BLOODY REVENGE

aikoden

aikoden

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Hahaha i so hate myself.. i have so many fics goin on yet im writing another one.. hehe.. i couldn't resist... BEWARE.. I HAVE LOTS OF UPCOMING FICS.. BUT.. don't worry.. i 4got most since i get side-tracked so much lol.. and also because i wanna finish my fics first ^_^.. aniwaise enjoy...

BLOODY REVENGE



Starring: Oguri Shun

PROLOGUE

Takeshi was walking back to class when he stumbled upon a body lying on the ground. "Mister.. Mister.. Can you hear me?" he asked the man as he gave him support. The man pointed to his side trying to show Takeshi the knife. Takeshi saw the knife and pulled it out. Blood slowly dripped on his hand as blood came rushing out of the man. The man screeched in pain. "MISTER!" he shouted.

The bell rang and students got out of class. Everyone stared at Takeshi and began shouting, "MURDERER.. MURDERER.. MURDERER!!!"

"It wasn't me.. It wasn't me.. I swear it wasn't me.." he said as he raised his hand in the air.

"STEP BACK!! STEP BACK!! HE HAS A WEAPON!!"

Takeshi looked up and dropped the knife. "No.. It's not what you think.."

The security guards rushed in and pushed Takeshi onto the ground. "ARREST HIM!! HE'S A MURDERER!!" the students shouted.

"NO I'M NOT! LET ME GO!! I'M INNOCENT!"

"Shut it you twerp! That's what they all say. YOU'RE UNDER ARREST!"

"I TOLD YOU I'M INNOCENT!"

"YOU HAVE THE RIGHT TO REMAIN SILENT!" shouted one of the guards.

The other guards walked toward the body and began examining it. They touched the blood on the ground. "Fresh blood." They touched the man's neck and pulse. "He's dead. TAKE HIM TO JAIL!!"

"IT WASN'T ME!! IT WASN'T ME!! I'M INNOCENT!!"

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
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n_naruk

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
I know what you mean by having too many fafics out. It's like you get a new idea you just have to write it before you forget about it. Lol. But great start! I have no idea who the guy is but he's somewhat cute. Heehee. Omg, I wonder what happen that made him look like he's the killer!
 
aikoden

aikoden

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HAHAHA OMG!!!!! I FORGOT TO ADD OGURI SHUN'S NAME ON THE POSTER... OMG IM SO LAME LOL... I'LL ADD IT NEXT WEEK KEKE XP..

NO WONDER I WAS LIKE.. SUMTHIN IS DEF MISSIN... IT WAS HIS NAME.. HEHE.. XP..
 
aikoden

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
hehe thanks RR...

hmmm i shall update this tomorrow.. if im not lazy xp ^_^...

I LOVE SHUN.. HE'S SO HOT!!!!
 
aikoden

aikoden

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Staff member
SORRY I WILL NOT BE UPDATING!...

IM TOO SAD FOR THE LOST.... WILL UPDATE MAYBE TOMORROW OR SO... SORRY..
 
n_naruk

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Aws, Hope you feel better soon...update when you can...sorry to hear about your lost. May Jinji RIP.
 
aikoden

aikoden

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Chapter 1

(Takeshi being interrogated by the police officer.)

"WHY DID YOU KILL HIM? WHAT GRUDGE DID YOU HAVE ON HIM? WHAT WAS YOUR MOTIVE BEHIND ALL THIS?"

"I TOLD YOU ALREADY! IT WASN'T ME!!"

"IF IT WASN'T YOU, WHY WOULD YOU ACT LIKE THIS?"

"BECAUSE I WANT MY INNOCENCE... YOU HAVE NO RIGHTS TO DO THIS.."

"THERE'S PROOF THAT YOU KILLED HIM."

"WHAT PROOF? I WAS ONLY WALKING BACK TO CLASS... HE HAPPENED TO BE THERE.."

"LIES!!! YOU KILLED HIM. WE ALL KNOW IT! YOU KNOW IT!!"

"THIS IS STUPID! NO ONE WILL BELIEVE ME ANYWAYS. THIS IS BULLSHIT!"

"SHUT IT YOU! ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS ADMIT WHAT YOU DID WRONG. HOW HARD CAN THAT BE."

"WHY WOULDN'T IT.. TRY BEING IN MY SHOES.. SOMEONE WHO IS INNOCENT!"

"WE ARE THE INNOCENT ONES... THE POLICE.. THE GOVERNMENT ... ONLY YOU ARE GUILTY!"

"IT'S BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU THAT'S WHY THE WORLD IS SO FUCKED UP!"

(The police officer slammed his papers on the table and punched Takeshi.)

"THAT'S IT! I'M GOING TO LOCK YOU UP FOREVER!"

"YOU HAVE NO RIGHTS TO. LOCKING UP THE INNOCENT PEOPLE... THE REAL MURDERER IS STILL OUT THERE.."

"WHY SHOULD I CARE ABOUT WHAT YOU SAY."

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(Police officers secretly talking to one another.)

"So.. How was it?"

"It's simple.. Just blame him."

"ARE YOU STUPID. WHAT IF HE FINDS OUT WE USED THIS TACTIC?"

"He wont know. He wanted him locked up anyways."

"So.. How do we split?"

"90 - 10.."

"YOU GOTTA BE FUCKEN KIDDIN ME...."

"I DID NOT GO THROUGH ALL THIS SHIT JUST TO GET 10%!"

"I DON'T GIVE A SHIT! I WAS THE LEADER SO I TELL WHO GETS WHAT!"

"THIS IS STUPID! FORGET IT! I QUIT! PSSH! GETTING SO DAMN LITTLE MONEY!"

(There was a cocking sound.)

"turn around.."

(A suspicious man triggered the gun.)

"I am the one who tells you what to do."

"B--BB--BOSS!!"

(He pointed the gun at the man.)

"Such a greedy bastard. Go to HELL."

(He cocked the gun and shot the officer.)

"So... What will it be?"

"We will do anything for you Boss!!!"

"Good boys.."

(Smiled the suspicious man.)

............................. TO BE CONTINUED........................

ENJOY.. IM STILL A SUCKY WRITER LOL XP...

 
n_naruk

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Oh wth!? The police officers are behind the whole murderer as well? But why blame Takeshi tho?!
Yes Aiko, such a cliffhanger!
 
aikoden

aikoden

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Chapter 2

(Takeshi talking to himself in the prison room.)

"Why did it had to be me who saw that man. Why couldn't it be someone else instead. I should have just left him lying there. There are so many people on campus. Why was I the only one who was present at that time? Where did all those guards go anyways? DAMN!"

"STUPID! STUPID! STUPID FOOL! DAMN IT!"

(He began punching the walls.)

(Other prisoners started shouting.)

"SHUT THE FUCK UP BITCH!"

"YOU KEEP MAKING THOSE DAMN NOISE AND SEE WHAT HAPPENS!"

"YOU DUMB ASS BRAT!"

"YOU THINK YOU'RE THE SHIT NOW!?!"

(Takeshi stopped and stared at them.)

"DO YOU THINK I WANNA BE IN THIS PLACE?"

(He began smiling.)

"Don't you dare try to mess with me..."

(The others began laughing.)

"Ohhh.. I'm so scared.,"

"Help me..."

"Ahhh.."

"Imma pee in my pants.. hehe.."

(They continued making fun of him.)

(He glared at them one last time.)

"Just you wait till it's break time."

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"You all are useless."

"But.. B-B-BOSS."

"We did everything like you wanted."

"Yes Boss.."

"But I thought it was pointless. Did you forget who makes the rules around here?"

"No.. No Boss."

"WHO THE HELL CAME UP WITH THAT STUPID PLAN? I WANTED HIM LOCKED UP, BUT I THOUGHT OF A BETTER PLAN THAN YOUR STUPID ONE! DO YOU NOT KNOW HOW EASY IT IS FOR HIM TO GET OUT BECAUSE OF YOUR STUPIDITY?"

"But B-B-Boss.. at least he's in prison."

"I guess this is goodbye then."

(He smiled and triggered the gun.)

"One. Two. Three. Four. Five."

"All dead."

"SUCH A DAMN WASTE OF TIME!!!"

"STUPID GREEDY COPS!"

"Just you wait Takeshi.. just you wait."

"I have something better for you. You'll just have to get out first."

(He continued laughing evilly.)

............................. TO BE CONTINUED........................

.. ENJOY .. i was quite blah on this so it wasnt that interesting hehe xp.. but do ENJOY.. ^_^
 
aikoden

aikoden

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Chapter 3

(Takeshi speaking to his parents through the glass wall.)

"Son.. Are you alright?"

"I'm fine Mom. Don't worry about anything."

"I wonder who did this to you. Bastards!!!"

"Dad. Chill. I'll find out who it was."

"Be careful dear. I don't want you hurt."

"No one can mess with me Mom."

"Have you talked to the officials yet?"

"No. It's odd Dad. Seems like no one believes a thing I say. It is as if it was all planned out."

"Don't worry. I'm going to hire the best lawyer to get you out."

"Don't get in trouble with the others ok son?"

"Thanks Dad. Mom, of course I wouldn't."

(The buzzer went on.)

"TIME'S UP!!!" (Shouted the guard.)

"Already? We just got here."

"It's alright Mom. I'll be out soon. For now, you two take care ok?"

"It's you who we're worried about."

(Takeshi smiled.)

"Then don't. Drive safely Dad."

"I will. I will."

After his parents left, the guard pulled Takeshi by the arm and dragged him out as if he was some sort of animal.

"You're gonna regret it one of these days."

"Ooooh I'm so scared." (The guard mocked.)

Takeshi stopped walking and stared at the ground.

"You just don't know who I am huh?"

"I DON'T GIVE A SHIT WHO YOU ARE!! KEEP WALKING!!"

Takeshi didn't budge and continued standing there.

"WHY YOU!!" (The guard got mad and began beating Takeshi up with the club.)

(Takeshi continued smiling.)

"You have no clue who you're messing with my friend."

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!"

"The roses today.. Don't they look BLOODY GORGEOUS TODAY?"

The guard was confused by Takeshi's words. Takeshi showed his hands to the guards.

"THERE AIN'T NOTHING THAT CAN LOCK ME UP!"

"WHAT.. HOW... HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!!"

"MAGIC!"

Takeshi pushed the guard down and began punching and kicking him left and right. He took the club out of the guard's hand and smacked his head.

"Awwwe... Looks like I made a boo-boo on your head. Does it hurt? Let me help you with that. Enjoy the long rest.."

(Takeshi began laughing evilly.)

The guard was in pain as Takeshi continued hitting him. All he could do was curl up in a ball to recieve less damages. He was even more scared of Takeshi than Lucifer himself. He soon began crying.

(Takeshi dropped the club as he got up.)

"Just what did I say? Didn't I warn you?"

The guard was still trembling in fear.

"MONSTER.. YOU'RE SUCH A CRUEL MONSTER!!!!"

"You think I don't know that?"

Takeshi continued laughing evilly but soon began to tremble. He soon fell to the hard ground shaking every part of his body.

............................. TO BE CONTINUED........................

lol.. ENJOY THIS SHORT UPDATE ^_^... I GOT CAUGHT STAYING UP LOL... ^_^....
 
tastesweetlove

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
seriously aiko...you left on a cliffhanger, although you said you were, but gasp. this was so unexpected. Takeshi is WOW the last part was kind of scary.
 
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