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kulyia

RUK
Changes have been made

Its been a few months now. And ive decided to change the cast for GOOD. lol. the banner will still be up because idont want to throw away Julies artwork. there are exactly NO cast or anyone for the characters. They are who you want to be. And like ive stated before you never know what your going to write. And over the months ive decided to write my future or current fanfics with no specific people. srry for the confusion. once again srry for the confusion. As soon as RR re-upload this, iwill continue to update it like once before. Murderer on Loose will however be put on hold.

-kulyia


*Party ; khoon dtaas
*Ratanas arrival in Dome Torng
*Rape
*Vanida lost in the forrest
*Kiet and Fake Tasanee will arrive in Dome Torng
*Engagement
*Death
*NEW details



The ORiginal cast is no longer the Current(10/9/9) cast.
Main Original characters:
Tua saranyu: Ahdit Suttikul
Nattarika Thamapreedanan aka leela: Tasanee Sirakit
Aom Piyada: Vanida Chapordaporn
Suwajanee Chaipamusic: Kulap Nimaporn
Captain Blank: Kiet *srry no idea his last name :eek: lol
jintara sukapat: Mali Suttikul
No character: Ratana Chapordaporn/ Suttikul
Weir: Virote
Aof Aphichart Puapimon: Adirake Sirakit

Banner credit:Aikoden​



-Kulyia
 

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Wa, I super love Tua and Nampeung in Mon Ruk Loog Toong. Kaew luem kong was a sad lakorn but Aom and Captain always have sad lakorns together! Can't wait for the update!
 

kulyia

RUK
Banner credit: Aikoden​


Writer Speaks: Subject: Theme
For music, Dome Torng is the theme. But somehow it wont upload. To listen and read, Please click on this link;
Theme
-Kulyia

Credits:SpicyFansubs / tua saranyu & nampeung nattarika



Chapter 1: Departing Scenery

The sounds coming out of the train frightened Nee. Standing across from her was her best friend, Vanida (va-nee-ta/aom/nida). Next to her was her boyfriend Kiet (Kee-it/captain), the ex of Tasanee (thaat-sa-nee/nee/leela).

Vanida: "Tasanee ...Dont be afraid. When you get there, write to me as soon as possible. You already know, I don’t need to say more." Vanida push nee towards the train then fold hers arms, leaning against kiet.

Nee found an empty seat on the side of the station. She looked out the window to see her best friend and the man she once loved so very much. Secretly, she still does. Able to force a smile on, she holds back her tears. Passengers were all seated; her seat was still empty; First class with not a lot of people on. A flashback enters her head... Located in Vanida's backyard.


Vanida: "Nee...My mother told me to go visit my grandfather. Lately, I heard he’s been getting sick, and.... acting weird...." (Ugly face. Suddenly her face lights up) "NEE!! Why don’t you go for me? They don’t know how I look like … besides my grandfather …and one of my aunts, but she no longer lives at Dome Torng, ever since she left with that impecunious (poor) man. But who cares, that old man is getting old that’s why he’s so sick!” (Shivers) “Probably even forgot about my appearance, He wont remembers a thing, nee!”

Nee: “But what if they find out vanida?”
Vanida: “No matter what, they can’t do anything. Even if they know they cant do anything to me. I’m the only granddaughter in this generation. Nothing can happen to me…. Ever.”
Nee: (Quietly) “What about me…?”. . Flashback ends.


Narrator speaks:
The story goes back to the beginning with a so-call Quick synopsis just to clear any confusion. And I just found out (july25) that Sirakit is a Real name. Google the name and you’ll be amazed too. Lol I made it up last night thinking about Dome Tong. Lmfao. -Kulyia

News has just reached the Sirakit (See-ra-kit) family, informing them that their abandon father had just passed away. Tasanee and her abusive short-tempered brother Adirake (Ah-dee-rak/Aof ) could careless about the man who deserted them and their deceased mother. In the news, it include that their father was in extreme debt, and could be the reason of his death. Days pass with no worries about the incident until Adirake was confronted by a mob. Scared for his life, Adirake offered his sister Tasanee in return. Heartbroken, Tasanee agrees with her brothers’ decision, and to keep the name Sirakit alive. Nees’ old childhood friend Vanida Chapordaporn (Cha-por-da-porn) comes to the rescue to help pay her debt. Tasanee finds it oddly strange that her old childhood friend who hasn’t been keeping contact for the past 8 yrs would come all of sudden to help her pay her debt. In return, Vanida said that whenever she needs help, Nee would come into the picture and for them to be best friends forever. On the morning of Nees’ 19 birthday party, Adirake got drunk because he finally figure it out that he was such an awful brother because he had never given anything to his one only sister. Adirakes friend manage to walk him home and left him unconscious on his bed. Later when Tasanee happily awoken her brother to help her blow the candles out, instead gave living hell to Tasanee as a present; ruining her image in front of all her friends, including Kiet. Because of this incident, Kiet turns to Vanida for comfort, but instead received more. Vanida has a place for Tasanee in her cruel heart, but is secretly jealous of her. Vanidas presents to Tasanee were stealing Kiet, and to portray as Vanida Chapordaporn who will be living in Dome Torng for one full year. Cornered, Tasanee agrees.



Ahdit (tua) sat still staring at the beautiful young lady. The first things he notice about the beautiful stranger were her long, black, silky hair. Curled all to one side. He tilt his head back to get a full view of her face but was distracted by her tears. He questioned why she was crying. But quickly answered it himself. “Of course.” (He said) “It’s a station. What could you expect?” a smirk he gave, and quickly turned to the opposite of the stranger.

As Ahdit closed the back door, he stares out the window to find her.

Suay: “Sir, Should we wait for somebody?”

As Ahdit answers Suay, Tasanee walked out of the station. His satisfaction was fore filled.

Ahdit: “No. Lets go.” Off the car went, to Dome Torng.


Narrator Speaks: Subject:Tasanee to Vanida
Tasanee, at times, her name will be switched to Vanida since she is portraying as the real one. But i will write it down in spoiler or just ahead of time so you wont be confused such as where.
-Kulyia

Vanida walked back and fourth. Her luggages were bringing her down leaving her with blisters on her right palm. “Are they here yet? Are they even coming for me? … Vanida…I want to come back home..” Vanida stop and stood still looking at all the cars, then suddenly felt a tap on her shoulder and turned around.

Kasem: “Are you miss Chapordaporn?” (Politely)
Vanida: “Yes. Are you from Dome Torng?”
Kasem: “Im your personal driver while your stay here at Dome Torng. I was asked personally by Khun Ahdit to drive you around. He must very glad that you have decided to come after all miss Chapordaporn. I almost forgot miss Chapordaporn, my name is Kasem ” (He gave nee a friendly smile then reached for her luggage.)
Vanida: “Thank you.” As they walked toward the car, Nee thought to herself, this must be how Vanidas every day life is like. Always having a personal driver, and everyone respecting you. Sadly, she compares vanidas to hers making her feel out of league.


-will update tomorrow.
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
kulyia, i fix ur html tag , all u have to do just click on the drop list and put 'html on" . I remember "Dome Torng" they were my favorite couple after Mon Rak Luk Thoong
 

kulyia

RUK
kulyia, i fix ur html tag , all u have to do just click on the drop list and put 'html on" . I remember "Dome Torng" they were my favorite couple after Mon Rak Luk Thoong

sarn!!! i tried deleting the utube movie and when i did that the song wouldnt play anymore.=[ And i dont know where Drop list is.=[ can u help me again.plz :( And yes im watching that one right now. ive only got to 6-1. much longer than i had expect. =]
 

kulyia

RUK
Banner credit: Aikoden​


Meanwhile..

Vanida: “Already miss her? … Can’t you not miss her for a second?” (Rudely) Nida was getting on his last nerve, slowly he turn to face her. He forces a smile and says “ไม่.” Then looked away.
Vanida look disgust. She was definitely getting tired of kiets company. And besides, Tasanee is nowhere near to continue using kiet.
Vanida: "Get out of my car... I don’t have anymore patient with you. For Just one day, you cant even stop thinking about her. How do you expect me to feel?” Slowly kiet turns to face her.
Kiet: “You know how to feel?" (Smirk) "For such hi-class girl, you are very stupid. Because only us humans can have Feelings!” (Kiet takes a deep breath) “Vanida .. If there is one day, you know the meaning of hurt, that day I will turn to you. But right now, I would prefer an image of an animal than you. I found my way in your life. I’ll find my way out. But let me tell you Vanida, if you don’t change, no one will ever love you as you desire.” As kiet took a step on ground, vanida threw a kick at kiet. He loses balance and falls off the car. He turns to see Vanida giving him a dirty smile. “No different from a dog Kiet. In this lifetime, you and that girl Tasanee will NEVER be together again! As long as I live, don’t rely on God to help you!” Vanida quickly close the car door disappearing into the crowd…
Kiet: “VANIDA!! You think you’re the goddess of every ones life! One day Vanida. One day will your fairytale come crashing down!! You will be no different from Tasanee or me. Just watch…”


From a far view, Ahdit got out of the car. He gets his suitcase in Suays hand and walked into Dome Torng.

Bow: “KULAP!!! KULAP!!! Khun Loob is home! KULAP!!” Not looking ahead, she crashes into kulap causing kulap to drop the roses.

Kulap: “Why are you such in a hurry Bow? There is no race.” (kulap smiling)
Bow: “Khun Loob is back home. Hehe. Kulappppp …”
Kulap: “Really?” kulaps eyes widen. “Bow please pick the roses off the floor.” Before Bow could answer, kulap already left.

Ahdit heard knocks on his door. He set his coffee down. Slowly, he walks over to the door but hears Kulap giggling. He frowns; he moves his hand from the doorknob and took a step back.

Kulap: “Khun Loob! Its me kulapp. P ’Loob!” Mali (Mal-ee) enters the hallway.

Mali: “Kulap, why don’t you go check up on grandfather.” (kulap knew better not to argue back, esp. to the elders. Off kulap went.) Ahdit opens the door purposely; he smiles to his aunt for scaring his sister away.


Kasem: “I hope you will adjust to Dome Torng well since you’re from town miss."
Vanida: (smiles) “I do too kasem.” As she spoke, she is quickly reminded that high chances she won’t survive. (To Herself) “TASANEE! How did you get into this mess? If their related to Vanida, chances are they will act the same! Maybe more than the same, BLOOD relation!!” her eyes widen all of sudden making kasem scared. “ha..uhhh…..I was just thinking.” (Smiles)
Kasem: “Oh.” (Smiles)
Vanida: “Is there anything I should know, before entering Dome Torng? Or..Be prepared for??”
Kasem: “I am not sure, because my job is drive to the special guest around.” Hearing that made vanida smile. She felt special for the first time in her life. Because she knew it was not a lie. But was again reminded, she is not the real Vanida they were expecting. “But, if you insist, Khun Ahdit does not like other people in his business. Including everyone else in the mansion. My wife Bow works inside, she tells me about Kulap a lot. They grew up in Dome Torng together. Kulap and Khun Ahdit are brother and sister, but Kulap is not his blood sister. Khun Ahdit parents have always wanted a girl, but luck was running out.. Growing up alone, Khun Ahdit had a very hard time trusting people. His parents were always on bussines trips. On their way back to the city, they saw a little girl. Right away, his parents notice the bond he had created with her, because of this his parents took her in thinking this would bring the family closer.” (Sigh) “Shortly after a year, Khun Ahdit and Kulaps parent got into a car crash while on a business trip. Ever since then, Khun Ahdit looked after Kulap all the time and never let anyone come between. Well, until Jatanee came into the picture, but that was long ago… a year or two… Anyways, They never wanted to adopt but to keep trying. It was weird because……… Miss Chapordaporn.. Don’t you already know these stuff?”
Vanida: “Oh uhh… my mother told me about it a long time ago. But … I forgot. Could you continue? Its more interesting hearing from you.” (Smiles)
Kasem: “No problem. At the time of the adoption, it was weird because everyone wanted to know why did they adopt when they don’t even agree to it. Until recently when I enter Dome Torng I found the answer I was looking for. Only those inside Dome Torng will know. It was because of Khun Ahdits late grandmother. She was very open to the idea of adopting, but … doing it Secretly. It’s been 7 years since I have known, yet it still confuses me of why would she like that idea so much.”
Vanida: “But, she only mention the idea of adopting once though… right?”
Kasem: “ไม่! She asked if Bow and I wanted to adopt just after 3 years of marriage! Of course we decline that, that women was out of her mind! ” (To herself) “Why was she so openly to the idea of adopting? Was she adopted herself?”
Kasem: “Well, now that you know miss Vanida. Don’t tell anyone I told you. Hehe. Just to make sure we don’t get into trouble.”
Vanida: “Don’t worry, I wont tell anyone kasem.” (Smiles) “By the way, does this Khun Ahdit still live at Dome Torng?”
Kasem: “This Khun Ahdit??” (Confused)
Vanida: “Oh. Haha!!! Remember, I’ve never met THIS Khun Ahdit.” (Smiles nervously)
Kasem: “Oh. haha.. Yes…” “ess??” Quickly, Vanida tried changing the subject.
Vanida: “ Soooo Kasem.. uhhh … what else about Dome Torng is there?”
Kasem: “Nothing to worry about miss Vanida. Just as long as you don’t get home sick.” (Smiles)
Vanida: “Uhhmmmmhuumhum.” (Vanida smiles dumbly)


Chapordaporn Residents

Mom: (Stands from sofa) “NIDA! Why aren’t you at Dome Torng?!”
Vanida: “Maaaaa … Tasanee..” (Smiles) “Already went for me.”
Mom: “What? How dare you lie to them that she is you? That is very childish of you nida!”
Vanida: “No. That is not true. Tasanee wanted to go. Adirake has been bad lately and making enemies. It is not safe over there, which is why she has been here the last couple days. She asked if she can go for me, for the sake of her life she said.” Vanida looks to the floor acting innocent.
Mom: “Really? Why don’t you tell her to come live here for time being instead? Or go to Dome Torng with you? Adirake should get his act straight! Ever since their mothers death, that family has been through chaos… tsk tsk tsk.” (Pity look)
Vanida: “Yeaaa…………. I said that too ma. But no matter, she insists. I really did want to go too. Remember ma?” (Smiles, she walks over to hug her mum) “To go see Khun Loob.” While her maa smile, she did the opposite….>=[ * EWW style


Chapordaporn Residents: Vanidas room
As soon as she close the door, she threw her purse down onto bed.
Vanida: “TSKKKKK!! A guy that old? Are you kidding me maa?! You must be crazy if you want to go see him!” (Folds hand) “STUBID tasanee!! Why does Everyone like you so Much??!! Tskkk!” Nida roll her eyes.



-Will maybe update tomorrow
btw iwasnt sosure about khun or p';my mistake if its wrong
 

kulyia

RUK
Banner credit: Aikoden​


Chapter 3: Unique Discoveries

“We’re here. Miss vanida, Welcome to Dome Torng.”
“Yes. Its very nice, are they here to introduce themselves to me??” (Pointing)
“Yes…. Or welcome you.” Kasem walk out of the car to the trunk. He notice vanida had already open her door.
“Why is this house so big? They only have 2 daughters, and besides they’re married.”
“Did you forget? Táng sŏng khoon Yaay did not get along well at all.” Kasem was beginning to worry. “Why does it seem as if this girl is an outsider? Everything she does not know.” (Frowns) “Miss vanida, next time let me open your door for you.”
“No. I don’t like it, I’ll just open it.” Vanida tried pulling her luggage from kasems hand. He declines her offer.
“What are you doing?”
“Getting my bag. Give me it.” She figures being nice was not an option, so she tried to snatch it. Again kasem rejected her offer and move it behind him.
“Miss vanida. No. That is not good. If khun Ahdit sees, he will be very mad. Not just him but also Mali.” Quickly she moves her hands to her side. (Her eyes widen. To herself) “OHY! Tasanee, you are not Tasanee anymore! You are Vanida Chapordaporn. Your rich, gorgeous, preppy, and self centered. Yes… Correct…” (Quietly) “Correcttt…” She realizes she said that outside of her mind. Everyone was confuse and pretty much annoyed. “Uhhhhh. AHEM! Hurry up!!!” She walks half way up the stairs then suddenly slowing down.

Kulap: “Where is she going?” (Quietly)

Bow: “I don’t know…Kasem!” She pulls onto his collar holding him back. “Are you sure you did not get the wrong girl!?” (Points) “A girl that dumb cannot possibly be VaNIda!” Her mouth was interrupted by Mali.

“Where do you think your going?” (Rudely)
“Inside…. Why? Why are you asking?”
(Loudly) “Because this is MY house. You have guts to ask that question?” A slap in the face did she felt. Vanida stood still like a statue.
“You are???”
“Mali. You don’t know? And yet, you still have the guts to ask me another question.”
“No. I didn’t mean it that way.” Vanida felt defeated already on her first day! She frowns looking at the floor.
“Fine. Go on inside, you must be tired.” Mali took off first. Followed by Vanida and the rest.



“Sit there.” (Points) “Judging by your movements, you must hungry.”

Vanida sees 3 people sitting on the sofas, while the rest sat on the floor next to Mali. She looked over to the third person, it was Kulap. Kulap gave a friendly smile to her as a late greet. Vanida warmed at the thought of kulap and her being close in the future.




Sirakit residents

Tong: “Hey. Where’s the food? I’m starving here Adirake!”
Adirake: “No. There’s no more food.”
Tong: “Where is Tasanee? Did she go to get something?” (Smiles)
Adirake: (Long pause) “No. I’m . . . I’m not sure. I came home this morning and she wasn’t here. Everything is still here. Maybe she went to the Chapordaporn to be bossed by her friend.” Adirake picks up his drink to sip on it.
Tong: “What if she left?” Tong laughed out loud. “What??? You know its true that’s why you are mad. Anyways, I’m getting hungry, Water cant make me Full! Lets go find something to eat. If it doesn’t come to us, we come to THEM.” (Smiles NAStily) Both of them walk down the street and saw some food stands. Adirake look to Tong and saw Tong censuring him to do. Adirake was against it, but Tong was right. Water can’t replace food.






“Oh, I almost forgot. Those are our workers here in Dome Torng. There are more, but not available right now. Just remember to look at the uniform before suggesting anything.” Vanida felt quilty. “This is Kasem, your personal driver. Anywhere you may want to go, just inform him whenever. But before you do leave, let me know ahead of time first. Next to him is Bow. She and Kasem have been married for seven years.. She works in the house and kitchen. Next to her is Phueng, and Tola. Both are the same as Bow, but Phueng has been here the longest and knows more. And that is Suay, Khun Ahdits personal driver. If you see Suay home, Khun Loob is too.” Kulap smiles. She look up and saw Mali looking seriously at her knocking that smile off.
“Why don’t you have one too Mali?” (Dumbly)
“Because my work and duty is here in Dome Torng. I take care of the major housework and Grandfather. You have one simply because you are from town and may not adjust to staying in one place too long.” Quietness was in the air. Vanida felt awkward.

“P’ Loob just got back from business in town. Maybe you two took the same train. And by the way, I am kulap.”
“Hi.” (Clear throat) “Possible . . . “ vanida spoke quietly. She thought about what Kulap had said… “If he did take the train, did he see anything?” Her thoughts were interrupted.

Dinner was served.



After dinner, Tola shows vanida the inside of Dome Torng since it was dark out. “Miss vanida, how long are you staying?”
“I’m thinking a year.”
“One year?? But . . . Won’t you get homesick?”
She shook her head. “No. No matter what, I promise. One year is not that long. Hopefully I will get use to here soon so I wont miss home too much.” Vanida turns to face Tola. “Whats the matter?”
“Nothing . . .”
“Then why are you confused? Did I say something wrong?”
“No. It’s just . . . I’m just confused of why you have never been here before, but then there is a picture of you in the family album.”
“What? How is that possible? Maybe you’ve mistaken me for someone.” Vanida turn her back to Tola. (Herself) “Is it that Vanida sent a picture of me ahead of time? But I don’t take pictures at all though.” Quickly she turns to face Tola. “Can you show it to me?”



“Shhh. This is khoon Yaays room. No one is allowed. But I figure, it shouldn’t be an issue since you are her grand-daughter.” (Smiles)
Peeking into the dark room. “Is she asleep?” Vanida takes a quick glance of Tola. “What now??” With a annoyed look.
“Miss vanida, she is not sleeping. Because she is dead.”
Her eyes widen. “What!? How!??”
“SHHHHhh! The next door beside it is Khoon dtaas room. Then down the hall to the right is Malis but she is downstairs. And at the end, is Khun Ahdits, but I think he is asleep. Let me take you to your room, then we’ll discuss it there, okay?”
“Sure . . .”


“Where is the page? It was here not too long ago. Humm. Miss vanida, I can’t seem to find it.” Tola looks up to vanida. Vanida was looking around her room at the interesting stuff. She look down to Tola, she pity her.
“Well . . . Your not going to find it down there.” (Vanida walks over to the lamp near the open window) “Come sit on this chair next to the lamp. Here, you’ll get more chance of finding my look-alike.” (Smiles)
“No. I don’t need any light. Its not here, someone must have taken it out. But I just saw it last week though. That’s strange . . .”
“What’s strange is that you are mistaking me for somebody Tolaa.” (Smiles) Vanida was relieved. “Just a mistake.” She said to herself.
“Well. If you insist, I guess. It is getting late miss vanida. I well leave so you can sleep. Ill leave as so as soon as I put these albums back in order.”
Just as Tola was about to open the door, Vanida signaled. “Wait!” She walks over to Tola. “Can I have a look at these pictures? Don’t worry, by tomorrow morning I will be finish already.” To convince Tola, Vanida did her puppy eyes.
“Okay, but just be careful. They are very fragile.” Handing the albums over to vanida like a baby.
“Don’t worry. If you can handle it, so can I.” (Smiles) As soon as she received the albums in her hand, she push Tola out and closed the door. “Good Night!” She screams through her door.
“Okay! You too.” She heard.
Vanida hurriedly walk to her bed and turn on her night-light to a higher standard. She carefully laid the 3 photo albums down and jumps onto her bed. (To herself) “OHHH Tasanee! For how long have you not been yourself??? Its feels soo good to relax and not worrying about repaying someone.” A big happy smile came across her face. “HEHE.” She said out loud. She open the biggest album, the oldest pictures were in there. The first 3 pictures were brown and white but all contain a beautiful lady sitting on a rocking chair, standing next to her was a tall handsome man, wearing tux. She wonder who could this couple possibly is. All the pictures in the first album at the beginning contain that exact same couple but at different occasions. Towards the middle, a different lady was sitting next to that same exact man. “Perhaps they’ve mistaken the lady too?” She thought. “But no, because if it’s a mistake, it wouldn’t have made its way halfway through the album.” Confuse she was, but didn’t let it stop her from looking at the albums. In the second album, it mostly contains pictures of kids and that second lady in the first album. “Who is she?” She thought to herself. As soon as she got to the last picture in that second album, she notices the first lady in album one was not at all in the second. “That is not a mistake at all.” She said. Finally as she was about to grab the third, a knock came to the door. She walks over, and stood next the door.

“Who is it?”
“Me, Phueng. Mali told me to tell you its pass midnight. To turn off your light.” (Rudely)
“Oh, okay. I will.” Nothing was heard in return. Phueng had already left. Vanida walk to her bed and sat on it. “That’s weird. How come they know my light is on when my room is on the opposite of theirs?” Spooked, she walks over to her door and opens it. Slowly, she peeks into the dark hallway. Nobody was there; lights were all turned off. After a couple seconds, a light starts to appear at the end of the hallway. It starts to get bigger as it gets closer. Vanida panics and quickly closes her door locking it right away. As she change into her nightgown, she kept thinking to herself that somebody was in there with her. Watching her while she took off her clothes one by one. Finally, she got under the covers. She twists and turn for a perfect spot. “I wish I had brought some candles.” (Sadly) Finally, she feel asleep.




Vanida awoken to the sound of a rocking chair crackling. Slowly she pushes herself up to see what it was. The light was shining through too much to see the image. She move her head a little to see that it was nothing. "Already morning" She said looking out the window. She look down to her desk and pick up the clock. "Its past 10!!!"

By 1030, she came rushing down the stairs still buttoning her shirt. She accidentally trip at the last step not paying attention and fell into somebodies arm.

(Surprisingly) "You!" She opens her eyes to see that it was a tall handsome man. She got scare and tries to break free. Khun Ahdits lets her go as she desire. He stares at her happily, then stopped. And turn on his Serious look. "Do you know what time it is?" (Demanding tone) Vanida stood still like a dumb doll. She just remember her buttons were not fully button all the way and covered her chest with her hands.

"Oump! I know I woke up late. I promise . . ." She just remember, the ALBUMS! Her worried face suddenly turns loss. He thought she was having a seizure and quickly walks to her side.

"Are you okay?" He asks.

"Oh my god! Umm, I . . . I forgot something.” She zooms back up the stairs almost tripping again but grabbed onto the rail. She left to her room leaving Khun Ahdit confused. She opens her door and quickly walks to the table near the window. The albums were not there. She panics and looks everywhere in her room. She started to sweat and became a mess. A knock came at the open door. She looks up while still searching under her bed. It was Phueng. She stood still at the doorway holding the three albums in her hand.

“You’re looking for this?” (Rudely)

“Yes!” Quickly, vanida stood to her feet. “Why did you come into my room?” (Demandingly)

“If I didn’t, I wouldn’t have known you went into Khoon Yaays room!”

“I didn’t! It was . . . “ Vanida was stuck there, She knew if she said Tola, Tola would definitely be fired.

“It was Tola wasn’t it!??” (Confidently) A smirk flew across Phuengs face.

Vanida swallowed hard and answered. “No!” Vanida took a few steps that took her halfway to the door. Vanida decides to use her status that she was given. (Loudly) “This is none of your business Phueng. Don’t ever come into my room without my approval!”

Vanidas response shock Phueng and threw that smirk of hers to the ground. Phueng bit onto her lower lips, as she knew she was defeated. (To Herself) "You are not the stupid push-over girl you were when you arrived."
"Fine!" she said loudly. “But I will tell Mali that you went into Khoon yaays room without her approval.”

“How dare you to disobey my orders!”

“Your orders?” (Smirks) “Miss vaniDA! This is not your house. You don’t have rules or standards here.” Again, she spook as if her status is the same as vanidas.

"Either way, I am a guest here at Dome Torng." She grabbed all her mites to say this sentence and look straight into Phuengs eyes. "Dont forget who my grandmother is." The fierce look vanida gave reminded her of someone in the past. Phueng freaks out and drops the photo albums.




-Will update tomorrow or saturday. im having a good feeling about tomorrow already. =D
 

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Kulyia, I finallly read all your updates and so far so good. I'm hating the real Vanida already. She was the one that wanted Tasanee to go to dome tong for her yet she goes and tell her mom that Tasanee that she insist of going herself? She's such a two face. Hope her fairytale do crash like Kiet told her.

Btw, seeing the name Vanida in here makes me miss the lakorn Vanida with Tua and Mew Lalita. And I so miss MRLT of Tua and Peung too! And I super love the theme song to dome tong.

Can't wait for more updates!
 

kulyia

RUK
let me finish playing poker. lol.and ill get back asap :D thank you kha
 

kulyia

RUK
Chapter 4: On a lookout

Writer speaks:
If you can, imagine her brother as Aof Aphichart Puapimon
rip=[
Don't worry, he has a Good role afterward.


Vanida ran to pick the fragile albums off the floor. "Phueng! Get out of my room!" She held the photo albums as if they were newborns. As soon as they were in her arms, she took some steps back. She notice Phueng stood still, still shock by what she had said earlier.

"You!" Phueng points directly to her. Phueng starts to shake historically. "Dome Torng does not accept you Sumalee!!" Vanida was confused. Just as she finishes her line, Khun Ahdit enters the doorway.

(In his relax tone) "Phueng." As startled as she was, she forces herself to turn. "Leave." As soon as his word floated in the air, she quickly obeys it. Khun Ahdit takes a few steps entering her doorway. He carefully moves away the drapes with the back of his hand on his way in. "You went into Khoon Yaays room last night?” He asked. She positions the albums as if she was burping them. Carefully, she walks over to her bed and laid it down without answering him. Khun Ahdit stares at the albums and sighs. Off to the ceiling he looks, then back to her. “I wonder if you’re going to answer my question. Easy questions always have short answers.” He said purposely trying to force an answer out of this beautiful stranger.

Vanida turns to stare at the floor. (In Tasanees voice she spoke) “I’m sorry for entering Khoon Yaays room last night. If you’re going to punish me, please do so only to me.” Her hands tremble nervously on her sides. With a quick glance, she notice him looking at her trembling hands and move it to her back. Khun Ahdit was hoping that she would look up to him instead of the floor. When she did not, he decides to do the first move. He places his hands onto his hips. While his hands were still on his hips, he took a few steps making the gap between them smaller. (In his serious voice) “Just so you know, you can’t barge into whoevers room when they’re not there.” He informs her.

As he wanted, she looks straight to him. She shook her head as she defends her answer. “But I didn’t barge in.”

His hands fell to his sides. “You defend yourself now, when just a minute ago you just plead guilty.” He turns on a focused face. As he spoke, he took more steps. He looks down to her feet and notice she was backing away. While backing, she hit the desk. He wanted to smile so much but hide it behind a focused face. By now he was standing right next to her. Close enough to hear her breathe.

“Of course. I admit I went into her room but I didn’t break the door down did I?” She said proudly.

Leaning in closer. “Aren’t you afraid?” He asked.

Her chin rises as she spoke. “What is there in this house to be afraid of?” (Looks away) “I fear nothing.” He slowly bent to the left side of her cheek and whispered. “Me.” Being already annoyed, she turns to give him a dirty look. While he, looks out the window grinning.





Chapordaporn backyard

“Good. You indeed did a very good job.” Vanida gave a twisted smile and looks over to Aroon. “Aroon, I want you to go bail him out. Once that is done, convince him to come to me. If he comes, provide him with everything he needs.” When he heard his command, he left the two alone. “I don’t want you to be near the Sirakits or here ever again. If you can, leave town and don’t come back.” (Smirks) “Tasanee. Lets see how long you can keep your words.” Vanida was still day dreaming, when little did she know Tong bent down onto his knees. He gently took her hand and pats a kiss on it. Vanida stares at him with a confused look. He slowly looks up to look at her. “There’s no way I will leave you alone my love.”(Finishing with a smiles) Her reaction went blank.


AGAIN Writer speaks:
If you can, imagine her brother as Aof Aphichart Puapimon
rip=[
Don't worry, he has a Good role afterward.


Aroon walks out of the police station followed by Adirake(Aof Aphichart). When Aroon got halfway down the stairs, he turns back to face Adirake.

(Looks to floor) “Thank you, Aroon.”

“I did not bail you out Adirake.”

He looks up. “Let me guess. Vanida?”

“Yes. Is there anything else that you need?”

Adirake sighs. “Can you take me to go see her?”

“Follow me.”




Chapordaporn Living room


Vanida bent forward to scoop some sugar into her coffee. “You came back early.” She looks up and instead sees Adirake. “Adirake.” (Sips coffee) “I thought you weren’t like your sister.” (Smiles)

He spoke in his normal tone. “I am not that dumb. But I want to know why you help me and where is my sister.” Vanida pats her hand onto the sofa and gave a flirty look to Adirake. “I am good standing. I will be done when you answer my questions.”

“What if I don’t answer? Will you stand there the whole day? The whole week, the whole month, or the whole year??” (Smiles and takes a sip while still staring at him) “Don’t worry adirake, I wont keep you starved like Tasanee while your here.”

Adirake takes a huge step scaring vanida. “Don't think you can hide her forever Vanida. I will find my sister. Once i do, I will come after you.”

“Is that a threat?”

“It is that you think it is.” He said annoyingly.

“I can bail you out and again, have you arrested. Do you want to try me adirake?” She gives off a ugly smile.

He laughed without humor. “You gang up with Tong? How LAME are you vanida? In my whole life I’ve never seen a women more desperate than you!” His words sting her hard.

She threatens him. “You want to try me adirake? I know where your sister is. Don’t think I can’t do anything to her.” Fast like the wind he climb across the table and grabs onto her neck and hold her against the sofa. She tries to scream but his huge hand covers it before letting anything out.

“Do it and we’ll see what happens!” He whispered into her ears.


Again Writer speaks:
If you can, imagine her brother as Aof Aphichart Puapimon
rip=[
Don't worry, he has a Good role afterward.



“Tola.” Vanida hands the albums over. “Take this to khoon Yaays room. I’m sorry if I created an issue for you.”

“No. Khun Loob didn’t say anything to me this morning. Probably only Pheung but, I can handle it.” (Grins) “Did you look through all 3?” (Curiously)

(Smiles) “Yes. I did. Thank you.” Tola opens khoon Yaays door and turns on the light. Vanida walks in after her. Instantly she began to shiver. She let out a few moans; her hand rises to censor tola to come. Tola quickly pushes the albums into the drawer, and ran over to Vanida.

“Miss Vanida are you okay??” Tola was beginning to freak out. Vanida couldn’t answer; she shook her head in response of no. Tola helps her out of Khoon Yaays room, just in time Mali had just came out of her room and saw the two.

Mali ran over. “What happened??”

“I’m not sure.” Answer Tola. As soon as Tola closed the door, vanida had stop shivering. Mali looks at vanida strangely. “You already stop?” She asked.

“I don’t know. My head was throbbing just a second ago. Now it stop.” She turns to face the door. “Do you think?? That it’s possible?” She asked in a low tone.

(Confused) “What?” Mali asked. “You don’t think it’s . . . Do you?” (Shakes head)

“No. I’m just saying. But. . “

“Then step back in there.” Mali said annoyingly. “Prove your point.”

“No! Fine, nothing is wrong.” Vanida took off towards the stairs.

Mali turns to face Tola. “What were you two doing in there?”

(She stutters to find her words) “We . . . Uh we were putting away the family pictures Mali.”

“Only?” Tola walks away but stopped by Mali. “Did she enter the room?” Slowly Tola turns around and answers. “Yes.”

“Did she touch anything?”

Tola shook her head. “No. I am not sure. We were in there for less than two minute.”

“Okay. You may go.” (To herself) “Did she touch something??” Mali was confused.

Vanida ran to the flower garden. She sat down on the side of the fountain. “What is wrong with me? There is definitely something up there in that room.” She stares to second floor.



-Short update. will update monday
 

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
I'm already loving Ahdit and Vanida(Nee) moments together.
That was kinda spooky when Vanida and Tola went into the room. With all the shivering. *shivers*
 
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