[R] 50 Shades (New MV and Ch.21: Let's Play!)

Sorry to disappeared on you for a while. I know it would happen when TNNKK airs ..... and I was right na..... I find it hard to go back and forth between Arthit and Christian. lol

I am already in love with Athit.... but Nadech easily does that to me. He is just wonderful to watch and I was commenting on a fave scene on TNNKK thread and I thought I'd put my thoughts here since this thread is at least [R]......

So in epi.2, I don't know about you but my temp. went up a few notches watching Nadech playing that kaen. It was everything about the scence.... the way he was holding the kaen (I find his hands very attractive), the way he put his lips on it, blowing in that hole to make beautiful sound and the look on his face ---- especially his eyes while playing it. OMG. H.O.T!!!!! I think I abused the replay button on that scene. I don't think that it was because it was late at night when I was watching that scene .... It was all Nadech. (I thought about just doing a teaser for that scene but my 50th vid is up next and I already dedicated to "fifty/Christian". lol so Athit vid has to wait for now).

And when he speaks in Esan, my mind goes in spins na.... he might as well be speaking French. It's so darn HOT. Why is that? I never thought dialogues will do that to me but I think it's because it's Nadech who is speaking it.

Christian always says to Ana - "It's just a pretty face" when she comments how women react to him... but really, "Nadech does that!!!" He is a pretty face for sure but all the other things that he does is sure a turn-on.

hahaha..... That kaen scene might get me back to Christian.... thanks Nadech. lol.
 
Hello. Just returned from a sweet summer vacation a week ago and hope you can forgive me for disappearing mid-story .... but I really needed that. :)
Now I returned as one very happy girl but geez, so much to catch up. lol

Did everyone read 50 shades this summer? Do you guys still want me to continue with this adaptation for Nadech & Yaya? I don't want to drop it yet but I just wanted to see if there are anymore interest in this. Can you let me know please?

Glad to be back naka.
 

paof

“Promise me...that you will live well.” XiaoFeng
I finish part one, but I still love to read ur adaption of yaya and nadech.
 

zazoured

sarNie Juvenile
Hey Welcome back Kiki !!!! 
I have missed you !!!!.... Hope you had a great holiday !!!! I was wondering where you went too lol !!!
Listen , I have still not read the 50 shades of grey cuz I want to read your adaptation first and see what you are going to do with Marsha 's character and how she is going to be like . So from me , it is a massive YES !!!! Please continue if it is not too much problems for you and you are still interested in doing it . I personally want to read more and will be waiting for the next chapter , lol . Big Hug ! 
 

Kiachue1

FF Writer!! Love it!
Please continued it even though i have already finish all 3 books i enjoy reading ur version also na and kiki thx for coming bac haha i hope u had lots of fun!! Heehe ^_^
 

shengvang

sarNie Adult
Hey!!! Welcome back. I hope you had a great summer vacation. I'm actually still on book one due to
busy schdule, but I'll get there for sure. 5555. Do finish this one to na ja. I'm enjoying it as much
as the book.
 
Ok ka. I will continue.

One thing.... the vote for Elena was Masha but after being away, I feel like I wanna to go with Janie for Elena character. She def. can play bored trophy wife. I think it'll be spicier for Yadech version of 50 shades.

As I was picking this story back up, thinking of Nadech with Masha just turns me off (it really creeps me out) although Masha really fits Elena. Elena was... older sexy domineering woman but still this is an "adaptation" right? We can all have fun with it. Most of you know the story already so you can always give me opinions and we can have "our" Yadech version and not just mine. :)

Let me know since you voted for Masha... I can still stick with her but wanted to see if you'll be ok with Janie if I go that way.....
 

Kiachue1

FF Writer!! Love it!
Anything is fine kiki were okay with watever u put in it cuz yadechs version of 50 shades is awsome also!!
 
Chapter 20: “You are mine in everyway”


Ana woke up the next day cuddled in Christian’s arms. He had spent the entire night with her, wrapped around her like a vine. She took a deep breath and stared at his beautiful face. It’s felt almost unreal that he is sound asleep in her bed. She reached out to touch his face gently. He is such a sight to look at. She can’t believe that this perfection of a man is with her.

With a faint groan, he stirred and opened his eyes slowly. They meet her gaze.

Christian: “Good morning” he says softly and peel himself from her “ah, even in my sleep, I am drawn to you” and smiles a slow sexy smile. She noticed that he is aroused and he smirks “um….. I think we should wait until Sunday”. He then lean down and kisses her lips gently. The move surprised Ana. “Sleep well?”

Ana could only nod at him. She is speechless again by his actions.
Christian: “So did I” a surprise tone in his voice “Yes, really well”. Then he remembered something and asked “what time is it?”
Ana: “it’s 7:30”.
Christian: “SHIT!” he jumps out of bed and get ready to leave. “I have a meeting this morning at 8:00 in Khon Kaen. I am going to be late.”
Ana is amused. She never thought she would see this very controlled man looking flustered. She smirks.

Christian: “Are you smirking at me?”
Ana: “Yes”
Christian: “I don’t do late Ana. Another first, Ms. Sperbund” and he bend down to kiss her swiftly and whispers “Sunday”, his voice full of unspoken promises and he is gone.

Ana felt a smile crept up on her face. Christian Kugimiya spent the night with her. He said he never slept with anyone yet he already slept three times with her. What’s even more special is that there was no sex last night. Just cuddling. What a sweet feeling that is. It gave Ana some hope and joy for the day.
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For next 48 hours, Ana and Christian exchanged some emails about what Ana felt after Christian “punished” her. Ana was honest about her confusion, that she felt demeaned yet aroused. She also let him know that she felt happy knowing that he was happy, yet she felt guilty to feel sated after that type of sexual experience.

He was straight forward with his answers too. He asked her to open her mind and just listen to her body. Let her feelings decide instead of what the society might think of what two consenting adults do behind close doors. What took her breath away was this:
“Ana, I am grateful for your inexperience. I value it and I am only beginning to understand what it means. Simply … it means you are mine in everyway.”

Wow. He sure knows how to floor her with words.

He also sent an iPhone to her. She was going to send it back but his text message made her smile.

“iPhone for you because I need to be able to contact you at all times. Also because you are the most honest in your emails and texts”.

They also set an appointment to be at his place at 1PM on Sunday, in Pattaya.

She also had to agree to have Boy sell her mini since he won’t let her drive it again mentioning her safety. He also only want her to drive the car he got for her, the BMW.

P’Boy picked up the mini on Friday. Ana wondered what and how much P’Boy do for Christian. She wanted to ask him so many questions.
Ana: “How long have you work for Mr. Kugimiya?”
Boy: “Four years, Ms. Sperbund”
Ana wondered if Boy knows all of Christian’s secrets and she is sure that he must have signed an NDA not to talk. Ana looked nervously at Boy with questions in her mind.
Boy: As if he can read her thoughts, he said “He is a good man Ms. Sperbund”. Then he bid her farewell and drove away with her old mini.
Can she believe him?

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That night Pope came over to hang out with Mint and Ana. The door bell rang and Ana’s heart leaped… could that be…..?

To Ana’s disappointment, it was only Mark who was there to surprise Mint. They were so lovey dovey that Pope and Ana got out to go to a bar for a drink, giving the love birds some personal space. The friendship is back between Pope and Ana, the attempted kiss forgotten.

They had a drink and Pope walked Ana back to the apartment. Once he was gone, Ana checked her email…. There is an email from Christian. He sounded mad.

“Have you packed your home phone, iPhone, and MacBook? Call me or I might have to call Mark!”

Ana looked at her phone and she had 5 missed calls and a voice message.
“You need to learn to manage my expectations. When you say you’ll contact me after packing, you should do so. If not I’ll worry and it’s not an emotion that I am familiar with and I don’t tolerate it very well. Call me.”

Ana’s stomach is in knots when she dialed his number.
Christian: “Hi” he greets softly.
His greeting surprised Ana because she is expecting anger but he sounded relived.
Ana: “Hi” she greets him almost a whisper.
Christian: “I was worry about you”
Ana: “I am sorry I didn’t reply to your earlier email but I am fine”.
Christian: “How was your night?”
Ana: “We packed, hanged out with Pope and then Mark stopped by” Ana paused to see if he will react to the mention of Pope’s name but he didn’t. She continued “How about you?”
Christian: “I went to a fundraising dinner. It was so boring, I left as soon as I could”.

He sounded so sad that Ana just wanted to hold him. She just want to be with him right at the moment.
Ana: “I wish you were here” she whisper.
Christian: “Do you?” he murmurs...... Wow. That doesn’t sound like him.
Ana: “Yes” she breathe softly.
Christian: after a long pause and a small sigh, he said “I’ll see you on Sunday?”
Ana: “Yes, Sunday, in Pattaya” she promised gently. She can’t wait to see him now.
Christian: “Good night”
Ana: “Good night, Sir”
Christian was caught off guard by the way Ana addressed him. She noticed the sharp intake of breath.

Christian: “Have fun with your move tomorrow, Anastasia” his voice is soft and both of them not wanting to hang up the phone. They are just holding on listening to each other breath through the phone line.
Ana: “you hang up” she whispers. She can hear his smile though the phone.
Christian: “No, you hang up”. She can tell he is grinning now.
Ana: “I don’t want to.”
Christian: “Neither do I.”

Ana: “Were you very angry with me?”
Christian: “Yes”
Ana: “Are you still?”
Christian: “No”
Ana: “so you are not going to punish me?”
Christian: “No. I am an in-the-moment kind of guy”.
Ana: smiles “I’ve noticed.”
Christian: “You can hang up now, Ms. Sperbund.”
Ana: “Do you really want me to, Sir?”
Christian: “Go to bed, Anastasia”
Ana: “Yes, Sir” and yet, they both stay on the line.

Christian: “Do you ever think you’ll be able to do what you are told?” He sounded amused.
Ana: “Maybe. We’ll see after Sunday” and she ended the call.
She can’t stop smiling now and she can't wait to see him again.

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That’s all for today. Next: RED ROOM!!! :)
 

zazoured

sarNie Juvenile
Thanks Kiki . I have been missing Christian and Anna, I am so glad they are back. They are so cute , not wanting to hang up first like kids...lol. The red room is next ? ... Will get ready for it then 
 
Kittiya and Zazoured, Thanks for reading naka.
Yes, Christian and Ana are like kids sometimes because this is their first true love. I find it sooooo cute when I read these moments so I focused on it na.
Now I am trying to get my head around how I am going to put Nadech & Yaya in the playroom (aka the red room). Well, it's a role play (even it is sexual) and they are the king and queen of role play but just thinking about it makes me sweat. :nailbiter: :sweat: lol
 
Chapter 21: Let’s Play


Mark helped the girls move to their new condo in Sathorn neighborhood on Saturday. They were all exhausted by the evening when the doorbell rang and Ana’s face lit up with hope but it was just a delivery guy with flowers and a bottle of champagne. They were from Christian wishing them luck and joy in their new home. Ana couldn’t help but feel disappointed. She has been envious of Mark and Mint’s PDA all day. She can’t wait to see Christian tomorrow. She can’t stop thinking about him.

Sunday Morning:
An email arrived with Christian’s security codes for the parking garage and elevator code for the penthouse floor in Pattaya. P’Boy is to escort Ana there. They’ll take Charlie Tango, the helicopter and Christian trusts only P’Boy to do this for him. Christian is already in Pattaya since Friday.
…

Arrival in Pattaya:
Boy: Good afternoon, Ms. Sperbund. Mr. Kugimiya is expecting you.
Ana steps out of the elevator. Christian is in his living room, reading the Sunday paper. He rises and walks towards Ana with an amused smile on his beautiful lips. He is so beautiful that Ana’s heart skips a beat. She is literally speechless.

Christian: “Welcome back, Ms. Sperbund.” He welcomes her. “Hmm…. I like that dress.” His eyes smile with some mischief.
Ana: “Hi” she greets softly as her face started to heat up.

Christian leans in and gave Ana a gentle soft kiss on the lips.
Christian: “So Anastasia, you have a much better idea of what I am about since you were last here”.
Ana: “yes”
Christian: “and yet you’ve returned”.
Ana nods shyly and she thinks she saw a reaction in his eyes.

Christian: asks out of the blue, “Have you eaten?”
Ana: oh no. “No” she whispers.
Christian: “Are you hungry?”
Ana: “Not for food.” She honestly replied.
Christian’s eyes heat up. He leans in and whispers….
Christian: “I can’t wait to get you naked either but Dr. Watanabe will be here shortly.”

Oh, the OBGYN appointment.
Ana: “I thought I was seeing your doctor. Who is Dr. Watanabe?”
Christian: “She is the best OBGYN in all of Asia”.

Boy: “Dr. Watanabe is here, sir”.
Christian: “Show up to Ms. Sperbund’s room”
Ana blinked. Ms. Sperbund’s room?

Christian takes her hand and pulls Ana into his arms and kisses her passionately. He then held her up tight against him, his forehead against Ana’s.
Christian: “I am so glad you are here. Thank you for doing this for me” he whispers.

…

Ana met with Dr. Watanabe about an hour for a thorough examination and they also discussed about pills. She chose the mini pill and bid the good doctor farewell.

Christian: “How was that?”
Ana: “Fine, thank you.” She paused and continued with a serious face “She said I had to abstain from all sexual activity for next 4 weeks”.
Christian is shocked and can’t hide his expression on his face.
Ana couldn’t hold a straight face too long and bust out laughing.
Ana: “Gotcha!”

Christian narrowed his eyes. His nostrils flared.
Ana stopped laughing. Her blood drains from her face. Did she push too far? Is he going to punish her?

Christian: “Gotcha!” he says and smirks. He grabs her and kisses her hard. “Such a naughty girl to tease a man in need. As much as I’d like to take you here and now, you need to eat. I don’t want you passing out on me later” he murmurs against her lips.
Ana: “Is that all you want me for – my body?” she whispers.
Christian: “That and your smart mouth”…. He kisses her again and drags her to the kitchen.

Ana can’t think about food but she ate. They shared chicken salad and some wine. Ana finished her salad and Christian teases her.
Christian: “Ready already?”
Ana: “yes”
Christian’s breath hitches. He stands up and pulls her to him from the dining room chair. He held her close and looked into her eyes and asked,
Christian: “Do you want to do this?”
Ana: “I haven’t sign anything.”
Christian: “I know. I am breaking all the rules these days. I just want to be with you right now. Are you ready?”
Ana: “yes”
Christian: “Good. Come.” He takes her hand and walked towards the playroom.
…

Ana’s heart is pounding hard. This is it! She is really going to do this.

Christian opened the door to his playroom and Ana enters once more into the Red Room. Christian’s stance has changed completely…. He looks taller, stronger, harder and tougher. His eyes are heated, lustful and hypnotic.

Christian: “When you are in here, you are completely mine” he speaks each word slowly and measured. “To do with as I see fit. Do you understand?”
Ana: “yes”
Christian: “Yes, what?”
Ana: “Yes, Sir”
Christian: “Do you mean that?”
Ana: “Yes, Sir”
Christian: “Good Girl. Now lift your arms up above your head”. Slowly, he undressed Ana without taking his eyes off her. “You are biting your lip” he breaths. “You know what that does to me,” he said darkly. “Turn around”.

Ana do as she is told. He is standing behind her and Ana can feel his body heat. He takes all her hair to let all hang down her back and smelled her. “You smell so good, Anastasia,” he whispers.

Ana let a soft moan out.
Christian: “Quiet” he breathed. “Don’t make a sound”.
To Ana’s surprise, Christian stared to braid her hair.
Christian: “I like your hair braided in here” he whispers. “Turn Around”, he orders.
“When I tell you to come in here, this is how you’ll dress. Just in your panties. Understand?”
Ana: “Yes”
Christian: “Yes, what?”
Ana: “yes, sir”
Christian: “Good girl” his eyes burn into Ana’s. “When I tell you to come in here, I expect you to kneel by the door” he paused then continued. “Do it now”.

Ana got into position and kneel as she was told.
Christian: “Place your hands and forearms flat on your tights. Part your knees and look down at the floor”.
Ana do as she was directed. He walked over and inspected her position.
Christian: “Will you remember this position, Anastasia?”
Ana: “Yes, sir”
Christian: “Good. Stay here. Don’t move” and he left the room.

Ana is a ball of nerves. She didn’t know how long he is gone for… a few minutes at the most but the anticipation is killing her.
Suddenly, he is back and it calmed and excited her at the same time.
Christian: “Good girl, Anastasia. You look lovely like that. Well done! Now, stand up”.
Ana stood up, not daring to look at him.
Christian: “look at me”
Ana looked up and he is looking at her intently but his eyes have soften.
Christian: “I am going to chain you now, Anastasia. Give me your hand”.

Ana gave him her hand and he turned her palm up and swats the center with a riding cop. It happened so fast that it surprised Ana. What more astonishing is that – it didn’t hurt! It was just a slight sting.
Christian: “How does that feel?”
Ana: “ok”
Christian: “Did that hurt?”
Ana: “no”
Christian: “This is not going to hurt. Understand?”
Ana: “yes” her voice is small and uncertain.
Christian: “I mean it” he said as if he can read her mind.

Then he showed her the crop. Ana’s eyes widen. It’s the brown leather crop that she dreamed about and had told Christian about it earlier this week. Christian’s eyes are now dancing with amusement.

Christian: “We aim to please, Ms. Sperbund” he smirks. “Come” he moves her to the grid. “Put your hands above your head” and he fastens black leather cuffs above her head. Her mind is reeling. This is beyond exciting and beyond erotic. She is trusting herself with this beautiful man who had admitted to 50 shades of messed up and yet, she trusts him somehow.

He slowly walks around her. Standing in front of her, he hooked his fingers into her panties and slowly peels them down. Not taking his eyes off hers, he is kneeling in front of her, took her panties in his hand and brought them up to his nose. Ana stopped breathing. That was so hot. He then grinned wickedly and put them in his pants pocket.

Like a jungle cat, he slowly moves around her and leisurely circling the riding crop at her navel. This is the most exciting and scariest thing Ana has ever done.

He walks around Ana again and on the second round, he flicked the crop, beneath her behind - against her sex. Ana cries out in surprise and pull against the restraints. The shock runs through her and it’s the sweetest and hedonistic feeling.

Christian: “Quiet” he whispers.
He walked around her again and the crop touched the middle of her body, moving down and flicks against Ana in the same place. Her body convulses at the sweet stinging bite. He then flicks again against her nipples and Ana can’t help herself but moan.

Christian: “Does that feel good?”
Ana: “yes”
He hits Ana again on her behind.
Christian: “Yes, what?”
Ana: “yes, sir” she whimper.
He came to a stop….. then very slowly, he rained small biting licks of the crop all over and down her belly, heading south.
Ana: “Please……”
Christian: “Quiet” he orders and flicks the crop at her behind.

Ana is lost in the sea of sensation. He then ordered her to open her mouth and dragged the crop against her sex. Ana is completely seduced. Christian put the tip of the crop into her mouth….just like in her dream.
Christian: “See how you taste, baby”.
Ana put her lips around the crop. Their eyes locked. His eyes are blazing. He is in his element.

He pulled the tip from her mouth and kisses her hard, tasting her arousal from her lips.
Christian: “Oh, Anastasia, you taste mighty fine” he breathes. “Shall I make you come?”
Ana: begs softly “please….”
The crop bits her behind…
Christian: “Please, what?”
Ana: “Please, sir” she whimper.
He smiles at her, triumphant.
Christian: “With this?” He holds up the crop.
Ana: “Yes, sir”
Christian: “Are you sure?”
Ana: “Yes, please sir”.

Christian: “Close your eyes.”
Ana shut everything out. She felt the biting licks of the crop against her belly once more. Moving down, soft small licks against her clitoris, once, twice, three times, again and again….until she finally let go and came loudly.

Christian wrap his arms around Ana as her legs turn to jelly. She is mewling and whimpering as the aftershock of the orgasm consumed her. He put her down gently for a brief moment, ripped open a condom and lifts her against him.
Christian: “Wrap your legs around me, baby”.
Ana felt so weak but she did as he asked. He wrapped her legs around his hips and position himself beneath her. He trusts hard and he is deep inside. Ana cried out as she listened to his muffled moans and he trusts again and again. Hard and fast.

Ana couldn’t believe that her body is tightening again. She didn’t think she could withstand another earth shattering moment but she had no choice. She let go and came again. It’s sweet and intense. Christian follows, holding Ana hard and close as he does.

He pulls out of her, unbuckled the cuffs and they both sank to the floor. He pulls her onto his lap, cradling her, caressing her.
Christian: “Well done, baby” he murmurs. “Did that hurt?”
Ana: “no” she breathes. She is so tired.
Christian: “Did you expect it to?” he whispers as he held her close.
Ana: “yes”
Christian: “you see, most of your fear is in your head” he pauses. “Would you do it again?”
Ana thought for a moment….and replied softly,
Ana: “yes”
Christian hugs her tightly.
Christian: “Good. So would I,” he murmurs and softly kisses the top of her head. “And --- I haven’t finished with you yet!”
Holy Moses.

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So did you survived the first play in the red room? Want more??? lol


I also made a vid to go with the chapter update naka. Read the chapter first before you watch the vid.... it will make more sense.
Warning: Mature content in the vid. After all, it is about the playroom.
I hope you like it. Leave comment on the vid if you can please. It motivates me for more. hahaha
Here you go.

@zazoured - thanks for the Pattaya pic na. I used it in the vid. :)


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zazoured

sarNie Juvenile
Hahaha ! , Kittiya I agree Hard to sleep after reading this ! Fortunately , I have just read this chapter this morning ! Lol.

Very sexy chapter Kiki !!! I am glad that it was not about giving pain but pleasure and that Christian is not pushing Ana to do things that she doesn't want to do . I cannot wait to see Janie and what her character is about . Like always , your MV is just so well done , so precise in the detail , you must be taking hours to find all of this and put it together. And you are welcome for the picture lol ... Kiki , you are really giving us the grown up Yadech here ! Lol . Cannot wait for next chapter !!!!
 

mia07

Introvert
Ah... Fifty Shades. I just finished the first book and am wondering if I should continue. It's so tense.
 
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