[FF] Torn in Between :: CH3 updated 11/8

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
ahahaha... oh goodness, here I am again. Bargie has me going googoo gaagaa over them atm all because of RM :D.. and yes I apologize for not updating my other ffs.. my laptop was down for awhile since i was waiting for a new laptop charger.. but here i am again. I promise I'll get working on my other ffs soon.. but for now, enjoy this new bargie ff :D


Starring:
Boy Pakorn & Margie Rasee
Co-Starring:
Wan Thanakrit & Rotmay Kaneungnij​

Prologue

-Boy's Point of View-

I met the most beautiful woman in the club tonight. She also happens to be the club's number one pole dancer. The way she danced got me going crazy as she spun herself around. Her name is Rasee. She had blonde hair and a fair white complexion. I can never forget the look in her eyes as she gazed upon me. It was as if I was put under a spell. All I know is that I would love to spend some quality time with her.

-Margie's Point of View-

Disgusting! Look at all of those lustful men. I can't wait for work to end. Just a few more hours and I'll be done. That one guy sure is annoying. He's been staring at me the whole time. I so can't wait to quit this job. It's all father's fault I have to work here.
 

TubbyTinker

You're Average Person :)
wow I love that poster and I'm loving the intro already hahaha....I can imagine Boy being a perv and looking at Margie hahahah

I need to get back into writing..it's been too long already lol
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
Chapter 1

"What do you want?" asked Rasee as she rolls her eyes taking off her earing. Her boss walked over and smelled her hair. "Get out of my space." says Rasee in annoyance. He starts breathing heavily on her right shoulder and takes a lick. She quickly got up and slaps her boss on the face. "I already warned you to get out of my space!"

Her boss gently rubbed his face where he got slapped. "You're such a wild girl. Even Rotmay wouldn't dare."

"Of course not! How dare you compare me to her!" She quickly threw her perfume bottle at the mirror, making it shatter to the ground. "The only reason I'm here is because of her!"

He shook his head. "No, silly child. It's your father's fault."

"Don't mention that fool to me. He ain't my father!" He slowly creeps his fingers on her back. "Why?"

Rasee turned around with rageful eyes. "Because of him, I'm in this disgusting foul place! I didn't even bother to go searching for him, but nooo.. Rotmay wanted to be a goody two shoes." She shoved her boss away. "My shift is over!" Her boss tightly grabbed a hold of her wrist.

"Not so fast missy. You have a customer tonight." She freed her hand. "Make Rotmay serve him instead. I'm done for tonight." "It's a pity but you can't leave. He already paid for you." He signaled for the guards to come in. Rasee sighed. "Really? You're going to go that far just to make me sleep with a foul old man." "Who knows? I just like getting paid." "I hate you! I hope you die soon so this will all be over!" He harshly slapped her face. "Thanks for that blessing. I hope I can take you along with me to the next realm."

The side of her lip got cut from his ring, making it bleed a tiny bit. Her face slowly began to puff up. "Thanks for that offer, but I rather sell my soul to the devil. Even I feel that he's a better man than any of you!" "Quickly take her to the room."

------------------------

Pakorn looked around in the room. "I wonder what these things are?" He grabbed something on the desk and opened it. "A ballon?" He quickly threw it on the ground. "Ewwe, a condom..." He looks around for a bathroom so he can wash his hands.

At that very moment, Rasee was thrown into the room. "Behave nicely will you. He should be in there already." Rasee stuck out her tongue. "Stupid workers." She walked over to the bed and stared at the condom on the ground. "What's the point of having room service if they don't even know how to clean up?"

Pakorn finished washing his hands and got out. "That's weird, I thought I heard something." He walked over to the bed and was surprised to see a beautiful blonde on the bed. "H-hi.."

She turned around with a soft fake smile. "Did you order for me?"

Pakorn was so nervous he began stuttering. "Y-yes.." She got up and seductively walked over to him. She ran her index finger down his chest. "So what was it that you needed?" "I can't believe it's this pervert who ordered me. I knew it!!! Freaken pervert!" thought Rasee as she continued her act.

"W-well.. I thought that.. M-maybe we.. can..."

"Maybe we can.. what?"

Pakorn quickly gulped. "Y-you see.."

"Uh-huh.. go on.."

"I thought.. Maybe we can be friends.."

"Awwwe, how sweet of you.. but what kind of friend.. And what category?"

"Category? What do you mean?"

"There's ton of friends out there.. such as school friends, bed friends.. and so forth.. So what kind of friend?" She wrapped her right leg around his left leg making him shiver.

"J-just friends." She removed herself from him and laughed. "Come on, just hurry up and get this thing over with." She begins taking off her top. Pakorn quickly covers his eyes. "Isn't this going too fast?" he asked. "This is what you wanted right? If not, I'm done for tonight. Just tell that old man you paid earlier that "it was amazing" alright? Understand?"

"I don't want to sleep with a random person. I want to know the person first."

"Well, that's a shame. I'm a random person, so.. I guess we won't sleep together. Bye." She puts on her top. He gently grabs her wrist. "Wait. I want to know you. I-I.."

She freed her hand. "I don't need to know a somebody like you. I don't want to know a somebody like you. I hate a somebody like you!" "Ahh." she whimpered as she touched the side of her lip. "Great, just great!"

He quickly took out his handkerchief. "Here. It's clean." She rolled her eyes in disgust. "No thank you!" He gently grabbed her face and pat the side of her lip, making her shiver. She shook her head. "Please get away from me."

Pakorn softly grabbed a hold of her hand. "What happened? You didn't look like this earlier?"

"This is my life. Looks fun doesn't it? I dance for you lustful men. And I also sleep for you lustful men." She clenched her fist.

"I'm sorry." He silently peck the side of her lip. Rasee's eyes widened. "I didn't know this would happen. I just wanted to spend some quality time with you."

"How much did you pay for me?" Pakorn stared around the room, trying to avoid the question. "I said how much?!"

"Just.. a few thousand. And I don't regret it either." He went in for slight kiss. "Sorry about this. I'm not good at it."

Rasee secretly blushed. "Goodness! Why the heck am I blushing? Crap, what's wrong with me?! Stop it.. stop it..." she thought. She shook her head. "You're just another one of those lustful men."

"I can assure you that I'm not." She placed her index finger on his lip. "All words men say are lies. They get what they want, and leave. Women are just pure entertainment. They always get replaced in a matter of second, just like me."

"No you're not. I can sense something special in your eyes. Something.. unique.. as if you are.."

"As if you are what?"

"I don't know." She removed her hand. "If you don't know, then how should I know."

"I don't know what it is but.. all I know is that. I want to be the man that's always there for you. A man that's always on your side. A man that will always cherish you. A man that.. will always love you."

Rasee stood lifeless as she repeats the word "love." "Love. What is love? Love is .. love is a meaningless word that gets said for no reason... Love has no particular meaning.."

Pakorn hugged her lifeless body. "Then let's learn what love is.. together."

Tears streamed down her face. "I hate you." she whispered. "And I love you." he replied. He gently peck sweet kisses around her neck. "Let's be one, together." (Imagine the rest people... :D)

.................... TO BE CONTINUED ....................

Thanks & Goodness, I didn't know where to start.. but I was so hyped up I had to start somewhere.. kekeke.. I hope you readers enjoyed... :D I'm not as good of a writer so.. My writing is bland.. I just hope y'all can feel the atmostphere's environment.. :D

Anyways I'm just telling y'all that Boy is somewhat of a clean-freak, smart, innocent virgin guy.. until he meets margie hehe.. and margie is a lady who is strong-willed and full of hate and resentment.. la la la.. just giving y'all some heads up on the two.. la la la.. rotmay and wan may be featured in the next chap.. ENJOY :D
 

Asy

sarNie Immature
Rotmay is the Nang rai? Too bad! :((

It starts very fast. I love it. Too funny that Boy is kinda nerd. :whahuh:

This is my first time to read on-going fan fiction. So, please update it sooner!!! Haha. :p
 

huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
Omfg, I loved it. I can totally picture ... everything :D
Bargie is wayyy too hottt, this room's heating up, LOL xD
I love Boy's words & attitude. Poor Margie. I wonder why she's working there.
Can't wait to read about Rotmay & Wan. :) Keep writing, aiko. Can't wait <3
 

fun

Expired Sarnie
It's kind of hard for me to imagine lol not because of your writing but Margie is just hard to picture her doing those stuff lol good start liking forward to more.
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
thanks for reading so far everyone :)

@fun, i know it's kind of hard to picture margie doing that but.. when i manipped the picture i had that type of character image set for my ff :)

@ Asy, no rotmay isn't n'rai.. i could never make her n'rai lol.

i will update this shortly ... :D
 

jjinxx

Is your "nom" Fai-approved?
I want Pakorn to be Rasee's knight in shining armor and rescue her from that disgusting place please! she has to go through so much and now she meets this amazingly sweet guy! he must take her away!
 

roselovesice

방탄소년단 x Bangtan Sonyeondan x JiTaew
Gosh. Why can't you just give us the detail and not make imagine it. :lmao3:
Darn. I was hoping that Boy would be a SADIST in here but guess not. Aahhaa It's okay though. He'll just be like "MARK!" :bhehe: A pervert yet, a sweet guy. :crush:
I can't wait to read more! Let's hope you finish this one this time. :coverlaf: But do take your time na! :thumbsup:
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
LMAO.. oh man.. i've been meaning to update this ff and even have the next chapter..
ehehe, will update the next chapter in a bit or later.. la la la .. missing BARGIE.. la la la..
 

Katerine

Butterfly123
Julie i thought this was an update!! lol

sigh i miss bargie to :(
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
Chapter 2

Rasee stared at Pakorn's peaceful sleeping face. "Oh god.. How can you be sleeping so peacefully?" She then hits her head. ".. I forgot to use protection... " She then bit her nails as she got up. "I should be .. safe.."

Pakorn slowly reached out his hand to Rasee's side of the bed. He realized she was missing, so he slowly peeked at the empty side. He swiftly rose up and search the rooms with his eyes, until his eyes stole a glance of her luminous back. Rasee turned and looked at him in confusion. "Is something the matter?"

Pakorn quickly covered his face. She leaned in closer and removed his hands from his face. "I said is something the matter?"

His eyes bulged wide open as his face neared hers. He quickly closed his eyes as his cheeks began to blush. "Uh.. nothings wrong."

Rasee then crossed her arms. "You're a weird fellow.." She grabbed her bra from the ground and put it on. She then smirk. "You're not used to seeing a woman's body huh?"

Pakorn gulped as he continued closing his eyes. "What makes you think that?" Rasee put on her underwear and jumped on the bed, making Pakorn open his eyes in surprise. She begins leaning closer to him. Their nose slowly touch and sweat began to form from Pakorn's head as Rasee moves in for a fake kiss. Rasee softly cupped his face. "What's the matter with you? Why are you sweating so much?" She removed her hands and got off the bed. "The fun is long over already.. Now, I'll get going." She put on the rest of her clothes and walked toward the door.

"Wait!" shouts Pakorn as he shakes his head. "Can't you stay longer?"

She looked at her nails. "Sorry, time is money."

He rushed over to her side. "Then.." "Then what?" she asked. "Then.. then I'll buy your time.." He clasped her hand. "Is that alright with you?"

"Sorry but, I don't like having a morning bed partner.. I want my rest too you know.. especially my beauty sleep.."

"I'll take you to the best spa to relax.. I'll get you the best treatments... I'll get you anything.."

"I'm not the one you should be talking to.. " she sighed. "My life is not mines."

***RING-RING*** "One moment please.." sighed Rasee as she picked up the phone. "What do you want?"

"How was it last night? Did you give him your best show?"

"I don't know.. Why don't you check the hidden cctv cameras?"

"Awwwe, you're just so smart aren't you? Now hurry up and get ready, you have another client today.. He's coming in with some big packages.."

"I'm done for today!!" shouts Rasee in anger. Pakorn stole the phone from her hands. "This is Pakorn speaking.."

"Oh dear, what do you want?"

"Is this how you treat your guests?"

"No, no.. It's a misunderstanding."

"Then, let me ask for another day with her."

"Her? I can get you another woman..."

"No, I only want her.."

"I'm sorry sir.. She's already packed with customers.. You know everyone loves young ones.."

Pakorn squeezed his fist. "Then how much does it cost to buy her?" Rasee's eyes widened. "Are you serious!?!?!? Give me the phone!!!" He gently shoves her away.

Her boss chuckles on the other line. "She's too expensive for you..."

"Just give me the price!" said Pakorn in a stern voice.

"Fine... She's worth a million dollars."

Pakorn's draw dropped. "D-deal!" Rasee hits him on the chest. "Are you crazy!! Why would you do something like this? We don't even know each other!!!"

"It's a deal! I'll have the guards come clean her up and delivered to you again in the lobby once we finish our paperwork." smiled her boss.

"Got it!" The guards entered the room and took Rasee away. "Let go of me! Let go of me!" She stared at him blankly. "Just what are you up to?" she whispered as they left the room.

Pakorn's body wobbled down to the bed. "Just what have I done? A million dollars.. a million dollars..." Pakorn put on his clothes and hurried down to the lobby.

---------------------------------------------------------------

*RING-RING* "Hello?" answered Rotmay as she waves to get a taxi. "What is it boss?" As she tries to get in the taxi, a man bumps into her.

"I'm sorry.. but can we share this taxi? I'm in a bit of a hurry." apologized the man. Rotmay gave him a pouted face as she continues listening to the boss. "WHAT?!?!" she said in shock.

The man looked at her in confusion and repeated his words. Rotmay shook her head and looked at him. "I wasn't talking to you... but yeah, we can share this cab.. but let me get to my destination first."

"That's fine by me." Rotmay then continued talking on the phone. "I'll get there soon boss. Please try to waste as much time as you can for me..."

"Who are you to order me around? Just for that.. I'm letting them go just like that." the boss quickly hung up the phone. Rotmay continues talking on the phone but was disconnected. "Just what is going on....." she said worriedly as she bit her thumb. "Mr. Taxi driver, please take me to ***** as soon as possible."

The man interrupted. "I'm going to the same place as well." Rotmay gave him a slight smile as she then stared at the cloudy blue sky. "N'Rasee, please don't leave my side." she whispered.


..................... TO BE CONTINUED ....................

*a/n: Hello everyone.. I hope all is well.. Anyways.. I'm back.. after being mia again lol.. but oi.. I just had to come update this ff since.. my imagination changed for the better-ish lol.. ahaha Anyways, I hope y'all enjoy :)
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
Thanks lakornsrok:)

I'll have Ch3 up soon.. I'm just noting that I finally made a poster for Wan & Rotmay.. I left it grey-scaled and added a light red tint.. Check my first post to see it :)
 

lakornsrok

sarNie Adult
ohh yeah now i see it!! aha of course what do i expect?? Aikoden the great photoshopper!! i lovedd the poster!! omg cant wait i am loving Bargie!!Thanks alott i am excitedd :dance2: :secret:
 
Top