Fate Within Our Love

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
The Boys

Bie As Peter: Ordinary,nice,Hot Oldest of two,Loves Fah

Mike as Nook:Rich Cute,Helpful,Cousin of Paul,and loves MIn

New as Paul: Rich, Plays Around Alot,cute,cousin Of Nook,and loves Noon alot!!!


The Girls

Grand as Fah:Rich Lovable,Beautiful,singing,Loves Peter

Toey as Min:Ordinary, Lovely, Pretty, Youngest of Two , and Loves Nook

P'mai as Noon:Rich,Lovely,sexy Younger cousin of Fah and likes Nook but loves Paul.







 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Chapter One:


May: Tawan tomarrow your sister is coming home from Korea with her friends and your gonna pick them up right?
Tawan: Yes Mom. But how many?
May:Just Noon and Fah.
Tawan:(wondering Who's Fah is.)Mom who is Fah? I seen Noon A few Time but never saw Fah.
May: don't worry your sister will tell you Tomarrow.


Fah:When Are we gonna get there I miss Chaing Mai alot.
Min:Don't Worry we'll get there eventually.
Noon:(Sleep talking) Yay We're here once again!!
Fah and MIn Just Staring at her


Tawan:I'm leaving mom.(looking @ May)
May:Where To?
Tawan:Nook's and Paul then the airport.
May:why go to Nook and Paul House?(looking Up at Tawan.)
Tawan:The Boys Wants to go see the girls.
May:Alrighty. (lookiong back to her Sewing)


Nooks House

Knock at door
Nook: Who is it?
Tawan: Me and Paul.
Nook: Open up!
Tawan and Paul walks in.
Tawan: Ready To Go?
Nook: Yeah.

Airport


Fah:yay we're here!!!


Tawan: Who is that girl?
Noon:she is my dads Best friends Daughter
Tawan:(saying to himself)So Pretty!!
Tawan:Min!!
Min:Tawan,Nook!!
Noon:Nook!!
Noon Going to hug Nook but he ignores her and goes to min
Nook:I miss you!! Alot Min!!
Noon Loking a little jealous
Paul:Miss you alot Missy!!
Noon giving paul a weird look
Noon:Hi
Paul Getting her stuff
Noon: I can do by myself!!
Paul:Let me help you!!!
Noon:no!!
Paul:Yes!!
Paul and Noon Arguing back & Forth
Tawan:Can I help you?
Fah:(wondering off)uh What me!??
Tawan:Can i Take your bag in Put it in the car?
Fah:Oh Sure thanks!!


@ Tawan's House

Min rushes in the house
Min:Mom!
Looks up and see's min
May:Min!!
Min:How Have you Been Mom!!!
May:Good!!
Tawan:MOm I going to my room give all the kisses and hugs all you want.
Drops his fone on the couch
Fah:I goin to the BR
MIn:alright
Noon Standing next and very close to Nook and Paul standing right next Noon
Noon:Nook Can we go to lunch later on?
Nook:I;m goign with Min already. (looks down to Noon) But you can tag along
Paul:Can I go then
Noon hits paul
Noon:NO You may not
Paul Trying to hold Noon's Hand

In Tawan:
Checking his pockets for his fone
Tawan:Where is it?

Hall Way
Fah Coming out the Br
Tawan coming from his room
Tawan And Fah bump and Fah about to fall
Tawan quickly catches her and looks at her
Tawan:are you alright?
Fah still staring
Tawan:Fah?
Fah:Yes?
Tawan: are yo okay?
Fah: Ka Thanks
Tawan still holding her and looking at her
Min:Fah are you
Min Staring at The two of them
Fah and Tawan separting
fah leaves
Min:Like her so far (giving him a look)
Tawan:Whatever!!
Min: I bet so!! (Lighty punches him on the arm)
Tawan smiles
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
sorry this is short i am a begginner
If not good tell me

Ch.2

@ the Restruant

Min:I love this palce>
Huggs Nook and Noon Gets Jealous a little
Paul see's her and grab her hands and take her inside
Noon: What are yo doing!!
Paul: Just bringing you ion here wahts the problem?
Noon: Nothing
Paul:Then Lets go find a seat.
Smiles at her she gives him a mean look
back to Min and Nook
Min: I think Tawan Likes Fah!!
Nook: Me too. When we saw you guys come out he asked about her.
They see Tawan and Fah walking together and twan hodls the door for her
Fah:Thanks.
Tawan:Welcome
Sits by Paul and Noon
Min:Whats up with them?
Nook:Idk
Nook takes Min hands from the table
Nook: Can we Go out to lunch some days
Min(Blushing) Sure.
Nook:Okay tomarrow at 1:00
Min Alright
Waitress:Can I get you guys Something?
Tawan:Sure Fried Beef w/t Rce please.
Fah: Me Too
Noon:Beef noodle soup Please.
Paul:same with me Please.
Noon Looks at Paul
Waitress walks away
Noon:You don;t like to eat those you would spit those out when we were stiil here!
Paul:But now i do!!
Raises his eyebrows
Noon:Ugh so annoying!!
Looks Away
Twan:So Fah how long have you know my sister?
Fah:About Sonce High School.
Tawan:and i never saw you.
Min and Nook sneaking to look at them
Tawan:Smiling at them
Tawan:I see you guys!!
MIn & Nook:Oops
Waitress:Here's your food.
Waitress serve and leave
Paul chocking on his noodles
Noon:See i told you, you still can't eat noodles!! Ugh
Paul:No there was something in there
Noon:Like What!!!
Paul:You and your beautiful face.
Noon giving him a mad look
Noon:Stop Joking and just eat!!



@Fah's House

Fah:Mom
Anne:Fah!! How was your Vacation!!??
Fah:Fun where's Dad
Anne:At work That's Good then. Who's That Boy?
Fah:Oh he's Min brother
The other two girls and the 3 boys says Hi
Anne:Hi All of you
Anne:Are you hungry Fah?
Fah:No Mom i just ate
Anne: Sorry i didn't pick you up at the airport..
Fah:No problem
Anne:You guys wanna sit?
the teenagers:Sure
all sits except Tawan
Fah see's tawan still standing
Fah:Tawan you wanna sit here I'll go get me a chair
Tawan:It's alright
tawan walks out and goes to his car
Everybody chats for a while and they leave except Fah


@Tawan's house
Min:Tawan wait for me i need to talk to you
He turns around and says:What is it.
Min:Do you like fah cause i can put you guys together since you broke up with bowie or she broke up with bow
Tawan interupts:Don't talk about that and theses dyas are hard so don't bring her up!!
Min:Well i was wondering tomarrow can i browrow your car? I going to the mall.
Tawan:I'll take you.
Min:Well umm
Tawan:Well Um What i have no time for you.
Min:fah and noon is going.
Tawan:Err alright i'll take you guys and nook with me.
Min:Well i can drive.
Tawan:No you can't.
Min:Ugh

Noon and Paul
Paul:go with me plz
Noon:No I'm going with nook not you
Paul not letting her go
Paul:plz!!
Noon:Fine where to?
Paul:Where do you wanna go?
Noon:Your the one who is taking me not me taking you!!
Paul Hugs her and says: To the parka nd have some fun in the sun!!
NooN:fine
Noon smiles and go with Paul

@ Tawan's workplace where he works for Fah's Dad\

Nok:Tawan since your my best worker i'll let you off toady
Tawan:Thanks I'll Be back tommarow
Nok:Alright
Walks out and bumps into Fah and get wet
Fah:I'm sorry i am so clumsy!!
Tawan looks at his shirt and look and see Fah
Tawan:It;s alright but what are you doing here?
Fah:My dad
Nok:Fah!!
Fah:Dad
Nok:I knew that was you!!
Fah:I miss you dad. Dad this is Tawan e is MIn's brother
Nok: I Know him already he works for me.
Fah:Oh sorry i didn't know.
Tawan:I'm Leaving Sir.
Nok:Bye then

@the Br
Tawan:Smiling at what happened
Tawan:Maby i do like you...
Walks out and see his ex
Tawan:Bowie?
Bowie:Tawan
Bowie goes to hug him
Bowie:I miss you
Tawan:Well i miss you too but as a sister so now let me go(Lie)
Tawan leaves and she gives an evil look and go after him
Bowie:Well i miss you.
Tawan:Let go of me.
YU:Bowie Come on we gotta go.
Tawan:Your guy is waiting for you!!
Bowie:(kisses him on the cheaks)I love you!!
Tawan:ugh
Tawan leaves and see's Fah
Tawan:Fah where you going.
Fah:Heading to your house.
Tawan:Want a ride you don't have to wait for a taxi.
Fah:Sure


Tawan's house

Min:Where is she
Noon:Maby she is coming What About your Brother?
Min:IDK
Noon:here he comes but i see someone else with him..
Min:it looks like Fah.
Fah Walks out
Fah:ready
Min:Yeah totally
Tawan:get in the car girls.

@ the mall
Toon:Fah!!
Fah:Toon
Toon grabs her hand
Toon:I miss you alot.
Fah tries letting go but he won't let her
Tawan:Let her go!!
Toon grabs Tawan by the collar
People stares Puts his fist up
Toon:What you gonna do? She is my Girl.
Fah gets mad and syas:What when did i accept you!!
Toon:I was just trying to make him go away
Fah:he came with me!!
Toon:Well then Control him (pushing Tawan Away and walks away
Fah:are you okay?
Tawan:I'm Alright
Fah is looking very worried

Toon On the side:Coming on the way here she comes into the store.



Hint Hint

He is trying to put her into danger than help her so they can got into marrige
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Ch.3

Tawan:Go and stick together so we wouldn't have to search
Min:alright.
Fah:Oh Look There having a show over tere
Tawan:don't go just in case!!
Fah:It's alright
Tawan:No!!
Min:It's okay Fah maby next time okay.
Fah:Alright.
Noon:Tawan why i wanna see them sing.
Tawan:NO!!! (In a mean voice)
Noon gets a little scared:Okay
Walks in store.
Tawan:I'll wait for Nook to get here.
Min:Alright.
Fone rings Tawan:Hello
Toon but different voice:Can I talk to Nook?
The girls see's him and sneak out
Tawan:Sorry he's not here in the moment.
hangs up fone rings again
Nook:Tawan where are you guys at?
Tawan:At the Ladies Style. So where are you at?
Nook:Looking for you guys!!
Tawan:Okay.
hangs up
Looks in the store and they're gone.
Tawan:Oh NO!!!

Looks around and finds them at the staduim
and sees's a guy with a gun and Blocks the girls but Fah hit's herself on a pole and faint
while Tawan fights the Guy.And people staring
Bye BadGuy!!
Min:And Noon:Fah FAH FAH!!!
Tawan:What happened to her!!
Fah:She hit the Pole.
Tawan Carries her out to the car
Tawan:FAH FAH FAH FAH!!!

@the hostpital

Doc:She'll be alright don't worry she'll wake up.
Tawan:thanks!!
Doc:That's my job
Girls over at here and waits for her to get up
Tawan rest
Fah:Sorry i didn't listen to you Tawan i'mm so sorry please get up please it's all me fault
Min:Fah Get up
Fah:Huh Where am i
Noon:mad: the hospital
Fah:where's,where's tawan is he okay?
Min:Yeah he's alright he's just resting.
Tawan:That's Good you're awake
goes to her and touches her on the head
she blushes Me:(hahahaha)
Min:we'll leave you two alone.
Noon:Min? (What!!)
Min pulling Noon.
Min:Come on(Quietly)
Min and Noon out of the room
Noon:what was that for huh!!
Min:Let them get to know each other that way they can get hooked up!!!
Noon:Well err Okay.
Noon:(Fone Rings)Hello
Toon putting a prank:Meet me at the park.
Noon:Who's this (toon hangs up)Hello hello!!
Min:Someone took my bag!!!!!
Nook see's and get the Guy:Give her bag back.
Nook gets the bag and hands it too Min.
Nook:Here.
Min:Thanks
Nook:No need to

IN the Room
Tawan:Are you alright.
Fah:yeah thanks for saving me. sorry we left.
Tawan:It's alright.
Tawan:(Am i falling for her)You Should rest.
Fah:Alright.
Few minutes pass and she sleeps already.
Tawan:You look pretty cute sleeping.(Touching her head)
They all walk in they walk in the room without him knowing.
Min:(Touches him on the shoulder)Tawan!!!
Tawan:Omg you scared me.
Min:Omg how can you be scared!!
Fah:Whats wrong.
Min:I apparently scared him.(giving a funny look)
Fah:Can i go home now.
Tawan:Sure you wanna get up.
Fah:yeah
He helps her up and their snickering behind him
Nook:Tawa (he's amazed)
Tawan:Were getting ready to leave.
Nook:can i talk to you for a minute.
Tawan:Sure min can you help her.
Min: sure.
Tawan:Hit her hurt part okay
Min:Ka

Out of the room
Nook:You like her rite.
Tawan:Yeah maby.
Nook:Yes i'm sure you do.I know her very well.
Nods his head okay

In the room
Min:What do you think of my Brother?
Fah:I like him a little he is pretty nice.
:Min:Well i can put you two together.
Raises her eyebrow
Fah:MIN!!! well the truth i want to know him more than this.
Min:Sure
Noon:Cause you like him.
Fah:It's been only two days.
Noon:Well yes but (Min itnerrupts)
Min:Yesterday i saw him holding you.
Fah blushes:Well because we bumped into each other and he caught me.
Min:Okay that explains.
Tawan walks in and ask:You ready.
Fah:Yes
Tawan:Lets go then.
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Ch.4

@ Min's house/tawan
Tawan:Why did you guys leav!!
Min:Well at lease nothing happened okay!!
Tawan:But i'm your brother!!
Min:I don't care!!
Tawan:Well i do!!
Min:I wish i never came bcak home.
Tawan:well why didn't you stay in Korea by yourself!!
Min:I hate you i wish you were never my brother!!
min mad and goes to room and tawan goes after her and grabs her on the arn
Tawan:well your my sister you have to listen to me!!!!
Min:I don't need to!!
Tawan:If you don't then your grounded for a week!!
Min:no i am old enough!!
Tawan:I can't put up with you anymore!!Your annying!!
Min slaps him and he leavs
Min:I I..Slaped him it's all my fault.
Goes to her room sadly and cries of what she did to tawan.

@Fah's house

Toon:your back huh.
Fah:Ugh(goes to her room and toon grabs her hand.)
Fah:let go of me!!
Toon:Should I
Fah:If you don't..
Toon:Then whhat
Fah Kicks him
Toon:fah fah you err
Fah stares at him ans says:That's wat you get!!!
She leaves and he says:Well you'll become mine pretty soon!!


Tawan scene
Can't believe my sister would do that
maby it was my fault also
or both of us


A few days pass they don't talk.
Tawan getting breakfast he see's min and says"Mom i am leaving
May:Alreay?
Tawan:Yeah
Min:tawan!!!
He ignores
Min:Tawan!!! (chases him) i need to talk to you!!!
Tawan:What is it!!
Min:Sorry for what i did do you accept it?
Tawan:(truffles her hair)If you want me too.
He leaves and she says:What does he mean by that!!
Walks inside
May:Whats wrong with you two?
Min:nothing.
May:mm huh

@ Noks company

Tawan bumps into Fah and she has hot water.
Fah:sorry I'm I'm so sorry!!
Tawan:Waitch(looks up0Oh Fah.
Fah:sorry she wipes him with her napkins.
Fah:Sorry.
Tawan:No need.
fah:we have shirts on sal ei;ll give you one for free?
Tawan:No it's alrihgt.
Tawan thinks.
Tawan:Fah it's okay umm do you have any time avalible.
fah:Umm Yeah sure.
Tawan:Can i take you to lunch at one o clock?
Fah blush:Sure why not.
Tawan:eek:kay.
He leaves and she loooks at him leave:Am i falling for you?



Nook and min:
Min and noom one fone
Nook:Can we go to luch at 1 o'clock
Min:sure why not.
Nook:eek:kay i'll be there at one.
Min:alright.

One o'clock

Min:where are we going Nook?
Nook: your fav
Min:Okay

Fah:where are we going?
Tawan:Mins Fav Place.



Mins Fav Place
In the restruant
Tawan:I'll be back.
Okay.
Min and nook walks in and see Fah
Min:fah What you doing here?
Fah:in a date.
Min:wiht who!!??
Fah:Tawan.
Min and Nook:What!!!
Tawan brought some flowers in
Tawan:Min!!!
Mai:You came with her.
Tawan:Yeah why can't i?
Min:Nohting.

Min and nook finds a place to sit.
Min: I think my Bro likes Fah.
Nook: maby so

Tawan:These are for you Fah.
Fah:Thanks.
Tawan:well this might be early but Umm Fah Can you be my girl to stand by me.
Fah blushes and think:i've fell for him i think i should:Yes Tawan!!
Tawan:thanks!!

Min:eek:mfg did he just ask her out!!
Nook:yeah!!
Min:i knew it what a evil brother!!
Nook:it's fine

Waitress:What can i get you guys
Tawan: some Fried rice with beef please.
Fah:same but chicken please.

Min:Yes their in each other already.


Back at Nok's company
Mrs.duaysianklao May your Daughter come model with us.
Nok:about that i have to ask her.
Person:Alright.
Fah:Dad.
Nopk:yes
Fah:they have a fashion show can i join?
Nok:I was just gonna ask you that two,Hold a minute please.
Nodds head
Nok:yes she may enter.
Person:thanks.
Hangs up
Fah:thanks.
Nok:your welcome.
tawan walks in:sir you have a meeting at three.
Nok:thanks Tawan.
Fah and twan smiles at each other.
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
I think this short but but i wanna make it entersting.
Ch.5

The next day Tawan recieved a letter on his desk.
he reads

From Fah to Tawan
Please come to the party. It's for modeling I want you to be there next week on Friday night at 9:00pm at the Pensol Staduim. Love Fah.

Tawan:sure why not.
Fah at the door
Fah:yes (and goes away)

Noon and Paul
Noon:The sky is so pretty today(to herself)
Paul:But your prettier.
Noon:how you know i was here?!
Paul:Followed you.
Noon:ugh what do you want.
Paul:You!!
Noon:Ugh i'm leaving
gets up and paul grabs her and kisses her.
Noon slaps him
Noon:I hate you!!
Paul:One day you'll know how much i love you.

Noon:i hate him.But that was a good one.
Min:eek:pen yor heart.
Noon:no the one i love is Nook!! Do you like Nook?
Min:(lies)No he's like my brother.
Noon:eek:h okay (check time)I have to go.
Min:Okay
Noon leaves her house.
min:sorry i had to lie your my bestfriend i don't wanna hurt you.



Fashion Show day

Fah:I'm ready.
Tawan:Okay come out.
She comes out and he does not blink at al.
Fah:Tawan? Tawan?
Tawan:eek:h yes.
Fah:you help me here on my back.
Tawan:sure
After he helps her Fah Bumbs into Bowie.
Tawan:fah are you okay.
Fah:yeah
Bowie:SorryTawan!!
Tawan:i have nothing to say.
Bowie:hold on.
Tawan:No i have to go.
Bowie:Ugh.
Calls Toon:she is leaving to the stage
Toon:alright.

Fah:Fah goes to her desk and a man gives her a paper
"I hope you you have fun see you after the show From:Toon"
Fah:what does toon really want.

Min:tawan are they starting yet
Tawan:5 Mins
Min:eek:kay.
Noon:sorry i'm late Traffice.
Min:no there not starting yet.
Noon:eek:kay.
anne:Min!!
Min:hi mirs.duaysianklao how have yo been.
Anne:Good you?
Min:good
Men on stage:ladies and gentalmenst the show is starting in 1 min.
Anne:i save 4 seats.
Tawan:i'm Fine i'll just stand.
Anne:you sure.
Tawan:yeah.

Show starts.Fah goes fisrt and the lights dies.
Guy coming shoot fah.
Tawan:fah!!
Tawan to the rescue pushes Fah onto the side and once again hits herself and faint.
Tawan fights and he ges stab a little and the guy got away.
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Ch.6

May:Tawan are you gonna be okay?
Tawan:Yes mom i'm just scared Fah might not wake up.(laying on his hostpital bed)
May:don't worry too much abot her right now worry about yourself first okay.
Tawan(trying to get up)Ugh it hurts.
May:Stay layed down tawan.
Min:i'll go check on Fah. alright.
Tawan:eek:kay.

When Min left out of the room and somebody covers her mouth with a peice of cloth and takes her.

1 hour later
Tawan:it's nearly One hour and she is not back yet.(in his head)he gets up and look for min and goes to Fah's room.
Tawan walks in and she is not awake yet.
Fah:tawan help me (in her dreams)
Tawan shakes her:Fah Fah!! I'm Right here.
Fah wakes up:Tawan.
Fah:where's Min and all of them.
Tawan:said she was gonna come and look after you but she never came back.
Fah:well i have to go find her.
Tawan:NO!!
Fah:YESS!
Tawan:NOO!
Fah:yes!!
Fah gets up and Tawan grabs her by the arm and kisses her.
Fah staring blankly
Fah:Tawan that tha...
Tawan:That was your fisrt kiss?
Fah nodds her head yes.
Tawan:how could it be i though thought you alredy did.
Fah:no(blushly)Min i'm gonna go find Min
Her fone rings from her purse
Fah:hello
FAKE VIOCE OF Min:Don't wrry about me i'll be home soon okay tell Tawan that.
Fah:alright. Bye
Hangs up Fah:MMin Told me she is going somewhere so don't worry about her.
Tawan:eek:kay
Anne:fah
May:tawan
May:where did you go.
Tawan;where else.
Fah:min said she'll be comming here soon.


Min Captured
Min:Let me go!!
Toon boy1:Why should i.
Min:let me go!!
Toon boy2:
Shut up or your gonna get it.
Min:What is it!!
Boy2:Really wanna know i'll let you know.
Min:What is it tell me!!
Boy2:if you don't be quiet i'lll rape you!!(lie just to scare her.
Min saw a knife and she waited tell they leave.
Min:i am thirsty and hungry can you get me some.
Boys1 and 2:Sure
She gets the knife and cuts right before they came back.
Boy:1Here's your food.
Min:here's you punch and kick.
She punches him and kicks his legs and stepped on his foot so he wouldn't be able to catch her.
Boy2:here is yo...Ehere is she.
boy1:she exscaped!!(painly)
min catches a taxi.
She uses her fone to call the police.
Nooks home was closer so she went there.

Knocking
Nook:who is it.
opens the door and Min hugs Nook.
Mion:I'm scared really scared (and she cries.)
Nook:what happened?
Min:somone tried to kidnapp me but i got away.
Nook hugs her and says:Don't be scare i will always be there for you okay.
Min:but i'm scared.
Nook pushes her away softly:i'm Here don't be scared.
Min and Nook stares while Min still have tears comin down.
and they kissed

In Nook's car headong to her house
Don't be scared i won't let anyone hurt you okay.
Min:alright i trust you.
Nook:that's good.
Holds her hand while driving.


At Mins house
Tawan:ugh where is She.
Fah:Tawan Don't be scared she'll make it home i know she will.
Tawan grabs her hand:Thanks your the one who is not in the family that cares for her the most.Thanks
Fah bulshes:your welcome.
Min:tawan!!! Fah!!!
Min runs and cries to Tawan:Tawan!!
Tawan:why are you crying.
Nook walks in
Tawan:did nook do something to you.
Min:No he didn't make me cry!!! Someone tried to kidnapp me!!!
Tawan Pushes her softly and asks her:Who tried to kidnapp you.
Min:I I (and she Faints)
Tawan,Fah,And nook:Min!!! MIN!! MIN!! MIN!!
Nook carries her upstairs.
They called the doctor.
tawan:Will my sister be okay.
Doc:Indeed she will she is vey scared of something or nervbous about something.
tawan:well she did
Fah interupt:she did say that someone tried to kidnapp her but she got away.
Doc:Thats mean she is very scared and worried about that then.
Tawan:alright so she is okay right yes.
Doc:Yes
Tawan:Thanks Doc.
Doc:my job (and leaves.
Nook told them the story that min told him

Min:no stop!!! Help me help me.
Fah heard and went into the room.
fah:min min get up.
Min:Get away from me now!!
Fah shakes her to get up.
Min wakes and she said:where's my brother?
Fah:Out there talking to Nook.
Min:nooks still here.
Fah:yes
Nook and tawan walks in and nook see's here awake and runs to her.
Nook:(happyly) Min your awake.
nook got her up and huged her.
Tawan:fah we should leave them.
Fah:eek:kay.

Out of her room.
Fah:I think Nook likes min alot.
Tawan:well if he does and just hope he don't break her heart.
fah:yes that's rue a brother doesn't want to see a sister with a broken heart.
Tawan:yes of course i love her alot.
Fah:I understand how much you love and if she loves someome and that person breaks her heart i bet you would do somehthing bad.
Tawan:well maby and the hostpital part umm I am happy i took your first kiss.
Fah:tawan!! why re you still talking about that huh!!(blusheing)
Tawn: But
Fah:But you sai (Before she said anything again he kissed her again and Nook and Min comes out to see them.
Nook:(coughs)
Tawn let her go
Min:Tawan it show that you do like her.
Tawan:i'll tell the truth i do and i gave her ,her first kiss
Min:what!! omg Fah did he?
Fah:Yes. and i like him alot also.
Nook:sjowthat you two are going out right.
Tawan and fah stares at each ohter and nodds yeas.
fah:nook we shouldleave it's getting late.
Nook:Okay
May:wait stay for dinner.
Fah:Okay sure.

@ the dinner table
tawan keeps staring at fah who sat across from him.
May:tawan stop staring at fah
Min chokes on her food
Min:tawan your staing at Fah
Tawan:No i wasn't
May:hurry and eat your food.
fah:can i be excused
May:eek:kay
fah leaves
tawan:mom i am done
Fah:i am going home bye mrs.May.
Fah leaves to the other side of the dinning room and awan grabs her and take her to the room
Fah:Tawan what are you doing
tawan:Watch the stars with me in my room for one night
Fah:why?!
Tawan:just to get me happy!!
Fah:no!!
Tawan:YESS
He pulls her onto the bed
FAH:NO NO NO NO NO!~!!!!
Tawan covers her mouth Shh
fah quiets and Tawan Holds her to while they look at the sky.
Fah was tired so she went to sleep.
Taawan:You look cute sleeping like that.
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Ch.8
Still night
Min:Tawan fah
Tawan:(Sleepy)What?
Min:Fah has to go home.
Fah:(sleepy)What about me?
Min:Gotta go home.
Fah:alright i'll get up right now.
They all walk out and fah and nook leaves
Min:Tawan how did she end up in your room?
Tawan:Why do you need to know?
Min:Because i need to know!!!
Tawan leaves
Min:Tawan you can't just walk away!!!
Tawan:Well i am!!
MIn:Why do you keep getting invlove with her?
Tawan:Why can't I?Your not her mother!!
Min:Well I know you won't last with her you did that to Kwan. She almost killed herself!!

FlashBack
Kwan Pretending to cry when she saw min
Kwan:Min!!!!
Min:Kwan?
Kwan:Where's your brother?
Min:Home Why are you crying?
Kwan:Your Brother!!
Min:What he do?
Kwan:Leave me!! And i almost killed myself but someone came in between me of killing myself!!
Present

Min:that's how i knew you cannot go with FAh.
Tawan:all that was a lie!!
Min:No Need to lie to me i know what kind of person you are!!!
Tawan:What kind do you think i am!!
Min:Selfcenter,Mean,And you think about yourself first!!!
Tawan:You didn't know what happened between me and Kwan she was the one who left me for soe rich guy!!!!
Min:I don't believe you!!! And i hate you.
Tawn Slaps her
Tawan:If you ahte me that much why did you even come back?
Tawan leaves and Min just stares and Faint.

In the morning
Tawan:Min!!
Shakes her but she doesn't wake up
Tawan:MIN!!MIN!!
She was really warm so he took her to the hospital.

At the hospital
Room 205
fah and Noon:tawan!!
Noon:is hse okay?
tawan:yeah she just got sick that's all.
fah:How did she get sick anyways?
Tawan:i don't know i just her on the ground where we were arguing.
fah:What you two were arguing!!!!
Tawan:Well Fah it's okay.
Noon:hope it is.
Nook walks in.
Nook:Tawan What happened to her?
Tawan:she got (Noon interupts)
Noon:Sick because i'm guessing thay were arguing.
Tawan:it's not like that Noon.
Noon:well you just told us you found her where you two wre arguing!!
Tawan:well it's none of your bussiness!!
paul walks in
Paul:do you know how to talk to a Girl!!!
Tawan:eek:f course i do but she is taking it the wrong Way!!
tawan walks out madly.
Fah:Tawan!!(goes after him)

Out of 205
Tawan:None well understand me!!
Fah:but i do i know what you mean by you finding her where you two were arguing!!
tawan turns to look at Fah
Tawan:you really do?
Fah:yes. when me and Nook were yonger we would argue also because we were ike brother and sister.
tawan goes for her hand
tawan:thanks for understaing me.
fah(blushes):It's alright.
Kwan:Tawan?
tawan:Kwan?
kwan goes to him to make Fah Jealous
Kwan:I missed you Tawan.(try holding his hand)
Tawan:stop touching me!!!
Kwan:but i miss you.
Fah:enough with that!!Tawan who is she anyways?!
Tawan:Kwan and she is my ex but!!
Fah:But i bet you miss her!!!
Fah goes into the room.
Fah:Noon i am leaving now!!
Noon:eek:kay i'll go with you.
Paul follows
Nook stays back to wait for Min to wake up.
fah:tawan have fun with her alright!!
Tawan:It's not what you think!!
Fah walks up to him and slaps him
Fah:i never knew a persopn like you can do this to me!!! I hate you!!!
tawan:Fah?
Fah runs away from him and he runs after her and out of the hospital
Tawan:Fah would you listen to me!!
Fah:why Why should I!!
Tawan:she left me for some other rich guy i said never to love her again untll i saw you i fell for you that moment i couldn't stop my heart i don't want you to be hurt by that women she thinks of money and thats all she wants is money but i wasn't rich enough!! but for You,you think of the heart!!!
Fah I love you!!!
 

TheGurlo22

sarNie Adult
Haha,,Min is so funny :),,pretending to cry..LOL
but hope she gets better :) you're so fast at posting these...Cute! Love it so far!!!
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Haha,,Min is so funny :),,pretending to cry..LOL
but hope she gets better :) you're so fast at posting these...Cute! Love it so far!!!
Oh it's because i spent the weekends at my sisters house and her internnet is way faster than my internet at my house
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Ch.9

205
Min:tawan Tawan
Nook:min(grabs her hand)
Min:tawan ssorry Sorry
Nook:min Can you hear me.
Min wakes
Min:where am i?(coughs)
Nook:at the hospital.
Min coughs and she covers her mouth blood is on her hand but too late Nook saw it alreasy.
Nook:Why..WhyDid you cough out blood?
Min:I don't know
Nook calls the nurse.
Min:nook don't do that i am fine
She cough a lot out and the nurses comes in
Nurse One:she Coughing to much blood get the doctor!!
doc:Whats the problem here?
Nook:she is coughing to much blood out!!!
The doc see's blood over the blanket
Tawan:fah thanks for understanding m..Min!!
Min coughs lots of blodd out
fah:MIN!! MIN!!
Noon:MIN MIN MIN MIN!!!!
Tawwan:this is all my fault thats why your like this!!
Min:(having a hard time talking)It' No..no one's Fault.
Tawan:min don't talk anymore!!
doc:you guys have to go out!!
Tawan:no i am gonna make sure she is okay!!
doc:no you have too.
They all go out.
Fah:Tawan don't worry to much.
Tawan punches the wall
Tawan:it's all my fault!!!
Fah cries a littlt
fah:NO it's noone's Falut!!It's just the way life is!!!
Tawan cries
Nook:Tawan we can't control evrything in life okay!!
Tawan continues
doc comes out
Tawan:how is my sister!!
Doc:she is pkay but she'll have to stay in here for the whole mnonth.
Tawan:as long as she gets better!!
Doc:Alright Tawan your the only person aloowed.
Tawan:thanks Doc.
Tawan runs in the room while Min was slepping.
Tawan sits and grabs Mins Hand
Tawan:i am one bad brother!! i can't even take good care of you.i dodn't keep my words from dad.What kind of person am i.Yes you were right Min i am selfish!!!Will you wake up and forgive me.
Min fingers move
Tawan:Min!!
Min:Tawan Tawan i i forgive you.
Tawan:Min your awake!
Min:tawan don't feel sad for yourself your...your a good brother.
Tawan:Min i am so Happpy your awake!!
Tawan runs out and tell evryone and the doc let them in the room.
Fah:Min your awake and alive!!
Nook:i am so happy(goes to her and grabs her hand)
Tawan scoots over to Fah
Fah Grabs his hands
Fah:(Wispers)Lets go have dinner.
Tawan:Sure why not.
They wait and dissus about the scedule of Min

@ Pattaya restraunt
Tawan:so you decided to ask me on a date?
Fah:i guess.
Tawan:HA you guess well that si sweet of you!
Fah:don't make fun of me okay!!
Tawan:It's alright after this can i take you somewhere?
Fah:Sure.
Their done and they leave.
fah:where are you taking me?
Tawan:somewhere.
Fah:ugh just tell me please.
Tawan:were here.
Fa runs out of the car.
Fah:this is so Beautiful!! You can see all the stars and firelies!!
Tawan:but you light up this place for me because you are so beautiful.
Fah blush like always
They played with the Fireflies and watch the stars
Fah:i wish we can stay like this forever.
Tawan:me Too.
They stare at each other and kiss

205
Nook:Min i am so happy you are with us.
Min:me too.
Nook:let me ask you this what happen between yu and Tawan.
Min:Nook look i don't want to talk about that right now here have some of this candy.
Nook:alright

Noon and Paul
Noon:paul i love you(lie)
Paul:i love you more.
Noon:eek:f course.
Noon's fone rings Hello
Fake Fah on the fone:Can you meet me outside of Pauls house.
Noon:alright

she goes out and someone covers her mouth witha cloth
 

kialakornlover

sarNie Adult
Ch.10

Place unknown
Noon is past out from Toon's servents
Noon wakes
Noon:Where where am I?
Guy1:Somewhere no one will find you!
Noon:Let me out now!!! or i'll call the police!!
Guy2:How i have your fone.
he shows her fone.
Noon:how did you get my fone i left it with Paul!!
Paul:Noon!!!
Noon:paul!!!
Guys leave
Paul:I'll make sure we get out of here okay.
Noon:promise?
Paul:yes i promise in my life.
Noon:Don't say that i believe you.
Paul:eek:kay.
Noon look at him worried because he is all bruised.
Paul:Don't worry about me okay.
Noon touches him and feel sad.

Fah and Tawan
Fah:This is very nice.Thanks Tawan for all this.
Tawan:no need to thank me.
Fah:can we
Fone rings.
Fah:yes mom.
Anne:Where are you?
Fah:umm With Tawan.
Anne:I don't want you to be with that guy!!Come home now.
Fah:Alright.
Hangs up
Fah:Tawan i have to go home now.
Tawan:can't we stay for a little longer.
Fah:maby we can come back here okay.
Tawan:eek:kay let's go.
They leave and there is a car after them
Tawan:there is car after us for some reason.
Fah looks and see there is a car after them.
Fah:Tawan hurry up go faster!!!
He goes faster and the other car goes even faster.
Tawan see's Toon and says i think thats Toon.
Fah:but but why would he do that to us.
Tawan:i don't know.
He stops the car and get out.
He goes to the other car and it was really Toon.
He pulls Toon out.
Tawan:Why are you following us!!(Grabing onto Toons Shirt.)
Toon makes him let go
Toon:Just to come get Fah and why are you with her.
Fah:It's none of your business!!
Toon:your mom told me to come look for you.
Toon Tries to grab her hand but she wouldn't let him touch her.
Toon:come on go home with me.
But Fah goes back into Tawans car
Fah:come on Tawan lets just go!!
Tawan goes to his car and they leave to Fahs house.

@Fahs House
Anne:Ugh where is she.
Fah:mom i'm home.
Anne:Good your home.I need to talk let's go sit.
Fah:eek:kay
Anne and Fah sits.
anne:Fah,I don't want you being with Tawan.
Fah:why not!! He is the one i love.
Anne:i want you to be with Toon Okay.
Fah:no I hate him.
Anne:will your going out with him tomarrow you got that.
Fah:Err (leaves and tries to go to her room.)
Anne:i am not done don't you walk oput on me like that.
Fah:why do i have to listen to you.If you want the Best of me let me love the person who i want to love.
Anne:well
Nok interupts:It's best for you to be with Toon!!
Fah:no i can't be with him he is not the one i love!!It's Tawan!!
Nok:if you don't listen to us you'll regret it!!
Fah:no i know whats best for me.I want you to marry a High class person not a medium class person.
Fah:It doesn't matter unless he loves me for whom i am.
Nok:why don't you listen to me!!
Fah:No I don't want to!!
Nok slaps Fah
Fah cries and run to the back house.
She sits on the Pool chair
Fah:Why can't i be with the person i love!!
Why can't i be with him he loves me and i love him thats all we need.
Anne:Fah.Don't feel sad.
Fah:Why sholdn't I.You saw what my dad did.And you know what you did also!!
She leaves to her room.

In room 205
Min:nook why don't you go home now.
Nook Grabs her hand.
Nook:i don't want to leae you here by yourself.
Min:alright you can stay with me.
Min Sits and Nook helps her.
MIn:thanks.
Nook:Your welcome.
Min and Nook stares and kiss.
Min:your not scared you might get sick?
Nook:No not at all.
They kiss and after Nook Opens the window and the look in they sky.

Fah calls Tawan
Fah:Tawan can you come pick me up in the morning?
Tawan:Sure Why not.
Fah:eek:kay At 10.
Tawan:eek:kay.But why so early.
Fah:because my mom wants me to go with Toon.
Tawan:Okay I'll Be there.
 

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
I can't wait to star reading this story. I've been busy lately to get star on this story. Thanks for the update.
 
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