"Forget the paperwork" LOL ! ... What a thing to say before having a first kiss !
:spicy: Man that chapter 6 was hot !
I love Ana's character, she is innocent because of lack of experience but she is daring and alert , ready to explore unknown territories. I like her smirks at him, her initiative to use his toothbrush (very sensual thing to do, really love the toothbrush bit ) was WOW , yet she blushes under his stares , unsure of who Christian is.
Lifts and Lust DO mix soooo well !!! and it was a really good example here !... Lol ! They were in a bedroom all night ,yet they have their first kiss in the elevator .
You know, despite the fact that Mr Kugimiya is a control freak and need some kind of Contract from Ana before anything can happen , which he fail at with that steamy kiss lol, the relationship seems pretty equal somehow, probably because Ana can take the pressure and she also take initiatives that challenge his controlling attitude.
KIKI !!! i LOVE IT !!!! I WANT MORE TODAY LOL !!!!!!!! :dance2:
( Ana in a daring voice after the elevator's kiss ) " Is there more where that came from ??? ..."
Umm.....umm.... Kiki ? " Where is my more so much more !" At ? Joking, joking....lol
Yep I know what u mean about using the F word cuz when I made my comment I actually used it ! I was sure it was there but later, I came back and decided to reread that chapter again and saw "forget" so I edited my post but I think you should change to the F word cuz , it makes more sense and Nadech do swear ! Lol !
It doesn't have to be too proper , I don't think , I mean everybody swear our days and the F word and Sh!t are just so commun !!!! Lol .
Waiting with sparkles in my eyes for the next update ..... By the way, I love your pictures idea to illustrate your writting, that is a really nice touch .
Kiki.....Thank You for sharing! I read the book up to chapter 7, but decided to stop there cus wants to read yours first. I'm not liking the other part of Christain.......I'm kind of scared for Ana if she go through it!! Now I know what BDSM mean!!
Damn Man !!! that was too short !!!!... :whatever: Anyhow, i m still loving it lol ! Actually what stand out the most out of this chapter to me is this " it won’t happen again. Well, ..not unless it’s premeditated ". I was like " What ? Christian ? Are you serious ???? " But i have understood that the kiss in the elevator was not a normal thing to do for him, which made him even more mysterious and desirable lol and made Ana a very special person indeed... ! Kiki , keep the good work and update soon .....i am getting obsessed with this thread lol