Poems & Quotes

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  1. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    i love reading randoms poem in web or quotes  and sometimes i love shared it  here too so i will look forward to read other people posts 
    i will satrt with this poem i found in "hello poetry" to Aiden Phelps 
    Glance behind you,
    What you may see may disturb you.

    What you once were
    isn't what you are now.

    It's not the physical appearance; the way you dress
    Not the tone of your voice,
    the change in your character – 
    But the change in your demeanor

    You've developed from a carefree soul
    to a figure you never imagine yourself being

    The lines on your face,
    developed from years of hardship;
    days in which you endured, prevailed
    fell back down, got back up again

    Weeks in which you worked day to day,
    Just to make ends meet. Months in which 
    You struggled to keep up on your feet.

    Your past self imagined this would be
    The equivalent of a cold, dark world.

    In every way, you see it's worth it.

    Worth each waking morning.

    This may not be what you wished for 
    When you were younger...

    ...It's all a part of living life. 

    We eat, we drink, we live, we die.
    Pay our debts in order to survive.

    We have to live through hardships,
    In order to make it throughout life.

  2. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    I love writing Poems. I remember i still have the packet of poems i wrote back in high school. I'll share some of them later. :) Thanks for creating this thread.
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  3. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    you are welcome :p and what a surprise i will look forwards to read yours girl update soon okkey  :clap:  :clap:
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  4. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    Here's a poem I wrote for my Kimmy fan-fiction, but i haven't posted it up yet.
    Last Rose:
    When the last rose left standing withers,
    When the last petal hanging on falls,
    That is how long my love for you lasts.
    This song/poem was written for a boy I used to have a crush on back in High School. He gave me the advice of a lifetime and it stuck with me until today. I only wished I could've gave this to him before we went our separate ways.
    True Blue:
    There are times I feel lonely and don't know what to do,
    There are times I want to tell someone, but don't know who.
    There are times I'm really happy just thinking about you,
    Want to tell you what I'm feeling, but you don't have a clue.
    But even though my love is like a shadow in the night,
    Hopefully there's a day you'll notice and make it shine bright.
    On that day everyone will truthfully see the light,
    But now all I can do is with all my strength, fight, fight, fight.
    Even though right now I'm all alone in this dark world,
    You'll always be the shining star leading me forward.
    No matter what path you'll be leading me toward,
    I'll keep believing, going, I won't be a coward.
    There are times I wonder if I will ever make it through,
    There are times I wonder if there are things I never knew.
    There are times when I don't see you're smile and it makes me blue.
    I wonder, I wonder, do you have these feelings too?
    Because I believe in what you say,
    life's about creating new paths, not finding your way.
    Because I believe no matter how far,
    life's about creating yourself, not finding who you are.
    Someday you'll see who I am inside.
  5. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    wooooooow i didn't expect that it's more beautiful than i imagined it great job girl do you still write poems ,you should, i really like it :bravo: :bravo: :thumbsup: :thumbup: 
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  6. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    Thanks. :) Yes I still write poems, just not as good as back then, because I don't write as much as before so i lost my spice in writing. :)
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  7. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    oh i see :) well if you had more poem i will be happy to read it :p 
    i hate how i always
    seem to forgot to 
    cherish every moment
    when it occurs

    i hate how i always
    seem to forgot to 
    cherish every person
    while i am loving them

    so a year later,
    when i look back 
    at those memories;
    well, that's all these
    places and people 

    they become
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  8. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    You are the whispering wind colorful in flight.
    You're eyes are worlds undiscovered.
    You're smile is the sun, brighter than daylight.
    You're aura is the glowing moon at night.
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  9. CTR

    CTR The Realist guy here period

    This is not about me but I tried putting my shoes on a single parent for a change.  No offense to anyone.  Just wanted to write an emotional piece.  Thanks.  :)
    How can you just leave?
    The kids are crying as they watch you leave with Steve
    River of tears coming down with no end no relief.
    Everyone was blindsided with your story, your deceit
    The kids cries as they see you climb into the backseat

    Brandon is 8, Kelly is 6, and Jake is four
    They ask questions in which I have no answers for
    Trying to stay positive and make sense of things as I close the door.
    Negative thoughts run through my mind, slut, tramp, whore
    But I gotta stay positive for my kids, my love, my life, my core.

    9 to 5 everyday struggling to put food on the table
    2 years pass, the kids are doing well, and their grades are stable
    Brandon just won an award, superintendent presented on Cable
    Jake and Kelly my love, my life, my two beautiful angels.
    Both are at the top of their respective class and continue to grow.

    Thanks for the love, the tears, the joy, and the heartbreak
    Thanks for the scars, for the quakes, and the life altering shakes
    Heaven smiling down, the white pure dove soaring, GOD never forsakes
    It's to late, the kids don't even want you, it was your mistakes
    As for me, I have forgiven you a long time ago, even if you're a lying snake.

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  10. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    wooow Bie why you didn't share this with us in kimmy's thread before ? it's beautiful  :spin: :spin: :heart: :heart: 
    Smile is a language of love
    Smile is a source to win hearts
    Smile is name of lovely mood
    Smile create greatness in personality
    Keep Smiling
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  11. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    thank you for sharing this it's  a sad story but it's a story we see everywhere around us 
    hope if every parent can think like that , children are a precious gift 
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  12. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    Haha Thanks. I just came up with it right when I was posting, so i still haven't shared yet. I will though. :)
    Wow. CTR you really know how to write. That was very touching and very true in life. :)
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  13. JMali

    JMali sarNie Egg

    Wow. I'm impressed with the way you describe Kimberly and that picture goes exactly with your words. I'm glad to be a koo-jin with you Bieluvr.
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  14. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    Thank you for your complements. :) I would like to see some of your work as well if you do write poems. :)
  15. 040156

    040156 sarNie Adult

    Oh man, i'm running out of likes. How many likes can you make in a day anyway? 
    I used to write poems regularly, more than 10 years ago. Somehow, about 80% is about unrequited love. I don't even know why.  :scratchhead2: .  Now my poems are just... well, contemplative? (but actually they're just really vague   :lolyup:)
    Here's a tanka which I made for a fanfic I wrote for an anime (Otome Youkai Zakuro) more or less three years ago. 
    As autumn draws near,
    the maple leaves turn crimson. 
    With soundless echoes,
    they shall all fall together
    Joining in blissful silence. 
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  16. CTR

    CTR The Realist guy here period

    Bieluvr, I'll back with a White Lotus update tonight.  This one was from my own experience.  Thanks everyone.
    The rains came down so quickly
    It was during my freshman years
    Hearing mom on the phone in tears
    I was in shocked, my feet wobbled I fell
    I wanted to shout I wanted to yell
    I wanted to tell the world how I've felt

    I wish I can say one last thing to you
    Pictures on the wall they're just in view
    I hope in heaven you'll hear it too
    Years go by but we'll still love you
    Your life lessons they still hold true.

    It was your time
    Angels came and then you went in to the light
    Sunshine days have turned into endless night
    But I know It'll be all right
    Cuz I got an angel watching over me
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  17. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    wooooow @Bieluvr, CTR, 040156,  really i'm impressed when i created this thread i never thought  i will discover the talented member in poet  in AF :bravo:  :bravo: :bravo: :bravo: :bravo: i will definitely look for more and more from you ladies please keep up updating i feel talentless in front of you  :hide:  :blush: kudos to all of you 
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  18. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    Thanks for your complements. I'm not that great. LOL.
    I feel sorry reading this. And thank you for telli9ng me about your fanfic. I can't wait. :)
  19. "peace"

    "peace" sarNie Tombstone

    What would you do
    If no one loved you

    Would you cry
    Would you sigh


    Do you care
    Do you swear

    Do you look for love
    Do you hide from love 

    Do you want it
    Do you need it

    Do you know what love means
    Real love
    Never ending love

    are you a hopeless romantic 
    romantically wanting love 

    What are the feeling of no love

    are they silent
    are they loud

    are they sharing thoughts
    are they lonely thoughts 

    do you have thoughts of joy
    do you have thoughts of nothing

    do you smile 
    do you cringe

    do you want it
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  20. Bieluvr

    Bieluvr XiaojuXiyou

    Moon shines above
    who should I love?
    Sun shines bright
    tell me what's right.
    Stars that glitter
    I need to be sure.
    Before I love someone
    what damage could be done?
    With a broken heart
    will we have to part?
    It all depends
    on our story's end.
    For now there's only fright,
    only unanswered questions in this night.
    How do you love someone fully
    when the path ahead isn't seen clearly?
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