2 nights a week :: (Sequel) Tik/Aff

sarN

sarNie Granny
:lol: isn't that nice girl !!! ....in the next sequel "3NIGHT" you the ice cream between them hahah
 

cecilia

Staff member
^omg. you're flavoring her already w/cherry on top.
what a sight :lol: .. i so wish you can write this and watch BADARN JAI at the same time.
i haven't start on MY ENEMY yet. i want to but my mind keeps pushing it away. why. oh why.
i want to read 3 nights so badly already :lol: .. i wanna laugh so hard and roll all over *lol-don't imagine*
 

margaretthao4

sarNie Adult
Ok here's the rest of my comments for this fic. I finished a while ago but just never posted up my comments.

“ …I intend to irritate you with my loud knocking !!...� said the girl
“ …why ? we always take a shower together when I stay over …�
---AMI OMG!!!!WHAT ARE YOU THINKING…I’M GOING TO TELL YOUR MOM LMAO

“…who is she ?...�
“ …my fiancée…�
---OMG HIS FIANCEE WAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

WAAAAAAAaaAAAAAAAAA AND MOH WAS JUST HTHE OTHER GIRL…WAAAAAA I FEEL BAD FOR MOH AND ARISOYA! WERE ALL EEING USED!


“ …right now you are being unfaithful to her !...� she was right about this man , he a womanizer and a cheater ! She wonders how many women is he dating at the same time ….or slept with? Moh , his girlfriend and now Aim …his fiancée and the next girls is probable his wife !! Ugh , she feel disgusted with this man !
----MMMM HMMM MOH IS GIRLFRIEND..MMMM YEAH NO!

Tik was a bit stun but smile and thought she want a quickie before leaving and right now he does feel a little burning left “ …baby , are you sure ? I thought you were tire from last night ?...�
---LMFAO WAA WHEN IT BURNS IT REALLY BURNS HAHAHAHA

“ …good idea . ok ok …but baby I didn’t wear any underwear under these short �
-----eeeewww she has to wear his pants that he wore w/o any undies ewwwwww!!!

Ami was watching Saturday morning cartoon on tv with her back facing them .
----lmfao that does sound like Ami hahahahahaha

“ ..tik ! ..� whisper Arisoya while poking her head out the door
“..come on !!...� he whisper while signaling for her to come out
---Arisoya why didn’t you just bust him right there. Then you wont have to do that whole 2 nights a week thing and you can finally go to Paris..gawd!!!! Lmao

The elevator door open and there was two old ladies in their sixty already inside , when Tik and Arisoya walk in . The old ladies was startle after seeing a man with only a towel standing beside them. The old ladies slowly move to the corner of the elevator , fearing if the towel drop they will have a stroke and die !
--OMG I forgot that that was all he had on too! Waaaaaaaaaa

“ …..well, it hard!!...�
The old ladies hug each other and shaken in fear once the word “hard� echo in the elevator !! This young man is probable a sex offender !!
“ …what so hard !!...� Arisoya shouted back
“ …it hard !!..�
“ …how hard is it !!!!...�
“ …baby , it very hard !!!...�
The old ladies scream their little head off , then the elevator door open and the old ladies run out . Tik and Arisoya look at each other puzzle as they walk out the elevator and continue their argument
----SUPER WAAAAA OMG HAHAHAHAHAHA I WOULD BE SCREAMING TOO! OMG
That reminds me I was out this passed weekend and I was caught in the middle of this gay parade nude bike ride. OMFG that was not fun. I didn’t look I didn’t look! It was scarry! Lmao

The security man grab Tik by the arm and drag him away . Tik try to explain it was all a misunderstanding but the security man refuse to listen .
---Lock his “hard� ass up!

HEY WHATS ALL THIS BAD TALK ABOUT MOH HUH?
LMAO CECI SAYING MOH’S GOING TO BE JELOUS OF AMI! PUH-LEEZE I HAD THAT TWICE OK! LMAO
STARRY YOU HAVENT READ MY SCENE? ITS NOT THAT BAD. LMAO
LMAO AMI 10X MOH WWWWHAAAAAA HAHAHAH AHAHA AHAHAHA

“ …peter !! shut up ! …I..I…I confess the truth to him already ...�
“ .. dang and you easy tooo . !!..�
---mmm hmm that’s what I said!

“ …holy Buddha ! He what ? Girl, you shouldn’t confess at all !!! And take the punishment instead !!...� Peter giggle
---waaa peter is bad lmao

“ …sorry girl – how about this, next time tell him to pull out before it erupt inside and make a mess ! Lets the bad boi swim outside the pool �
-----waaa sarn where is this side of you coming from? I’m shocked!

“…umm…excuse me sir …can i have 8 home pregnancy test …please� said Peter in a low disguising voice while Arisoya standing behind him .
“ ….do you really need it ...and that many? but you're a man..� said the seller , doubting if a gay person can get pregnant or not ?
“ ..yes I need it ..um..huh..it..it for my dogs .. ..� Peter blurted out , then grab the kits and rush to the check out line while Arisoya follow behind him.
--- WTH 8? And its for his dogs lmfao! Poor Arisoya. Lmao serves her right for being so easy. She did end up having doubles. Lmao

“…ah, girl ! I haven’t gone under the knife yet --- “ Peter pause and look into his friend sad puppy eye and said “ …alright , alright , it just my curse to be your friend …�
---I find this line to be hella funny..he’s gay but he denies being a tran lmao

“ …alright then, question #5: are you sexual active now . This question is asking if you’re sleeping w/ men .
“ ….yes, every weekend ..�
---LMFAO UH HUH +SOME

they on a budget with the gas price going up
---mmm hmm arnt we all. Shoot I cant even drive my ass to wal-mart anymore lmao.

The only two girls he seeing right now is Moh and Arisoya but with Moh the relationship hadn’t gone too far unlike …Arisoya !! Holy Buddha .
---ugh w/e! lol don’t be jealous

“ ..shhhh . If Ami see you , baby I promise you …that girl will bomb your house with egg everyday for the rest of your life ..�
----lmao I will help her hahaha jk jk jk I’m sure she would too!

Holy shit why didn’t that old lady lock the stall door? Lmao that makes me scarred now when I need to shit in public places what if someone barges in like that. Omg remember to do the camo cough..if you guys havent read the shitting list on sw you should its hella funny.

Peter was watching the couple and after they left , he turn back to his friend and said “ ….that girl seen to have control over him ! I bet your husband have a tattoo said : belong to Ami : � Peter giggle
---lmao Umm has one that says Moh hahaha

“ ..i don’t ..but your room was the only one with it’s light on . so I sit under the tree and stare at the balcony for over an hr . Praying my Juliet will appear ...� he smile
---aaaawwwwwwwww I like that

“ ….u didn’t wear any underwear !...� Arisoya laugh as she watch him roll on the ground and rubbing his butt to ease the pain . What an idiot ~ he bare like a baby bottom !
---no undies again waaaaa

“ …ugh ! what is it now ? !!..� she was annoyed with him .
He reach for her hand and bend down to kiss “ … … I think ..im falling in love with you..�
---awwww this part I like….super cute reminds me of when se7en blew me our first kiss! Heheheehehe

“ Arisoya!! Baby ! Is that you !! Who that you talking to ? !!!Is that a man !! � shouted Harit from inside the gate and quicken his pace .
“ ..ahh, Mr.Tutorson ! Thats the guy that kidnap Arisoya! ..� scream Peter , following behind Harit
“ …Harit , don’t go crazy on the man without talking to him first!!� shouted Soriya
" ...my parent is home !!.." said Arisoya
" ...o' shit .." cries Tik
----oooouuuuuu what is he going to do to tik? Lock is hard ass up? Lmfao!!!

“ …..cause he like it raw Mr. Tutorson !!
“ …o’my!..� cries Soriya
---lmfao HE SURE DOES LIKE IT RAW! wonder if soriya thought about how harith was like that to her? Hahahaha

“ …and there was this one time she return home with her hair wet and tangle up wearing wrinkle up t-shirt . I think her kiwi was smash several time until his banana split ..�
“ …my baby ..� Harit fainted , his body slip between his wife arm and hit the floor .
---pain or guilt? Lmao Peter waaaa peter…TMI FOOL TMI!!!

“ …who the hell are you …� Harit shouted at the girl with small apples and skinny legs , who was standing to the left of his main target
“ ..m m..my name is Moh ..� she put her hand down
---since ami is the only one whose seen me….lmao is that me? Small apples and skinny legs. Lmfao heller no! LMFAO!!!! don’t forget the lip gloss that didn’t make it onto my lips too! Hahaha

This it not 100 years ago where girls is on the bottom, time change and now girls can be on top � Peter giggle and blush by his own word of wisdom .
---I like this line hahaha I shall use it now! Lmao

….it not the wine! your banana wasn’t an average asian men , it make scent the condom broke if the kind you brought was to small and when it rip I told you to stop but you keep on moving ..� she blurted
“ …but baby …we still have a long way to go !..�
---WAAAA THIS ALL INFRONT OF HER DAD…WAAAAA

The two girls was swinging octopus‘s hand at him and screaming in his ear, protesting!
---wooo were vicious! Get off my man Hahahaha

. Its probable the intoxicate mind that speaking to him because he drank 3 bottle of Scotch and right now his head is spinning like a Ferris wheel.
“…so be it! Let me have my last meal then …� he chuckles and take a bit out of the big apples
--I can never think of apples in the same way anymore. Your making everything I eat turn into something deedy. Lmao I also eat pineapples and you know those are rough on the outside so you have to peel it slowly and then you can devour the bittersweet inside lmao.
Oohh I also eat lasagna which is creamy on the outside and gooey in the inside.
Hmmm what else do I eat…laab which you know ground beef or ground w/e meat you like lmao..oh and sticky rice…do I need to explain sticky rice? Lmao

it take more than 6'im to choke MOH !!! J/K !! I'll reveal how big it is in the fiction then ...HAHAA
---WTF WAAAAAAAAA OMOGOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I’M SPEACHLESS!

“ …you can’t fight me …so might as well feel me …�
---mouth drops open! waaaa

“ ….9inch when tamper with , come on now …�
----wooo this line super bad…sarn what the heck you’ll be in fun fun’s 35 minute zone in no time.

“ ..her name is Minny ..� said Arisoya , coming out the restroom fully dress
---my turtle is Squirt and I don’t know if it’s a boy or a girl. I’ve had it for maybe 3-4 years now. But for the last 2 years its been living away from me. Sad =(

Holy Buddha !! That Ami!! Tik immediately goes into his car and dock himself while keeping a good eye level on the window.
---woo Ami’s not going to use just any regular eggs either. She’s going to use ostrich eggs! those are super big!

“ …the bed in the background hint it away !!..� said Soriya
“ …it to early into the lakorn , it just an attempt ..� said Harit
---these two should know best.

Ami pull down her shade and laugh like a crazy horse “ …im egging your house old man ! Tell your daughter to stop seeing my fiancée !!..�
---LMFAO YEAH THAT DOES SOUND LIKE AMI HAHAHA jk jk jk

“ …CEO of Eye Candy was shot between the leg by a popular model…of whom name begin with M and end with H at her condo last night. Witness said there was another party involve but due to the status of the other party, reporter can not reveal her name. Tik Jesadaporn Pholdee was treated at BBK Hospital …�
-----IT WAS ME YES YES I ADMIT I SHOT HIS BALLS OFF! LMFAO! HE DESERVED IT..NOW EVEN PETER WONT WANT HIM. LMAO

“ …yes you are ! girls these days can have lover before marriage ! It a trend! Look at Ken & Noi, they live together for years ! Or Janie! They are Thai star , left alone us common people.
-----WAAA JANIE? I NEVER KNEW…BUT I SUSPECTED! LMAO

“…no, let me finish. She want to commit suicide, that why I was over there.�
----PUH LEEZE MOH COMMITING SUICIDE..I DON’T THINK SO.
MOH GIRL WTH HELL YOU COMMITING SUICIDE FOR? LMAO FOR SHOOTING HIS BALLS OFF? LMAO JK JK JK I LOVE MOH TOO MUCH! =)

Every since the news about his surgery leak out to the press , all the girls in Thailand had drop him from the calendar even Moh and Ami no longer what any part of him after witness his banana got blast off with their bare eye . It was a misfortune turn good for him , yeah he lost half of what drive woman crazy but he gain …love! Yes, it crazy …he going crazy to be happy in a moment of crisis!! He love every moment Arisoya come to visit him and he secretly pay the hospital for him to stay for another week because he want to be spoon feed by her .
----I’m hoping Sarn will write his banana back in. It seems too unreal…Tik w/o his other half….waaaa!!! Lol

“ ..baby, I suppose to leave since last week but I pay the nurse to let me stay longer ..�
“…you scheming bastard ..�
----Awwww that’s super cute. Makes me think about that song Sent From Heaven by Keisha Cole

“ ..excuse me ..ahem..� said one of the nurse
---lmao NOoooOoo why now!? Hahaah

if she found out he really didn’t goes under the knife like he said …everything might blow up in his face. No, Tik…no no …just one more month all this will be over .
----ppphhhhewwwwww I knew it! Wooooo good good good it’s ALL still there lmao. I guess I missed it by a centimeter. Lmao

He cup himself and bang on it with his fist .
----WWWWWOOOOOOO TOTALLY NOT EXPECTING THAT!!!!

“ …it not what you think !!! I was trying to bang it down …�
----OOOOOOuuuuuhhhhhh lmao


“..baby , come with me …we have lots of talking to do ..� he grab her hand and drag her across the room . She gasp at the sight of peter on the floor and force to cross over his body . Tik took her to his room and slam the door shut . Lock it.
---woooo possibly another deed scene???…

He going crazy again …it burning .No ..no no..Tik. He been good so far …don’t mess it up but ahh…it ..hard.
----be bad be bad! Hahahahaha

He use his knee to gain access to those kiwi…and she confirm it once he drove in . Lair !
** imagine the rest ppl***
---mmm hmmm I knew this was coming! Lmao woooo I dislike those “imgagine the rest� once or twice ok but all the time…ugh its only a matter of time before sarn starts writing the real thing. Hahaha

“ …ah, stop rubbing my legs!! It dangerous!!� cries Peter and Tik immediate got up.
---omfg that’s funny!


Even Moh and Ami find me repulsive.
---not me lmao its ALL still there remember..hahaha

Tik swing the door open and walk in “..baby, don’t feel insecure . …� he been listening the whole time .
----hhhuhhhh gasps!

“ …if you love me , why didn’t you just tell me..�
---gasps with butterflies

He pull her head back and stare into her teary eye .
---waaa I just imagine him beating her up right there…waaaaa what an image get out get out its going to ruin sweet tik for me. Lmao its that whole “he pull her head back� I just imagine it like him grabbing her hair and hen her head pulls back and then he beats the shit out of her..waaaa!!!!

She pull the blanket over the twins and kiss them on the forehead . Then turn to her husband and said “ …alright , make it quick ! My parent is down stair …�
“ …yes !! …� he chuckle , then lift her up and carry her toward the bed . Damn it . Not the springy one again !!
**imagine the rest ppl**
DANG SHE POPED OUT TWINS AND SHE’S NOT SORE? OMG! AND AGAIN IN HER PARENTS HOUSE…DANG!
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
hahha...i was reading back ur comment moh.....and i thought ..dang ...wat was going on in my head ? haha...next sequel "3NIGHT" ...will be the girl turn ...i'll make it creamy for sure + hilarious situation
 

cecilia

Staff member
OMG. moh. you're hilarious. this is why you need to read and comment at the same like AMI and me :lol:

man, i miss 3 nights. can we do it before my enemy end ?
 

cecilia

Staff member
*sure, i won't mind reading sucking blood man eating meat :ph34r: * <--WOW. that sound kindda gross with images of devil ppl

ah, i really deprive .. i want more 3 nights :p
 

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
Ami pull down her shade and laugh like a crazy horse “ …im egging your house old man ! Tell your daughter to stop seeing my fiancée !!..�
---LMFAO YEAH THAT DOES SOUND LIKE AMI HAHAHA jk jk jk

^^ wth LMAO

omg this thread is still going on as well??? lol

ceci, did you get to read some of that my enemy yet?...help me comment!..gosh after many days..i am finally caught up to that fic..millions of things (figure of speech) running thru my mind as i read it..lol SarN is super good...

LOL SarN..badal/badan jai just barely started its gonna be a longggggggggggg wait ceci...unless of course SarN goes and spoils us like she usually does..shes good for it!!!
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
omg.. i have finally started this.. woot woot.. omg.. i read the first 3 pages kekeke.. woot woot.. smokin .. lmao.. hahaha i was like omg MOH .. keke..lol.. hahaha but its not kekek lol... haha.. i'll. continue later if i have the chance xp kekke.. iono y i didnt start earlier.. ahhhhhhh .. kekke.. i love it SARN .. xp..
 

cecilia

Staff member
Ami, i tell you, she definitely know how to torture me .. taking sweets away from me :lmao: ..
2 months, that's madness. i wanna egg your house now .. :loool: even i complain about the two nights a week airing.

argh, you just make the day last longer and the month seem to stretch out now :(

oh, my enemy definitely become my enemy, it's too dramatic for my taste. i like bittersweet revenge romance ..
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
gosh im so slow readin kekeke.. i have to stop readin this for now.. kekek i might get caught lmao.. haha n i dont ant that to happen kekeke..
 

katia

sarNie Hatchling
thanks for sharing sarn, i really enjoyed this one from beginning to the end... funny how i read this one before ' 1 night a week' thanks for the hard work
 

cecilia

Staff member
i finally print this out .. man. so many pages ..
can't believe i read that many pages -- it's like over 96 pages in Comic San font in size 7 :lol:

THIS ONE HAVE MORE PAGES than ONE NIGHT A WEEK. now, i can back and read the printout once more ..

until 3 nights come out :wub:
 
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