tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
those banners are soo awesome..that is just how i picture aum would look like...lol...the hand is creepy oooooo
Disturbia :: Aum/Aff/Tik/Ann n more [Chapter 15 is UP!!]
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[ Chapter 6 ]
The sky was getting darker than before, signalling to everyone that it might just rain. In a secluded area where not even a single man could be seen, there was car with 2 person in it. One was left unconscious while the other was busy taking off his clothes.
"Before was an engineer, then a salesgirl, after that a teacher .. erm .. how about this one. Man, I forget to ask!" Aum said accompanied with an evil smile. His fingers was working really hard as they are now unbuttoning the clothes of the unconscious one.
Just as he was about to take off the blause which Suzie was wearing, his laughter stopped.
"Eh, what the..!" He couldn't believe what he was looking at. Behind those blouse, was a micro transistor and a radio receiving device. Aum sense there's a danger coming right to him.
"Don't move! You've been surrounded! Get out of the car with both your hands on your head!"
Four patrol car accompanied by two police van suddenly came out of no where and surrounded his Vios. Aum was speechless. Everything happened so fast.
There was only one word which came out of his mouth during that time. "Shit!"
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"Just like you guessed Officer Rome!" Inspector Tik was ready at his position. His pistol was ready to fire anytime to Aum.
"After I saw the way Ann answered yesterday, I knew she was hiding something. It was not a waste that we spied on her home after that."
"He's not going to get away this time. Luckily everything is going as plan. I was very worried after the conversation in the car suddenly stopped. I knew something bad was going to happen."
"This criminal is very cunning one. But all that is going to stop right this instant, Sir!" Officer Rome smiled and said with full confident.
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"Argh .. SHIT! I'm trapped!" Aum shouted. He looked around him. All of the polices are armed with pistols and they are ready to shoot him if they are ordered to. Aum bit his lips. "Animals!"
"It's better if you just surrender yourself to us! You're surrounded!" A voice came out from the hailer.
Better? If I surrender, I'm sure I'll be put on trial and hang to dead! Or better still, I'll be sentenced to stay in prison for the rest of my life!"
"All unit, do not release any fire yet. One of our officer is still in the car." Inspector Tik whispered through the radio.
The situation at the scene suddenly became so quiet. Aum still haven't come out yet. The other polices are still waiting. At his side, Suzie was still lying down, unconscious.
Aum was still thinking.
"Fine! You bastards think you can catch me eh!" The car's engine was on again."Come and try then!" He pushed his accelerator pedal and the Vios suddenly rushed to the front.
"Look out!" Inspector Tik shouted at his officers. But, he himself couldn't escape from getting hit. The Vios came straight and hit Inspector Tik's body which flew at the air for a moment before dropping down real hard to the ground.
"Sir!" Officer Rome suddenly came and helped him.
Aum was driving out of control, as they were nearing the edge of the mountain .. the maroon Vios went down together with Suzie and Aum in it. While tending the injured Inspector Tik, Officer Rome suddenly turned back and saw the car going down the mountain. That was when he shouted ..
"Ritaaaaaaaaa!!"
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"In an incident happened yesterday night, one police officer was killed while the other was admitted to the hospital for having serious injuries. The body of the officer, Sririta Jensen, 27, was found dead and trapped in a maroon Vios at the bottom of the river. The suspect which was also supposed to be in the car however can't be found."
"A representative of the police said that they already closed that particular area from being opened to the public. Police are still trying to find the suspect. Public are advised to .."
The television was switched off.
Ann shakes her head. She can't believe what she just saw in the news thats now. How did the police know about Aum's identity? She remembered her conversation with Aum that day. Shit, they spied on me!Ann bit her lips.
The vision of seeing the Vios in the TV suddenly appeared again. She suddenly felt so sad. I wonder how is Aum right now. Tears could be seen in her eyes.
Ting tong!
Ann went and opened the door. Two man with uniforms stood outside while holding a warrant.
"Good afternoon. We're from the police department. You're being arrested for .."
"Cut the crap." Ann said as she took out her hand and ready to be cuffed.
"Miss, you got the right to remain silent. Anything you want to say .."
"Do you think you're a national police or what? Stop talking about "rights" with me. I find it funny."
The two polices don't dare to speak anymore. Ann was escorted into the police car and it suddenly rained.
The sky was getting darker than before, signalling to everyone that it might just rain. In a secluded area where not even a single man could be seen, there was car with 2 person in it. One was left unconscious while the other was busy taking off his clothes.
"Before was an engineer, then a salesgirl, after that a teacher .. erm .. how about this one. Man, I forget to ask!" Aum said accompanied with an evil smile. His fingers was working really hard as they are now unbuttoning the clothes of the unconscious one.
Just as he was about to take off the blause which Suzie was wearing, his laughter stopped.
"Eh, what the..!" He couldn't believe what he was looking at. Behind those blouse, was a micro transistor and a radio receiving device. Aum sense there's a danger coming right to him.
"Don't move! You've been surrounded! Get out of the car with both your hands on your head!"
Four patrol car accompanied by two police van suddenly came out of no where and surrounded his Vios. Aum was speechless. Everything happened so fast.
There was only one word which came out of his mouth during that time. "Shit!"
---
"Just like you guessed Officer Rome!" Inspector Tik was ready at his position. His pistol was ready to fire anytime to Aum.
"After I saw the way Ann answered yesterday, I knew she was hiding something. It was not a waste that we spied on her home after that."
"He's not going to get away this time. Luckily everything is going as plan. I was very worried after the conversation in the car suddenly stopped. I knew something bad was going to happen."
"This criminal is very cunning one. But all that is going to stop right this instant, Sir!" Officer Rome smiled and said with full confident.
---
"Argh .. SHIT! I'm trapped!" Aum shouted. He looked around him. All of the polices are armed with pistols and they are ready to shoot him if they are ordered to. Aum bit his lips. "Animals!"
"It's better if you just surrender yourself to us! You're surrounded!" A voice came out from the hailer.
Better? If I surrender, I'm sure I'll be put on trial and hang to dead! Or better still, I'll be sentenced to stay in prison for the rest of my life!"
"All unit, do not release any fire yet. One of our officer is still in the car." Inspector Tik whispered through the radio.
The situation at the scene suddenly became so quiet. Aum still haven't come out yet. The other polices are still waiting. At his side, Suzie was still lying down, unconscious.
Aum was still thinking.
"Fine! You bastards think you can catch me eh!" The car's engine was on again."Come and try then!" He pushed his accelerator pedal and the Vios suddenly rushed to the front.
"Look out!" Inspector Tik shouted at his officers. But, he himself couldn't escape from getting hit. The Vios came straight and hit Inspector Tik's body which flew at the air for a moment before dropping down real hard to the ground.
"Sir!" Officer Rome suddenly came and helped him.
Aum was driving out of control, as they were nearing the edge of the mountain .. the maroon Vios went down together with Suzie and Aum in it. While tending the injured Inspector Tik, Officer Rome suddenly turned back and saw the car going down the mountain. That was when he shouted ..
"Ritaaaaaaaaa!!"
---
"In an incident happened yesterday night, one police officer was killed while the other was admitted to the hospital for having serious injuries. The body of the officer, Sririta Jensen, 27, was found dead and trapped in a maroon Vios at the bottom of the river. The suspect which was also supposed to be in the car however can't be found."
"A representative of the police said that they already closed that particular area from being opened to the public. Police are still trying to find the suspect. Public are advised to .."
The television was switched off.
Ann shakes her head. She can't believe what she just saw in the news thats now. How did the police know about Aum's identity? She remembered her conversation with Aum that day. Shit, they spied on me!Ann bit her lips.
The vision of seeing the Vios in the TV suddenly appeared again. She suddenly felt so sad. I wonder how is Aum right now. Tears could be seen in her eyes.
Ting tong!
Ann went and opened the door. Two man with uniforms stood outside while holding a warrant.
"Good afternoon. We're from the police department. You're being arrested for .."
"Cut the crap." Ann said as she took out her hand and ready to be cuffed.
"Miss, you got the right to remain silent. Anything you want to say .."
"Do you think you're a national police or what? Stop talking about "rights" with me. I find it funny."
The two polices don't dare to speak anymore. Ann was escorted into the police car and it suddenly rained.
imaginarygur
sarNie Adult
waaa... aum got away... sigh... pity ann for getting caught...
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
awww rita died 
i wonder what's going to happen to ann...is she going to be given a deal if she helps bring in aum...bc he managed to get away...that was so twisted..suzie is a police officer....wait did she die too???
i wonder what's going to happen to ann...is she going to be given a deal if she helps bring in aum...bc he managed to get away...that was so twisted..suzie is a police officer....wait did she die too???
iluvnumandoil
sarNie OldFart
all these n' ek are dead what going on
erm .. suzie is rita! lol .. rita is the undercover police as suzieawww rita died
the truth will unveil itself
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
lol ok...i was like suzie and rita??? okay.... so sad .....at first i thought suzie was some white chick...i guess not anymore lol
ahahaha .. man .. did i make things complicated or wat?
is it good or wat?? lol
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
it was good...i was re-read that part lol...i see now i'm just all over the place today lol
i'm just all over the place today lollol...i can see that...ur replyin to every fic.. im just reading sarn's jlr victim unit...cos its funny ya noe ...wif ceci n ami in it xD
im resting awhile frm updating disturbia..i really feel like a psycho gurl writing this fic..wana do a wally on jlr victim unit lol
im resting awhile frm updating disturbia..i really feel like a psycho gurl writing this fic..wana do a wally on jlr victim unit lol
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
lol...yeah i read all the fanfic here i'm a fanfic addict ^^
you should totally do a wally for the JLR Victim Unit .^o^.
i'm a fanfic addict ^^you should totally do a wally for the JLR Victim Unit .^o^.
ahaha...im not a fanfic addict but i luv to write..what does that means??? lol!
uh huh...yep doing a wally on it soon .. wif some dead fishes..
anyways,im writing on disturbia cos i gt writer block for forbidden love n forgive me lol...cant seem to update them both!
uh huh...yep doing a wally on it soon .. wif some dead fishes..
anyways,im writing on disturbia cos i gt writer block for forbidden love n forgive me lol...cant seem to update them both!
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
oh for disturbia--a twist could be that ann was really controlling aum to do all those crimes psychologically and he didn't know it...and then aum doesn't get caught in the end...but leaves us hanging on him finding another prey in another country
or a twist could be that aum/ann turns out to be the same person..a multi personality...and when they were talking to each other, they were just talking to themselves....no what that would be weird...lol
hmmmm i wonder what made aum do this..i know it said he blames his mom and dad...eww did they do something to him when he was younger and now he has psychological issues due to it...to feel the need to take woman at their weakest moment and take control......that would be disturbing
i wonder who is the mother of tik's son is....hmmmm
man i feel like i wanted to many CSI/Law and Order stuff...
or a twist could be that aum/ann turns out to be the same person..a multi personality...and when they were talking to each other, they were just talking to themselves....no what that would be weird...lol
hmmmm i wonder what made aum do this..i know it said he blames his mom and dad...eww did they do something to him when he was younger and now he has psychological issues due to it...to feel the need to take woman at their weakest moment and take control......that would be disturbing
i wonder who is the mother of tik's son is....hmmmm
man i feel like i wanted to many CSI/Law and Order stuff...
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
me too....i love criminal minds...and csi (the las vegas one the best, then Miami, then new york)....then i like law and order suv, then law and order CI, then just law and order...
hmmmm maybe aum is doing this to show that he is better than the police officers....not leaving any fingerprints or anything....he thinks of this as a game...oOOo what if his father was a police officer..or this happened to his mother or something....or aum likes to feel danger....or maybe he gets excited when woman are vulnerable...or maybe he's a sex addict???
hmmmm maybe aum is doing this to show that he is better than the police officers....not leaving any fingerprints or anything....he thinks of this as a game...oOOo what if his father was a police officer..or this happened to his mother or something....or aum likes to feel danger....or maybe he gets excited when woman are vulnerable...or maybe he's a sex addict???
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
darn....
hmmm back to square one....once again
hmmm back to square one....once again
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
i know...there always those BANG..the ones you never suspect....are always the ones....