Close To Your Heart ::Chapter 10::

jeeja

Miss SMILES :D
finally i've got time to read this :D

aw...i want her to be faithful too, but jealously won't hurt too much lol

I love the new creation and Erich is beautiful.
the synopsis is awesome. i'm anticipated for the next chapter.
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
Chapter 09



"here... i already fill up these documents for my participation...", at first he dont know if he really had to be happy. he accepted the documents that Luisa gave him. these past few days he's been upset because he eagerly wanted Luisa to join the competition and that it would be big waste if she'll let this opportunity go. he opened the documents and read the documents, she already filled up and her father's signature was the proof that she had her parent's consent.

Luisa: aren't you going to hug your student?
Montee: mmmmm... im still doubting.
Luisa: what else you should doubt?
Montee: that you might quit in the middle of the competition and decided to quit for the rest of your life.
Luisa: really???
Montee: honestly, i am happy now that you got your father's consent. i'd experienced that one of my students before he quit because he got pregnant his girlfriend.
Luisa: but that's a different story from mine.
Montee: still... i am hoping that you wont give up your dream.


she smiled and gave him a hug. it surprised him, but he knew that she was happy and this is what she decided to be; to be a professional chef just like him. Luisa admire Montee for its patience and understanding not only to her... but to all of his students. she's lucky that Montee chose her to participate this competition and a scholarship from abroad is a big opportunity. pride of the university, Montee's one of the honor students and went abroad to pursue his dream. she wanted to be like him someday.

she want to make her family proud of her.


click...click...click... flash~!

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"whoah... i didn't expect to see your sister being like this. she seems so attached to this chef~!", Alex's friend told her as they were in the restroom. Alex didn't care, she kept retouching, while one of her friends busy looking at the pictures that they took when they accidentally passed by at the corridor, saw Alex's sister embracing the chef teacher of culinary arts department.

after retouching, she take a look of those pictures. she just smiled, something came up to her mind. she thought that this might be one of her sister's secrets. she knows how forbidden of a student and teacher having secret relationship. but who cares? when the first time she met this teacher, she had a feeling that this guy likes her sister.

she wouldn't mind if her sister having this certain relationship with this guy, he's reliable, mr. nice guy and has the looks. they also look good together. she thought that if its true that Luisa's having a relationship with a teacher, then its her problem of how to keep it a secret. the university shouldn't let this find out or else... her sister will be in big trouble.

"who cares... as long as she doesn't mess up. its her life..."

"you dont care if the school finds out if they have this secret relationship?", her friend asked her.

"no... i would rather worry to my studies..."

"what if the school finds out?"

"look guys... as you seem to know Alex Sandejas here. she dont mind to what Luisa does, besides they're not real sisters, so why should she care. right, Lex?", Bettina said whom one of Alex's closest friend and the one she trusts most, like more than a sister. Alex just smiled as she agreed to what her friend said. "more importantly... Luisa can mess every girl's man but not ours..."

on the second thought, Alex disagree because she dont think Luisa is a playgirl type. even their not totally close like sisters, she still knows Luisa's nature.

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Alex didn't expect that it Damien would go hangout with her than to his buddies. he said that he had enough with his buddies, going in the usual hangout bores him. so he decided to stay with her... at home. while Luisa prepares a dinner for them.

also an unexpected visitor came, it was Luisa's teacher. "what are you doing here?", Luisa asked with a smile.

Xander: i invited him. (her father who got out from the house, holding a cane.)
Luisa: dad... (she meet him and Montee helped too.)
Xander: im fine... i can do it.
Luisa: but-
Xander: i said i am fine... you cant just let me stay in my room or used the wheelchair. you know i hate it. (after he said it and Luisa let go of him as he can do it by himself, his attention turned onto her teacher.) its nice to see you again, Chef Montee...
Montee: i should be the one who greet you, sir. thanks for inviting me.
Xander: my pleasure. im just glad to see the person whom i will entrust for my daughter's leave to next semester.


Montee finally joined them at dinner, he was impress that Luisa's dishes are expected extraordinary. joining them, he met again Alex who's the youngest of the family, the eldest is not around as Luisa told him that he lives in the States because of work. he also met Damien again, the one who confess his feelings to Luisa and that he's having a relationship with the younger sister.

after dinner and conversation with the whole family, Luisa and Montee had a moment together all alone at the gazebo. he was happy that he got invited by her own father.

Montee: knowing your family, i realized that im just starting to get to know you... even if you're my student.
Luisa: dad's just being talkative. i guess you really helped out tonight.
Montee: what do you mean?
Luisa: even if my dad doesn't tell me, i know he's upset about my brother.
Montee: your brother... you mean the one who's in the States.
Luisa: who am i referring to... (she slap to his shoulders.) anyways, eversince he broke up with his long-time girlfriend, he always let himself busy from work. if he calls, he'll ask my dad about work only. he doesn't talk about what he usually does. dad asked him if he's fine and if reminded him that he doesnt have to be this way. being workaholic, it only upsets dad because it reminded his old days as if he never cared to his family. he doesnt want my brother to be like him.
Montee: we can't force some people to move on, it doesnt took months for him to recover. the only thing you must do is give him time and remind him that he still got family.


too emotional and sensitive, it was too late for Luisa to realize that there were tears falling down her face. Montee wiped away her tears and hugged her. "knowing you... i know how much you care about your family. but just let them be and they'll soon be healed....", he hugged her.

from the bushes, Damien didn't expect to see such a scene; a teacher and a student embracing each other's arms. clenching his fist, he wanted to punch this man for doing such a thing to his girl. yes, even if he dumped by her... she would always be girl he always wanted. "hey... i've been looking all over for you", he turn his head and there was Alex.

Alex: (she noticed who's the one that her boyfriend's looking at.) surprising, isn't? (she smiled and look onto the one she's pointing at.) i wouldn't be surprise if these two end up together.
Damien: you knew? (she just smiled. it means yes, secret clenching his fist.) when did they started to go out?
Alex: i have no idea.
Damien: isn't forbidden- i mean... teacher and student?
Alex: so what? Luisa's graduating soon and i dont think i would opposed.


"and i wouldn't be surprised again if once Luisa got into abroad, im sure that she'll offer herself to him", even if it was a joke, telling him that Luisa will only give up her virginity with this guy... it still isn't funny. he had no right to start getting pissed off. but no matter what, for Damien, Luisa is still the one for her.

and if there's someone she should offer her virginity...

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that would be him.... only him....


Luisa received got much good credits from school and for that, some of her classmates hold an exclusive celebration for her only. even Montee greeted her despite of his busy schedule, he didn't join the party because he got an event to his restaurant. Alex joined the ladies party and isn't interested to celebrate the party for her sister.

all of these... planned by Damien.

he took all the time to check out the schedules, even him, he canceled his coming from the cocktail party prepared by one of his father's business partners. Damien chose to attend the party of his beloved Luisa, even she doesnt love him back... it doesnt matter.

he doesnt care if its called obsession... but to have someone like Luisa, he'll forever treasure it. he's willing to do everything to make her stay and after that... he will do everything to make her love him. he doesnt care if it would hurt Alex, because he never loved her in the first place. it was always Luisa whom he loved.

the nights he spent with Alex, he would imagine and looked onto her face. it was Luisa. images he sees was only Luisa. nobody knows that, not even Alex... neither Luisa. except that there's someone who knows it, the motel owner's son who happens to be his childhood friend. he would tell his secret to him only and that his secret would be always safe to his childhood friend.



he came at Luisa's party. to her surprised, Luisa's cheerful aura invited him to go have fun along with her classmates. he would do as what she says, but at afar... a few glimpse of her. he wanted to do as what he had planned out. inserting his hand to his side pocket of his pants, holding a pill.

as Luisa took a seat, trying to get some little rest after having fun with her classmates. Damien this time move and come to her. but before he came onto her, he brought up some drinks for him and to Luisa. it has the pill dissolved in a few seconds.

Damien: hi...
Luisa: Damien...
Damien: did i disturb you?
Luisa: not at all... im just resting.
Damien: do you want to go home now?
Luisa: no, its okay... i just can't go home if the party's just starting.
Damien: here... have some drink first.
Luisa: its good to know that you're here celebrating here with me. (she took the glass of champagne that has the pill.) where's Alex? i thought you were together.
Damien: nah... she's hanging out with her friends as usual. you should know it. tonight is lady's night, so no guys allow.
Luisa: i see... (she finally took a sip of her champagne.)


Damien was just relaxed and Luisa kept on talking about her plans if she got into France. he tried himself to look so interested about her story, but later as she mentioned the guy he's pissed with. he secretly controlled himself to it, still look interested and their usual conversation that he would always smile at her.

later she starts feeling dizzy. couldn't handle the air inside and so Damien helped her to got out. but it didn't helped after they got out, Damien look anywhere else, no one's watching. when finally, Luisa fainted he carried her and hurried got inside the car.

he kept driving, until he reaches the motel. his childhood friend knows it and even helped her out to get inside in the motel room. everything he planned out was ready, through the help of his childhood friend.

leaving an evidence, everything has been recorded. this will leave Luisa had no choice but to accept the truth that the only man who could love her like this is none other than but Damien Montecillo. he took her womanhood while she's unconscious, because if there's someone who would be her first... that would be him and no one else.

"hahahaha! now, this is something real from you Damien... you're damned ass porn star~!", his childhood said. Timothy dela Cruz, whose a motel owner's son. that his father was used to be a family driver of the Montecillo family.

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see you in the next chapter as the scandal of Luisa and Damien revealed in the whole campus. leaving no choice but to withdraw of this unexpected scandal and rumored about having an intimate relationship with a professor is unforgiven. leaving again no choice for Montee to be fired by the university.

introducing new character again... Timothy dela Cruz.


it's funny how i added some characters for this story. it served some connections as it was all Erich's leading men in real life, except for Piolo Pascual (the main lead here in this story). i firstly introduced Montee's character as i imagined that it would be good if Coco Martin plays it. besides, he's one of those possible actors that Erich's will team up soon. they're first team was in their movie "Noy" that is currently showing. next character is Timothy whom i imagined as John Wayne Sace, Jawe is one of Erich's leading men when she started in showbiz and during her teenage days.

for more characters, i think i'll add Derek Ramsey, i haven't figure out yet if what will be his character but im sure that he's not a villain here, but rather another rival of Anthony Sandejas in my story. Erich just sent a message to her fans that her next movie will be with him, its really surprising because this would be the first time for her to be pair with someone who's older than her with a few years. hopefully the movie is not tragic because she sent a message with a picture, i think they're starting to shoot now. wheeew she's on a roll for movies this year.
 

jeeja

Miss SMILES :D
Damien is evil, i regret feeling pity for him lol
can't believe he used such plans to take away a woman's womanhood.

but anyway, love that t-ser gonna go check it out now. :D
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
Damien is evil, i regret feeling pity for him lol
can't believe he used such plans to take away a woman's womanhood.

but anyway, love that t-ser gonna go check it out now. :D

is someone gonna save her?
he can't take it!

i dont wanna spoil the next chapter. ^_^V peace~! no one will save her... because this will led to as one of the university's scandals.
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
Chapter 10



Damien started to undress his beloved who fella asleep because of the pill that he put awhile ago. he was sorry but he can't help it but to go further than this. he kissed her neck and both hands are now exploring her private parts, the moment he looked on her face. watching her asleep, it made him realize how even more lovely she was.

he rained her with kisses and feel her. he unhooked her bra and owned the other mound by his hand, slid 'til he reached her curved side of her body. but he stopped as something reminded him when he was about to kissed her lips.

he gave up and didn't want to continue.


"dude... what happened? you stripped her already...", Timothy asked him when he saw him on the video. he came into the room and asked him while Damien started to get her dress up.

Damien: i cant do it.
Timothy: why??? i thought-
Damien: i just can't do it...
Timothy: is there something wrong?
Damien: nothing... i'll just drop her home now.
Timothy: wa-wait... if you can't do it... then why dont you just give it to me.


he didn't like what he said. he took his collar shirt and was clenching his teeth as he got mad at him all of a sudden. he let go of him when he finally set his mind after what happen, he deep sighed and started to dress up as he was about to get home.

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the next day...

Luisa woke up with a headache. but as far as she can remember, she was at the party... but all of a sudden she woke up in her own room. she remembered being dizzy and the last person who was with her was Damien.

she dialed his number but it was only ringing. he didn't answer it. he was still asleep, right next to him is a woman that he spent his night after he refused to do it on Luisa.


"why you're not answering....", then someone's knocking on the door. it was Alex.

Luisa: Alex...
Alex: where did you put the medicine?
Luisa: medicine?
Alex: dad, needs take his dosage now.


she come with her and they entered to their father's room. she gets the medicine from the drawer, while Alex helped their father to sit straight. "here you go dad...", the two sisters helped out their father and Alexander took the medicine as what advice him.

Alex: dad, instead of suffering like this... i think its advisable if you should stay in the hospital.
Luisa: Alex is right, dad...
Xander: i am fine... i just need to take these medicines regularly.
Alex: what if kuya found out that your condition's getting worst.
Luisa: Alex...
Xander: dont tell Anthony. i dont wanna bother him especially that he's doing everything for what i have built. i already accept that im going to die soon.
Luisa: dad, please dont say that... (Alex didn't say anything as the feeling as mutual.)


Luisa endured of having headache as she and Alex stayed inside their father's room to be with him. it was Sunday and though Alex already made an appointment with her friends, she canceled it because she and Luisa decided to have fun with their father as they watched movies and as usual with Luisa... she baked a cake for her family.

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days had already passed but she noticed that Damien unexpectedly avoiding her, she wonder why. she wanted to talk to him and only to tell him that she believed that Damien was the one who brought her home the night at the party. where she felt dizzy and that's how she remembered only. she insist that she maybe fainted and he was the one who helped out.

later, she thought that he wasn't maybe avoiding her but rather busy with studies...

she tried her best in studies by Chef Montee's help. even now, she's working as an apprentice of him at the restaurant. this will also give her ideas on how to manage a restaurant business aside from being the chef at the same time.

at the kitchen, as the restaurant was about to close, Luisa started to get ready to go home but she saw Montee making a dish.

Luisa: Chef, do need my help?
Montee: uh... no. it's okay. im just actually studying this recipe. you can go home now.
Luisa: alright... i'll go now.
Montee: (before she leaves, he called her again.) Luisa...
Luisa: yeah?
Montee: maybe i need your help after all...


she smiled and went back to the locker room and change her clothes, he smiled when she was standing right infront of him. she was wearing the same uniform as him. she then helped him out to prepare some of the dishes.

for the past few years, aside from her brother... Montee had a big part of the most important people to her life. he wasn't just a chef teacher, but also good friend. there are times she thinks of him of more than close friends, she admits that she likes his character. everything about him was just so good to be true and if he could find a right one to his life, that girl would be the luckiest woman in the whole world to have him.

while cooking, they keep chattering and joke around with each other. it was plain friendly approach but for Montee it was something else. he looked at her secretly and as he watches her, he realized how she grew lovelier each year. she has been his student for 2 years and now she's taking her steps to reach her dreams. he couldn't wait to see that and he promised himself to guide her until she reach it.

Luisa: Chef, is there something wrong? (she caught his stare.)
Montee: nothing... im just thinking something...
Luisa: is it another one of your jokes you wanted to share it with me?
Montee: well.... (he dont know where to start, if he would tell her it maybe sounded like a joke but for him, its for real.) i dont know if its a joke. but i gotta question for you....
Luisa: so we're now in question and answer portion, mr. chef (she laugh.) game...
Montee: okay... i'll ask you will be the one to answer, is that okay?
Luisa: game...
Montee: as a student, how do you manage to separate your studies from love life?
Luisa: oh, geez... that would maybe an easy question. i dont have a love life and you know that. i only have my family and my studies...
Montee: what kind of man do you look for.... (for a second, she dont know why she couldn't answer that question.) okay... next question...
Luisa: but i haven't answered that question yet.
Montee: so what's your answer then?
Luisa: maybe someone who's just like my father... like my brother... i mean they're one i admire most. responsible, sensible, understanding, caring-
Montee: seems like you're looking for a perfect man after all.... mmmmm... what about the man who's with you right now?


.::Background Song::.
instrumental version

she dont know if she had to be surprise of what he just said. yes, she also admire him... and Montee's one of her perfect description. he's a man who could really take care of his woman.

she laugh with the thought of maybe its just a humor of him trying to show. yes, its possible to fall for him but it would be forbidden since she's a student and he's a teacher.


right after when they finish cooking the recipe that Montee was trying, she felt so proud that she's part of learning it. after tasting it, Montee wants her to bring home some of it and so she took it. but as she was about to took the bag of food, his fingers touch hers and they look into each other's eyes.

Montee: (this is what he was talking about, a feeling that he couldn't take it anymore as he knew how forbidden it was.) i... uh... i... im sorry.
Luisa: why are you apologizing?
Montee: nothing... its just that... (his heart suddenly beats faster, he felt like he wanna burst.) Luisa...
Luisa: yeah? (she was waiting for him to say something, something that made her curious of why all of a sudden he act that way.)
Montee: you... you... you dont mind if... if...-
Luisa: why are you stuttering... what's wrong, Chef?
Montee: can you call me by my name, we're not in a class...
Luisa: okay, but-
Montee: Luisa... you dont mind if a man like me will court you, right? i...-
Luisa: what? (and that... made her surprise with what he just said.)


she let go the bag of food, fell onto the floor as he grabbed her face and kiss her all of a sudden. she dont know how long the kiss was, but she suddenly remembered someone... Anthony. she remembered the accidental kiss.

she pushed him away and gave him a hard slap. she dont know what to do and because she only felt something wasn't right. neither kissing Chef Montee or thinking about her brother. it wasn't right and it made her confuse only.

why her innocent lips would taste this such a feeling.

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days had passed again and she was absent for a couple of days, she dont think she could face Chef Montee after what happened. inside her room, she kept reading some emails from Anthony. he could tell much if what's going on with his life, while she couldn't tell anything... nothing relevant except from what happened to her and her teacher.

Alex knocked to her room all of sudden, the teachers were looking for her and because she needed to fill up some documents before she leaves for a competition.

Alex: now, what? what's going on?
Luisa: nothing...
Alex: what do you mean nothing? last semester's approaching and you've been absent for days. the teachers has been asking your submission of the documents.
Luisa: i see...
Alex: what's wrong? aren't you telling me something? is there something i can help?
Luisa: i dont think i need help... its just that im lack of motivation...
Alex: you're just nervous of the competition you got into.... Luisa, you dont want to lose this chance, right?
Luisa: i know...
Alex: tomorrow you should go to school... (she was at the doorway.) your chef teachers looking for you. the whole school will hold a program for the students who'll give them some merits and you're one of the list. dont miss that...


Alex left, she was dressed in a party get up as she's going to attend a house party of her friend. nothing seems change with her sister since she really loves to hangout. meanwhile, she dont know if she needed to attend the program tomorrow. but more importantly she still needed to submit some other documents for her leave.

however, she still dont know how she'll face Chef Montee for tomorrow.

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"why do you want the original copy?", Timothy asked Damien. he was the motel when he found his friend watching some porn again. yesterday, his friend texted him that he got the copy already from what he did to Luisa. not literally he did it, he went back that time to the motel to accompany his asshole friend. but what happened just then is that he brought some girls for the two of them....

after seeing the copy, he can't just let his friend do this to him. it was highly documented and he couldn't allow this to spread this video because it'll ruin his name. he also saw Luisa in that copy and he couldn't allow him to ruin her too.

Damien realize how it'll ruin for both of him and Luisa.

Timothy smiled and give the original copy to him. he made him sure that he doesnt have any copies of that scandal and after the original copy was given to him, he left...

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see you in next chapter, sorry for a late update and just leave the errors be... im in a hurry as usual. XD
next chapter, the scandal will be shown and it'll ruin Luisa's opportunity to join the competition.

with Anthony's comeback, it'll change the whole treatment to Luisa. expecting that he'll be siding Alex.
 

jeeja

Miss SMILES :D
i've been waiting like forever...jk
great update.
i'm so glad tat Damien didn't do anything to her.
oh man, but that clip gonna ruin her TT_TT
 
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