In to Fare:: Aum A & Aum P:: Chapter 1 is up

Katerine

Butterfly123
it taken me allday to think of a name and i have no idea who in it yet im tossing between Aff and Oil or Aum and Aum or i dunno

‘If you believe the impossible can happen’
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Aum Athichart – Himself
Aum Patchrapa – Herself but will be called Pat from real name
And many more.


Aum is a 26 year old hotel owner he is engaged to his loving girlfriend Donut they where set to marry but Donut died in a car accident, with her friend (undecided) by her side who got away, Aum wanted to find out who did this to her and wanted his revenge on that person!, but the person who was in the other car was Lift Pat’s (Aum P) older brother who actually had nothing to do with the accident, but he has to serve the time. Will Aum find out who killed Donut or will he take everything out on Pat (Aum P)?
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
OOoooO sounds interesting already...just by the name lol...it doesn't matter....i love aum and aff...but aff and oil OOoOOo oil is a HOTTIE....hmmm maybe oil and aump....
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
lol.. hhahaha rr.. keke.. btw i cant wait for u to get this fic runnin xp keke.. i wouldnt mind the cast xp..
 

pze

sarNie Adult
i like the summary so far....i can picture it while reading already....lolz.....this is gonna be good....do start on this soon....
 

mango

Lakornaddict ;)
ohhh i like the summary so far. UPDATE SOON :D
waiting to read this one and many more kekeke ^_^​
 

Katerine

Butterfly123
Chapter 1

Friday 13th June:
[Siam Clubs]
The Siam Club is on of the most exclusive night clubs in Bangkok
‘Aum put that drink down’ said a strange voice coming from his left. Aum turned round to see who it was ‘Put that water down’ he finished off
‘Nam’ Aum replied turning to shack his best friend hand.
‘Now put that water down’ Nam Said grabbing Aum’s glass of water and continued ‘Give his a Singha’ reaching his hand out to pay the bar tender
‘I can’t drink beer I’m driving’ Aum said, not accepting the Bar Nam offered him
‘You’re driving?’ Nam Said sounding like this was a new thing for Aum, which it was before Aum met Donut all he did was party and goes to his condo and sleep during the day and party during the night leaving his parents to pick up the peaces
‘Yes, I’m driving’ Aum replied
‘You Driving’ Nam sound even more confused
‘Yes what’s so confusing about that?’ Aum asked Nam looking at him
‘Nothing’ Nam said taking the bottle of Singha he offend Aum before and taking a big gulp out of it. ‘It nothing except a year ago you would have cared if you where driving or not’
‘I’m a changed man’ Aum said laughing
‘Changed, maybe’ Nam replied putting the beer bottle on the table and patting Aum on the back. Aum just laughed.
‘I better go’ Aum said getting off his seat
‘Go?’ Nam replied ‘This is you last night of singlehood and you leaving?’ He finished
‘Yes I’m getting married in the morning’ Aum replied
‘God hope I find a girl like that before I turn 27 years old’ Nam said,
Aum stared at Nam the said ‘You are 27 years old’ then Aum started to laugh
‘Ha Ha, funny I know, aren’t you going?’ Nam replied
‘Yes I’m off Cya’ Aum said starting to walk off Nam just waved then got back to his drink.

[Outside Siam Club]‘What car sir?’ a boy said
‘The BMW’ Aum replied to the Boy giving him his parking token and his car keys
‘Thank you sir, I will be right back’ the boy replied, Taking the token and car keys from Aum hand and started to walk to Aum’s car.
‘Fine’ Aum said to the boy.
Aum started to walk to stretch his legs when all of a sudden he was on the floor.
‘THEIR SHE IS’ two men shouted from a distance, the girl looked up, she had long dark hair which was put up in a ponytail.
‘Great I’m dead’ she said getting up off the floor, and then she looked at Aum ‘Why are you on the floor?’ She asked him
‘Well...’ Aum started while he was getting up, but before he could finish the girl was gone. ‘Where has she gone?’
‘Who? Sir’ the boy asked getting out of Aum’s car reaching out to give Aum his car keys
‘Umm nothing, thank you’ Aum said, taking his car keys from the boys hand and reaching for his wallet to give the boy a tip.
‘Have you seen a girl run pass’ one of the men who shouted earlier asked the boy
‘No’ he replied
‘Have you?’ the other man asked Aum ‘She around so high’ lifting his hand to show Aum the height of the girl. ‘She looks around 19 -20 years old, and has look dark hair in a ponytail’
‘Umm, No I haven’t sorry’ Aum said but he did see this girl it was the one who he bumped into earlier.
‘Ok thank, but if you do please phone this number.’ The man said giving Aum the card with the number on it. Which had a name of a hotel called (Siam hotel)
‘I sure will’ Aum said taking the card from his hand then he got into his car and started to drive off when he got mile away from the club he saw the girl again, but he just drove past.
‘Err... I hate MEN’ she shouted ‘Err... ‘She went to reach for her back pocket ‘WHERES MY PHONE’ she shouted ‘OMG how am I going to phone my brother now Err.’ Then she moved round in her pocket a bit more ‘Auh, some change’ she looked round for a payphone she found one so she went to it and started to dial a number
‘Hello how is this?’ A man asked on the other side
‘P’Lift its N’Pat ‘Pat said
‘PATCHRAPA’ this man said. Aum was confused on who was talking to her ‘Where the hell are you it midnight, you better have a good excuse.’
Pat realised who it was and relied ‘Pa’ she to a big gulp from the back of her thought
‘Yes, Where are you I’ll get one of my men to come and get you’ her farther said
‘Don’t bother I’ve only just lost them’ Pat replied
‘Yes I know, I’ll get them to pick you up’ He replied
‘Wait what are you doing at my house?’ She asked her farther
‘Your mother house’ he replied
‘Yes exactly my mothers house, not yours and I’m not going home if your there’ Pat said
‘PATCHRAPA’ her farther shouted down the phone ‘HELLO!’
‘Hello’ Pat said down the phone like her farther but she had rainouts of time on her phone ‘Great no more money, great’ she finished kicking a stone on the floor but it hit the back of someone’s head
‘HEY’ the man shouted turning round ‘N’PAT?’ he seemed a little confused, Pat was just about to start running but she got a little closer and saw it was her brother
‘P’Lift?’ she said ‘What you doing here?’
‘Looking for you’ Lift replied
‘Me?’ Pat asked sounding confused
‘Yes you, my asked me to come look for you because she was worried that you would end up doing something bad’ He answered ‘And it looks like you have already’
‘Me never’ Pat said looking around her
‘Pat’ Lift said shaking his head
‘Fine, I never asked him to bring his army on me’ Pat said
‘Come he’ll be gone by now, Mum will be worried out off her mind by now’ Lift said walking to his sister and putting his arm around her
‘Yeh I guess’ Pat replied looking at her brother and walking off.
 

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sarNie Granny
how exciting...i am already hooked...a changed man because he's getting married..awwww...YAY they met.."bumping" into each other....
 

Katerine

Butterfly123
Chapter 2
Next day
[Aum’s House]

‘Aum Wake up na ka’ his mother said standing out side is door knocking, ‘Aum dear wake up’
’10 minutes Mum’ Aum said putting the pillow his head was on over his ears.
‘Aum 3 ½ seconds otherwise I will get Gig pour cold water on you’ she said knocking the door harder ‘ No, ok, GIG COME UP WITH THAT WATER’
‘Alright, alright I’m up’ Aum replied getting up off his bed to open the door to let his mother in.
‘Well go have a shower Aum’ his mother said, pushing towards Aum’s bathroom
[Pat’s house]
‘Pat, ja wake up it your last day at school, you don’t want to be late now’ Pat’s mother said walking into Pat room.
‘Ok Ma’ Pat replied, sitting up and stretching her arms to her left the she starred out the window.
‘It looks so beautiful today’ Pat mother said sitting on Pat’s bed
‘Hmm’ Pat replied not realising her mum was talking to her
‘Pat about yesterday’ Pat mum started but Pat just ignored her and got up and walked out her room to the bathroom which was right opposite her room.

[Aum’s house]
‘Aum, are you ready?’ his mother asked sitting on Aum’s king-size bed.
‘Yep I am’ Aum replied walking out with only a towel on around his waste.
‘Right your clothes for this afternoon are in the cupboard’ Aum mum said walking up to Aum ‘I’m so proud of you’ she said and then kissed him in the forehead.
‘Today the day!’ Aum said to his mother.
‘Yes it is and your farther would be a proud man to if he was still here today’ His Mum replied walking out the Door.
‘I know.’

[Pat’s house]
‘Ma, have you seen my school shirt?’ Pat shouted from the bathroom
‘Yes it in your room, would you like me to pass it to you?’ Pat mum asked
‘Yes please’ Pat replied ‘I’ll be 10 minutes, Can you tell P’Lift that’
‘Tell him you self’ Lift said walking through the hallway to go to his bedroom ‘I’ll be in my room give me a shout when you finished’
‘Ok’ Pat replied.
‘You ready yet?’ Lift shouted ten minutes later
‘Yes, ready’ Pat replied walking out her bedroom door ‘Ready’
‘let go then’ lift said. They both walked out the house the went into Lifts car and drove off
[Donuts house]
‘May, can you believe I’m getting married in an hour’ Donut said sitting on her dressing room chair while the hair stylist was doing her hair.
‘Yes and where going to be late if you don’t hurry’ May say sitting on Donuts bed.
‘Ready’ Donut said getting up from the chair; she had already had her dress on which was plain white with sparkling crystals round the neck line.
‘WOW’ May said you look beautiful
‘Thank you’ Donut said ‘Where my farther then?’
‘Umm your farther left I said I would take you’ May said
‘Oh ok, let go’ Donut said, so they both walked out of the door.

[Outside Pat’s school]
‘Thank you, P’ Lift’ Pat said getting out off Lift’s Car
‘Do you want me to pick you up?’ Lift asked
‘Nope’ Pat replied starting to walk off
‘PAT’ lifted shouted out the window
‘Yes’ Pat said turning around
‘I’ll pick you up at 3’ Lift said, and then he shut the window before, Pat could even say anything.
‘Pat, Pat’ this boy said
‘NOTE, WHAT YOU LOOKING AT?’ Pat shouted
‘You have you older brother escorting you everywhere all because you lost a bet ‘Note said
‘I didn’t lose anything’ Pat said shrugging Note on the shoulder while she walked pass.
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‘I still can’t believe that I’m getting married’ Donut said sitting in the passenger seat while May was driving the car.
‘Yes I know’ May replied ‘Let’s turns on some music’ May turned on the radio
‘I still can’t believe it we’ve not been together long and where getting married’ Donuts said
‘yes I know you’ve said it about thousand time’s, so shut you mouth or 10 minutes. Your not the only woman Aum’s be with’ May shouted at Donut looking at donut and not on the road
‘MAY!!’ Donut shouted
‘Shut you mouth I’m sick of you and Aum’ may continued not realising.

May suddenly turned round and she didn’t stop the car and Donut turned to her left where she could she Lifts car coming straight for her then May stopped all of a sudden right in the middle of the junction, the all of a sudden the was a big crash, 2 more cars crashed into the car.
‘PAT’ Note shouted, but Pat didn’t listen ‘PAT, ISN’T THAT YOU BROTHER’ Note shouted even louder he got Pat attention, Pat turned round and saw her brothers car and 3 other cars.
‘P’LIFT!’ Pat shouted running toward her brother car, but a police man stopped her, ‘Let me throw that my brother’s car’
‘Sorry misses the policeman said
‘PLEASE THAT MY BROTHER!’ Pat shouted
‘N’PAT’ someone shouted from crash walking toward an ambulance
‘P’LIFT, P’LIFT’ Pat shouted she pushed pass the Policeman and ran up to her brother .
‘Nong’ Lift said. Pat ran up to lift then rapped her arms around him and didn’t let go she stood there crying, then all of a sudden and policeman pulled her off and put handcuffs on to lift.
‘What you doing’ Pat said trying to push the policeman off Lift ‘P’Lift what are they doing’ Pat turned to Lift.
‘There arresting me’ Lift said looking at his little sister who eye where full of tears ‘they think the accident was my fault’ the policeman put Lift in the Van
‘P’LIFT’ Pat shouted ‘P, P-‘then all of a sudden Pat fainted
Lift turned round to see his sister one more time but saw she was on the floor and then he pushed the policeman out off his way, ‘N’PAT!’ he shouted running to Pat, ‘SOMEONE HELP ME, PLEASE’ Lift shouted, then two ambulance men heard him and ran over to see if Pat was alright but Pat was out cold.
On the other side of the Crash fire crew and paramedics where trying to get Donut out of the car but she was jammed in but may managed to get out with only a few scratches. Then all of a sudden, on of the fire men could smell Gas and hear and a car running,
‘IT’ GOING TO BLOW’ the fireman shouted ‘IT’S GOING TO BLOW’. The suddenly everyone ran from the scene, and then with in a few seconds of people running from the car because the car was going to blow up the car did blow up!
 

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sarNie Granny
OMG *shock* donut died and the car exploded....gasp.....so it was May's fault huh.....not paying attention...but they think it's lift's awwwwwww
 
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