Secret Wishlist: COMPLETED*

Chapter Seventeen
All of them are in class once more after the holidays.

Prof. Trabjan: *looks around the classroom* So...how were your assignments?

The 6 remain silent.

Pinky: *raises her hand*

Prof. Trabjan: Yes?

Pinky: *about to cry* It was...horrible.

Prof. Trabjan: *confused* Why? What's wrong? Why is no one pleased? I thought that this woud he-

Vier: *mad* You thought it would help? It turned our lives upside down and inside out. *glares at Win*

Prof. Trabjan: *thinking* Ok, I have a new project. Write a sorry note to someone.

Noon: *raises an eyebrow* A sorry note?

Prof. Trabjan: Yes, Noon. And you guys start now, too.

Time passes and everone hands their assignments in. Prof. Trabjan passes the "letters" around the room.

Pancake: *recieves hers*

"Dear Pan,

I'm sorry for what happened na.
And I'm sorry I kinda used you to make Noon jealous too.
After everyone got home I thought and thought about the whole situation and well I kind of came to a conclusion
that everything that I did was because of jealousy and the "win" factor.

Tle."

Pancake looks around the room and then to Tle, who smiles back weakly at her.

Pinky: *recieves hers*

"Dear Ky,

I don't really know what to say but "I'm sorry".
I know it's kinda corny, but oh well. I'm sorry for not telling you about
my crush for Pan, and I'm sorry I was the person who made you and Win have a misconception
of each other. I really don't know why I said "I like you" to you. I'm thinking and cursing myself right now.
Tell Win that I'm sorry for hurting his girlfriend, too.

Vier."

Pinky starts crying after reading this.

Noon: *recieves hers*

"Dear Noon,

I know it's kinda my fault for a lot of things.
And I never knew you liked me. But you never showed any sign at all! I'm sorry,
but I really do like Ky I guess. However, right now I'm kind of mad at her for some things.
Besides, you have Ky's cousin, Tle. I've heard from Ky that Tle is so into you.

Win."

Noon glances at Win, not knowing how to reply. After that, Win recieves his sorry letter.

"Dear Win,

You can guess who this is from, right? It's from your girlfriend, Ky.
But then if you don't want to read this, it's ok I guess. All I have to say is that I am
really sorry for all the things that have happened. I didn't meant to say that I wasn't your girlfriend or anything,
but it just kinda slipped. If you still want to by my girlfriend, after reading this, please just give me a sign.
And as for the Vier thing, we don't have a gf/bf bond anymore...

Ky."

Win looks up to Pinky, smiling at her. She smiles back, overjoyed. Prof. Trabjan then walks over to Tle, giving him his sorry letter.

"Dear Tle,

I'm betting you probably know what I'm going to say.
It's a sorry letter...and I'm real sorry. Sorry for writing that stupid comment on the assignment.
But I don't think that anymore. I regretted writing it and I'm really sorry for what's happened. I can swear to you
on my beloved brother's head that I am not lying.
And you do know that I love Vier, right? Hope you forgive me...

Noon."

Tle is speechless...he doesn't know what to say. Making up his mind, he looks up to Noon. She smiles weakly, hoping for forgiveness. Last but not least, Prof. Trabjan hands Vier his letter.

"Dear Vier,

I regret writng the things that I did about how
I disliked you and how I liked Tle. You've been so kind to me but I
wasn't sure how to react back. I guess it's my stupidity again that's taking the lead on my brain.
Hope you forgive me for my stupidity na ja.
Oh ya and Win told me to add that he's sorry for punching you...BTW when DID he punch you...?

Pan."

Win: *turns to Noon* So everyone's happy again?

Noon: *looks around* Hopefully. Umm...let's go celebrate.

Pinky: *joining in the conversation* Where, huh?

Tle: My nosy cousin.

Pinky: If you weren't nosy you wouldn't have heard me being nosy.

Pancake: You guys are so immature LOL. But I love you guys all the same.

Vier: *pokes his head into the circle* ...friends again?

Win: *nods* Yea, of course. Who agrees say I.

Pinky: I. Yay I'm first to say it.

Pancake: I. Second!

Noon: I...third. Again...

Vier: I LOL.

Tle: I. *laughs*

Pinky: *turns to Win* Why didn't you say I, Win?

Win: I still haven't said sorry to someone. *turns to Vier* I'm sorry na. For punching you.

Noon: Ok anyways I've decided.

Pancake: *raises an eyebrow* Decided what?

Noon: ...THE SPA!

Vier: *raises an eyebrow* Oh please.

Win: Just follow the ladies. I mean, we're friends, right?

Pinky: Ya yeah whatever.

Noon: *sighs*

Tle: Why are you sighing...?

Noon: Because! We're fighting again.

Vier: Yea but this time it's good fighting.

Tle: Is there such thing as good fighting...?

Vier: Of course there is!

Pancake: So when are we going?

Win: How about after this class?

Vier: Sure.

PS NEXT CHAPTER IS PART HAPPY PART SAD. BUT THEN WHAT ELSE CAN IT BE?
 

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
I can swear to you
on my beloved brother's head that I am not lying.

^^Lmao Noon! She's too funny!^^

Glad everyone is all happy again!​
 
Chapter Eighteen
All 6 friends arrive at Platinum Spa.

Tle: *looks around nervously* Are you sure that this is a good idea?

Win: *shrugs* I don't know...

Noon: Don't be silly. This is a great idea. It's the ideal place to relax, no?

Vier: *sighs* Noon, not everything is about relaxation...

Noon: Oh please will you just let me express my inner desires?

Vier: Inner desires? Of what? Entering the same spa room as Tle?

Noon: *turns red* Vier! I can't believe you said that about me. I'm going to tell Dad.

Vier: Oh please. Tle told me about the "I'll swear on my beloved brother" thing.

Noon: *turns to Tle* You TOLD on me?

Tle: Sorry...

Win: Oh c'mon stop the sibling rivalry already.

Noon: *gives Win a what-did-you-say-again stare* Win...

Pinky: *walks out of toilet with Pancake* What did we miss?

Pancake: Yea, what exciting thing happened while I had to take Ky to the bathroom?

Win: That's a toilet, not a bathroom.

Pancake: WHATEVER. Like I care.

Vier: You really wanna know?

Pancake: *nods*

Vier: A bomb was set and Noon started blowing up.

Noon: *angry* Whatever. *turns to Tle* Now you know why I want to swear on my brother head?

Pancake: So are we EVER going to go in any time soon...?

Vier: Ok then let's go in.

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Receptionist: Hello and welcome to Platinum Spa. Do you have a member card or do you wish to register?

Noon: *hands the receptionist her card* Here. Umm... *looks back at her friends* 6 3-hour packages please.

The receptionist nods, does all of the billing, and walks back to the counter. She hands back Noon's card.

Noon: *accepts card* Thanks.

Receptionist: *smiles* You're welcome. And, please follow me.

Pinky: *looks around* Is it like 1 room 1 person?

Pancake: *smirks* What? You want to be in a room with Win?

Win: Hey that's a great idea! *turns to Pinky* How about it, Ky?

Pinky: I might be your girlfriend but I do not need to see you half naked, ok?

Noon: *laughs* Are you sure?

Vier: *raises an eyebrow* I don't think Ky's too sure of herself. Don't you see her smiling?

Noon: *sighs* Vier...it's called sarcasm you idiot. I never knew that the days you got locked up in the cellar made you this stupid...

Vier: *gets mad* Hey, I told you to keep that as a secret.

Pancake: *interested* What did he do, Noon...?

Tle: He probably tinkered with the vault again.

Vier: Hey, how'd you know? *gives Noon a deadly stare* Don't tell me it's you...

Noon: *smiles nervously* ...why would you think that?

Pinky: Probably 'cause he knows his blabbermouth sister too well.

Tle: *sighs* That's just like me knowing my khun noo cousin too well, Ky.

Pinky: *makes a face at Tle* So what? I'm not a khun noo...

Pancake: Oh please you so are. But then again Win is so khun chai LOL.

Win: Hey what have I gotten to do with this conversation?

Noon: It's fun when everyone joins in. But then again it becomes disastrous.

Vier: Only when you talk, Noon.

Receptionist: Umm...

Pancake: *turns to the receptionist* Yes?

Receptionist: I forgot to ask you about how the arrangments are going to be laid out.

Noon: What rooms are left?

Receptionist: *looks at PDA* The main room, 3 single rooms, 1 double rooms, 2 triple rooms, and 1 VIP room.

Noon: The VIP room can hold how many...?

Receptionist: *thinks* At max 6 people.

Noon: Ok, we'll take that. And don't worry about the cost, I'll pay after we're done.

Receptionist: *nods*

Pinky: *confused* What do you mean max 6 people?

Receptionist: In the VIP room there are 6 beds that are sectioned off by curtains.

Pancake: *unsure* CURTAINS!?!

Noon: What are you thinking? Don't try anything on my brother. He's not worth it.

Pancake: *blushes* Yea, I'll keep that in mind.

Vier: *turns to Noon* You HAD to ruin it.

Noon: *smirks* ...so what? Are you going to kill me?

Vier: No...but I am going to annoy you and Tle the whole time we are here.

Win: Uhh, is there anything else I can do?

Receptionist: Mister, this is a SPA, not a recreation center.

Pinky: *turns to Win* C'mon, it'll be fun.

Win: *sighs* For you guys, sure. But not me.

Pinky: *raises an eyebrow* Why?

Win: It's nothing. Anyways, let's go.

Pancake: *turns to Pinky* I told you I second your type of men.

Pinky: Pan, that's not the least bit nice. Well, then you second your own type of men.

Pancake: *doesn't know what to say*

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Win, Pinky, Pancake, Tle, Noon, and Vier arrive at the VIP room.

Vier: *looks around* Ugh, so this is how it looks like?

Pancake: I'm starting to have second thoughts...

Noon: C'mon guys, don't back out now!

Pancake: I didn't say I'll back up but this place is WAY to open.

Pinky: ...I agree. I mean, these curtains are so...translucent.

Win: The more translucent the better.

Vier: Although I hate to agree but I do.

Pancake: Oh please. It's not like i'm going to be on the bed next to you.

Vier: Aww, c'mon.

Pancake: *thinks* If Ky sleeps next to Win I'll sleep next to you.

Vier: *turns to Pinky* Ky, please? Please sleep next to Win.

Pinky: I...uh.... *unsure*

Win: Come on, it's not as if I haven't seen you in a bikini.

Pinky: True, but this...

Tle: Ok let's make a deal. When 3 hours are up you girls must let us men choose where to go next.

Pancake: *whispers to Pinky and Noon* They'll probably take us to a prostitute club.

Pinky: Eww, no way am I going then.

Noon: Me neither. I mean, that's just totally...wrong.

The massagers come in and take each person to their bed. This was the outline (sorry for the ugly photoshop drawing):



PS I WAS LAZY SO THE SAD PART WILL COME TOMORROW. I BETCHA YOU CAN WAIT FOR THE STUPIDES NAMNAO-EST PART 555+
 

metiwan

sarNie Hatchling
i hope u will update soon na... is tle gonna date noon yet? is pan gonna date vier soon? What the sad part?i am so excited...
 

metiwan

sarNie Hatchling
i hope u will update soon na... is tle gonna date noon yet? is pan gonna date vier soon? What the sad part?i am so excited...
 

TubbyTinker

You're Average Person :)
Pancake: *whispers to Pinky and Noon* They'll probably take us to a prostitute club.

^^ that part cracked me up so bad lmao
 
Sorry guys for not updating but right now I'm in Lampang (for Songkran) and I don't think they have interneg here. Right now I'm using my iPhone's EDGE haha. Well when I do come back (or find internet I will upload the next chapter for you guys.

Ok sorry again for the delay...
 
Good news. I deleted the namnao part and replaced it with something else (;
I'll be back by tonight (Thai time) so I'll upload then na ja.
 
Chapter Nineteen
The 6 friends are done with the spa and are now in Noon&Vier's van.

Noon: *bored* What are you guys doing after this?

Tle: Well us guys decided that we're going to a nightclub.

Pancake: *turns to Pinky* Ky, I SO told you SO!

Noon: *sighs* I was hoping you weren't right, Pan. But I guess you are...

Vier: Why? You said we got to choose next, no?

Pinky: Yes, but-

Win: But what ja, Ky?

Pinky: I DON'T WANT TO GO!

Tle: It's not like we're going to go to a stripper club. Jeez.

Noon: *roll eyes* C'mon, we all totally know why you guys want to go to a nightclub. If it's not that then what else can it be?

Vier: You girls should stop thinking of us so badly...

Pancake: I wasn't. *sighs* But then again...

Win: Ok, so we've decided. Let's go already.

Pinky: *stares at Win* Oh please! You guys don't have to act so excited.

Tle: Ky, please use the correct word. It is YOU guys that are excited.

Noon: Us? How?

VIer: *smirks* You'll see.

Pancake: I hate it when they say that...

Pinky: *turns to Pancake* You hate it? I despise it, totally.

Vier tells his driver to take them to the nightclub.

Noon: *sighs* Do we really have to?

Win: Of course, Noon. A promise is a promise.

Noon: Fine, but there better not be any dancing, stripping, drunk prostitutes!

Pancake: If there are, we're going home.

Tle: *winks at Win and Vier* ...of course.

Noon: *raises an eyebrow* What's that supposed to mean?

Vier: Oh, it's nothing.

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Noon&Vier's driver takes them to the airport.

Pancake: *confused* There's a nightclub at the airport?

Noon: *turns to Vier* I was wondering the same thing...is there, Vier?

Vier: *laughs* You'll see.

Pinky: Stop sa-

Win: *hushes Pinky* ...stop saying "you'll see" right?

Tle: You girls are so babyish.

Vier: *looks around* C'mon guys! Let's get going.

Noon, Pancake, Tle, Vier, Win, and Pinky got off of the car...

Vier: *turns to Win and whispers* Are you sure this will work?

Win: *shrugs* I don't know.

Noon: Don't know what?

Tle: Uhh...it's nothing.

Pinky: You guys are acting so mysterious. What is it?

Vier: I SAID NOTHING!

Pancake: Gosh, don't be so...boring.

Win: *looks around* We have to check in, let's go.

Noon: What the hell? Check into A NIGHTCLUB?

Vier: Y, yeah. I mean... *pauses* It's a nightclub. In...in...in the airport.

Tle: Ya so they have to check for...umm...security.

Pinky: *raises an eyebrow* Check IN for a goddamn NIGHTCLUB? What? Do they have to check that we're 18+ because it contains...uh...

Noon: *thinks* Eww, then we're totally not going. To think that airports have these kind of things...

Pancake: But I didn't see any nightclub when I came!

Vier: It's in the departure section.

Win: *thinks* Yea, yea and it's...brand new.

Noon: So new that we didn't know of it?

Vier: *thinks fast* Well you guys don't like nightclubs but...we....we do.

Win: *turns to Vier and raises an eyebrow* We do?

Tle: *gives Win a why-the-hell-did-you-say-that stare*

Win: *gives Tle an I'm-sorry stare*

Pancake: You guys are acting so weird today.

Pinky: ...not to mention WAY scary.

Noon: And mysterious. I never knew that there was an airport nightclub.

Tle drags his friends to the departure section.

Noon: What? We have to check into the DEPARTURE SECTION?

Pinky: This is WAY to mysterious. *turns to the guys* Spill it.

Win: Well...uh...no...umm...

Vier: Shut up, Win. You're making us sound so stupid.

Noon: YOU GUYS ARE STUPID. Don't make me remind you about-

Vier: Shut up or else Noon. I'm seriously going to murder you if you dare say anything.

Tle: *turns to the girls* Well...we just wanted to surprise you guys.

Pinky: By embarrassing us in front of the whole world?

Win: Now c'mon! We...didn't mean to?

Pancake: What do yo mean "didn't mean to?"...?

Vier: Pan, don't be such a narrow minded person!

Pancake: Narrow minded? How? For a second there I actually thought...

Noon: Thought what?

Vier: Oh please it's nothing. Now, c'mon. The truth is...

Win: Is...

Tle: We're taking you guys to Mae Hong Sorn.

Pinky: *surprised* What? Mae Hong Sorn?

Vier: Uh...yea. I mean...Tle overheard you saying the thing about us taking you guys to a prostitute club. So we were weird...and stuff. It was BECAUSE of Tle!

Tle: Hey! Why throw everything to me? It was Win...

Win: *bewildered* What? Why? Why me? I mean...It was YOU, Vier.

Vier: No! It was YOU!

Tle: ME? It was Win.

Win: It wasn't ME.

Pancake: *sighs* Will you guys just shut up...?

Vier&Tle&Win: STAY OUT OF THIS!

Pinky: *turns to Pancake* Pan, have they gone totally insane?

Pancake: Ky...only an idiot wouldn't know.

Noon: *sighs, then looks around* ...everyone's watching us.

Pancake: I know...

Pinky: And it was all because of the guys, god.

Win: *annoyed* YOU GIRLS ARE SO HARD TO PLEASE!

Noon: *raises an eyebrow* Us? What do you mean US? It's you who wants us to fly ALL over to Mae Hong Sorn to go to some NIGHTCLUB?

Tle: *laughs* No, no it's not like that.

Pinky: *confused* Then WHAT is it, huh?

Win: We were planning to surprise you guys with a trip to Mae Hong Sorn, minus the nightclub. We only said nightclub because Tle said that you girls thought that we'd take you to a PROSTITUTE nightclub.

Pancake: Oh...well...umm...

Noon: Well then...what are we waiting for?

Tle: *sighs* We're waiting for Vier. He just went to the toilet.

Pancake: *looks around* What? When?

Win: When Tle and I were arguing. He "slipped" away.

VIer: *walks back* Sorry guys. Well, how was that now?

Tle: *gives Vier a you-are-such-are-scaredy-cat stare* FINE.

PS I CHANGED IT FINALLY. AND UPLOADED IT TOO. HAPPY READING [:
 

TubbyTinker

You're Average Person :)
awww they're going to Mae Hong Sorn, that's one of the romantic place lol

what was the nam nao part and speaking of nam nao, I think my stories are the most nam nao tee sood lol
 

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Yea what was the nam nao part? And Thip, your stories are not nam nao! Mae Hong Sorn, reminds me of Buang Ruk Kammathep. lol. The guys are funny. Especially Wier. Took himself to the toilet while Tle and Win were arguing​
 
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