," say his father, ignoring Nadech's words.
Nadech sat silently, since he knows it's no use arguing with his father.
"...and in order to make this company a success, you are not allowed to get married or have any friend," finish his father
"What?!" say Nadech
"Yes," say his father
"Not allowed to get married or have friends?!" repeated Nadech
"Yes," say his father
"Why?" ask Nadech
"Because it will keep you away from work," say his father
"But, that's not fair," say Nadech
"It's all fair, and you have no right to argue," say his father
Nadech stand up.
"I have listen and follow you and mom's every word, but to have me not allowed to marry and have friends is just too much, I refuse," say Nadech, and he went out the door.
"Nadech! Come back right now!" his father yell after him
Nadech ignore. He refuse to lose his 2nd lover, and his friend.
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"How did the meeting between you and your father go?" ask Yaya
"It was good," Nadech lied
"Oh that's good than," say Yaya
"Yes. And you do you need help?" ask Nadech
"Yes, may you give this to table #4," say Yaya, handing Nadech a tray full of sweets.
Nadech took the tray and put it on table #4. He was still worry about his father's words.
Nadech walk back to Yaya.
"Thanks," say Yaya
"It's ok," say Nadech
Yaya look at Nadech. Nadech looks really stress out.
"Is your parents ok with you visiting me every single day like this?" ask Yaya
"Yes, they're ok, why?" say Nadech
"I'm just scared that they might not like a poor girl like me," say Yaya
Nadech put Yaya's hands in his hands.
"Yaya, don't think like that," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
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"How's your day?" ask Marie
"It was good," say Boy
"Are you ready?" ask Marie
"Ready?! For what?" ask Boy
"Did you forget what we talk about yesterday?!" say Marie
"Oh that," say Boy
"Yes, from now on I'm your girlfriend, and I'll show you how great love is," say Marie
"Stop bragging about love," say Boy
"Ok, so what do you want to do today?" ask Marie
"Anything," say Boy
"Anything?! Are you sure?!" say Marie
"Yes," say Boy
"Ok, let's go dancing," say Marie
"No, I don't like dancing," say Boy
"Well, you let me chose already," say Marie
"No, I don't want to go," say Boy
"Let's go," say Marie, pulling him alone
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Noona look at the pictures again, and again. She couldn't get enough of it.
Mark and Boe are getting tired of her looking at the pictures over and over again.
"Are you done?" ask both guys
"No," say Noona
"How much more to go?" ask Bie
"Don't know," say Noona
"Hurry up," say Mark
"Yes," say Noona
Noona kept looking at the picture that Mark kiss her on the cheek. Than she try to imagine it again. They were standing in front of the camera. And than Mark gently bent down, and kiss her on the cheek. It went like a flash, but it was a good moment to her. It was her favorite moment.
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"Tomorrow, let's go have fun, ok," say Nadech
"But, Nadech, I have...," say Yaya
"I know that you have to look after the shop, but resting for a day will be okay," Nadech interupt
"But," say Yaya
"No buts, if you say but one more time, I'll kiss you," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"Tomorrow, I'll come pick you up, and we'll go have fun, ok," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"Ok, than come on, let me sent you home," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
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"How did it go?" ask Natwara
"It was good. James have improve a lot on our relationship," say Chailda
"But don't be too sure, ok," say Natwara
"Why not?" ask Chailda
"A guy like him is tricky," say Natwara
"But he promise me that he won't hurt me again," say Chailda
"Yes, but just don't be too sure," say Natwara
"Yes," say Chailda
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"Did you come with that guy again?" ask Tah
"Nadech?" ask Yaya
"Yes," say Tah
"Yes, why can't I come with him? He's my boyfriend" ask Yaya
"Why do you have to like a person like him?" ask Tah
"Well, he is a gentleman, and I like his personality," say Yaya
"But you know how rich people are. They usually just trick poor people until they get hurt," say Tah
"But I think that Nadech it different," say Yaya
"But I still think you shouldn't date him anymore," say Tah, turning away
Yaya walk over to him, and put a hand on his shoulder.
"Tah, come on, you haven't got over it yet. Nadech and I have already date for 6 months. I know him. He is unlike the others," say Yaya
"Yes," say Tah
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"What do you want to go today?" ask Nadech
"Just hang out," say Yaya
"OK, than what do you want to do," say Nadech
"Go for a walk," say Yaya
"Ok, let's go," say Nadech
Nadech dive to the park. They got out of the car, and went inside the park. Than they start their walk.
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"OK, it's your turn now," say Marie
"No, I don't want to do anything, my legs is sore from yesterday already," say Boy
"No, you have to go," say Marie, tugging at Boy again
"Ok," say Boy
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After the walk, Nadech and Yaya went to the playground, and starts to play on it. Yaya sat on the swing, and Nadech swing her.
"Are you having fun?" ask Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"Do you want to go get something to eat?" ask Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
"Let's go to a restaunt," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
They got to their car, and Nadech drove. They got to the restaunt. They haven't eaten anytime yet, but Nadech got a call from his father, and have to go see him. Nadech drove Yaya home, and than went to his father's company.
"Hello," say Nadech, entering the door
"What is this?" ask his father in a mad voice, and throwing some pictures on the table
Nadech walk over and look at the photos. It was of him and Yaya.
"Who is that girl?" ask his father
"My girlfriend," say Nadech
His father turn around, and look at him.
"You know that you're forbidden to have a girlfriend," say his father
"I refuse," say Nadech
"Why?" ask his father
"I don't want to own this company. I want to live my life the way I choose it," say Nadech
"What?! Nadech, you have NO RIGHT to do that!" say his father
"I'm sorry, dad, but I can't really do what you want," say Nadech
"Nadech!" say his father
"If you and me can't talk with out causing trouble than, we shouldn't talk, good bye," say Nadech, walking out
"Nadech!" yell his father
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Enjoy! :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
thanks falada, sense there'll b lots of drama wif yadechs relationship ! nadech tries 2 fight 4 his love, tats great but sad and difficult wif a domineering parent ! poor nadech he has his dad and later on k 2 deal wif, really tough love 4 yadech ! like m-b, she takes initiatives! thanks 4 yr update and looking forward 2 read more ! wif appreciation falada !
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Your welcome, Key. :D LOL love is a very hard thing to deal with. If you don't have faith and trust, than you can't have it. 
 

vorleak

sarNie Hatchling
Thank you falada, oh I forgot u have part 2 , but anyway yadech ending together I'm really enjoy it :) very appreciate ka
 
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