Series 1: My Sweet Revengeful Wife -- Complete 47 chapters

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
Same here too I was confuse on the twist as I was writing it. hehe

Just to let ya know this coming Sunday I won't be posting chapter 46 up yet. I still working on it. I think it might be the finale chapter.
 

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
Will its not Sunday yet but I decide to post chapter 46 up. I thought this chapter would be the last chapter but it seem like it was to long so I have to cut it into two chapter so 47 will be the finale chapter of this story. I will post the last chapter next week until then enjoy this chapter. :lol: This chapter might help answer some of your answer and confuse from this story where thing are at now.

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Chapter 46

Neecha walk to her room thinking what she just hears from Win conversation on the phone.​

Neecha: No wonder he been acting weir since he came home from the hospital. He’s not Tawan. If Win is here where is Tawan?

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At night Sam and Nana was in their room getting ready to go to bed.​

Nana: Now we told Neecha what happened what will happen? (sat on the bed)

Sam: Anything could happen. We still have to talk to Tawan. (look at Nana)

Nana: Do you think it will go well with Tawan?

Sam: Don’t know. We just have to wait and see.

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In Neecha and Tawan room, Neecha look at Win who was getting ready to go sleep on the couch. Win took off his shirt to wear his pajama when Neecha notice the scar on his chest. She wonders how Win got the scar. His scar look the same as Tawan scar and is even on the same place too. Win look at Neecha and notice she been staring at him for a while now.​

Win: (look at Neecha) Something on your mind?

Neecha: (blink) Uh…(look away) nothing.

Win: You had been staring at me for sometime now. If something bothering you, you can tell me.

Neecha: (nerves) I just…want to know how you got that scar.

Win: Oh, this…(pinot to the scar)

Neecha: Hum…(nod)

Win: Will…(think) I got it from a car accidents. A piece of glass from the car crash cut there.

Neecha: Oh…

Neecha wonder when she asked Tawan how did he’s that that scars on his chest, he didn’t remember but Win can remember how he got the scar.​

Win: (at the couch) Goodnight.

Neecha: Night. (look at Win from the bed)

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The next day Win left the house before Sam came downstairs to talk to him.

At the construction site Wai and his men were watching Nipporn as they wait for Win.​

Hong: (look at Wai) This time if you don’t do it the right way I’m going to kill you all.

Wai: It won’t be like last time Sir.

Hong: (turn to look at Nipporn) If you don’t do this you’ll be sorry for ever meeting me.

With that Hong left in a different.​

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Sam: Where Tawan this morning? (look at Nana)

Nana: I don’t know. (shrug) I saw Neecha walking out of the house this morning but didn’t see Tawan.

Sam: I better get to work then. I’ll talk to Tawan tonight when we come home.

Sam kisses Nana on the cheek before he went.​

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At the construction site Wai told his men went to hide and get ready as Win pull his car to the construction site. Nipporn look around him as Win walk up to him.​

Win: Why do you want to meet me here? (look at Nipporn) Isn’t this a bit odd, meeting at a place like this.

Nipporn: I don’t know how to tell you this…(pull out the gun)

Win: What with the gun? Did…you kill someone?

Nipporn: No.

Nipporn try to tell Win what going on with his eyes but Win didn’t get it. Wai and his men were hiding as they watch Nipporn and Win.​

Li: Do you think he will do it?

Wai: Shhh…let’s just watch what he going to do.

Win look at Nipporn raise the gun and point it at him.​

Win: What are you doing?

Nipporn: (look at Win) I’m sorry.

Neecha got there and saw Nipporn pointing the gun at Win. She stops the car and ran out to them.​

Neecha: Tawan. (run to them)

Nipporn and Win look at Neecha running toward them. Wai and his men saw Neecha.​

Wai: It looks like it’s going to be complicate.

Neecha got to Nipporn and Win.​

Neecha: (look at Nipporn) Tawan, what going on? Why are you pointing a gun at Win?

Nipporn: (still pointing the gun at Win) Neecha, why are you here? You shouldn’t have come.

Win: (walk to Neecha) Tawan right Neecha you shouldn’t have come.

Before Neecha can open her month, Win grabs her as hostages and pulls out a gun inside his jacket pocket and points it to the side of Neecha head.​

Neecha: Win?

Nipporn: Let her go.

Win: I don’t think so, Tawan or should I said Nipporn. (grin at Nipporn)

Neecha: Nipporn? (look at Nipporn)

Win: (look at Neecha) Oh, you don’t know that his real name.

Nipporn: Don’t listen to him, Neecha.

Wai and his men watch the scene in froth of him unfold like a tv drama.​

Li: What going on?

Xai: Yeah. (look at Wai) Are we going to shoot them all now?

Wai: Let’s just see where this is going.

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Sam walks into his office. He didn’t notice something was odd in the room as he went to sit in his office chair. Hong pop out from where he was hiding and point a gun in the back of Sam.​

Hong: Don’t movie.

Sam: Who are you? What do you want?

Hong: Have you forgotten all about me? Turn around.

Sam slowly turns around to face Hong.​

Hong: (smile) Did you miss me?

Sam: Hong? (stared at Hong) You’re not dead?

Hong: (laugh) Did believe I would be dead so easily? I’m Hong Duaysienklao! (look at Sam) You thought I was dead huh! You stole all of my achievement of a lifetime, I put into the company, and I created!

Sam: (stay calm) You didn’t created anything for the company. (stared back at Hong)

Hong: (outrage) What?

Sam: You didn’t achieve anything or created the company. (look calm) While yapping about development and growth, greed has blinded you all.

Hong: Shut your month! (point the gun in Sam face) You can act all you want but a bullet is all it takes to silence you.

Sam didn’t say anything as he looks at Hong.​

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Win: Drop your gun if you want to see her live.

Win still pointing the gun to the side of Neecha head.​

Neecha: (scare) Tawan. (look at Nipporn)

Win: Do you want to see her live or not? Throw your gun over to me.

Nipporn look at Neecha who was scare. He didn’t know what to do. If he doesn’t shoot Win, Wai and his men will shoot them all.​

Neecha: Tawan.

Win: Didn’t I tell you he not Tawan. He’s Nipporn.

Tawan: I am the real Tawan. (look at Win) You really think you can fool everyone pretend to be my twin brother. (still point the gun at Win) You’re wrong. I knew everything from the star 18 years ago at the hospital. My brother die in that car crash a few days later. I told the doctor not to tell my parents because they were going to switch us. When I was going to Win room I saw you and another person going into his room with the doctor. I knew something was up. I e-drop on what was going on and over hear everything. That why I decide to switch our name back. So you got to leave to the state and I get stay behind. You’re not the real Win. You’re really Nipporn.

Nipporn: (laugh) You really think you know everything.

Tawan saw Nipporn was letting his guard down so he took that chance and ran into Nipporn and Neecha. Tawan knock the gun in Nipporn hand away as Neecha fall to the ground as Tawan and Nipporn struggle with each other.​

Tawan: (punch Nipporn) Are you okay? (turn to look at Neecha)

Neecha: I think so. (look at Tawan) Watch out!

Tawan turn to look at Nipporn as Nipporn hit Tawan with a piece of wood. Tawan was on the ground as Neecha rush over to Tawan side.​

Neecha: Tawan. (worried)

Nipporn went to grab Neecha by her arm and pull her away from Tawan. Neecha hit Nipporn and fight him but he was to strong.​

Neecha: (hit Nipporn arm) Let me go. Err…Who are you anyway if you’re not Win or Tawan?

Nipporn: (stop walking) You want to know who I am? (look at Neecha) I tell you who I am. I’m Nipporn just like what Tawan said. (to close to Neecha) And do you want to know something else?

Neecha: (step back) What?

Nipporn: Who really behind all of this.

Neecha: Who?

Nipporn: You see when we get there.

Nipporn pull Neecha behind him to his car. At the car Wai and his men were waiting for them.​

Nipporn: Take her. (swing Neecha to Wai)

Wai: (hold Neecha) Where are we going Sir?

Nipporn: To meet Hong.

Nipporn went to the driver side as Wai make Neecha go inside the car.​

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Hong: (still holding the gun to Sam face) What are you going to do now, huh? If you want to live beg forgiveness.

Sam just looks at Hong talking away. Sam took that chance to grab the gun out of Hong hand as the two went down to the ground struggle for the gun. Hong was on the floor as Sam holds the gun to Hong head.​

Hong: (look at Sam & laugh) Go ahead and kill me. Pull the trigger. Do it! (shouted)

Sam didn’t pull the trigger; he was kind of shaking pointing the gun at Hong.​

Hong: You can’t kill me. (look at Sam) You don’t have the courage to do so. Murder is not for anyone. (laugh) If you have the guts go ahead and shoot me.

Hong slowly walk toward Sam. Sam was uneasy still pointing the gun at Hong.​

Sam: (nerves) Don’t take another step or I’ll shoot this time for real.

Hong: (laugh) You really going to shoot me? (walk closer to Sam)

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Tawan slowly came around as he awake up. He touches his neck as he feels the pain.​

Tawan: (look around & think)…Neecha!

Tawan look around and didn’t see her or Nipporn there. He ran to Neecha car and saw the key was still in the car. He got inside the car and drove off.​

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On the road to the company, Neecha was in the back with Wai and Li as the two watch her.​

Neecha: Where are you taking me?

Nipporn: (look in the view mirror) You find out soon enough.

Nipporn drove as he took out his cell phone and call Tawan.

Tawan was driving when his phone ring.​

Tawan: (answer) Hello.

Nipporn: If you want to see Neecha alive come to the company. (hung up with that)

Tawan: Hello, hello…

Tawan turn his car around and drove to the company.

Nipporn got to the company and got out of the car to take Neecha by the arm.​

Nipporn: (look at Wai) You three go around the back door to get inside.

Wai: Okay.

Wai and his men walk away. Nipporn then turn to look at Neecha.​

Nipporn: Don’t try anything stupid when we go inside.

They walk inside the company as workers greet them. They went to Sam office on the third floor. Inside Sam office, Sam was about to pull the trigger when Nipporn open the door. Sam turns to look at Nipporn and Neecha. In that moment Hong went and grab the gun out of Sam hand and point it at Sam.​

Hong: What took you to get here?

Nipporn: (push Neecha inside) Sorry. Thought it was going to be easy but she was there.

Wai and his men came into the room too.​

Sam: What going on here? (look at Nipporn) Who are those men, Tawan?

Nipporn: (look at Sam) Sorry, I’m not Tawan. (grin)

Sam: What?

Hong: You see Sam, his not Tawan but Nipporn your other son which you didn’t want and toss him away.

Sam stared at Nipporn thinking. Neecha look at Hong and notice that he is her father.​

Neecha: Dad?

Hong: (look at Neecha) Hi Neecha.

Neecha: You’re not dead?

Hong: No sweetly. This hold time it was a plan for you to believe Tawan kill me and your mom but your mom really die that night.

Neecha: Why?

Hong: Because I’m not going to let Sam take away the company. I work to hard to have everything I built taking away from me.

Sam: You didn’t want to save the company as it was going bankrupt.

Hong: Shut up. You should worry about your own problem right now. (pointing the gun at Sam) That is to explain to Nipporn why you tossed him away. (laugh)

Nipporn: (look at Sam) Yes, dad. I would like to know why you and mom didn’t want me.
 

PhoneO_5

sarNie Oldmaid
So, the Nipporn they kidnapped from the hospital is really Tawan. Then the Win at home with Neecha was really Nipporn. And, the real Win died. Correct? And the three brothers were not triplets, there were twins. But, a third child that was tossed out. Correct?

If all the above is correct, then woah, I feel bad for Neecha because all this time her father pretty much killed her mom and is killing her father in law. So sad.
 

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
So, the Nipporn they kidnapped from the hospital is really Tawan. Then the Win at home with Neecha was really Nipporn. And, the real Win died. Correct? And the three brothers were not triplets, there were twins. But, a third child that was tossed out. Correct?

If all the above is correct, then woah, I feel bad for Neecha because all this time her father pretty much killed her mom and is killing her father in law. So sad.
Yes it's correct like what you said about the real Tawan, Nipporn and Win....about the brothers are triplets or twin you just have to find out in the last chapter.

I did said in a few post back if you think you know who behind all of this you might be wrong...hehe
 

jeeja

Miss SMILES :D
aw...it's sad that this fic is ending TT_TT
i wonder why Sam n his wife threw Nipporn out???
can't wait to find out :D
 

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
Awww its Sunday and the last chapter of this story. This is the first series of the 4 story. The next series will be "My Crazy Stalker Wife" the second series.

I'm so sad that this series is coming to an end today. Here is chapter 47 the End.

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Chapter 47

Sam stared at Nipporn; he didn’t know what to say. Just then the door open and Tawan walk into the room.​

Hong: Look what we have here. You finally show up.

Tawan: (by the door) I call the police. They are going to be here any minutes now. You won’t get away with this. (walk up to them)

Hong: (swiftly point the gun to Tawan) You think by calling the police going to save you and your dad? You’re wrong.

Sam saw that Hong wasn’t paying attention to him, he was about to rush over at Hong and take the gun but Nipporn saw Sam move. He quickly points his gun at Sam.​

Nipporn: Don’t move or I’ll shoot you.

Hong look at Sam then to Tawan.​

Hong: (grin) Say good-bye, Tawan.

Hong pull the trigger, everything happened so fast.​

Neecha: No!

Tawan: (look at Neecha in horrifying) Neecha.

Neecha push Tawan away as the built hit her from the back. Tawan was on the ground as he looks up at Neecha slowly fall to her knee. Hong was shock what he have done. Tawan rush to Neecha as she about to hit the ground.​

Tawan: (hold Neecha) Neecha. (saw blood on his hand)

Neecha: (try to talk) I…I’m sor...sorry for…(try to look at Tawan)…

Tawan: Don’t talk. You’re going to be okay.

The police men came and knock down the door and came into the room. They saw Neecha lying on the floor cover in blood.​

Lt. Yon: (point the gun) Don’t move.

Hong look around to escape but there were too many police men in the room. So he grabs Nipporn as a hostage and point the gun at the police men.​

Hong: Don’t come any closer or I’ll shoot him.

Lt. Yon: Calm down. We won’t shoot. Let the hostages go.

Hong: No. Not until I’m out of this room.

Lt. Yon and his men back away so Hong can get what he want. Hong walk toward the door holding Nipporn as his hostages. Wai and his men follower behind Hong. Hong was at the door still pointing the gun at the Lt. Yon and his men. One of Lt. Yon officer was scared he might die in this shoot out and accidently fire his gun. The built hit Wai as he’s fall to the ground.​

Both Li & Xay: Boss!

Hong turn around and saw Wai got shot. Hong then stared to fire back with his gun at the police. Lt. Yon try to get tell his officers not to shoot but it was too late everyone was shooting. A built from one of the officer hit Nipporn as he limp to the ground.​

Sam: Nipporn.

Hong ran off as the police chase after him. Some of the officers caught Li and Xay as the other went after Hong.

Neecha and Nipporn were rush to the hospital. They were in the ER for hours. Nana got the call and rush to see Neecha and Nipporn. Sam looks at Tawan who was worry. He walks over to Tawan.​

Sam: (put his hand on Tawan shoulder) They going to be okay.

Tawan: (look at his father) I’m scare something might happen to Neecha or the baby.

The doctor came out from the ER as Sam and Tawan rush to the doctor.​

Tawan: Is my wife going to be okay?

DR: Right now she lost too much blood and her lungs are clog for the baby to breath. We did all we can. Now it’s up to her.

Tawan couldn’t believe what he hears.​

Tawan: (grab doctor shirt) You have to save them. I can’t lose them.

Sam: (pull Tawan away from doctor) Thank you doctor. What about my son?

DR: (face suddenly change) We did all we can to save him.

Sam couldn’t believe Nipporn die. The nurse wheel Nipporn out from the ER as Sam look at his son on the bed.​

---Flash back---

DR: We sorry we couldn’t save the third child. After the first and the second child were deliveries there was a complicated with the third child. He dies after a few minute he was born.

The doctor told Sam then doctor walk away.​

---End Flash back---

Nana got to the hospital and look at Sam and Tawan.​

Nana: What happened?

Sam just looks at his wife pitiful not knowing what to say to her first.​

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The police chase Hong in the street. Hong crash his car into the power line as the police got there. The oil was leaking before LT. Yon and his men got out from the car to go see Hong if he okay but Hong car explode.​

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---In Neecha room at hospital---

Tawan stood beside the bed looking at Neecha who still haven’t waked up yet. His hand went to hold her hand on the bed hoping she and the baby will make it through the night.​

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Sam and Nana was at the morgue as Nana lifts the white sheet to look at her son. The son she was told was dead at birth. Nana couldn’t hold her tears in as she touches Nipporn face. She cries in ache. Sam stood in the back watching his wife cry in sorrow.

Later that day Lt. Yon came to the hospital to see Sam and told him what have happened to Hong.​

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The next day the doctor came to check on Neecha to see if she was out of the danger zone. The doctor told Tawan Neecha is going to be okay and so is the baby. Tawan was so happy and relief.​

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Two week later Sam and Nana were at the grave yard where Tawan told them where he buries Win at. They also bury Nipporn beside Win. Nana was sad looking at her two sons gone from her. She touch Win tombstone as she cry in silence.​

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A week later Neecha came home from the hospital. Tawan watch over her every second. He won’t late her do anything. He’s worry something might happened to Neecha and the baby if she do stuff.

Sam and Nana decide it was best for everyone to leave Bangkok and go to the farm to take their mind off what have happened.​

---Chiang Mai @ the farm---

Tawan and his father were outside on the porch talking as Tawan explain to his father what happened 18 years ago.

Neecha was in the garden looking at the roses she plant them since she was young. Tao was happy to see her. They were talking and Tao told her, Sue was there a few months ago but left. Neecha wonder what Sue is up to lately. She hasn’t had a chance to call and talk to Sue since she went to Bangkok.

At night Neecha and Tawan was in their room getting ready to sleep.​

Neecha: Uh…mmmm

Tawan: Something troubling you. (look at Neecha at the bed)

Neecha: Tawan, I…I’m sorry about my father for causing you and your family life in all of this…

Tawan: (walk to Neecha)You don’t have to apology for that. It’s all in the past.

Neecha: (look at Tawan) I have too apology because of my father I thought you kill them. That makes me want to get revenge on you and your family.

Tawan: (chuckle) You been planning to kill me.

Neecha: (nodded) Uh huh.

Tawan: (pinch her noise) I all ready knew you want me dead. (grin)

Neecha: How?

Tawan: I over hear your conversation with Joy that day, I ask what you two what were you two talking about and remember that night you came to my room. I found the knife under the pillow the next day.

Neecha: Then why did you still marry me if you knew all of this? (look at Tawan)

Tawan: Haven’t I told you when you were at the hospital that I love you. No matter what I still love you. I love you since that day at the beach when we first met. (smile) You were so cutie acting all tough around me when I was ignoring you. (look at Neecha) Don’t you remember what happened that day?

Neecha: Umm…What happened?

Tawan: (lift his shirt up) You give me this. (point to the scar)

Neecha: (question face) I give you that scar? (point to her)

Tawan: Uh hum. You asked me that night how I got the scar. I didn’t want to tell you the truth so I lie.

Neecha: How did I give you that scar? I don’t remember doing thing to you.

Tawan: It was when I help you up from your fall. After you got up you push me to the ground. There were broking glasses in the sand and I got cut from it. My mom saw the blood on my shirt and took me to the hospital to have the cut clean up and Band-Aid. My mom thought it would be best if I go home. Since my brother came home from the state that day, he will take my place for the day.

Neecha: No wonder when you came back, you seem different and nicer to me.

Tawan: Now you know the reason behind the scar.

Tawan smile as he lean in to kiss Neecha. He turns the light off with his other hand.​

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---3 months later---

At the hospital Neecha give birth to a health baby boy. Tawan was overjoyed he’s going to be a father. Sam and Nana were happy for Tawan and Neecha. Tawan and Neecha name their baby Jun Suthikamol.

Jun was at the nursery where all the babies were as the nurse left to go do something. The door was left open. After the nurse was gone someone open the door and walk into the room. The lady looks at the baby in each bed until she came to Jun. Jun smile looking at the lady. The lady smile as she picks Jun up to hold him.​

Lady: Your so cutie. (hold Jun in her arm) Since Nipporn didn’t finish the job as I have plan for him, I just have to take you...(look at Jun)...Will you be up to the job? (smile)

The lady looks at the baby next to Jun and switch Jun name tag with the baby name tag then she look at Jun and walk out of the room with him. Outside a car was waiting for her. She went inside the car. Inside the car there was a man on the left side of the seat waiting for her.​

Man: Did anyone see you?

Lady: No.

Man: (look at Jun in the lady arm) You think he will finish the job where Nipporn have left it at.

Lady: He will. (look at the man) Haven’t I show you what I’m capable of. I got Nipporn didn’t I? (laugh) I’m the mastermind behind this whole thing from the day Nana gives birth to her sons.

Man: No wonder (grin) you’re my sweet revengeful wife.

The two laugh as the driver drove the car away from the hospital.​



The End or is it?

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Author note & Thanks:

First, I would like to take this moment to said thank you to all the readers who have read this story and supporter me. With out your support I would not have finish this story and thank you for taking your time to read this story. It been a long journey.

Second, I know there are some loos end to the story but I left it like that. I will tell you that this isn't the end of Tawan and Neecha. They will also be in "My Crazy Stalker Wife" the second series of 4 story.
 

jeeja

Miss SMILES :D
Thanks for writing such a wonderful and sweet revengeful fic :D
i'm glad they have their happily ever after XD
can't wait for "My Crazy Stalker Wife". remember 2 PM me...
 

mainhiathao

sarNie Granny
woah, neecha got shot, all the drama man, love it! nice ending by the way! this was totally a beautiful fanfic you've written dancy. :D love to hear from ur updates in ur other story of cheer n ken " my crazy stalker wife".
 

huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
omggg,
It's sad that this fanfic ended because I loved it.
Although, I love the ending.
Ohhh, they got a baby boy. He must be adorable, squeal xD
ooooh, btw, i love the ending line that man said:
Man: No wonder (grin) you’re my sweet revengeful wife. x]]]

No problem, Dancy, you know I'll always be a supporter of your fanfics ;]
Really?
yippee, more Tawan & Neecha x]
can't wait for My Crazy Stalker Wife.
you gotta update me.
 

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
Thanks for writing such a wonderful and sweet revengeful fic :D
i'm glad they have their happily ever after XD
can't wait for "My Crazy Stalker Wife". remember 2 PM me...
No problem. I almost didn't write this story if I didn't stumble upon it. I wrote this story a few years back and didn't finish it and now I'm so happy I finally finish it post it for ya to read it. Will "My Crazy Stalker Wife" won't be anytime soon. It might be next year project but when I do post it I will remember to pm you... ^_^

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woah, neecha got shot, all the drama man, love it! nice ending by the way! this was totally a beautiful fanfic you've written dancy. :D love to hear from ur updates in ur other story of cheer n ken " my crazy stalker wife".
Thanks mainhiathao for the lovey comment. Will the next project I'm working on is "Nameless Memories aka Sweet Sorrow Love" with Co-writing with: theofficialASIAN.
 

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
omggg,
It's sad that this fanfic ended because I loved it.
Although, I love the ending.
Ohhh, they got a baby boy. He must be adorable, squeal xD
ooooh, btw, i love the ending line that man said:
Man: No wonder (grin) you’re my sweet revengeful wife. x]]]

No problem, Dancy, you know I'll always be a supporter of your fanfics ;]
Really?
yippee, more Tawan & Neecha x]
can't wait for My Crazy Stalker Wife.
you gotta update me.
I know its sad that this story end. When I was posting the last chapter up I fell like a part of me is like its not complete and feel weir for some reason. I will pm you when I post "My Crazy Stalker Wife."
 

PhoneO_5

sarNie Oldmaid
Yay! They were triplets :D....Nooooo two of them died :(. I love this ff. Can't wait until the next installment of the series :D I love the way you're leading into it :D
 
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