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  1. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    I won't be posting up for a while
  2. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

  3. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    sorry it took awhile
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    When Darkness Fall

    Ch.5 pt.1 Enjoy!! Sorry it took awhile, part 2 will be up sometime later. He pull Rita toward him and gave her love marks on her neck. She then finally realize the time and needed to get home before Paula was worried about her. She couldn't stop smiling the hole time during her ride home...
  5. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    Hey guys!! I'm gonna try to update this weekend
  6. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Gosh the new fanfic is so confusing
  7. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.9 Enjoy!!!! Pick her up and carried her out of the hospital. Bee is screaming and kicking Pong to put her down. Pong: WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? Bee: You think I want this child Pong: AT LEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE Bee: What a chance for you to cheat on me and leave his child in the street Pong...
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    When Darkness Fall

    Ch.4 Enjoy!!! She saw him transform into a vampire. He turn around when she heard Rita gasp. Rome: Don't be scare, I'm gonna save you Rita: But how? Vampire aren't real Rome: I am one Rita: But.... Rome: No but, your getting weaker each time you talk. I'm gonna save you Rome fully...
  9. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    Thanks!! I was gonna put Paula and Tye together but I love Beam and Paula chemistry together. You will find out this weekend what she saw
  10. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    Ch.3 ENJOY!!! Someone POV..... Tonight is the night when everything becomes different again. When darkness raise from the dead. I be watching his every move tonight. Rita was getting ready for tonight. She invited Paula since she doesn't want to be by herself since she think Rome is coming...
  11. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    Ch.2 Enjoy!!! It was nice for Tye to show me around campus but I still wish it was Rome though. Tye is hot but he is not my Rome. But its okay I might settle for Tye if Rome doesn't like me at all. Rome went stright to his place since he didn't live on campus. He when into his frig and...
  12. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    CH.1 Enjoy!!!! This is so different from my style of writing but I wanted to write something about vampires and stuff due to my love of Twilight. It was a like a dream. It happen so fast that nothing was the same after again. I just got into the school of my dream with my dream guy. I...
  13. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    Lol!!! I was going to use a different guy but he look best with Rita Thanks, I'm gonna start post up this weekend I love books about vampires. Rome would be a reallly hot vampire
  14. lenaaun

    When Darkness Fall

    When Darkness Falls Prologue: I was only 16 when I first met him. He was untouchable, I couldn't stop staring at his flawless face. I wanted him so much but I couldn't I wasn't pretty like other girls where. He was everything that I wasn't. Two years....... I just finish high school...
  15. lenaaun

    FANFIC UPDATES

    RR can you delete Sin City 2 http://www.sarnworld.com/discuzz/index.php?showtopic=38033 I want to finish my other stories 1st
  16. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.8 I'm back!!! I'm sorry about not posting when I was gonna to. I had a family emergency and needed to focus on that. Pong: Why are you crying for? Bee: Why? Because I'm pregnant with your child and how am I gonna face my parents and everyone Pong: Easy your marry Bee: You don't...
  17. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Sorry guys! I was going to post up tonight but I have a family emergency to attend to this week
  18. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Hey guys!!! I'm gonna update this weekend.
  19. lenaaun

    Thai Stars with perfect english

    This is an old post but here Rita speaking a little english http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jJLlAffCRY...feature=channel
  20. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Soorrryyyy I won't update till the end of this week since I'm on vacation from work so I'm traveling at the moment
  21. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Next chapter I will update more on tui, pang, and oh She doesn't know what to do now
  22. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.7 Enjoy!!!! They reach to City Hall. Bee wasn't feeling well and wanted this nightmare to end. Every time she pinches herself to wake up, she still see Pong right next to her. She was screaming inside her head, telling herself how stupid she was to get that drunk. They sat there with...
  23. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    I be updated later!!!!
  24. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    But there a price to go along with that. hehehe
  25. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Yep they are and there gonna be some rated R scene in this
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    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.6 The next day in the office....... Bee was at her desk typing the document for Pong to read and sign for the new project that the company was working on. Pong came late to the office and called Bee to come into his office and wanted to speak to her about what happen between them. Pong...
  27. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.18 pt.2 Final Chapter Sorry I just wanted to finish this. I'm not in the mood to write anymore for this story. A year later............ Benz finally found happiness with Paul. They got marry after they found out that Benz was pregnant and didn't want their child to be tease. She...
  28. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Gonna finish this when I get back from work!!!!!!
  29. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Final Chapter Enjoy! grab Ken color of his shirt bringing him up off the seat. Rome punch him in the face for hurting Ken. Ann and Rita started to scream to break the fight between brothers. But Rome didn't care until he got tired from punching Ken. Ken try to defend himself but Rome was to...
  30. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Sorry again for not updating this!!!!!
  31. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Thanks, hahaha yeah I been lazy also since it summer vacation for me. Yeah I can wait to start on Sin City 2
  32. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.22 Enjoy!!!! I haven't been on for awhile and I'm gonna finish this ff. Rita was getting bigger by the minutes and Rome wouldn't let her do anything beside eat and sleep. She felt like she was a baby herself since she was aloud to do anything. Rome wanted to back to island so Rita can...
  33. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    hey guys, I'm back guys!!!! I'm gonna finish up my stories soon just need to revise it a little. I'm gonna work on Sin City II staring: Ken, Rita and Rome
  34. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    RR I love ur posters!!! Gosh sorry I haven't been updated, I'm gonna start next week when I'm done with my training.
  35. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.18 part.1 Enjoy!!!! Sorry been lazy awhile due no school for me this summer and enjoying the nice weather and traveling. Just as Rita wanted to rest from the hard shopping she did with her parents and Aum. He wanted to spend some more time with her alone. He carry her to their bedroom...
  36. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.5 Enjoy!!!! The next morning……… Bee woke up feeling sore and didn’t know what happen last night. She felt someone next to her and thought that it was her bestfriend Pang, but she realize that she was naked. She look under the cover to see who it was. Bee: AWWWWWWWWWWWW Pong started to...
  37. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    I'm gonna post my stories tomorrow instant since I'm getting sick. Grwwwww
  38. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    I will update this monday since it a holiday
  39. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Hey!! Sorry that I haven't post any stories yet for a while. I just started a new job and stuff and when I settle down, I will start posting again
  40. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.21 part.2 Ken began telling his story’s how he got on to the ship with them……… I was going crazy knowing that I became something I didn’t want to become like my father. I couldn’t believe that I was starting to become crazy, like a madman. I saw the ship and decided to hide their till...
  41. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    OMG I can't wait. GOOD LUCK
  42. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    It was nice, I was in Hawaii and the weather was great!!!! As for Ken how he got on the island u find out sometime tomorrow
  43. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    CH.21 part.1 Enjoy!!!! Ann was on the ship watching Ken sail back into the sea. She can remember what happen an hour ago. An hour ago…. Ann was running toward them to see who got shot. She saw blood on the ground hoping that Ken was safe. She didn’t see who got shot since it happen so...
  44. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Hey guys I'm back from vacation!!! I will try to post this weekend
  45. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Hey guys, I'm on vacation enjoying the beach and will be back to update my ff.
  46. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    u will find out the next chapter, how he got there and why he did that to ann its gonna take a while for ken to open up to ann, since he wanted to be with rita in the beginning. but you find out they open up to each other while the story progress
  47. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    LOL, I was gonna use Dennis instant to rape her but I wanted to make it more a guess
  48. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    LOL, you will You find out in the next chapter about why ken did what he did he doesn't change is feeling for rita but he feels he needs to take responsible
  49. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.20 part.2 ENJOY!!!! The moment you guys been waiting for, the mystery man is reveal. Night time………… The mystery man came back as his promise Ann he would. Ann was waiting for him to come back. She wanted to get out of this hellhole. ?:We should get going (he went to untie Ann hands)...
  50. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    I'm gonna try to wrap all most of my story by next weekend.
  51. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    lol, the next chapter will explain how the man came there on the island you will find out soon. LOL But I think mention I change this story line a lot. But you will fine out soon enough You will RR, I'm gonna try to make this longer
  52. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.20, pt.1 Enjoy!!!! I just realize this is my longest FF. The next morning………… Ann woke up from what was a nightmare in the arm of that man she slept with. She couldn’t believe that she got RAPE. Ann started to cry waking him up. He didn’t know what happen. He finally realizes what...
  53. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Nope, Dennis brother is really dead in the story. hahaha Here a clue, the man who did that to Ann doesn't work for Dennis and as for Dennis men, its only him. I think I'm not going to ruin Rome and Rita happy moment together. As for Ann, will end up with that mystery guy and will have a...
  54. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    hahaha yes2drama, I know how much you really want to know who the man is. I will post sometime this week. I should be studying for final!!
  55. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Sorry RR, I'm not gonna update Bleeding Rose. I have such a writer block on that. IDK why?
  56. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.19 part2 Enjoy!!! Rita wonders where Rome went to. It was getting really late. She hopes nothing bad has happen to him. She doesn’t know what to do if something to happen to him. It was 7 p.m. now……… Rome finally came back. Rita was waiting for him on the couch. Rita: Rome where...
  57. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    Ch.5 Part.1 Enjoy!!! Tye started to become very emotional thinking about what happen in the past. All a sudden the sky started to change. The clouds started to move rapidly, changing the color to black. When Tye become very emotional, things starts to change. His father couldn’t wait for...
  58. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Hey guys!! I think I might go a squeal to Sin City, after I'm done with a couple of my FF. Since Don't leave me alone and Pirate Territory is almost done.
  59. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    CH.17 Enjoy!!!! The next morning…. Rita mom was in the kitchen making breakfast for them. She wanted the best food for her grandchild. She couldn’t wait to see what she was haven, she hope it’s a little girl so she can take her out shopping, get their hair done and ect…. On the other...
  60. lenaaun

    Undercover Love :: Rome/Rita

    I really like this ff
  61. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.19 Part.1 Enjoy!!!! Rome and Rita reach to her house. It was massive, then where they were staying at. He couldn’t believe his eyes. There were question where Rita and Ann was gone to. The polices came to question Rita and her where about since her friends were dead. Police #1...
  62. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    I'm the same way when I talk to my best friend Tui like Pang thats why There were photos of them in bed lol
  63. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    lol, clue she did act with the guy but that all I'm gonna say
  64. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.4 Enjoy!!!!! Rated R :r-scene-pop-corn: Pang was at Bee house around 5. She handed Bee a really, really, really short dress. Bee: Pang you know I don’t like to wear thing that show a lot of skin Pang: Bee, come on, you have a great body. Show it off once in awhile. Bee: Pang...
  65. lenaaun

    Ladies Room *Book 3: Chapter 4, Part B*

    Gosh ur killing me, I can't wait to read some more.
  66. lenaaun

    Ladies Room *Book 3: Chapter 4, Part B*

    omg I feel really bad for Rita :lmao: . Gosh Rome is such an ass
  67. lenaaun

    Ladies Room *Book 3: Chapter 4, Part B*

    Great update, I can't wait to read more but I feel bad for Rita.
  68. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Thanks guys, your comments were sooo funny. All I'm gonna say is that they are gonna go home drunk and together in bed. :spin: :drool:
  69. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    CH.16 Enjoy!!!! Aum took Rita to the doctor to see what was wrong with Rita. He wanted to make sure nothing bad happen to her. The doctor brought them to the room to run some testes on her. They waiting about 15 minute to see what wrong with her. They went back into the office. They...
  70. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.3 Enjoy!! Bee pushes him away and hurry back to the clients. Pong was standing smiling, he doesn’t know why but her face was priceless. He went back to the table. He notices that she wouldn’t look at him though out dinner. He offers to take her home, but she refuses since she didn’t...
  71. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    lol, nope its not Aum, but you will fine out in the next two chapter
  72. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ann wasn't innocence it this story, her past will come out later........ Don't worry Ann will have an happy ended Isn't More of the man will be reveal shortly
  73. lenaaun

    Capture d' Moment :: Rome/Rita

    I really like it, I can't wait for more......
  74. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch. 18 Part.2 Enjoy!!! Sorry for the delay my older brother and his family came to visit and I wanted to spend time with them since I haven’t seen them for two years. Dennis left Ann in the broken down house. Where water would leek onto her, making the night cold. Dennis didn’t care anymore...
  75. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Sorry guys I will post the other part tonight. Spoil: Someone will die Rome might face with the police enforcement
  76. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Sorry I'm not gonna post till tomorrow instant. I have to study for my exam tomorrow.....
  77. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Lol, you see. I'm gonna post the other half later since it a real nice day out and I'm gonna enjoy it.
  78. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    I'm actually changing the story line a little Yep Dennis will do more worster than that. But someone will try to save her
  79. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.2 Enjoy!!! Bee: I’m sorry I didn’t mean to bump into you (while getting up) Stranger: Are you blind or what? Bee: I said I was sorry and I didn’t mean to Stranger: Yeah sure (he left before Bee can say another word) Bee became grumpy because she didn’t mean to bump into that stranger. She...
  80. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    All I'm gonna say is Dennis doesn't warm up to her and she will end up with someone. I will post the last part of Ch.18 tomorrow. You be shock :P
  81. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    You will fine out in Ch.19 about Rome and Rita
  82. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Yep, you gonna get shock even more on the next part lol, yeah I wanted more drama in this
  83. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    I will post the other part tomorrow. Spoil: Ann get rape
  84. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.18 Part.1 Enjoy!!! Dennis and Ann were sent to sail today. She said her goodbye to Rita and promise she will come back to her to the city when she done sailing. Dennis had a grin on his face knowing he will finally teach Ann a lesson. When they got on the ship. She couldn’t believe...
  85. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    Ch.1 Enjoy!!! Bees always remember where she came from. She was always happy even she was poor. Her parents try hard in making money for her to go to school. She was grateful, for her parents hard working and she wanted to repay her debt toward them. Pong in the order hand was ungrateful...
  86. lenaaun

    Upside Down!:: [COMPLETE]

    I bet its Nate or Toby
  87. lenaaun

    The Bleeding Rose (on hold for the moment)

    Ch. 2 part1 Enjoy!! As they were walking out of the airport. Ann couldn’t stand being next to Ken. She really wanted to punch him in his face for not saying sorry to her from the beginning. Ken was thinking that Ann was a slut or something because of how she was dress. He couldn’t stand...
  88. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    I was going to use Oh but I'm really into the lakorn Buang Ruk Kammathep so I decided to use Tui. But Oh might show up. LOL, Pong is super cute now.
  89. lenaaun

    The Unpredictable Love

    The Unpredictable Love <div align='center'> Staring: Pong Nawat Kulrattanarak Bee Namthip Pang Ornjira Larmwilai Tui Pakorn Namo</div> Synopsis: Bee is a 21 year old woman who was born into a poor family. She works hard in what she does. At age 18 she got a scholarship to study aboard...
  90. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Your welcome!!!
  91. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    CH.11 Last Chapter Enjoy!!! One week later………….. Dennis was enjoying his time with his finance and soon to be wife and child. He couldn’t believe that Ann had left them be. As he thought, but he doesn’t know Ann came up with a plan. Rita got tired and hungry waiting for Dennis. She...
  92. lenaaun

    Upside Down!:: [COMPLETE]

    Hmmm..... I wonder if Ty is starting to like Rita or just going ahead with Chance and his plan on the new girl.
  93. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.15 Enjoy!!! Every night Aum always put a move on Rita. When he can’t sleep at all he wake up Rita to how some play time. He couldn’t keep his hands off of her. He came with the conclusion that he gonna leave the show business to be with her and baby that he plan on making with her. Rita...
  94. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    I really like their chemistry in lakorn. I'm almost finish with this fanfic after I will post a story of pong/bee more likely yeah, its all part of Aum plan to tie Rita to him lol
  95. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    Ch.4 Part.2 Rita: (she didn’t know what to say to a this stranger) um… not sure Tye: please Rita: umm…… (something was pulling toward her to say yes) sure Tye: Okay, here my business card meet me here at noon Rita: okay As Tye was leaving he had a smile on his face. He started to walk back...
  96. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.14 Enjoy!!! They reach back to his house. When they were walking up the stairs Rita was about to into her room, when AUm pulled her arm. Aum: Where do you think you’re going? Rita: To mine room Aum: I think you go the wrong room Rita: What are you talking about? Aum: Your staying in my...
  97. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    CH.10 part.2 Enjoy! I’m gonna rush though this story this week. After I’m done I will post Pirate. Dennis picks out the perfect outfit for Rita and himself. He knew this was he wanted and he never felt so sure before. He glad that he finally knows the meaning of love. Dennis took Rita to...
  98. lenaaun

    Upside Down!:: [COMPLETE]

    It getting really interesting!!
  99. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.10 part.1 Enjoy!!! Dennis can see blood on her knees and arm. He wanted Ann to pay for what she did to Rita. Rita was still in shock about Ann. Thinking that this woman is crazy. As Ann was leaving, she couldn't believe that Dennis push her of the ground. She wanted that whore...
  100. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.13 Enjoy!!! Sorry I didn’t post this weekend, I will try to post this week. When I have a chance. Rita woke up feeling sore. She was lying on top of Aum naked. She can feel his manhood against her skin. She remembers the last time they decided to call it quite of passion love making...
  101. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    CH.12 Rrated Enjoy! Sorry about the long wait. Been busy with school, but I will post up more this weekend. As for all my other fanfic. Rita mom was getting the maid to make sure they guard the door so they wouldn’t leave the room. She was hoping she has grandchildren soon since she feels...
  102. lenaaun

    The Unfortunates

    I am not a fan of Yard also. It was a cute moment at the zoo.
  103. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    Ch.4 part.1 Enjoy!!! He kept following her, as she made her way to the park. He wanted to know who she was. He couldn’t control himself, he kept on following her. As the beautiful girl was walking toward where her sister was at, she felt someone following her. She dares not to turn her...
  104. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    Yeah he does but he doesn't come to play later
  105. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    Ch.3 Enjoy!!! Tye was working at his step father company. Tye hated his stepfather and wanted him to be dead. But, his mother stops him from even turning into his father. He couldn’t even stand his step family, he wish it was like before when his mother didn’t meet him. He needed to...
  106. lenaaun

    Cursed Amulet :: Rome/Rita

    I love it!!!
  107. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    CH.2 Enjoy!! He believes no one would save him. Surly someone was listening to him. He surely will send his two most beautiful daughter down to earth to save him before it’s too late. He wanted peace on earth. There was no way he letting his brother win the fight on earth. He surly knew...
  108. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    CH.1 Enjoy!!!!! I committed the worst sin that a man can face. I tear away the innocent of humanity in the world. I brought so much pain. Why am I like this? Why do I feel the need to destroy everything that is happiness? I felt the need to do more damage that I already did. I can’t...
  109. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    I am to but still not sure who I will use yet. I like Tye though to.
  110. lenaaun

    Se7en Deadly Sins

    The seven deadly sins are lust, gluttony, greed, sloth, wrath, envy and pride. Have you ever did something so evil and never regret it? I'm gonna tell you my life stories how I got here with all me evil doing? I never knew the meaning of kindness before until I meet her. She was an angel to...
  111. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    CH.11 Rita mom force Rita to show around the house. She took him to the backyard. It was simple but really beautiful. He was amaze that it was way prettier then his yard. He notice Rita closing her eyes while inhaling the fresh air. He thought she look so beautiful just looking relax and...
  112. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Thanks for reading!!! I might write another fanfic. But I don't know who to use. Cause I want Tye and Rita or someone else. Please let me know
  113. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch. 16 Enjoy!!! Rome waiting for his wife to get out of the emergency room. He was worry for her and his child. It was getting really crazy. Everywhere you see nurses and doctor running to his wife and Aum in the emergency room. He waiting with his head resting on the wall waiting for his...
  114. lenaaun

    Whispers :: Ken/Ann

    It doesn't really matter with me if its Rteam or KAteam. I will like either way
  115. lenaaun

    Is it to late? ( Ch.2 part2) 3-16-09

    Ch.2 Part2 Enjoy!!! Sorry that it short. But, I was trying to wrap ch. 2. She was a goddess and I felt that I was to serve her. She thanked me and I ask for her name. She told me just to call her Rita. What a pretty name right? She was the perfect form of a woman that god can make...
  116. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    CH. 15 Enjoy!!! A couple of months pass by….. They were home enjoying there quiet time together. Until they heard someone screaming. They wonder who it was. They started to walk outside to see the noise. It was Aum looking horrible. He been drinking himself to death. He doesn’t know how...
  117. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Yeah when I'm done with some of my fanfic. I will start bleeding rose and a new one but not sure who will star in my net fanfic.
  118. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    CH.10 Part 2 Enjoy!!! They were in the limo. Aum was surprise that Rita was also rich. A smile was beginning on his face knowing that Rita is not gonna use him for his money since she pretty much richer then him. Rita: What are you smiling about? Aum: Umm nothing just the kiss Rita: (her...
  119. lenaaun

    Whispers :: Ken/Ann

    I like the intro. I want Rteam!!!!
  120. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.17 Enjoy!!! In the mean time….. Ken was in hiding from Rome men. He doesn’t know what got into him. All he knows he needed help. He becoming crazy. Ann was having a great time. She was falling for him. Dennis plan was working. He needed Ann to trust him. Dennis: Ann Ann: Yes...
  121. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.16 Enjoy!! Rome didn’t care about anything beside making Rita feel comfy for his child. He hope he get a boy. Rita was getting really tired and she wanted to do was sleep. Rome took her head and laid it down on his chest. He felt asleep while holding her. Noon couldn’t wait for her...
  122. lenaaun

    Friendship (Ch.4) 3-10-09 (on hold)

    Ch. 4 Enjoy!!! While shopping Rita notice that Ken was being over protected of her which made her smile like a little school girl. Ken was getting thirsty and told Rita he be back soon. When he was in line getting his order. A guy approach Rita. He was trying to get with her but she wasn’t...
  123. lenaaun

    Is it to late? ( Ch.2 part2) 3-16-09

    Ch.2 PART 1 Enjoy!!! I became the shadow for the force. I became watch full eyes of the city. I hear a woman crying. I jump from building to building trying to save the helpless woman. I see her screaming, her hair is covering her face. I see the bad guys. I slide down the pike. They...
  124. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    I will later this week since I'm on spring break I will post a lot more then I did.
  125. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    Ch.6 THE END Enjoy Aump didn’t know what to do. Ann of course knew that it was Aump decision who she wanted to be with but she wanted her to be with Ken. Both man decided it was Aump choice to choose. They both decided to wait at city hall with two different room so she can chose to be...
  126. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.9 Enjoy!! Ann didn’t sleep all night thinking about them having sex. She wanted to get her. Ann hated it and very much is dying a little every time seeing Dennis happy with someone else. Ann became an obsession with Rita. Fallowing her everywhere trying to trap her but, it was so hard...
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    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    CH.14 Enjoy!!! Rome was standing there watching his wife dance with another guy. He badly wanted to beat that guy up wicked bad. Rita can felt Rome staring at her with Dennis. When the song ended she kindly thank Dennis for the dance and was tired. She walk up to Rome and gave him a kiss...
  128. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    CH.10 Part 1 Enjoy!!! Aum was finally done with his photo shoot. The paparazzi wanted to know his relationship with the female right next to him. Aum conform that he is indeed dating to young beauty next to him. Paparazzi # 1: Miss Jensen how does your parent like the fact your dating Aum...
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    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    CH.15 Enjoy….. Dennis had the perfect plan to get Ann to pay for his lost. He wanted her to understand the word saddest. He wanted her to suffer. His first plan was to make her fall in love with him and with that love he will began he plan. He started to laugh to himself. Dennis went to...
  130. lenaaun

    Broken Pieces...

    Gosh Aum is a man whore. I love the story though. I wonder what will happen if Ann was pregnant and Aum found out
  131. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.9 Part II Rome started his way to her seeing she was alone. He wanted to swiped her off her feet right off. Rita was getting bored waiting for Aum to get out from the dressing room. Rome made his way to Rita. He wanted to take everything away from AUm. He hated the fact that Aum has...
  132. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    All I'm gonna say is that Dennis does something cruel to Ann.
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    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    CH 14 Part II Rrated Rita look up to see into Rome eyes. There was tears in his eyes. She pick up her hand to wipe his tears away and wonder why he was crying. He finally spoke Rome: Rita I don’t want did to happen to you never again. Rita I love you Rita: Rome it wasn’t your fault and...
  134. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Sorry, I started school and I had a lot of homework and on top of that my computer broke so I got a new one
  135. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.14 Enjoy!!! I know I haven't updated this one in a long time. Tomorrow I will try to post the second half. First half…. Rita started to scream. Ken punched her stomach to shut her up. He was started to undo his pants when a force came crashing through the door. It was Rome, Rome was...
  136. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.9 first half Enjoy!! They finally arrive at the photo shoot. Rome was also there in another area taking some picture for his new commercial. He spotted Aum and the gorgeous lady standing next to him. He was staring at her. Aum notice someone eyes on Rita. He saw Rome and knew what...
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    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.13 Enjoy!!! Sorry again for the long wait!!! Dennis couldn’t believe that Rita was marriage and a mom to be and plus he thought she was a hot one to. He couldn’t stop staring at her and notice every time he does Rome would grab her waist claiming that it was his woman. He wanted to...
  138. lenaaun

    The Bleeding Rose (on hold for the moment)

    Sorry I mean Aump opps. Hehehe and no Aum is not gay. He not even in the story
  139. lenaaun

    The Bleeding Rose (on hold for the moment)

    Ch.1 Sorry I haven't post any stories in a long time Year 1993 Ann was about 16yrs old. She and her parents went on a curse to Bahamas. Her mother best-friend Cara came along to. Ann was really close to her mother, everyone thought of Ann as a mini version of her mother. Her father Joel...
  140. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Hey guys!!! I'm gonna upload all my fanfic this weekend
  141. lenaaun

    Soo Sarn Poodaesah(Chulumpee)

    I can't wait to see this lakorn. Rita and Tye looks cute together. Does anyone knows when will it air?
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    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.8 Enjoy!! Rita woke up feeling like it was her best sleep ever. She felt someone arm wrapping around her. She look on side and notice Aum half naked hugging he. She started to scream. AUm woke up by her scream. Rita: Aum why am I in your bed and your shirtless. Aum: Don’t you remember...
  143. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    CH.5 Enjoy!!! Aump had a date with Ken tonight. He wanted to tell her something over dinner. She still felt pain though her legs but she got the courage to stand up and got dress up cause she wanted to tell Ann what happen. Aump went to go see Ann was her flower shop. Ann was happy to see...
  144. lenaaun

    The February Ladies::[Rita/Ann/Aff]

    OMG awww poor Rita and Rome they have lust for each other but to scare to tell each other.
  145. lenaaun

    The Bleeding Rose (on hold for the moment)

    Lol RR, Don't worry I'm pretty sure it won't happen to you since its only in my story.
  146. lenaaun

    The Bleeding Rose (on hold for the moment)

    Intro II Characters Ann: is 24 year old females who needs to find her true love before her 25th birthday. She very determine and has a strong personalties. Ken: is 27 year old male who is very clumsy. He keeps to himself, he feels that relationship are waste of time for himself. Since...
  147. lenaaun

    The Unfortunates

    I love it!!!
  148. lenaaun

    The Bleeding Rose (on hold for the moment)

    Intro: Ann was raise by her wicked step mother and her father. Who hated Ann with a passion. She wanted Ann to die along with her mother. But, she decided to give her a present a curse white rose. She didn't mention that if she touch the rose. The rose belongs to her and only her. The...
  149. lenaaun

    The Bleeding Rose (on hold for the moment)

    The Bleeding Rose Staring: Ken Ann The white rose bleeds when I'm heart is missing that special someone. It will bleed on and on till I find my one true one.
  150. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.7 Enjoy!!!! Rita was enjoying her meal when Aum tapped her shoulder scaring her to death. She wanted to yell at him but she couldn’t since her face was stuff with food. Aum started to laugh at her. He really enjoy her company. He doesn’t feels so alone now. He wanted her to be his wife...
  151. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch. 6 Enjoy!!!! Rita: I’m sorry what? Aum: Rita please be my girlfriend for now Rita: Why me? Aum: Rita I really like you from the moment I laid my eyes on you Rita: What? Aum: Yes Rita (grab her hand into his) Rita: Umm….. not sure Aum: Okay it settle you’re my girlfriend Rita: What? I...
  152. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.13 Enjoy!!!!! They held each other throughout the night. They decided it was time for them to get back. Since it has been a couple of days now. They started to walk to look for something that look like they’re on the right trail. Rita: Rome I see someone Rome: Where? Rita: Right...
  153. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    Grrwww.... I feel for you. I have statistics homework and a test on it in two weeks and I still don't get it.
  154. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    So hey guys I'm gonna update tonight pirate territory and not sure what else. But, I have another fanfic in mind to write about. But I tell you guys about it later.
  155. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.8 Enjoy!!!! RatedR. :w-scene-pop-corn: :r-scene-pop-corn: Got done with all my homework and decided just to update this story. They went to the club. Num pulled Rita to the dance floor. Making Dennis sitting with the other models. He got really jealous and he couldn’t control himself...
  156. lenaaun

    FICTION DISCUSSION

    I don't know when I will have time to write my fanfic to, since I went back to school this week and I shouldn't take all my hard classes this semester. But, I try when I'm not doing busy.
  157. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    CH.4 Enjoy!!! Short update!!!!!! ~~Aump~~ Something inside of me wanted to die. I really hate him for what he has done. No matter how I try to forget about him. It still hunts me. I want to move on but am I willing to let of what he did to me. I think I need to teach this bastard a...
  158. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.7 Enjoy!!!! A short update. I had a photo shoot today and decided to take Rita along since I don't know what Ann might do. When we were walking to my car I notice Ann car from across the street. Shit I thought she living across from me. Lucky we're sharing a room and I didn't want Rita...
  159. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    You find out!!!! :lol: But it gonna be in a couple more chapter I want to make Rome jealous of Rita hanging out with Dennis
  160. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.12 Enjoy!!!! Rome watch as Rita felt asleep. He walk outside the room to make a phone call to Ann. He felt mad as hell knowing that Ann betray him making him hate one the most important person in his life. Ring....ring..............ring......... Ann: Hello Rome: Ann Ann: Rome what the...
  161. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch. 5 Enjoy!!! This is for Lollipop_luv who wanted me to post this up and sorry about the wait. What the hell Rita! He mines and an only mines. I hired you cause I thought you hated him. Awww I should slap you!!! It was just Benz thought. All she ask was how was the evening cause she...
  162. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    Ch.3 Enjoy!!!! Aump felt asleep with tears still coming down. Krit woke up with the sun shining though. He felt like there was rain drop hitting him. He look on his side and saw Aump in his arm crying. He realize what he did to her. He felt pain shooting though his heart. He couldn't...
  163. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.6 Enjoy!!! They finish there meal and decided to go back to sleep since it was 4ish in the morning. Dennis was getting tired since he didn't get any sleep. He felt asleep when he and Rita went back into the room. Ann was watching them with smile and was thinking they where doing the...
  164. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.11 Enjoy!!! Sorry I thought I post it up!!! Rome wanted to know the truth from Ann and wanted to know where his letters that Rita sent him. Rita had really bad morning sickness. Everything she ate when back out. Rome was getting worried that his child is not getting anything to eat...
  165. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    CH.2 Enjoy!!!! RatedR kinda Krit realize that he wanted Aump again. He doesn't know how. Right now all he want was to drink himself to death. Thinking Aump really move on from him. He couldn't believe she change so much for the pass week. She got hotter and doesn't look the same girl he...
  166. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.10 Enjoy!!! Rome turn around to face Rita in there room. Rome: Rita I need to ask you something? Rita: Sure Rome: Okay Rita: yes Rome: Okay how come you never wrote to me when you where at the State Rita: What are you taking about? I wrote to you every week and I never got a letter from...
  167. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    Lol, RR but you gonna find out what Krit does and you will not like it. Aump is one of my favorite thai actress. I be updated later tonight. g2g before I'm late for work
  168. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    Ch.1 Enjoy!!!! Aump....... Krit you know how much I loved you. I gave you my body and soul. What do I get in return? Let me tell you, Nothing. I caught you cheating on me over and over and I still come back to you. Not anymore. I need to move on with my life and be with someone that love...
  169. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.9 Enjoy!!!!!! They felt asleep being really tired from making love though out the night. Rome woke up holding onto Rita. He couldn't believe how beautiful this angel look like naked in his arm. He started to give her kisses on her neck. Rita: MmmmMmmm.... Rome stop it, I'm tired...
  170. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Thanks!!! Yeah I'm gonna miss my long vacation. But I be posting more chapter tonight.
  171. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.8 Enjoy!!! RatedR They are gonna share the bed again since the room didn't have everywhere else to sleep. The floor gets really cold since the floor is marble. Rome couldn't stop looking at Rita. She was getting ready for bed. He watch her brushing her hair at the dresser. He...
  172. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.5 Enjoy!!!! While sleeping Dennis kept staring at Rita sleeping. He couldn't get her naked body image out of his mind. He felt his man hood rising up. He try so hard to think of something else. It was hard for him. He needed to try real hard. He went to use the bathroom and when he got...
  173. lenaaun

    What the point of loving you? (Complete) 3-10-09

    What the point of loving you? Aump Chakrit (Krit) ken What the point of loving you? If you don't love me back. I hate being with you. You make me feel useless Krit!!! I fucking hate you and please leave me alone. I finally pulled myself up and your coming back cause I move on. You told...
  174. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    lol, yep but you find out why he doesn't get anyone in a couple more chapter
  175. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.12 Enjoy!!! Sorry it took awhile. RatedR :w-scene-pop-corn: :r-scene-pop-corn: In the mean time......... ~~~Dennis~~~ I don't' know why she(referring to Ann) can leave me alone. I will never like her. She not my type and she only like me cause she can't remember who I was. Flash...
  176. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.7 Enjoy!!! Sorry about the long wait!!!! They both blush and got up quickly. They didn't talk much during breakfast. Aum stay in his room sleeping since he didn't sleep at all. Then his phone rang, it was his mother. He pick up the phone. Rome: Shit Rita, my parent is staying with...
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    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.4 Enjoy!!!! There food came. Rita dig in right away. Dennis was a little worried. Rita: Dennis eat IT Dennis: ummm..... is it clean Rita: Dennis I have eated here so many times and nothing happen to me Dennis: Okay He took a bite and he never eated anything this tasty before. It made...
  178. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.3 Enjoy!!!! Rita didn't want her grandparent to think she was doing something wrong. She doesn't know how she got mess up with all this craziness from. First from Dennis then to his crazy ex who want to kill me. How am I gonna stay at his pad? My grandparent will kill me finding out I'm...
  179. lenaaun

    The February Ladies::[Rita/Ann/Aff]

    I wonder why Rome was acting that way to Rita? Can't wait!!!
  180. lenaaun

    Five Roses- FINAL CHAPTER *COMPLETE*

    Omg, I can't believe its coming to an end
  181. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Ch.2 Enjoy!!! During the ride to restaurant. Dennis kept telling Rita to really act like they're in love. When Ann leave him alone for good. She will walk on a runway shows showing off her new catwalk. Rita couldn't wait since no one is willing to teach her since her grandparent told them...
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    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    CH.1 Enjoy!!! I been with Ann for about two months before I decided to move to Thailand to be with her. I wanted to become a successful model and actor there. I love Korea a lot but it's time for me to be with Ann. I thought everything was going great. But, one time she stalk me at a...
  183. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    Hehehe I do sometime. Yep Ann is going to do some crazy stuff. I'm gonna post the first chapter sometime today.
  184. lenaaun

    My Crazy Ex (Ch.11 THE END) 4-12-09

    My Crazy Ex Girlfriend Staring: Dennis Rita Ann Here my story about my crazy ex girlfriend. Oh by the way my name is Dennis. I'm a famous model in Korea, but I decided to move back to Thailand to be with my girlfriend then. Her name was Ann, oh gosh she was crazy. She would stalk me...
  185. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.11[/size] Enjoy!!!! Sorry for the short chapter. I promise the next chapter is gonna be longer. I kinda have writer block on this. They stay in each other arm naked though the night. He couldn't believe that she his. He falling for her everyday they spend time together. He doesn't...
  186. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    All I'm gonna say is Aum doesn't hook up with anyone. As for Rteam hehehe they gonna have another Rrated scene.
  187. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    CH.6 Enjoy!!!!! He quickly went to pick up Ann. He went to her condo to see if she was done. She open the door with a smile. But when he try to give her a kiss, she distance herself. He wonder what was wrong. He took her to a fancy restaurant. It was there favorite place to eat. He pull...
  188. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.5 Enjoy!!! They continue though the night making love. They held each other while sleeping naked. The next morning........ They woke up late in the day. Rita notice she was naked. She thought she deamt about making love to Aum. She realize did she and Rome had sex. She started to...
  189. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    lol, I got help from boyfriend since he major in journalist.
  190. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.4 Enjoy!!!!! RatedR. :r-scene-pop-corn: Be warn hot scene. :loool: They reach to there room. They both were quiet. They didn't feel like arguing. They stay in there room avoiding each glare. In the mean time...... Rome father had a plans to drug them during dinner, so they will...
  191. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch. 10 Enjoy!!!! RatedR. :w-scene-pop-corn: :r-scene-pop-corn: While hiking Ken had a plan to make Rome fall into the river by the waterfall. He wanted Rome gone so he can have Rita for himself. He never felt jealous before till he met Rita. They stop by the top of the riverfall...
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    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.3 Enjoy!!! Rome woke up first then Rita. He wanted to get ready before she woke up. He couldn't forget what he saw last night. Rita naked chest and he needed a cold shower. He a man and he has needs. When he got out of the bathroom. He still notice Rita sleeping. He went to sit on...
  193. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Ch.2 Enjoy!!!! ~~~Rita~~~ We reach back to the house we will be living together. Are parents were waiting for us in the bedroom. I hope they leave soon. I want to get rid of this night. I want my live the way it was before this nightmare. Grrww..... I was right our parents are in the...
  194. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    CH.1 Enjoy!! ~~~Rita~~~ I was force to marry him. We hated each other so much cause we had to break up with the people we truly love. I hated him, and he hated me which I knew. We truly wanted to be out of this marriage. I was in love with my boyfriend Aum. He was hurt when he saw the...
  195. lenaaun

    Hopeless (complete) 3-18-09

    Hopeless Staring: Rome Rita Ann Aum Why did I had to be force to marry him? We hated each other. This marriage is a total fake. I try to run away but my dad always found me. If it wasn't for the stupid arrange marriage. We are force to be marry and they are trying to force us for...
  196. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    All I can say is yes Ann and Dennis did meet. Dennis has a reacted to not liking Ann.
  197. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    CH.9 Enjoy!!! Ann felt unwanted by the new hottie. She didn't know why since this was the first time she saw him or is it. She wanted him. She was watching him taking off his shirt. Daydreaming..... Ann I want you now. He started to do a strip tease while looking at her. She was getting...
  198. lenaaun

    My Fake Fiance:: Chapter 1 COMPLETED

    I can't wait for this story!!! :blink:
  199. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.8 Enjoy! While Ann walk up to the cargo's. She went up to him. She wanted to know who he is and wanted to get him all to herself. Ann:Hi, my name is Ann. What yours? ?: Dennis Ann: Oh kool your name is Dennis. What are you doing? Dennis: What does it look like I'm doing. Ann: Yeah so...
  200. lenaaun

    The February Ladies::[Rita/Ann/Aff]

    Great story!!
  201. lenaaun

    Is it to late? ( Ch.2 part2) 3-16-09

    CH.1 Enjoy!!! It short!! Is it to late? That the question you should think about. I tell you my story if you want. So okay I tell you. This what happen five years ago. I was a cop at the time. Yeah a cop, I know. It coming back to me like it was yesterday. There was a bad shooting...
  202. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.7 Enjoy!!! Rome: I will tell you if you promise me something Rita: What's the promise that I have you tell me your story Rome: Only if you promise me first, then I will tell you about my story Rita: Okay fine I promise Rome: Since you promise that you won't leave me alone at the island...
  203. lenaaun

    Is it to late? ( Ch.2 part2) 3-16-09

    I was going to write about them being separated but I change the story line. I wanted more like a cartoon kind of story feel.
  204. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.6 Enjoy!!!! The ship came closer. He knew it was another pirate ship. He order his man to get their armors ready for a battle. He turn around to face Rita. Rome: Rita hold on to this sword and stay right behind me, you got that Rita: Yes, whats going on? Rome: We might be fighting...
  205. lenaaun

    My Heart's For Sale :: Rome/Rita

    Love the stories so far, I wounder where he taking her.
  206. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch. 5 Enjoy!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!! Rita felt someone tapping on her shoulder. She turn around to face Noon, Rome sister. She wounder what she wanted from her. Since she doesn't really know her. Noon: Rita can I talk to you Rita: What about? Noon: Okay I know Rome like you, what about...
  207. lenaaun

    Is it to late? ( Ch.2 part2) 3-16-09

    Is it to late? Staring: Rita Andrew and many more..... P.S. I'm gonna try to write first person. Is it to late? To get back want you once had. I don' t know. What do you think? I hate the presets, there so many evil going around. The innocent of laugher in child voice. I want to to...
  208. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch.14 Enjoy!!! Last chapter Rita couldn't believe Rome. She walk back and forth in there room where they made love. She wrote a letter for Rome. She began to pack all her stuff that she needed and decided this was his lesson on treating people like toys. Rome reach home to see his lovely...
  209. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.4 Enjoy!!!! Short chapter!!!! Rome.......... How am I going to get Ann to help me. Wait maybe if I gave her a chest full of gold she will help since I know she loves gold. She be willing to help me. Man I want to get her in the sheets. Ken........ There something about Rita that...
  210. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    lolz
  211. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch.13 Enjoy!!! I can't believe I'm naked in the arm to the man I use to dislike in the world. I never thought he would be my husband and my lover. If someone told me that me and him is going to get married I would of not believe it, till this day. I can feel her getting up. I want to spend...
  212. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Yeah I'm trying to a new style in my writing. As for being there I bet you wish it was you instant RR. lolz
  213. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch.12 Enjoy!!! X-Rated :r-scene-pop-corn: . Hehehehe I was laughing typing this. Its a long chapter. Its gonna get hot. lolz He turn around to face her. They look at each other with hunger in there eyes. He knew tonight was the night and she knew she will no longer be a little girl...
  214. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    This will be finish this weekend I think.
  215. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.3 Enjoy!!!!!!! Rome told his man to burn Num body to get rite out of the smell. He left with Mart to the house. He was glad that he got Num. Since Num was his enemies. Num gave Rome a scar on his chest, during a fight about a girl. That Rome loved and Num stole her under him. Making...
  216. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch.11 Enjoy!!!! Sorry it a short chapter. In the mean time at the Jensen house...................... There were no room to walk since they had everyone coming to help with the wedding for tonight. Rome couldn't wait to see Rita in a wedding dress. He could finally have her. Rita was...
  217. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Don't worry I didn't I will update that tonight. But my other stories on hold though
  218. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    CH.2 Enjoy!!!!! Rome took them to where they were gonna stay at. Ken follow behide them. He notice how scare Rita was and he wanted to help her but he couldn't. Ann eyes almost pop out when she saw the gold furniture. From the bed stand to the bathroom was cover into gold. She wanted it...
  219. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Yep, yep. I'm not really sure yet. But it might be Aum or Mark for guys. For girls NoonS or Aump. Not sure.
  220. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Ch.1 Enjoy!!!!!!!! Rome love the sea as much as land. He felt free and powerful knowing he was the ruler of the sea. This was his territory. He always wanted to be a pirate just like his father. His father was tough and strong no one dare to mess with him. His mother was different, he...
  221. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    This is gonna be one of my long chapter. So not sure. hehehe
  222. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    I so agree with you about pirate being hot. lolz
  223. lenaaun

    Pirate Territory (complete) 6-25-09

    Pirate Territory Staring: Rome Rita Ken Ann Rome was the leader of the Pirate. Who loved the fact that he rule the ocean. His older brother Ken didn't have the heart in it like Rome. Since he was never that evil like Rome. He was the nice one out of his family beside his mother. His...
  224. lenaaun

    Friendship (Ch.4) 3-10-09 (on hold)

    CH. 3 Enjoy!!!! It was the first day of school for Rita. Ken drove to pick up Rita at her house. He couldn't wait to see her. He went inside to to see if she was ready. While coming down the stairs, Ken couldn't stop checking out Rita from head to toe noticing what a hot body she got...
  225. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Yep, but you won't know how till later in the story.
  226. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.4 Enjoy!!!! When they reach to the hotel where the benefit was being held. There were camera flashing everywhere. Rita was blind by the light, then she saw a hand toward her. She grab it, it was Aum. He was trying to block it from her. Paparazzi #1: Who is she? Paparazzi #2: Give us...
  227. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch. 10 Enjoy!!!! Sorry I haven't post my computer crash and I just got it fixs. Sorry that its short. I will try to finish this asap. Couple of days pass.................... They decided to go back to the city. Rita seem happy about Rome. He never wanted to end this, he felt peace and...
  228. lenaaun

    My Heart's For Sale :: Rome/Rita

    Great start, really different which I like.
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    Don't leave me alone

    CH.3 Enjoy!!!! Aum was laughing to himself about Rita. He thought she was so cute. ~~ring~~~ring~~ring~~~~ Aum: Hello who this Benz: Its me Benz Aum: Yes what is it Benz: Don't forget you have a benefit dinner tonight and you have to be there Aum: Aww yeah okay Benz: Sooo umm...who are you...
  230. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    CH.2 Enjoy!!!! A short chapter Aum couldn't wait to see her face, he felt like there was something about her that he wanted to get to know. It see like she doesn't know who I am. Which was good. Her manager Benz went to pick her up at Rita place. She wasn't looking forward to working for...
  231. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Ch.1 Enjoy!!!!!! Aum is the most high paying artiest of this decent in music and acting. He had everything that person can have but one thing that he doesn't have is someone there for him not just for his fame. One day he was heading to his agency company to see talk to his manager for...
  232. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Thanks NoyV, I'm trying to post my fanfic before it disappear from my head lol, anyways I'm gonna try to upload some chapters of my story, cause I might not not be uploading for a while cause I be traveling for my job.
  233. lenaaun

    Don't leave me alone

    Don't leave me alone Staring Aum Rita Aum is a famous musician/actor. He had everything but he was always felt alone. There was always people surrounding him but they were never really there for him though. He wishes that someone will come and take away his loneness. Rita...
  234. lenaaun

    Friendship (Ch.4) 3-10-09 (on hold)

    Ch. 2 Enjoy!!!! Rita wore a yellow dress, it made her look like a princess. Her heart started to beat faster knowing Ken will be there. She couldn't wait to see him again, she misses him sooo much. She hope that they can be friends again. In the other hand, Ken wounder who the party was...
  235. lenaaun

    Friendship (Ch.4) 3-10-09 (on hold)

    This fanfic is gonna be all short chapter.
  236. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch.9 Enjoy!!!!!!!!! Rated R :r-scene-pop-corn: Rome reach for his hand and started to touch her but he stop and gave her a kiss. He needed a long cold shower. He doesn't want to force her to sleep with him. He couldn't stop thinking about her in a dirty way. He was daydreaming about...
  237. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    It really wont really happen about her getting back him till toward the end. And as for Rita finding out it will be toward the end to.
  238. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch.8 Enjoy!!!!! Rome couldn't wait to get though with his plan. He called one of his girl to help him out. She was surprise by Rome. She never thought that he would settle with any girl. But, she thought it was crazy but she willing to help him. Since he help her a lot. Rome knew all...
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    Friendship (Ch.4) 3-10-09 (on hold)

    CH.1 Enjoy!!!!!!!!!!! It been five years since they have seen each other. Ken drove by Rita house and wounder who was moving in. He thought that someone bought the house since she hasn't came back. He wonder who, so he decided to ask his parent who moving in to Rita place...
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    Payback is a B***h

    CH.7 Enjoy!!!!!!!!! Rome was soooo piss off that Rita left before he came to pick her up. But, in away it made his wanted her even more. He thinking of how have her all to himself. In the mean time..... Rita went shopping and decided to go home later. Cause she doesn't want to dump into...
  241. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Ch.12 Last chapter Enjoy!!!! Rita went for a walk. Out of nowhere someone came up behind her cover her mouth with alcohol making her faint in the person hand. Minutes later Rita woke up, with people talking. Then she heard Num voice. Num: So, you think you can fool me Rita: What are you...
  242. lenaaun

    Sin City

    CH. 11 Enjoy!!!!! One more chapter to go. Yay :clap: They were getting close to capture Num. They really want to get Num and be done with. But, they have became closer as the days goes by. Aum sense that there were something going on with Ken and Rita. Cause every time he stop by to...
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    Friendship (Ch.4) 3-10-09 (on hold)

    Friendship Staring Rita Ken Ken and Rita friendship was unstoppable when they were little. They live near each other. Everything was going good for them. Till one day Rita parents die in a plane crash leaving young Rita with her grandparents, who live in Australia. There...
  244. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Don't worry I'm gonna make it two long chapters this week. But, be surprise
  245. lenaaun

    Sin City

    CH. 10 Enjoy!!! I think I might make this short. Since I want to write something different. When this is done.I'm gonna write another story about Ken and Rita. Rita didn't want to talk to Ken anymore. So Ken went to see his friend Paul to talk to him about what happen with him and Rita...
  246. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    CH. 6 enjoy!!!!! Sorry it's kinda short. I will be kinda busy this weekend redoing my room and might not have time to post more chapter. The next day.... Rita left Dennis place in the morning. When she got home she didn't expected that Rome was at her place waiting for her. Rome: Did...
  247. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch. 5 Enjoy!!!!! Rome wanted to spend the whole day with Rita. Rome: Rita want to go out tonight Rita: I can't, I have plans Rome: Like what? Rita: I'm gonna meet Dennis, I miss him so much especially his touch(she was lying about part, since she haven slept with anyone yet) Rome: Oh I see...
  248. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Nope she doesn't, all I can say is she doesn't fall for him that soon.
  249. lenaaun

    Sin City

    P.S. I'm gonna post more chapter for this story on the weekend now. I kinda have a writer block on this story. But I'm planning to finish this before Christmas for who ever like this Fanfic story. Enjoy Spoil: Who will Rita choose? Aum -The xboyfriend, who she kinda still love...
  250. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    CH.4 Enjoy!!!!! I'm calling a quite for tonight. Will be posting a chapter later. Goodnight That night............... Rome............... Damn why can't I stop thinking about her. Is like she has a spell over me. Damn I can't wait to see her tomorrow. Her touch and her soft lips...
  251. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Ch.9 Enjoy!!! A short chapter. Ken left Rita sleeping and decided to make amend with her. Rita was still in a little pain but she feels a lot better. She couldn't believe he witness his wife and son being kill in front of him. She feels like she still not sure if she will never forgive him...
  252. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Yes and No about Dennis getting hurt. You just have to see. Hehehe
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    Payback is a B***h

    CH.3 Enjoy!!!!!!! Rita wanted to scream for help. But, his hand where on her mouth. He turn around to face her, it was Rome. She wanted to scream but he force a kiss on her. Making her slap him and knee him on his private part. Making him fall down. Rita: You deserve that asshole, how...
  254. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Thanks for all your comments. Some of them crank me up. :loool:
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    Payback is a B***h

    CH.2 Enjoy. Its a short Chapter. Rome went up to talk to Rita. But when he try to talk to her, but she just walk away leaving his mouth open. She hated him and didn't want to talk to him. While Rita was talking to one of the party guest. The guest was talking about how brilliant she...
  256. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Ch.1 Enjoy :ph34r: It been four years, that I step back here. My parent were the one to visit me during school and my runway walk. Gosh the bring back so much memory. I hope that I never see Rome again. He made my younger years very painful for me. I heard so much rumors about him...
  257. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Ch 8 The next morning..... Ken woke up with a bad headache. He wonder why he was naked. He turn to see Rita laying next to him naked also in his bed. He thought of what happen last night, he recall thinking he was making love to his wife Anne. OMG he thought I rape her. He look at her...
  258. lenaaun

    Payback is a B***h

    Payback is a Bitch Staring Rome Rita Rome and Rita live right next door to each other. Rome always made fun of her, cause how they way she looks. She had an afro and wasn't pretty looking like other girls in there high school. Rome and his friends use to make fun of her calling...
  259. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Ch.6 & 7 Rated R. :r-scene-pop-corn: Enjoy, sorry I took a while to post this up. They reach to the gym. Ken wanted to see how tough she was. He started to get warm up then Rita ask him if he doesn't mind in boxing with her. He was fined since he thought she can't fight. To hid...
  260. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    CH. 8 Enjoy, last chapter. I'm gonna go write some more chapter for Sin City. One month later...... They were at home. Rita was feeling well, so Aum took her to the hospital. They did some testes. The doctor came in congratulation your having a baby. Aum was soo happy that he gonna...
  261. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    CH.7 Enjoy, Rated R. She turn around to see who it was. (It was Tik she gasp) Rita: Tik let go of my arm your hurting me. Tik: What the fuck, how can you marry that guy for. Rita: Tik you hurt me first and now I have move on with the person that I love. You cheated on me and now I...
  262. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    Ch.6 I was going to post it yesterday, but couldn't get internet connection on the road. So anyways I'm in NYC. I try to post a another chapter up today. The next couple of days..... Rita and Aum told her parent they got marry. Her father was piss off that he didn't to walk her down...
  263. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    Hahaha all I can yes and no. But, I'm gonna try to finish this weekend, since I only plan to cut this story short.
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    Helping Hands {short story}

    CH.5 Enjoy!!!! Rita couldn't believe she heard it, he has cancer. No Aum you can have it. Rita kept listen in on them. She didn't know what to do, but she know she has to be there for him. Doctor: Aum you need to be careful from now on, don't work to much. We need a donor before 3...
  265. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    Ch.4 I hope you guys enjoy, I'm gonna finish this story first then Sin City. I think I'm gonna make this a short story. Since, that what I'm heading on. During the night............ Rita............ OMG I can't believe I was holding his hand the tired night. Why didn't I notice it...
  266. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    hahaha They might or something will happen to them. hehehe
  267. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    Thanks, I think my poster skill is not up to your level though. Have a great Thanksgiving!!!!
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    Helping Hands {short story}

    Ch.3 Rita couldn't believe Aum was her new partner. He also couldn't believe that he was working with her. It must been faith for them to meet again. Rita show Aum where everything was. It was noon time. Rita: Aum do want to have lunch with me today? Since I owe you so much. Aum: Sure...
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    Helping Hands {short story}

    Ch.2 Rita couldn't believe how this stranger was being really nice to her. She couldn't sleep at all, the image kept playing over and over again in her mind. Tik and Anne sleeping with each other behind her back. I'm sick of everything, I thought he loved me and I thought she was my best...
  270. lenaaun

    Sin City

    CH.5 Enjoy, I will post more chapter later, I'm gonna start on Helping Hand for a little a bit. Rita kept thinking about Aum. Do I still love him? She wasn't sure what she felt about him. Ken couldn't stop thinking about Num. How am I gonna get you? They didn't sleep till late in the...
  271. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    Ch.1 Enjoy, I really enjoy writing this story so far. I will post more chapters later on. Everything was going the way I wanted to. I got a high paying job at a law firm, the perfect boyfriend and so much more. Until that one day, that broke my soul, I wanted to surprise my boyfriend at...
  272. lenaaun

    Helping Hands {short story}

    lol, I just like writing story since I was young. It help me express my thought on how I see thing as. Hahaha I know what you mean about dawn to other fiction.
  273. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Thanks RR I really love the poster you made for me. You don't have to trouble yourself. But thanks again. I'm the same way, I love when it snows but hate to shovel, But I love it when it snows on Christmas eve, it make my Christmas even better. LOL
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    Helping Hands {short story}

    HELPING HANDS Staring: Aum Rita Tik Chakrit Anne Aom Paul Num I decided to use more character in this story. Have you ever heard the thing you love the most will destroy you? That happen to me, it destroy me. I wanted to give up, until that day my life change cause of him. I will...
  275. lenaaun

    Sin City

    hahaha Your lucky I love the snow but not to much, I live in the New England area and we have every type of weather. About the love firing up, you just have to wait and see.
  276. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Ch.5 Enjoy While leaving the office. Ken decided to finish his partner Paul at his house. While starting his car, it didn't turn on, he kick the damn car and curse a storm. Rita wishes she had a new partner but she didn't want to look like a diva, demanding a new partner. She decided...
  277. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Thanks, I like when it rains and snow but not pouring rain though. I was shopping with my boyfriend and it started to pour on us, making us run for cover. Hehehe but, I still had fun.
  278. lenaaun

    Sin City

    CH.4 Enjoy I just got back from dinner. What a sucky day out today? It pour on us, but I had fun. The next morning..... Ken woke with a knock on his door. Ken: come in maid: Ms. Rita told me to get you this pair of clothes and to tell you breakfast in done. Ken: Okay I be there soon...
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    Becoming a Family Again

    I know I ended really quickly, but I couldn't just wanted to finish this asap. But, I'm gonna try to make my other future story longer. I got writer block writing about Becoming a Family Again. hahaha
  280. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Chapter 3 enjoy I wanted to post this during work since, I finish typing this. But I couldn't get internet connection with my laptop at work. I kinda feel this was a little draggy............ Sorry :blink: While they made into the night club. Every guy envy Ken, since he was with hottest...
  281. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Hahaha I'm not surprise if I sometime type Rome name instant of Ken since I keep thinking I was typing the story with him and Rita.
  282. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Ch.2 enjoy The next day..... Ken wasn't looking forward to meet his new WOMAN partner. Ken was sitting at him desk looking though files about the gang. Rita reach to her new work location. When she got every men was staring at her like a goddess. Thinking to them self who is she. Rita went...
  283. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    CH.12 the last chapter :clap: I hope you guys love my first fanfiction story. I had fun writing this story.... The couple of has pass by..... Rita was on her last month of the pregnancy, which she was happy. Since Rome won't let her do anything beside sleep and eat. While Rome was...
  284. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    Ch.11 While waiting for doctor to come out. Rome made a phone called to the nanny telling her, that they be a little longer. Second later, the doctor came out. Rome ran to the doctor. Rome: What wrong with my wife? Doctor: You don't know that your wife is three month pregnant with your...
  285. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Ch.1 Enjoy...... Have you ever heard the City that never dies? When night time come, all the illegal actives come out making the city known as Sin City. I use all my power to get all these illegal actives out of my city. I need to find the leader of the Sin City Gang who ruining everything...
  286. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    Chapter 10 Rated R. :r-scene-pop-corn: Enjoy Rome quickie undress and got in the shower with Rita. Rita: Rome what are you doing? Rome: with a smile, you know!!! laughing.... he never felt like this even when he was in love with Lin. There something about Rita that make him want to be...
  287. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    hahaha since Joel is a baby still, he can sleep though everything.
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    Becoming a Family Again

    Chapter 9 :wub: Enjoy The next morning... Rome woke up first. He kept staring at Rita. Thinking to himself that he was the most luckiest guy on earth, he marry the most beautiful woman. He gave Rita a kiss on the naked shoulder, waking Rita. Rita turn to face Rome. :kiss: Rome gave her...
  289. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    Hehehe Umm Joel was sleeping thought out the night and Rome did do something to Rita, but I didn't want to write about it in the earlier chapter.
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    Becoming a Family Again

    Ch.8 Rated R. :r-scene-pop-corn: enjoy. While kissing, Rome and Rita felt that someone is pushing them to be closer. It seem that Lin wanted them to be together. Rome started to undress Rita, which was easy since she was wearing a dress. He was so amaze by her body. Seeing her naked...
  291. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    lolz, Aump is not gonna be the third wheel. But there something that gonna go between Rome and Rita. Rita x-boyfriend come back to the picture, making Rome jealous. :tease:
  292. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Me 2, I really want to see Ken pair up with Rita in lakorn. Cause I'm kinda sick of him paring with Anne.
  293. lenaaun

    Sin City

    Yeah I kinda mess up the pic. Thanks RR for another picture. Thanks Again RR, I love this poster the most. Ken work at the FBI agent. His partner Paul got shot and needed to recover. His boss decided to assign him a new partner till Paul is better. Rita is Ken new partner. Ken is a...
  294. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    Chapter 6 and 7 Another two long chapter. ^_^ I know I'm posting this fast I just wanted to finish this. I have another great idea for another story staring Aum and Rita or Rita and Ken don't know who to use yet. Which do want more Rita and Aum or Rita and Ken? Lolz I'm almost done with...
  295. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    Chapter 4 & 5 I made it a two chapter since it was long. Hope you like it... Since leaving the Hospital, Rita kept thinking about Rome. What did I get myself into, but I needed to know about Lin and why she never talk about her days at college. In the meantime..... Rome thought of away to...
  296. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    Thanks RR, its soo cute. Its perfect for the story thanks again
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    Becoming a Family Again

    Chapter 3 While Rita was leaving the Hospital with Joel. Rome decided to pretend to bump into Rita just so he can be more closer to her and Lin son. While Rita was heading out to the door, she had a hard time holding everything in her hand since she had Joel also in her hands. Sooo Rome...
  298. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    yep I will post more chapters this weekend, since its a long weekend for me.
  299. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    CH.2 Rita: How do you know my sister? Rome: Lin and I went to college together. How is your sister. Rita: she started to be teary. Lin is DEAD!!! Rome: Wait.... your lying. (thinking to himself) omg Lin. Why does t have to happen to you. I wish I could have told you that I loved you since...
  300. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    Thanks RR, you just have to wait and see I will post the second chapter up tomorrow, explaining how Rome knows Rita sister. Yeah Rome will look hot as a doctor. lol
  301. lenaaun

    Becoming a Family Again

    This is my first fanfiction story that I'm writing. I hope you guys like it. It staring Rita and Rome since I love them so much. Thanks to RR for the pic Chapter 1 It was a stormy night. Rita was home resting. She hope her older sister Lin was fined. Rita thought to herself Lin...
  302. lenaaun

    Dao Ja Rat Fah(Who & Who)

    I pretty sure it Benz and Rome pairing up together..
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