Rachfull
sarNie Oldmaid
Come to think of it, I've never seen Sleepless in Seattle. Always meant to watch it, but I haven't gotten around to it yet. I've seen the other Tom Hanks/Meg Ryan movies, though: Joe Versus the Volcano and You've Got Mail.
[Ch3] Bpoop Phaeh Saniwaat (Broadcast Thai) : Pope Thanawat / Bella Ranee
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Rachfull
sarNie Oldmaid
YAYYYYYY I STARTED IT!!!!! A few notes:
Okay, without further ado, here is the first installment of the Date-Kaew fanfic
- I'll post updates to the fanfic under spoilers with the title "Date-Kaew Fanfic" until I come up with a better name. That way I don't spam the thread if people don't want to read it. EDIT: Fine I'll leave it out
- This is only the first installment, there are more to come. How many more, I don't know. When it comes to writing, I have a reeaaalllyy hard time holding back
- I even added some fan service in this first installment for all of you!!!! I HATE writing fan service, so you're welcome! I only threw up three times while I was writing it
I don't like writing romance I always feel unqualified- Oh and I'm not totally confident on my "P's" and "jao ka"s so lmk if I make a big mistake or just ignore the mistakes
Also this isn't my best writing so bear with me:
Date-Kaew Fanfic Vol. 1“Khun P’!”
Something was jabbing into Date’s back, something that felt like the beak of a bird, or a pencil, or…
Date rolled over so quickly he almost toppled off the bed. But he had achieved his object: Kade’s finger was no longer disturbing his sleep. In fact, his arms were constricting her every attempt to continue disturbing his sleep.
“Khun P’!”
“Mmmm,” Date mumbled.
“Khun P, it’s time to get up.”
Date nestled deeper into his pillow, tightening his grip on Kade.
Kade giggled. Then she clapped a hand over her mouth. She forced her face into a stern look. “Khun P, you’re supposed to meet with Khun Chantawat in a few hours. Get up!” She pushed against his chest again.
A light knock rapped on the bedroom door. “Khun Mae, Khun Pa jao ka!”
Date and Kade jumped apart, diving off the bed for “Khun Pa’s” shirt.
“What is it, loo?” Kade shouted as Date hurriedly pulled his arms through the shirt sleeves. In a minute, he had the shirt on and the waistband tied, and not a moment too soon: little Prang swung the door open and toddled into the room. She tugged on Kade’s skirt, and began, “Khun Mae jao ka--”
But before Prang could finish, Pin and Yam came hurrying into the room, chests heaving. “Katot jao ka, Khun Ying,” Yam panted, “We were dressing Prang’s hair when she ran away. We tried to catch her--"
"--but she’s really fast,” Pin finished.
“It’s alright, P’Pin, P’Yam,” Kade said. She crouched to Prang’s level. “Did you need something, loo?”
“Khun Mae jao ka, I wanted you to dress my hair today,” Prang explained, gazing up at Kade and sticking out her bottom lip ever so slightly.
Date, who had stood with crossed arms and watched the spectacle unfold, launched into action. “Prang,” he began, raising his index finger. “You should not run away from Pin and Yam. Apologize to them.”
Kade stood up and sent him an exasperated look as Prang clung to her skirts. Date simply stared back, raised his eyebrows, then lowered his gaze back to Prang.
“Now.”
Prang peeked up at her father through her eyelashes, saw the stern look on his face, and spun around to face Pin and Yam.
“Katot.” She turned back to Date. He glanced around the room, purposefully looking everywhere but at Prang. Kade bent down and whispered in Prang’s ear.
“Katot, Khun Pa jao ka.” Prang aligned her hands and bowed once again. Kade smiled knowingly at Date. Date continued to look around the room, but this time his lips twitched infinitesimally upward.
“Come, loo, I’ll dress your hair for you,” Kade said, directing Prang out of the room by her tiny shoulders.
Date, unable to hold back his amusement any longer, allowed a wide grin to spill across his face.
YAYYYYY Part 2 of the Date-Kaew fanfic!!!! Yes, I am accepting name submissions because I have no idea what to call it
Can I just say I love writing from Date's point of view because he tries so hard to conceal his emotions but he always ends up inadvertently revealing them
DATE-KAEW FANFIC PART II
Later that day, Date was reading one of his political texts at his desk when a servant escorted two men into the house. Intrigued, Date marked his place in his book and rose from his chair. He crept over to a pillar to watch the men from afar as Kade greeted them. He felt the vaguest twinge of jealousy, then silenced it, reminding himself that he and Kade had been married for almost twenty years now, and had four children together. There was no need for him to feel jealous over her greeting other men. He could just calmly return to his desk and continue reading his book without a care in the world.
Next thing Date knew, he was standing in the common area of the house, staring down the two intruders.
“Ah, he’s here,” Kade said, rising from her seat. The two men did likewise. “Khun P jao ka, this is Khun Chantawat and his son, Khun Natawat.” She pointed at each man respectively.
Date breathed a sigh of relief. Good, a married man with his son. No need to be concerned at all.
Unless Kade wanted a younger man now that her husband was old. Date’s brow furrowed.
As Date tried to ascertain how far a young man could charm his Karakade in the ten minutes the two had spent together, the older man spoke: “You remember, Ork Ya, that we had an appointment today?”
Date nodded, still calculating. Chantawat’s question hung in the air for a few minutes. Then something clicked in his brain, and Date woke up. “Yes. Please, sit down.” He gestured at the seat in front of him.
Chantawat and his son sat once again. Date lowered himself onto the couch opposite, training his gaze on them. “Now, what business did you have to discuss with me? You said it was important.”
“Ah, yes,” Chantawat responded, easing forward in his seat. He glanced at his son.
Date briefly shifted his gaze to the son as well. Did Kade like tall noses?
“My son here, Natawat-- well, he’s had his eye on your daughter Kaew,” Chantawat responded, resting a hand on Natawat’s shoulder.
Date froze.
“And he asked me to come meet with you to ask your permission to court Kaew.”
Date’s body sat rigid while his mind raced at a pace so swift, even his thoughts were blurred. His brain halted for a second.
“Permission for you to date my oldest daughter, Chantawat?”
“No, no,” the older man chuckled, “Permission for Nathawat to date your daughter.”
Date’s face fell, all color draining from it.
RACHFULL'S DATE-KAEW FANFIC PART IVRACHFULL'S DATE-KAEW FANFIC PART III
Updated sooner than intended by popular demand
And I've even quoted the previous parts above so you guys can reference them if you need to. You're welcome.
Hee hee hee I enjoyed writing this part
Are you happy @Rosi ???
Part III“Khun P!” Karakade whimpered from her place by the front steps. “Why did you usher Khun Chantawat and Khun Nathawat out so soon? They were only here for less than five Baht. Isn’t that rude in this era?” Kade glanced out the door again, to where the men’s boat had just set sail.
Date spun on the ball of his foot, and stalked away from the door.
Kade followed him. “Khun P! Why are you so angry? Did they do something that upset you?”
Date ignored her.
“Khun P!” Kade grabbed Date’s arm and pulled in front of him, stopping him in his tracks.
“Out of my way, Khun Ying Karakade!” Date’s eyes narrowed as his voice crescendoed into a near-shout.
“Mai! I won’t move until you tell me what’s wrong!” Kade spread her feet apart, raising her fists.
Date flashed his eyes down at Kade’s balled fists. At any other time, he would’ve found her funny. But not now. “You really won’t move?”
Kade simply adjusted her stance into a more stable position.
He took that as a no.
Grabbing Kade by the shoulders, he shunted her to the left of his path. As she stumbled in the direction his hands persuaded her in, she tripped on a nearby ledge, lost her balance, and fell onto the hardwood floor. Date glanced down at his wife, and walked away.
That night, Date abandoned his place of refuge in his office and headed toward his and Kade’s room. However, as soon as he reached the door, he couldn’t open it. Something seemed to be blocking the door. He knocked. “Karakade! Open the door! It’s me!”
No response.
He knocked again. “Kade? It’s me, Date.”
Still no response.
He pounded. “Khun Ying Karakade! Open this door right now!!”
A piece of paper slid into Date’s foot from underneath the door. He picked it up and unfolded it.
“Ork Ya Visut Sakorn--
I would rather sleep with a snake than with you.
Regards,
Khun Ying Karakade, Head of Household”
Date read the note again. And again. One more time.
What had he done to garner such treatment from his wife? They’d gotten along perfectly well that morning and even better the previous night. She’d even kissed his cheek right in front of their children before lunch. And then he’d gotten that visit from those two… creatures, and…
Oh.
Date backtracked, making his dejected way to his old room for the night.
Better things to come... but gotta set everything up in this part
Part IV
Back in his old room, Date paced back and forth. So now Kade was mad at him. Great. But that was hardly a problem, he’d go apologize and plead with her later. She never stayed angry for long. The more pressing matter was this Nathawat character.
There was no way he would allow that child to approach his daughter, the only daughter he’d had for nine years until Prang was born. That was out of the question.
But what if the boy tried to meet Prang in secret? He couldn’t allow that either. That’d be even worse than them courting in front of him. How could he prevent his Kaew from being tainted by that boy? She was only sixteen. She didn’t understand the desires of dishonorable young men, nor did she understand the tactics they used to get what they wanted. Date had been a young man once; he knew all too well what young men wanted and how they got it.
Maybe he could lock her in her room? No, that would be too drastic. And he could never follow through with such a punishment; he’d give in within a few days.
He could send her away for school? Hmmm. The idea had merit, but the problem laid in exactly where he could send Kaew. He didn’t want her to live far away from her friends and family. Or to live far away from him.
He made his decision. Date would simply have to strongly discourage Kaew from dating for the next few years, that was all.
Besides, things weren’t the same as when he and Kade were young. Kade was considered old by the time they married, and she was only a few years past twenty. Women these days were choosing to wait until they were closer to that age to marry. It wouldn’t completely demolish Kaew’s future prospects if she held off courting for a few more years. She would have plenty of time to date and marry after that Nathawat was out of the picture.
Yes, it would have to do. He would tell Kaew tomorrow, then after that issue was resolved, he would go plead with Kade. Maybe afterwards, he’d be able to catch up on the sleep he most certainly wouldn’t be getting tonight.
lamchieu
sarNie Adult
@Rosi here’s the pic I told you. I’m not sure if it’s the real deal or photoshopped. I’ve tried to dive so deep in millions of pics on instagram by all my best of a sea-town-born girl but to no result. All of suddenly bang, it’s all over the instagram this noon. What a coincidence. You probably seen it too
lamchieu
sarNie Adult
You
you cracked me up, yeah, that’s just hilarious. And the time after their French kiss, pin an yam dont let Kade to pull up the sleeves. I liked wth, the other shoulder is bare girls
lamchieu
sarNie Adult
Don’t worry, our war is still good so you shouldn’t take it into your head. I just don’t want to sound ungrateful you knowAwww you feign tolerance for me now??? That's the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me, @lamchieu
lamchieu
sarNie Adult
phatman
POPE's #1 MIA LUANG
Haha. Aww. Thanks dear. I wouldn't want to take it from you though. They have to give me my BPS love. They have to!
phatman
POPE's #1 MIA LUANG
Right. She's the true nang'rai. Haha .I was an ideal mia until your possession turned me into dark side
DaoRisa
Love has nothing to do with bodies.
Hope Pope and Bella will have a new lakorn together while waiting for the writer to finish her Prum Likit (BPS part 2) story. I'm so in love with this couple and want to see them in romantic comedy or else with a good script, not junk.
Will be forever until Prum Likit start. hummmmm
Will be forever until Prum Likit start. hummmmm
Rosi
Wifey #42
Man, you're deep. I'm suddenly starting to wonder who you really are. That has got to be one of the most heavenly places on earth. I've only seen it on maps and documentaries but it's heartbreakingly beautiful. Snow is silence & that makes it special in a different way. You're making me jealous but only a little twinge I guess because it's been too long my heart's set on a tiny village (translated Little Prayer House in the Woods Betwys y Cyd) it's in Snowdonia.
Hey, do you know that the SJDK MUSE site isn't working today? It makes me scared I won't get to see BPS anytime I like - sign says it's under maintenance. I hope that's true, I hope it'll still be there for us by tomorrow.....
I just noticed little Joi in this picture & how inquisitive he is the way he's looking up at Date. Could this be the time when he saw his young boss starts changing (hate to love).
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Rosi
Wifey #42
Ok cross fingers what Roberto is receiving Monday is BPS DVDs. Or yours is returned by the delivery truck. At least for me if I know he can get one order right, then no problem I'll send you mine I can always ask him for another. He owns a series of beach homes on the island, runs a French bar & restaurant & have all these local staff as caretakers. I've ever asked him before for a few movies with subs but his staff can't find it. But BPS I asked only recently & yesterday he replied "Ok found your sexy movies. Will be delivered Monday to my house. I will let you know then. Cheers, R."
lamchieu
sarNie Adult
I think it’s him for sure, look thinner, but the mouth, nose and eyes are undeniable. I kind of like this photo of him, look serene, genuine and his eyes are so clear and bright, mesmerizing and electrifying
lamchieu
sarNie Adult
Lol. Am I the only nang’rai in here? And when have I turned to nang'rai???
I’m supposed to be the good person fighting for all the lesser wifeys here
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Mycthao
sarNie Hatchling
I am too. I don’t think we’ll get to watch Prom Likit any time soon but I hope they make it worth the wait. In the mean time, I would like to see a modern love story between them. I think it’ll be cute.
Rosi
Wifey #42
You could be right..... and he is all that which you described. Maybe I didn't want to believe it because I'm so used to his thick, dark eyebrows which are so expressive that's why I worried in case it's a photoshop. Great when he ordained his eyebrows were off but he didn't change much & easily recognisable.