Missunderstanding of my mom's friend

SmileBo

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile






...Misunderstanding of my mom's friend...

......Ern (Cheer) mother friend thinks that she murder her parents......
....A gruop hooling helped her....
.....The boss (Big) from the group love Ern and a girl (Kwan) from the group love Big....
...What'll she do when she fall in love with a polish (Wier) and the polish search her......
........Will her life end up with sorrow or happiness?.......


Starring:Cheer as Ern,Pin
:Wier as Warit
:Big as Bank
:Kwan as Rin

Note: With hooling i mean those people who dress only black....
 
SmileBo

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Here is ch.1.


There was two girls comming and talk with each other and looks fun.

One of the girl:Fai,will you come in?(look at the other)
Fai: No need,Ern. I have to hurry home.(Smile)
Ern: See u tomorrow then.(Wave at her friend)

When Ern go in she heard her mom was screaming.She go quick to her mom's room and saw a few men. They hold her dad and pointed the gun near his head. The man ask Ern father to give them money.I have give you said her father.Just this said the man and hold up the money and cast that.The man saw her and go to her. Her dad scream her to run but she was shock and just look at her parents.

At the way..
Fai remembred that she have forgot to take a book from Ern and go back to her.

At Erns house.
Run scream her dad to her.Shut up say the man and go to Ern and say Ern to don't be afraid.
Her dad:Run,Ern..Run!

The man shooted her dad and her mom scream and cry. The man pointed the gun at her mom.
Her mom: Don't do it,pls Mr Akarat..

The man turn and go to Ern.She was still shock so the man took her out.Ern mom was screamming to don't take Ern and the man get a sigh to his men and his men hit Erns mom.Ern run to her mother and push the man from her mother but there was so many.One man hit her and her mother come to help her and Mr Akarat push Ern mother and she fall down and hit her head and fainted.Ern run to her mother and cry.Mr Akarat look at the window when he heard step.They run out from the back side.Ern run to her father.The one who comming was her mom's friend.She scream help when she saw Ern was sitting beside her father and the gun lay beside her.All the money was pell and noise.There was more people comming and Ern heard that her mom's friend was say she kill her parent b/c of money.Now she know what they thinks and run from the house when she heard siren from polish cars.

At the night.
Ern was crying and go.She don't know where she is.There was dark and just a few of the streeth light was shining. Sudden she saw a car and show her hand to stop. The car stoped and a few people come out.When she saw there face she get afraid, they are hooling.They look at her and laugh and she cry and hold her ears.They stoped when a guy from the car said them to stop.The guy come out from the car and go near Ern.
The guy:Do u need help?
Ern don't look at the guy and look only down on the ground.There was a girl in the group.She come to Ern.
The girl:Don't you hear what he ask?(Pushed Ern)
Ern fall down on the ground and the guy look at the girl and come to help Ern up.
The guy:Do u want a lift to your home?(Help up)
Ern:I don't have home to go.(Look up)
When he saw Ern his heart beat faster and faster and then he look at his friends.
The guy:U can go live with us..(Smile)
The girl:No,Bank.We don't know who she is and what she have done.How will we do if she is a murder?(Look at the guy)
Ern look at the girl and heard the word her mom's friend say.

Flashback.
She kill her parents b/c of money.She kill her parents b/c of money..(again and again)
End flashback.

Ern:No, i don't kill them, i don't kill my parents.(run)

Enjoy na...:)
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
I like it so farr.
Sucks,why would they think that she killed her parents for money?
Sadd for her but he seems nice to help her.i'm waiting for more of this FF:)
Update Soon!
 
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dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
This story is good. Sad that her parents die. Don't know the girl name yet but she so mean to Ern.
 
SmileBo

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
awesomedua said:
I like it so farr.
Sucks,why would they think that she killed her parents for money?
Sadd for her but he seems nice to help her.i'm waiting for more of this FF:)
Update Soon!
Click to expand...
Thanks..Cool that you like it.
B/c the money that Ern father give to Akarat,he cast is on the floor so her friend mother saw that.That why they think she kill her parents.

Hope you will like the other ch too..:)
 
SmileBo

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Ch.2

Ern:No,i don't kill them,i don't kill my parents.(run)
Bank run after her and try to grep her.
Ern:Get of me,i don't kill them.(Yell)
Bank:Take easy..(Look at Ern)
Ern pushed Bank away and run.There was a car comming,she saw the car and the car stopped infront of her so she got shock and fainted.Bank grep Ern before she fall down.Bank look at the girl and said go open the car.Bank carry Ern and go to the car and his two friend look at him.
Bank:Want to sleep here?(Look at his friends)

At Bank's house.

The girl:I'll take her to my room.
Bank:No need..(He carry her to his room)

When Ern wake up she look around her and saw Bank was sitting on the sofa and reading newspaper.
Ern:Where am i?
Bank:Are u wake up?(Look up frpm newspaper).U are in my house.(Smile)
Ern heard a knock on the door and tre people come in.One girl two boys.
Ern look at them and then at Bank.
Bank:I am Bank.This is my friend.(Look at the girl) Her name is Rin and this is Dom and Dan(Ponit at the two boys).They are sibling.
Dom:And we are his friend too..(Smile)
Ern:Are u guys hooling?
Bank:Yes but not like the others.U don't have to be afraid.
Rin:What's your name?
Ern:My name is Ern.
Dan:Why are you go alone like this at the night?
Dom:It's danger for a pretty girl like you.(Smile)

Ern look at them and tell why she go like that.
Bank:So your mom friend thinks that you murder your parents?
Ern:Mm.
Dom:That was pity for you but don't worry, you can stay with us.
Bank:Is that you or me is boss here?(Look at Dom)
Ern:Thanks for help me.(Stand up to go)
Bank:You say you don't have home to go.U can stay like Dom said.
Rin:What will we do when the polish search her?
Bank:Don't think to much,Rin.


Ern dream about her parents and scream out.Bank come to look her.
Bank:It's nothing.You just dreamed.(console her)
Rin come and see her but she stopped when she saw Bank was holding Ern and go back.

At the morning.
When Ern wake up there was none.She heard a song and go the way she heard the song.When she open the door there was all there and play.When Ern saw Rin box, she go to Rin.
Ern:Can u pls learn me?
Rin:Have you try it before?
Ern:No,if you learn me this will be my first time.(Smile)
Rin:Ok,come here and do like this.

Rin learn how to box to Ern.B/c is a first time for Ern so she got scar.The tre guys look at them.
Bank:Stop!Ern,you learn first and then you can box with Rin.Come,we have to get the plaster for you.(Took Ern's hand)
Rin look at Bank when he get plaster to Ern.
Dan:Are you jealous?(Smile)
Rin:Want a scar?(Fake a smile)
Dom:Come here,brother.(Look at Dan)

Ern and Bank go to market to get closth for Ern and Ern stopped when she saw her pic on tv.
 
SmileBo

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Ch.3

At Market.

Ern and Bank go to market to get closth for Ern and Ern stopped when she saw her pic on tv.
Ern:Bank,we have to go.
Bank:Why,don't u like the clotshed?
Ern:Look at the tv.(She hide her behind Bank)
Bank:Holy shit, we have to change your style and face.(took Ern to the car)You stay here,i'll go take some closth and make up for you.
Bank come back and give the clotsh to her.
Ern:Black!
When she have take the closth, Now u look like me and my friend..It fit you said Bank.
Ern:Do i have to wear like this.(Pointed at herself)Like a hooling.(mumbled)
Bank:Now none can notice you.We go and buy some closth for you,seem like you don't have any..(Laugh)
Ern:Sure.(Fake a smile)

They buy closth and go eat.Suddenly Ern saw Fai (Her friend) and run after her. After a few minute she doesn't saw Fai longer.She look around her and saw Fai sawdow at the mirror and run after Fai.After her a woman scream *My bag,my bag* but she don't care and run,somone collide her and she fall down.She look up and a man grep her.
Ern:Get of me!(Yell)
The man:If you give me the woman's bag.
Ern:Which bag?
She try to get of and run but the man run after her and pull her.They fall down on each other and the man in accident kiss her on her cheek. They look at each other.
Ern:I'm not a thief.
The man:Why are you run then?
Ern:I...i..It's not your problem.
The man:So you don't have an answer for me..Give me the bag.
In that moment they heard a woman say thanks to a boy b/c she get her bag back.They look at the way.
Ern:Can you pls get off of me?(Look at the man)
The man stand up and don't know what to do.
Ern:Say sorry,pls.
The man:Sorry.(Shy and smile)
Ern fake a smile at him, step on his fot and run.She turn back and yell that for kissing me.The man look around and all people look and him.He smile and go from there.
The man:What a girl, yelling like that.(Mumbled)

When he was at his car the phone call.He keep it and answer.It was from his boss.

At polish station.
Boss:You know,i want you to saerch the girl who try to murder her parents b/c money.I want you to look everything about the family.It that ok,Warit?
Warit:Of course.

After meeting with his boss he go to his car.Try to murder their own parents b/cof money said to hiself.When he as at his home he saw his mother was talking with someone.
His mom:Are you home?Come here and meet Duang.(When she saw him)
Duang:Are you tired,Warit?(Smile)
Warit:Who's she?(Look at his mom)
Mom:Don't you remember?This is Duang,your father friend's doughter.
Warit:Ohh,Duang.Sorry that i don't remember you,you looks prettier now.
Duang:It's that true?(Smile)
Warit:Talk with my mother,i will take a shower.(Go)
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
love it:)
who's "That Guy"....
i wonderrr.lmao.write more soon!
 
SmileBo

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Ch.4

Warit:Talk with my mother,i will go and take a shower.(Go)

At Bank's house.
Bank:Ern,you have to change your name.
Ern:Why?(woder)
Bank:They are saerch you on the tv.If someone ask your name,what will you do?
Ern:Oh,yes but do you have a name for me?
Bank:Let see..mmm..How is Pin?
Ern:pin?It's cool.
Bank:From now on your name is Pin then.(Smile)
Ern:I'll go andtake a walk.(Go)

Ern go at the walkside and think about the news she saw on the tv. The news about her mother was laying in the hospital. She want to go visit her mother but don't know how. Suddenly a car drive beside her and there was water after the regn last night,the water splash on her and the car didn't stopp.She saerch a stone and cast to the car, in that moment stopped the car and the stone hit the car mirror.A man come out from the car.
The man:What have you done?(Yell and look at Ern)Oh.It's you.
Ern:You again?
The man:Why did you cast the stone to my car?
Ern:Why did you stopp the car then?Look my closth is all wet now.
A girl come out from the car.
The girl:Warit,just take her to polish station.
Ern:polish!(Scream)
Warit:Fallow me to the polish station.
Ern:Oh,so your name is Warit.It's a populer name you know.(Don't know what to do b/c of the polish station)
Warit:Don't change subject.(Fake a smile)Thanks for telling me,Duang.Fallow me.(Look at Ern)
Ern:Why?That's not my fualt that your mirror is broken.
Warit:What's your name?
Ern:Why sould i tall you.(wisepered)
Warit:Just say,don't think too much.I want to know your name b/c i have to write that you cast stone to my car to the polish.
Ern:My name is Er..(Stopped)
Duang:Can you pls say it quick,we don't have time.Do you know that we'll go eat dinner??
Ern:No,how can i know that you two will go eat dinner when i am not your friend.(She saw Warit starr at her) Oh,my name is Pin.
Warit:Lastname?
Ern:Lastname!ahh,have a good dinner.(Pushed Warit and run)
Warit fall down on Duang b/c she was standing behind him.
Warit:Sorry.(Stand up)
Duang:It's ok.
Warit:That girl!(Look at Ern as she run and smile)

Ern go and visit her mother at hospital.
Ern:Mom,can you hear me?Pls wake up.(Cry)
A doctor come in.
Doctor:Who are you?(Look at Ern)
Ern:I'm a friend of her dougther.How about her?(Look at her mother)
Doctor:She is not wakeup yet and we are not sure is she will be ok when she wake up.
Ern:What do you mean?
Doctor:You may know that she fall down and hit he head so we are not sure if she can talk when she wake up.
Ern:pls,help her as much as you can.(Cry and look at her mother)

When she come homeshe didn't talkk with anyone and go direkt to her room.When Bank come in she was thinking about her mother and cry.
Bank:Are you crying?Is something happen with your mother?
Ern:My mother isn'twakeup yet and....(Stopped and cry hard)
Bank:And what?
Ern:And they are not sure if she can talk when she wake up.(Hold him)
Bank:Don't think too much,Ern.Maybe she can talk,who knows.(Hold Ern to his arm)
In that moment Rin come and saw Bank was holding Ern and Bank turn back and saw Rin.
Bank:What do you want?
Rin:You guys can come eat now.(Look at Ern)

In the morning.
When Ern wake up she go to the room there they have sport.Ern box and thinks about her mother.When Bank wake up he go and see if Ern wake up yet.When he doesn't see Ern he go to the sport room.Ern doesn't know that Bank was comming. When she turn her head and saw Bank was standing there and hit Bank on the face accidently.Bank fall down.
Ern:Oh,sorry.I don't mean to do that.Is that hurt?(Go and see)
Bank:My eye!(Covering his eye)
Ern:Let me see.
She go near him face to see is someting happen.They two meet face and Rin,Dom and Dan come see it.
Dom:What are you guy doing?
Ern:I accidently hit Bank,Right Bank?
Bank:Yahh,yahh.(Look at Ern and smile)
Rin got angry and said Ern to box with her.When they box Rin box hard to Ern and Ern fall down.Bank come and stopped them.

At lunch.
Bank give food to Ern and the two brither look at Rin and saw that Rin was sad.
Dan:Here,i know you like chicken.
Rin:Thanks.
Bank:Who's say that she like chicken,she like pasta.(Look at Dan and give pasta to Rin)
Ern and the two brother look at each other and smile.
After they have ate ask Ern to Dom and Dan if Rin and Bank was falling for each other.They are just friend said Dom.
Ern:Why he seem so jealous when Dan give chicken to Rin then.(Mumbled)

Ern:Bank'can you go and visit my mother at the hospital?
Bank:Why not?(Smile)
Ern:Thanks.If she is wake up can you pls tell her that i miss her and will go visit her soon.
Bank:I will.(Go)

At hospital.
Bank go and look at Ern mother.But she isn't wake up yet so he put the flowers Ern buy to her mother and he heard step at the door and before he get hide the man come and saw him.
The man:Who are you and what are you doing here?
Bank:I...i..Who are you?
The man:I'm Warit and polish that look this woman.
Bank:polish!!(Shouted)
Bank was about to run when Warit push him down and he try to get free and they beat with each other.

At Bank's house.
Rin phone call.Rin take it and saw the number was unknow.
Rin:Hello!
From the phone:Hi,i'm Warit.Are you Bank sister?
Rin:No,i'm his friend.
Warit:Ok,your friend Bank is in the polish station.
Rin:What?!
The brother look at Rin.
Warit:We grep him b/c he go at Dao's (Ern mother)room and doesn't say what he doing there.
Rin:Thanks for telling us.We will be right there.
Dan:Who's that?
Rin:Bank is on the polish station.
Dom and Dan:What!!(Same time)
 
mainhiathao

mainhiathao

sarNie Granny
here yah go a poster of cheer n weir, i couldn't find any pix of big, so i just did a poster with cheer n weir.
:D

poster:



ban:

 
SmileBo

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Ch.5

Dom adn Dan:What!!(Same time)

At police station.
Rin:Why don't you say what you doing there?
Warit:You are his friend,right?
Rin:Yes,my name is Rin.
Warit:If he don't talk he have to stay till he talk.
Rin:In the jail?
Warit:Yes.
Dom:Tell them what you are doing there.(He stopped when he saw Bank starr at him)
That call on Warit phone.
Warit:Hello,oh Duang.What's wrong?
Rin:Oh yes.The phone.I know now what i have to do to get him off.(Look at her friends)
Dan:How?
Warit:I have to go out.Can u pls look at him.(At a police)
Police:Yes.

At shopping.
The phone call on Ern.Ern look at the phone.
Ern:Hello,Rin.
What's wrong with him?Grep by the police?I will be right there.(Hung up)Dao is my mother.

At police station.
Ern:Why didn't you talk the true?
Bank:Can you guy wait outside?(Look at his friends)B/c i don't want you to get in the jail.
Ern:And you will be here insteand for me?
Bank:It's okfor me.(Smile)
Ern:You help me enough now.That is my turn to help you.(Go)
Bank:Ern,what will you do?Don't do stupid.(Yell)
Ern:Can you pls take him out?(At the police)
Police:If he say what he doing there at Dao's room.
Ern:I'll tell you.

After a few minute the police come and get off Bank.
Ern:Thank you very much.
Police:No problem.Have a good day.(Smile)
Ern:You too.
When Ern and Bank come out Rin run and hug Bank.
Rin:I was so worry about you,i tought you don't come out to day.
Dom:How did you come out?
Bank:What you go and do in the police room?(Look at Ern)
Dan:Do?!(Yell)
Ern:What are you guy thinking,i am not that kind of girl.Ijust go and say that i wasafriend of Ern and want to know about how my mother is.That why Bank was there.
Dan:Like that?
Ern:Mmm.
Bank:Do he ask your name?
Ern:Of course.I have something to buy.See you guys at home.
Bank:Bye!Be care for.
Ern:I will,Bye Rin.

At market.
Ern go and look at the vase.She saw Warit and Duang and Warit saw her and wave at her.They was on other side and she saw Warit was picking the phone.It's was from the police.
Warit:Hello!
Police:You don't need to come back.
Warit:Why?
Police:Someone have come and take out that guy.
Warit:Who?
Police:A friend of Dao's doughter friend.
Warit:What her/him name?
Police:Her name is Pin Ployjon.
Warit:Closth?(Look at Ern's way)
Police:All black.
Warit:Thanks,it was you,Pin.(When he look at Ern's way Ern wasn't there anymore)
Duang:What are you looking?(When she saw Warit was looking around)
Warit:Nothing.We go.

Warit look around and saerch Ern when they go.Duang said Warit to come faster and when she turn back she bumped with someone.
Duang:Are you blinde?(Look at the one she bumped with)
The girl:Oh,my vase.Why are you blame me the one who was fault is you.(Look up and saw Warit)
Warit:pin Ployjon.(Fake a smile)
Ern:You!How do you know my name?
Warit:You have to come with me to the police station.
Ern:Why?
Warit:You are a friend of Ern Jarujinda,right?(Note:Jarijinda is her lastname)
Ern:Yes.How do you know that?
Warit:And you are the one who take Bank from the jail,am i right?
Ern:How do you know about that stuff?
Duang:He is a police.
Ern:police?(Look at Warit)
Warit:Yes,girl.(Smile)

Hope you guy like this.:)
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
omg.it's intersting..
errrg;i hope nothing happens to Ern.
awhhh;Bank is so nicee,i'm falling for him<3
lmao.update soon,i'll be waiting for the next update.
 
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