My Heart in your Hands...*Chapter 2 Updated* ^_^

[babyblue]

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Chapters:
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Main CAST:

Pae Arak as Peeranan Nongbonarith

Age 21

The son of the richest family in Bangkok, Thailand. When he was 18 years old he used to be very pleasant and sweet, but after his beautiful girlfriend Nattiya died by supposedly committed suicide by cutting her wrist in his bedroom floor while he was at work. In his mind there is no way Nattiya would kill herself, why would she? When he had promised her he’d marry her the upcoming week.
From sweet and kind, he became a rude, bitter, and a womanizer…is it too sooth his dead soul?
Will he love again…or will he die a lonely man?

Kwan Usamanee as Rattika Ponchai

Age 19

A young girl, whose parent died because of a car accident, lived with her grandmother who works as a head housemaid for the Nongbonarith family. Was force to live as a slave, she was once free to roam about, now she must listen and obey her master’s command. Life isn’t as easy as she thought it would be, the mystery of her master’s son girlfriend, Miss Nattiya supposedly haunts the big house. They family acts as nothing ever happen, maids butlers gossip to one another about the death of Nattiya, peculiar things starts to become even more dangerous for Rattika herself.



Character:


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Thin Sethachoke as Bonarote Nongbonarith

The father of Peeranan and Pietranan Nongbonarith, he’s one of the richest man in Thailand. He has 2 handsome sons, half paralyzed from the waist down after mysteriously falling down the 30 stairs in the Nongbonarith household. Luckily he did not die, Sad that his son doesn’t recover from his girlfriend incident.

Pinky Sawika as Viktearia Pasekarn

Age 19

Best friends with Rattika since a child, very protective and love her very much. A person who loves adventure the more you tell her not to, the more she wants to do just that. She's neither poor nor rich just medium, her family owns a jewelry shop. Boost that she is scared of no one not, even ghosts.

Win Tawin as Pietranan Nongbonarith

Age 19

The youngest of the Nongbonarith family line, he very bossy and spoiled, he hates girls who wants to be tough, love girls who are girly and cute. He loves his brother very much but he can’t help his brother anymore then giving him support. Hoping maybe he would get over his girlfriends death. After his brother girlfriend died, Peeranan had charge drastically from being his kind brother to being a man with no heart, as if a walking zombie without a soul.

Koy Ratchawin as Kathy Rongtekarn

Age 20

Was Nattiya best friend currently Peeranan friend a rich snobbish girl, can’t stand poor people. Think she’s better than everyone else. Loved Peeranan even before Nattiya captured his heart. Never forgave Nattiya for that. After Nattiya death, Kathy tries to take Peeranan who she thinks is rightfully hers. She will not lose him to anyone again. Will she succeed?

Aum Patcharapa Chaichue as Nattiya Bonareak

Age 17 *When she died*

The girlfriend of Peeranan who mysteriously died, loved Peeranan with all her heart…haunts the house of her boyfriend…why? Is it because she loves him and wants him back? Or did something happen that caused her death and she out for revenge?

Au Panu as Panarong Nongbonarith

Age: 23

Panarong is Pee and Piet Cousin. Rarely comes over. Was Sad over the loss
of his Young Cousin Girlfriend. But hope for the best. Hopes that Nattiya will rest in peace.

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I hope you guys like the cast
I will update chapter one tomorrow
Please read and comment…I would like
To hear your opinion…​

 

[n_naruk]

Pae...my bff was so much in love with him before.
I have a feeling that there's a mystery behind Nattiya's death. She didn't just kill herself because Peeranan didn't marry her. Can it be Koy? Hahaha, I'm just guessing.
I love the idea that Kwan is living in the same house as Peeranan.
I love Pinky&Win together <3.

Aump as a ghost should be interesting!

Who's Thin? What lakorn has he been in? His first name is so familiar to me but idk if that's who I think it is.

Update soon!

 

[tastesweetlove]

seems very mysterious and cool. I can't wait to read it. ^^

 

[babyblue]

Chapter 1

3 years ago…​

Hey you guys, lol I did wanted to update
Chapter one tomorrow but I couldn’t get the
Chapter one off my mind…so I decided to update it.
Did you guys like the poster? I tried my best. Lol.



(Peeranan P.O.V)

After leaving work with my father, I had asked to go see my beautiful girlfriend, Nattiya. She is the most beautiful girl in the world, no girl can compare to her. She sweet, kind, and very down to earth. Earlier today I went to mall to pick out a wedding ring for my bride to be. I smiled at the beautiful white diamond ring, small and petite just for my Nattiya.
I got to her house and aunt Pim, her mother greeted me, “Oh hello Pee, are you here to see Nattie?”
“Yes auntie, is she here?” I asked.
“Yea,” my beautiful bride to be came down the stairs that moment, “Here she comes.”
I smiled, I walked up to her, “Wow Nattie, every time I see you, you become more and more beautiful.” I kissed her cheek then.
“Oh stop it P’ Peeranan. I’m blushing.” She smiled lovely at me.
“But I’m telling you the truth.” I told her.
She gave me a kiss on the cheek, “I love you.”
I hugged her to me, “I’m going to marry you, I already gotten the wedding ring, do you want to see?”
I pulled it out, “No P’ Peeranan, I want to be surprise.”
“Ok. Who are you going to invite?”
“Families and close friends.” She told me.
“You sure, don’t you want it a little big?” I asked, “Most girls want their wedding big and memorable.” I told her.
“P’ you know I don’t like big things, and crowded places, and plus you know my wedding dream, I told you like every day. I want my wedding on the beach, and aisle with flowers as the line. White chairs lining in rows on each side.” She was daydreaming.
I blew air into her face, “Wake up sleeping beauty.”
She wrapped her arms around me, “that’s my dream P’ Peeranan.”
I hugged her back, “I love you.”

(End of Peeranan P.O.V)

(Author P.O.V)

Their love grew; it made people around them want to smile, making people want to find love just like them. Nattiya did what she had dream of doing; she got her invitation handed out, and the wedding planner made her dream came true, picking the best beach place to put up her wedding place. Nattiya can’t wait for the wedding date, which takes place in one more week. She couldn’t stop talking about it…she imagine her wedded life to be the best thing in her life…what can ruin that?

(End of Author P.O.V)

(Nattiya P.O.V)

“Mom, I’m going to go to P’ Peeranan house ok, I have something to give him.”
“Ok honey. But be home soon okay, we got to pick up your wedding dress. Don’t tell Peeranan yet ok, we should make it a surprise, let him see you in the dress when your wedding day come.” My mother reminded me.
“Ok mom, I won’t tell him. Even though I wanted to.” I pouted.
“Just wait ok.”
I hugged my mom, “Love you mom.”
“I love you too sweetie.” She kissed my forehead.

*At Peeranan household*

“Eh chuan?” I called one of the mad, “Where is P’ Peeranan?”
“Oh Master Peeranan isn’t here right now, he should be here in an hour or 2.” She told me.
“Ok…I’ll wait in his room, if he comes tell him that.”
I started walking up the stairs, when uncle soon to be father in law, Bonarote, “Um…hi uncle.”
He glared at me, and walked out.
I don’t understand, why does he hate me so? I tried very hard to show him my real side, but he never stayed long enough or even cared by what I do. *Deep sigh* he’ll grow to love me someday.
I walked all the way up the stairs and into my sexy hubby’s room. When I walked in, the smell of him washed over my face…I love the smell of him, it makes me feel very comfortable and welcome. I sniffed in the air around me.
By next week, P’ Peeranan will be my husband; we will share this room together. I smiled to myself…nothing will ever compare to this…

(End of Nattiya P.O.V)

(Peeranan P.O.V)

I walked inside the house, took of my shoes and headed to the stairs, “Oh Master Peeranan.”
“What is it Chuan?” I asked.
“Miss Nattiya came; she’s in your room now. She came about a half an hour ago.”
I smiled then, “Ok thanks Chuan you can go do your job now.”
I continue up the stairs, when a voice called me, “Peeranan.”
“Oh hey Kathy what are you doing here?” I asked.
“Um…I came about 20 minutes ago, auntie Pim said she is here.” Kathy said.
“Oh, well I just came, Chuan told me too, I’m going to see her now; you want to come?” I asked her.
“Of course, I want to see my girl too.” She said.
We walked all the way up the stairs, and open the door to my room, “Nattie? Nattiya are you here?” there was no answer.
Didn’t Chuan say she’s up here?
“Nattiya? Nattiya?” I walked all the way inside the room, with Kathy right behind me.
There she was on the floor next to my bed, I smiled what is she doing on the floor?
“I shook her gently, “Nattiya…”
She didn’t stir awake, “Nattiya?”
I turn her over, her wrist fell out from behind her, and my eyes widen, “Nattiya!”
Blood…so much blood…her other hand holding a sharp pocket knife I pulled the shit out her hand and I pulled her, embracing her in my arms, kissing her bleeding hand, “Nattiya please wake up, wake up…”
I didn’t care who was near me, all I knew was that Kathy had fainted…
“Nattiya…wake up…please…wake up…” tears cascade down my eyes, my beautiful Nattiya…

*Police came*

After they covered her beautiful face the came to me, “Was there something that made her want to commit suicide?” that angered me
“She did not commit suicide, why would she? We were going to be married after this week!” I cried.
“But evidence shows that she killed herself, the pocket knife was in her hand, there’s no other explanation.” They told me.
“I won’t believe it, there is no way she would kill herself, she loves me…SHE LOVES ME. WE WERE GOING TO BE MARRIED, MARRIED DO YOU HEAR!!! We were going to be married…married…we were going to be married…” I couldn’t take anything else inside… Nattiya is gone… Nattiya left me…she left me…

(End of Peeranan P.O.V)



For sure chapter 2 will be post up
Tomorrow. To tired…lol
Did you guys like it? How is the poster?

 

[n_naruk]

I knew I left something out in my comment. Lol.
Aump makes the poster look scary. Hahahaha.
But overall, the poster is cute.
I like the concept of the house since that's Peeranan's house and also where Nattiya died at.

*Will read it later...I'm so tired and sleepy now*

Edited: There has to be something else behind Nattiya's death. First, Peeranan's dad...then Katy appear in the picture...hmm...

Nice start. Can't wait for more.

 

[tastesweetlove]

i like the poster---especially how you took two pictures and made it seem like it was one (ex: Pinky/Win and Kwan/Pae)

the first chapter was good. I wonder who did that to Nattyia---Peeranan's dad and Katy would be the likely suspects but it would be too obvious, I'm thinking that it had to be someone else unless it's not.

 

[zienan09]

oh wow!! i LOVE stories like these! ehehe.
its sucha nice start!! and i cant wait to read the rest.
and thanks for the pics&info..it was really useful.
i hope you update it really soon =D

 

[babyblue]

thanks so much you guys for liking my story. man, I will update i just hadn't had time. i was planning to tho but i forgot that we had a party that day. so i couldn't go on the computer. then it took us 2 days to clean all the mess. man it was very dirty. hopefully by today or tomorrow i will post up the chapter that been sitting on my table. ^_^ love you guys!!!

 

[tastesweetlove]

can't wait ^^

 

[lakornsrok]

Omg...Soo GOOd..I LIKe it...Please Update it...can't wait 4 KWAN!!

 

[lakornsrok]

OMg..please Update SOON...i really can't WAIt..PLease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wub: :arrg:

 

[babyblue]

Chapter 2
The Present​

I’m so sorry for not being able to update
It’s just so dam busy nowadays. But anyway
I hope you guys love this update.

I decided to add another cast to the story. Well not really…since I wanted to add him…just couldn’t remember who I choose. Lol…silly me. But well, the new cast is Au Panu.
You will see his Cast summary in the cast section.
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(Author P.O.V)

Spinning his wheels into the kitchen when chuan his trusted head housemaid came to greet him, “Oh head master, what are you doing here in the kitchen?”
He smiled, “I’m just rolling about.” he told her, “Oh, and where is Peeranan my son?”
“Um…Master cane home at 3 in the morning and was very drunk, as of right now he is sleeping in his room.” Chuan told him.
“*Deep sigh* that one…help me the stairs will you, I’ll wake him up myself. Doesn’t he knows he has work?” he shake his head slowly.
Chuan help him up the stairs pulling him up as she goes.
In her mind she wonders, that night…how did head master fall of the stairs? He was still young, still strong, how can he fall of the stairs so easily? But thank god, at least he’s alive and well.
Chuan pushed the Head Master to Master Peeranan room.
Bonarote pushed open the door and headed to his son’s bed, “Pee… Peeranan, son, wake up.”
“*Yawn* what do you want?” Peeranan yawned.
“Pee, its afternoon, aren’t you going to work?” no answer, “Pee.”
“Gosh! What do you want from me, dad?” Pee asked his dad as he sat up.
“Aren’t you working today?” Bonarote asked yet again.
“No…I have to meet up with some people.” Pee got off the bed and walked to the bathroom.
“When will you change?”
“What do you mean?”
“This…This you that is irresponsible, the you that is worthless!” Bonarote said in frustration.
“Isn’t that what you wanted? You wanted Nattiya out of my life? When she gone for real I become this person you regret? Too bad dad, you can’t have everything you want.” Pee asked his dad full of anger erupting from his body and soul.
“You sound as if you believe I killed her, or forced her to kill herself.” Bonarote sounded shocked.
“Well, I don’t know what to believe anymore.” Pee said.
“Pee”—
“Forget it dad, I don’t want to talk about it.” He closed the bathroom door. Peeranan did not see the sadness in his father’s eyes.

*On the street of Bangkok, Rattika Life.*
Mr. Ponchai just finished his duty as a taxi driver, now he must do his duty as a husband and a father to his lovely wife and daughter.
It’s already 10:00 pm, Mr. Ponchai had to go pick up his beautiful wife at the noodle place that was sold and serve on the side of the street.
“Hi husband.”
“Hi wife, how was work?” Mr. Ponchai asked his wife.
“A bit tiring but I’ll be fine.” Mrs. Ponchai told her husband, “How about you.”
“It’s fine.” He told her.
They smiled to one another when the phone rang.
“Hello?” Mrs. Ponchai answered.
“Mom”
“Oh hi Rattika honey how was school? Did you get home safely?” Mrs. Ponchai, the loving mother asked.
“Yes mother, Viktearia drove me home.” Rattika told her mother.
“Oh is she there with you?”
“Yes mom but she’s watching T.V. right now.” Rattika laughed.
“Hmm…that’s good honey, well I’m almost home, we see you—husband! Watch out!”
The line went dead…

(End of Author P.O.V)

(Rattika P.O.V)

“Hello? Hello? Mom? Mom you there? Hello!” I yelled over the phone.
“Rattika, what’s wrong?” Viktearia asked me.
“It’s my parents…suddenly the line went dead.”
“It’s probably the service.” Viktearia tried to soothe me.
I shook my head, “Viktearia…I don’t have a good feeling.”
“Ok…you know what; I’ll take you to find them. We’ll probably even meet each other up the street.” Viktearia smiled.
We both went into her Celica 2005 GTS, and drove to find my parents.
When we got up the street and made a right turn there was traffic that blocked the intersection. Many people got off their vehicle to circle around the accident spot, making it hard for me to see what happen.
But that intense feeling at my guts told me it something I shouldn’t look at. I have to know, I have to see for myself.
I slowly got out of the car with Viktearia trailing behind me.
The closer I got, the terrified I became.
I squeeze between the people and when I saw with my own eyes, my heart almost drops to the floor…
“MOM! DAD!” I yelled at the top of my lung, tears cascading down my eyes. I pushed through the people, the polices, but they grabbed me, holding me back.
“Let me go! It’s my parents!” I cried.
They let me go, I rushed to my parents. The paramedics covered both of my parents faces…
“No…NO…it can’t be…” darkness close over me…

(End of Rattika P.O.V)

(Chuan P.O.V)

*Ring*
*Ring*
*Ring*

Aish where are all those dam maids!
I picked up the phone, “Hello?”
“Is this Mrs. Ponchai? Mother of Mr. Ron Ponchai?”
“Um yes…”
“We like you to come and prove that the body we have with us is Mr. Ron Ponchai. Please come to Bumrungrad International Hospital.”
I dropped the phone, “No…my son…”

(End of Chuan P.O.V)

“Shh… Rattika there in a better place now…” Viktearia was saying, I wouldn’t listen…
“Grandma!” I rushed into her arms and cried, “Grandma, mom and dad is gone, they left me.”
“There, there sweetie, everything well be fine.” She cried, I did not believe it one bit…

(Rattika P.O.V)

(Peeranan P.O.V)

“Chuan.” I called as I walked through the door.
“Chuan.” No answer…
“Chuan!” damnit! Where is she?
“Waeyo!
“You called me Master Peeranan?” the maid answered.
“Where’s Chuan?”
“She’s um”—
“Why do you want her?” my dad butted in.
“I’m hungry.”
“She’s not here, Chuan needs to be with her family, today her son and his wife got into an acceded and died at the scene, her only relative left is her granddaughter and she needs her. So she won’t be here 3-4 days” my father told me.
“What? Is the girl a little kid? Aish! Who’s going to cook for me?”
“Waeyo can cook.”
“Forget it, I’m not hungry.” Damnit, damnit all!

(End of Peeranan P.O.V)

(Author P.O.V)

The funeral went by fast, tears were shed, and many well wishes were spoken. However, there’s no place for Rattika to live but with her grandmother. But she has to throw away her freedom to become a slave. From a free woman to a slave girl, what hopes or choices does she has?

(End of Author P.O.V)

(Rattika P.O.V)

“Don’t worry, you’ll still be able to go to school.” My grandmother assured me.
“But”—
I didn’t get to finish because Viktearia cut in, “I’ll pick you up every day, what are friends for right?”
I took a deep breath; I guess I’m going to have to walk this path.

*Arrive at the Nongbonarith household.*

Wow…it so big…
“Well, we’re here, come on.” She held out her hand.
Should I take it? Or go back with my friend?
I took a deep breath and took my grandmother’s hand.
I walked toward my new home. The Nongbonarith Household…

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Drama is coming soon!!!
Sorry if this chapter is boring…^_^

 

[lakornsrok]

Omg...PLease update SOon..yay she Gets to be in THe House ughh But as a SLAVe..oh well i like those Kind..Please Update MOre..Thanx Luving iT!!u RAWK... :wub:

 

[tastesweetlove]

that was sad how her parents died but at least she still had her grandmother to take care of her.

 

[zienan09]

awws. that was sad =( i feel bad for her..and i bet its not gonna look too good..but i bet it will later on ehehe.
i cant wait to see what kinda twists and turns you have in here..especially with the mysteries ^-^

 

[lv88]

Awesome! i luv it. Please update soon!!!!!

 

[n_naruk]

Peeranan is so stubborn and such a brat for his age.
Aws, that's sad how she lost both of her parents.
Her life sure will be tough as a slave and being in the same house as Pee

 

[babyblue]

Chapter 3

The New surrounding…
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Sorry for not updating, I was suppose too, but I’ve been busy…well I do hope you like the chapter.

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(Rattika P.O.V)

Inside the house was beautiful, nice and has lots of space.
Then to my right which was the living room there was a man in his wheel chair staring at me.
My grandmother bows her upper half and dragged my hand as she walked toward him, “Head master, how are you?”
“I’m fine Chuan, is this”—
“This is my granddaughter, Rattika; I like to ask for your permission if it’s alright for her to live with me, and to serve your family.
“Is she still in school?” the man asked.
“Yes…last year.”
“Hmm, alright…I don’t mind.” He smiled.
“Tell him thank you.” My grandmother instructed.
“Thank you head master.” I said.
After head master rolled away, grandmother told me to go explore my new hope. First place was the kitchen since I love to cook; there I met 4 girls that aren’t that much older than me, and 3 older woman who was a little younger than my beloved grandmother.
“Can I help you?” one of the 3 older women asked
“Um no…hi, I’m Rattika, I’m grandma Chuan granddaughter. Nice to meet you guys.”
“Oh! You’re her granddaughter. She told us about you, wow you’re beautiful.”
“Thank you.” I started blushing.
In the kitchen I met auntie Urai, auntie Nam, and auntie Jian, the 3 older women. The other 4 girls were P’Aon, P’ Waeyo, and P’ Pekoun. They were all nice to me.
After meeting the kitchen staff and the inside staff, I went outside to meet the staff outside, they were equally nice as the inside staff.
There was uncle Cam, P’ Ta, P’ Chet, and uncle Keit.
So far I love this…but it still doesn’t hide the fact I miss my parents.
I walked back into the house and into the kitchen to see if anyone needed help.
“You’re so helpful honey.” Auntie Urai said.
“Thanks auntie Urai…” I smiled.
“Auntie Urai is there anything to eat?” a guy voice…I didn’t bother looking up.
“Oh…young master Piet, what are you doing in the kitchen?”
Who is he? *Cut*
“OW!”
“Oey! Blood.” P’Aon panic.
“Let me see.” The guy grabbed my hand and sucked in into his mouth and spit it into the sink.
“You got to stop the bleeding…fir…st…” he looked at me…not blinking and eye as I tried to pull my finger out of his grasp.
“Um…can you let go of my hand?” I asked.
“Oh…sorry. Um…”
“Rattika na ka.” I introduced myself.
“Rattika…I’m Piet.”
“Um…yes, I heard auntie Urai called you.” I smiled.
He looked embarrassed.
I put the bandage on as I felt him still looking at me.
“Young Master, please go wait at the dining table, the food will be ready and serve to you.” Auntie Urai said.
So far today was good, everyone was nice. I left outside for a breath of fresh air, so calm so quiet…just as I like it…

(End of Rattika P.O.V)

(Peeranan P.O.V)

After parking my car I saw a girl standing next to a tree, she look so much like Nattiya… Nattiya I went close to her from behind, it has to be Nattiya, the long wavy golden brown hair, that stance, that sweet humming.
“Nattiya…” I held her in my arms… Nattiya, you can back…
“Hey let me go!”
I snapped out of my stupor and pushed the girl down, “You’re not Nattiya…”
“Hey, what’s wrong with you? Harassed me then acts as if I’m the one that is wrong?”
“Who the hell are you?” I asked.
“What? I’m supposed to say that! Not you!” she yelled at me.
“Or you’re the burglar?!” gasped, “Help! Help! Burglar!!!”
What the hell?
“Where? Where?” Chet asked.
“Everyone was surrounding us, lights were turned on.
“He’s the burglar” she said pointing at me.
“Oh…Master Peeranan.”
“Who?” the girl look confused.
“He’s the oldest son of head master Bonarote.” Aon told her.
“Oh.” Stupid girl.
“Stupid…really stupid.” I walked away really annoyed.

(End of Peeranan P.O.V)

(Rattika P.O.V)

I went to the servant’s quarter by myself when I saw a shadow near a tree…
“Who’s there?”
I walked toward the tree when I felt cold rush…
I had chills from head to toe…I saw a girl, she was wearing a white gown…her hair about the same length as mine, I looked at her gown again…but this time my eyes almost popped out, blood…blood…I stared at her face she was now staring straight at me…I froze I couldn’t move…she came closer…closer still…I closed my eyes tightly, but I can still feel her present…
“Rattika… Rattika!” I open my eyes and the girl was gone…but my grandmother stood beside me.
“What’s wrong? You look as if you just seen a ghost.”
“It—it—it’s nothing grandmother lets go to bed…”
I felt the cold chill again, but I didn’t look behind me…

“Rattika… Rattika”

(End of Rattika P.O.V)

 

[n_naruk]

Aws, Pee still misses Nattiya.
I like Pee and Rattika's first encounter tho even tho it was an accident done by Pee thinking that Rattika was Nattiya.

That was so Nattiya that Rattikar saw! *Chills*

Thanks for the update!

 

[babyblue]

Man it sucks...i made a trailer for this story although i can't save it as wmv from the window movie maker. it getting on my nerves.