Forever Love (COMPLETED)

huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
i read the preview...
omgg, he cant marry Dao. i...hate her!
awww, he misunderstands. cant wait.
poor Mesaya was fired :/ blah, disliking dao
but loving the fanfic :]
 

lakornsrok

sarNie Adult
Chapter 17 of Forever Love
Tun calls Dao
Dao: Hello P'Tun?
Tun: DAO! I wanna see you now!
Dao: How come you sound so mad?
Tun: Let's meet!
Dao: Where?
Tun: At the Yum restaurant
Dao: Ok now?
Tun: Yes! Go now! See you!Bye!
Tun hangs up and drive his car to Yum restaurant. Dao was already over there. Tun walks to Dao and sits down.
Dao: Hi Tun. Why are u in a rush?
Tun: I want to talk about the marriage
Dao: so u heard about it too?
Tun: My mom just told me now
Dao: That's good then so u will be ready too right?
Tun: Dao, you and I are friends. I can't marry you!
Dao: Why? You are not my friend. You are someone that I loved since little
Tun: What?
Dao: I liked you since we were kids!
Tun: Dao! I can't believe this but I really can't marry you
Dao: Why? Do you still have wan in your heart?
Tun: No I love someone now and it can never change
Dao: who do you love? Tell me!
Dao starts crying. Tun gets up from his chair.
Tun: I really can't marry you because I already loved someone
Dao: Who is it Tun?
Tun: I love Mesaya!
Dao: What? You're lying right? You told me you don't like her because she is a heartless girl!
Tun: But now I love her and nothing can change it!
Tun walks and Dao runs to Tun. She holds Tun's waist.
Dao: Please Tun! You can't do this to me!!I love you!
Tun moves Dao's hand and walks away. Dao falls to the ground crying. Dao goes to the wine bar. She drinks and is crying.
Dao: Mesaya! I HATE YOU! IT's ALL YOUR FAULT that TUN Won't MARRY ME!
San sits next to Dao.
San: Would you like revenge?
Dao: I LOVE REVENGE!Who are u?
San: A guy that will help u revenge!
Dao: GO away! I love Tun! Why won't he love me back?
Dao cries and drink more wine. Dao faints and San takes her. The next morning when Dao wakes up, she was sleeping on the bed. She gets up. Dao was wearing her undershirt and shorts. She sees San coming out of the restroom. Dao is surprised.
Dao: What are you doing?WHAt? What did you do to me???
San: I kinda help a sweet pretty girl who wanted revenge
Dao screams
Dao: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
She throws the pillow at San.
Dao: Get out!
San: Calm down pretty girl
Dao slaps San.
Dao: Don't touch me!
San pushes Dao to the bed.
Dao: What are you doing?
San: Listen!I can help you get Tun back
Dao: I don't need your help! I can do it myself!
San: Really? How are you going to separate both of them when they fall in love?
Dao: I.......I.......
San: I can help you
San gets up
Dao: Tun is going to confess to Mesaya soon
San: I can make him come back to you just the snap of my fingers
Dao: Should I trust you?
San: Depends on you, if you like to trust me or not. But Tun sure will come to you. Watch my show!Tun will definitely marry you
Dao: Hopefully everything you say is true
San walks out. Dao is angry.
Dao: Don't think that I will forgive you!
The next day Tun wanted to tell Mesaya his feelings. He went to the hotel to meet Mesaya. He bought her chocolates and roses. Mesaya was cleaning and Tun saw her.
Tun: Mesaya!
Mesaya saw him
Mesaya: What do u want?
Tun: I want to tell you that
Mesaya's phone rings
Mesaya: Sorry..excuse me...
She answers her phone
Mesaya: Hello? San? What?
She dropped her phone and ran. Tun picked up her phone and listened.
Voice: Help me Mesaya! Please don't kill me!
Tun:What?
Tun closes the phone and chases after Mesaya. Mesaya gets in her car and drives. Tun also gets in his car and drives. Mesaya looks for her phone.
Mesaya: Where is my phone?
She remembered that she dropped it. Mesaya gets to the park and gets out of her car. She runs and sees San. It looks like he got hit because he was bleeding.
Mesaya: Are you ok?
San: You really came Mesaya!
Mesay: What happened?
Tun follows Mesaya and hides behind a tree. San saw Tun. All of a sudden San hugs Mesaya.
Mesaya: What are you doing?
San: I like you Mesaya!
Tun is shocked.
Mesaya: I....I..like you too...
Tun is sad and walks away to his car and drove off
Mesaya: but I only like you as a friend
San: Why? Do you like someone else?
Mesaya: N.....No...Let's go. I'll drop you off at your house
San: ok
Mesaya helps him up and takes him to her car.
San: Just drop me off at the Magnificent hotel
Mesaya: Ok
they get to Magnificent hotel and San runs to his room. He washes his self and is happy that his plan worked.
San: HAHAH!!TUN!!You must hurt like fire have burned you huh?
San wipes the fake blood off him
San: Tun I will never let you get what u WANT!
Tun in his car:
Tun: How can I be so stupid? She doesn't even like me. I can't believe that she will like San too.
Tun goes back to Magnificent hotel and sees Mesaya. He grabs her hand.
Mesaya: Hey!LEt go Of mY HAND!
Tun lets go of her hand
Tun: here
tun gets her phone from his pocket and gives it to Mesaya.
Mesaya: You have my phone?
Tun: You dropped it
Mesaya: TH.....Thank you, did you want to tell me something?
Tun: there's nothing to tell anymore
Tun walks back to the pool
Mesaya: How weird
She goes back to work
Tun calls Dao.
Tun: Dao? I want to talk. Let's meet at my house tonight!
Dao: Really P'TUN??You're not mad at me?
Tun: Why Would I? See u!
Dao: Ok P'Tun, see YOU!
Mesaya worked until it was time for her to get off work. She left home. Tun got off work and drove home. Dao was talking with Mrs. Thanapol.
Dao: Tun doesn't want to marry me. He said he had someone else!
Mrs. T: What? Did he really said that?
Tun walked in
Mrs. T: Tun, why? Why won't you marry Dao?
Dao: He likes a worker at his workplace
Mrs. T: Really? Who is it?
Dao: A girl name Mesaya! A LOW CLASS!
Tun: Don't say That DAO!
Mrs. T: IS that true TUN?U like a low class girl?
Tun: yes mom
Mrs. T: How can you?
Tun: But I decided to marry Dao as soon as possible
Dao and Mrs. T: REALLY?
Dao: You're not lying right?
Tun: Why would I lie? I'm going to marry you Dao
Mrs. T: I'm so happy for both of u
Dao hugs Tun
Dao: I'm so happy TUN!
Tun: I am too
He goes to his room
Tun: I'm sorry mom and Dao, I'm tired. I'm going to go rest.
Dao: Don't worry about it Tun. I will plan our wedding
Mrs. T: Yes go rest Tun. We'll plan it and get it ready
Tun sits on his bed thinking
Tun in his mind: Is this really the end? There is no chance between Mesaya and I?
He goes to sleep. The Next day tun gets up and gets ready to go to work. He walks downstairs.
Mrs. T: Hey Tun! Dao And I have found the date for both of your wedding
Tun: WHAT?
Mrs. T: Are you too happy son?
Tun: W.....When is it?
Mrs. T: June 18
Tun: What? Why so soon?
Mrs. T: That's right, only 4 more days.THen it's your wedding
Tun: I'm not even ready!
Mrs. T: What?
Tun: I mean I don't even know where the wedding is taking place or what I'm going to wear
Mrs. T: Don't worry. That's really easy because it's all set for u
Tun: all set?
Mrs. T: Yep, Dao and I said the wedding will be at our hotel and Dao already picked the clothes for u
Tun: Really? Like you guys planned the whole night?
Mrs. T: Yeah we did and Dao just left
Tun: You guys must be EXCITED!
Mrs. T: Of course we ARE!
Tun quickly gets in his car and goes to Magnificent Hotel. He gets out and sees Mesaya. He ignores her and goes into the hotel and walks outside to the pool.Mesaya goes to Tun.
Mesaya: IS there something bothering you?
Tun: Why do you care?
Mesaya: I just want to ask you about Wan
Tun: What about her?
Mesaya: Are u back with her?
Tun: I..............
Dao: Tun!!!
Dao runs to Tun. Dao sees Mesaya. Dao hugs Tun and kisses him on the cheeks. Dao: Hi TUN! Your mom told me to come so you can see my Wedding dress
Mesaya: What? Wedding?
Dao: Yes Tun and I are marrying
Mesaya: So what u wanted to tell me was that you're marrying?
Tun: R.......Right I wanted to tell you that I'm going to marry Dao
Mesaya: Oh Congratulations to both of you!
Dao: Thank u very much! We both will love eachother
Mesaya walks away and cry. But Tun and Dao doesn't know that she's crying because her tears are coming and she doesn't wipe them. Then she hides behind a bush crying.
Mesaya: I should be HAPPY!
She wipes her tears. Dao drags Tun.
Dao: Let's go look at my wedding dress Tun!
He lets go of Dao's hand.
Tun: Sorry I have to work!
Tun walks back to the pool
Dao: Tun! TUN!
Tun runs and hit the wall with his fist.
Tun: Why?
Tun went to see his dad in the office.
Mr. T: Hey Tun!
Tun: Hi dad! I want some help
Mr. T: What is it?
Tun: I don't want to marry Dao
Mr. T: you already told your mom and Dao's parents already know that u were going to marry her
Tun: dad you can change it. I don't have any feelings for Dao. I love Mesaya now.
Mr. T: what? You love Mesaya, the girl that works for our hotel?
Tun: yes dad
Mr. T: Tun the only one that can help you is you.
Tun: me?
Mr. T: yeah you have the right to do it. If you love her tell her so she knows
Tun: what if she loves someone else?
Mr. T: If she loves someone else then let her go and let fate decide. If you both are meant to be then no matter what you guys will never separate
Tun: Kap pho. I will follow your words
Mr. T: Good then. I agree with you everything. When you marry, you won't be a worker anymore but a manager like me too because there are too many that I can't handle all of it
Tun: PHO! I don't want to be a manager
Mr. T: You can go out now. Get ready for your wedding
Tun gets out. Mesaya sees Tun. She walks away from him.
Tun: Mesaya
Mesaya: I'm happy that you're engaging
Tun: T...Thank you
Mesaya keeps walking.
Tun to his self: Tun you have to do this! Fate will decide if you both are meant to be together!
Days of the engagement was getting closer and closer. Just 1 more day then it's the wedding. Dao sent invitations to people including people that works in the hotel. She purposely gave one to Mesaya. Dao asks the employee at the counter where Mesaya is. Dao goes to room 238. Tun sees Dao and follows her. Dao knocks on room 238 and Mesaya opens the door.
Mesaya: Sorry but......Dao
Dao: It's just me
Mesaya: Why are you here?
Dao: I just wanted to invite you to Tun and my wedding
Mesaya: Why would you invite me?
Dao: Because you are the one that Tun l.........
Tun opens the door
Tun: It's me!!
Dao: Tun, what are you doing here?
Tun: Dao! Don't cause a problem or I won't marry you!
Dao: Ok P'Tun... Sorry I just wanted to tell Mesaya that you l......
Tun: Stop it right now!Dao!
Dao: Mesaya! I want to tell u that Tun l...............
Tun grabs Dao and kisses her in front of Mesaya. Mesaya is confused.
Mesaya: What are u trying to say Dao?
Dao: I wanna tell u that
Dao looks at Tun
Dao: That Tun loves ME!!
Tun: That's true! I love Dao that's why I'm marrying her
Dao gives the invitation to Mesaya.
Dao: here
Tun: You should come to our wedding too
Mesaya: Maybe I can't because I have to work
Tun: Of course you can because every worker in this hotel is to help
and attend
Mesaya felted like she wanted to cry, but held back her tears.
Mesaya: Really? Then I guess I'll be there
Dao: I'm so tired
Tun: I'll drop you off at home
Dao: Ok let's go hun
Dao holds Tun and they both walk out. When they left Mesaya starts to cry and she lies on the bed. Tun and Dao gets outside.
Tun: Let go!
Dao: What?
Tun: I say LET GO OF MY HAND!
Dao: Huh? Aren't u taking me home?
Tun: I don't have time. Sorry!
He walks away
Dao: Tun! TUN! AHHHH!!Tun u wil be mines tomorrow
Dao gets a phone call from San.
Dao: Hello?
San: Hey!
Dao: Why do you call me?
San: I already did u a favor
Dao: What favor?
San: I made Tun come back to u already
Dao: Oh don't worry. Where are u?
San: At the hotel
Dao: I'll come see you now. What room?
San: 204
Dao quickly walks to room 204 and knocks on the door.
San: Wow, that fast?
Dao: What kind of favor do you want?Money?
San: I'm not a beggar and I don't need money
San pulls Dao and starts kissing her.
Dao: Hey Stop!
San: This is my favor!
Dao: Of course, I mean tomorrow I'm marrying Tun already
San: Then let this be the last night of you and me before you marry Tun
San kisses Dao. Mesaya stops crying and gets out of room 238.She sees her dad. Mesaya runs but he sees her.
Mesaya's dad: Mesaya wait!
He gets to her and stop her
Mesaya: Get out of my way!
Md: I just want to talk to u for a bit
Mesaya: How did u know I was here?
Md: easy thing! All I did was ask where you are and they told me
Mesaya: So u followed me?
Md: Something like that
Mesaya: Why are you here?
Mesaya's dad pretends to cry.
Md: I really need money or they are going to be after me! Please give me money!
Mesaya: NO! I will never give you money
Tun walks and them both
Mesaya's dad: But I'm your father!
Tun: huh? Father?
Mesaya: Father? You abandoned me when mom died!
Md: I did that for a reason! Give me money now!
Mesaya: NO! Don't think that I will give money to u because I won't!
Mesaya dad cries
Md: You have to give it to me or they will kill me please!
Mesaya: Stop your lying! Every time you come, you ask me for money to gamble like last time you lied to that guy!
Md: Now I'm not Lying! If you don't have money today, then I'll come tomorrow!
Mesaya: Don't because there is a wedding here tomorrow and I'm going to attend it!
Md: Ok then after tomorrow then!
He walks away. Mesaya cries.
Mesaya: Why?
Mesaya walks back to the hotel. Tun comes out.
Tun: that guy is her father? So she told me the truth!
Tun flashbacked to when Mesaya told Tun that he got tricked.
Mesaya: He lied to you
Tun: what?
Mesaya: He lied about his wife dying
Tun: how do u know?
Out of his flashback:
Tun: i've been tricked!?
It was time for Mesaya to leave work. She drives home and goes to her room. Mesaya cries and look at the invitation. She opens the envelope and looks at the card. She reads.
Mesaya: You are invited to Tun Thanapol and Dao's wedding
On Friday June 18
Time: 4:00 p.m – 10:00 p.m
Location: Magnificent hotel
In pEn- please wear something NICE!
– Dao Usamanee
Mesaya looks to the left side of the card. There was a picture of Dao and tun smiling wearing their wedding clothes. Mesaya puts the invitation down and opens her closet. She looks at her blue ruffle dress.
Mesaya: I will come and give blessings to u Tun!

At the Casino: Mesaya's dad gets hit by some guys.
Man: Stop!
Md: Please I will give money to u tomorrow
man: You think I will believe u? U say that every time!
Md: My daughter won't give me money this time!She says she is going to attend a wedding tomorrow!
Man: You have to get me the money!
Md: I will....but not today..........
man: Hit HIM!
The guys hit Mesaya's dad.
Md: Please!
Man: Stop! Will u get the money tomorrow?
Md: uhh... I will try to get it from my daughter
man: Tell us who your daughter is!
Md: Her name is Mesaya!
Man: Mesaya?! Do u have a picture of her?
Md: yes
He takes out a pic of Mesaya and shows it to the man.
Man: This girl is your daughter?
Md: yes
Man: Don't worry I will help u get the money
Md: Don't do anything to My daughter PLEASE!!
man: Don't Worry!!

At Tun's house:
Tun is in his room.
Tun: Tomorrow is my wedding! What should I do? Hope everything is going to be alright! I will get to see Mesaya for the last time?


To BE continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PREVIEW: They are getting ready for the wedding. Dao leaves San's room to get ready. Mesaya goes to the hotel with Fah to help out wearing her dress. Tun sees Mesaya. Tun kisses Mesaya on the lips.
 

lakornsrok

sarNie Adult
IMaa sorry readerss..Been Soo busy latelyy..OOPs.s.haha..Enjoyy!!


Chapter 19 Of Forever Love
Tun: If u tell me that u like me, I will not marry Dao,just one word and I'll cancel this marriage
Mesaya keeps quiet. Tun kisses her on the lips.
Mesaya in her mind: Should I tell him?
Mesaya: I............ I....... I Don't LIKE U!!!!
Tun: ok
Tun walks away. Mesaya starts to cry and she calls Fah.
Fah: Mesaya, how was it?
Mesaya in a crying voice: Fah, let's go home
Fah: Are u ok?OK I'll come
There was a big van parked in front of Mesaya. A guy comes out.
Guy: Are u Mesaya?
Mesaya: yes I am. Who are u?
Guy: You'll have to go with us!
Mesaya: I don't know u guys!
The guys hold Mesaya and pulls her to the van. Mesaya kicks them and run.
Mesaya: Help ME!AHHH!!
Fah on the phone: Mesaya, are u ok?? Mesaya!
The guys hit Mesaya in the stomach. Her phone drops to the ground and the guys carries her to the van. Fah sees Tun looking sad. She runs to Tun.
Fah: Tun! What happened? How was ur talk?
Tun: She told me she doesn't like me
Fah: what? Mesaya! Mesaya! She Got KIDnappED!
Tun: WHAT??!!
Fah: SHE got kidnapped, I just called her now and she's in trouble
Tun runs outside and sees the van take off. Tun gets in his car. Dao sees him.
Dao: P' Tun, where are u going? P'Tun!
Tun drives chasing the van. Fah sees Mesaya's phone. She picks it up. Tun calls Mesaya. Fah answers.
Fah: Hello?
Tun: Mesaya??
Fah:Tun, Mesaya dropped her phone. Please help her.
Tun: Don't worry Fah. Give me your number so I can call u when I get to her
Fah: 238-9618
Tun: Ok then bye
Dao goes to Fah.
Dao: Where is P'Tun going?
Fah: Why do u want to know?
Dao: Hey! Tun is my husband!
Fah: Not YET! You're not even wearing the wedding ring and he's not too!
Dao: Hey TELL ME WHERE TUN IS GOING!
Fah: Really want to know? Tun is saving the one he loves!!
Dao: AHHHHHHHH!!The one Tun loves is me and I'm right HERE!
Fah: Nope if you're the one he loves then why did he run away from the wedding?
Dao raises her hand going to slap Fah. Tun's mom come out.
Mrs. T: DAO!
Dao turns back
Dao: mom! What are u doing here?
Mrs. T: Dao! Why are u so slow? Where's Tun? You both need to say the speech and cut the cake and get blessings!
Dao starts to cry
Dao: Mae! Tun ran away
Mrs. T: what? Tun ran away?
Dao: That girl knows why Tun ran. I ask her but she won't answer!
Mrs. Thanapol goes to Fah.
Mrs. T: Where is my son?
Fah: He went to help my friend. She got kidnapped
Dao: She's lying!! She helped Tun get away!Tun ran away with Low class MESAYA!
Fah: Hey Don't LIE!!
Mrs. T: What?? Tun ran with the girl that u told me he likes? Mesaya?
Dao: Yes Mae! She has been planning to steal Tun from me! I won't let them do this MAE!!
Mrs. T: Tell me where is my son and your friend!
Fah: I don't know!
Mrs. Thanapol slaps Fah
Mrs. T: I ask you where is Mesaya and TUN!
Fahh starts to cry
Fah: I really don't know
Mrs. Thanapol was about to slap Fah again. Mr. Thanapol comes out.
Mr. thanapol: Stop! What are u doing?
Dao runs to hug him
Dao: Pho! Tun ran with Mesaya!
Mr. T: What?!
Mrs. T: Your son ran away with that girl! Her friend is the one over there!
Mr. Thanapol walks to Fah.
mr. T: U are?
Fah: I'm Fah, Mesaya's friend
Mr. T: Tell me Fah, where is Tun and Mesaya?
Fah: I don't know!
Dao: She's lying Pho!
Mrs. T: Don't believe her!
Fah:: I'm telling the truth! Mesaya got kidnapped and Tun went to help her. I know nothing more!
Mr. Thanapol: I trust u! Thank you
Fah: Thanks for believing me
Mrs. T: Why do u believe her?
Mr. T: Because she's not lying and it doesn't matter because Tun Ran Away
Dao's parents came out
Dao's mom: Dao why are u crying?
Dao: Mae! Tun ran away! He ran away!
Dm: What?
Mr. T: Please Calm down, we will try to get Tun back, so please relax
Dao's dad: REALX??If u guys don't want my daughter then why didn't u guys tell us?
Mrs. T: Sorry I don't know why Tun would do this
Mr. Thanapol calls Tun.
Tun: Hello?
Mr. T:Where are u?
Tun: Dao and his parents are really mad! U need to come back!
Tun: Dad! I can't! Mesaya needs help! Got to go! BYE!
Mr. T: Tun! TUN!
Dd: What did he say?
Mr. T: He says he can't come back because he loves someone else not Dao
Dao: NOOO!!!NOt True!!
Dao runs away crying
Dm and Dd: Dao!!Come back! Where wil we hide our face?
Mrs. T: I'm so sorry! I can't believe Tun will do this!
Fah takes a taxi home. Tun chases the van. The van parks at a casino. They carry Mesaya into the casino and takes her into a dark room. Tun follows them. The guys tied Mesaya up. Her dad comes out. Mesaya wakes up.
Mesaya: PHO!!
Md: Mesaya, I don't want to do this but this is the only way for me
Mesaya: So u planned this out?
Md: NO, not me!
A guy comes out.
Guy: ME!
Mesaya: Who are u?
Guy: I am the person that your dad owes money to!
Mesaya: Then why am I involved?
Guy: Because your dad said you will pay me
Mesaya: what?
Md: You say u will give me money
Mesaya: That's why u kidnap me?
Guy: I was the one who wanted to kidnap u!
The old man touches Mesaya's face.
Mesaya: Don't TOUCH ME!
The guy slaps Mesaya and her lip is bleeding.
Guy: I like quiet girls! U dont' have to pay me. Just be my 4th wife!
Mesaya: Never will I marry someone ugly like U!
The guy grabs Mesaya
Md: Please don't do anything to her!
The guy points to Mesaya's dad. The guys hit him.
Mesaya: Don't hit him! I will give u money!
Guy: I don't want money, I want u!
Mesaya: that.......you'll have to let me decide
The guys drag Mesaya's dad with them
Md: Run daughter! RUN!
Guy: SHUT UP!
The guys hit him again
Mesaya screaming and crying: NOOOO!! Please don't hit my dad!
They left her alone in the room. Tun opens the door and runs to Mesaya.
Tun: Mesaya! Are u ok?
Mesaya: Who are u?
Tun: It's me TUN!
Tun hugs Mesaya
Tun: are u ok?
Mesaya: Why are u here? What about your wedding?
Tun: don't say anything else. Let's get out of here!
Tun unties Mesaya and holds her hand. He opens the door but some guys were there.
Guys: Where are u going?
Tun lets go of Mesaya's hand and stars fighting the guys.
Mesaya: Tun be careful! AHHHH!
Two guys were carrying a stick. Tun blocks and take the sticks from them. He hits them. Then the someone opened the door. It was the old man. The old man was holding a gun.
Old man: let go of the girl!
Tun: Never!
Tun runs and tries to get the gun. Then the gun fired and someone got shot.
Mesaya: Tun!!
The old man fell to the ground bleeding. Mesaya runs to hug Tun.
Tun: I'm ok, are u alright?
Mesaya: yeah
Tun grabs Mesaya's hand
Tun: Let's go!
They both got out of the casino and got in Tun's car. Some guys were chasing them.
TO BE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Preview: Dao goes to the wine bar. Tun and Mesaya goes to a place. Dao has a plan with San. Mesaya gets shot!
 

lakornsrok

sarNie Adult
Sorry Readers;i'm so busyy with high school.
all these transferring and end of the school year.
gossh.so tired!

Chapter 20 of Forever Love
At The Wine Bar: Dao is sad and angry at Tun for leaving the wedding.
Dao: I will never forgive you Mesaya!I Hate U! You StolE TUN FrOm ME!
San comes by.
San: I thought a beautiful girl like u is marrying
Dao: Shut UP! It's all Mesaya's FAULT!SHE Will Die IN MY HANDS!
San: CALM DOWN GIRL!
Dao: I won't forgive the girl who stole Tun from me!
San: Do u need any help?
Dao: IF u want to help me!
San:Of course but I'd like a favor first
Tun checks to see if they are still chasing them. They were gone.
Mesaya: They're not chasing us anymore!
Tun: That's right!
Tun drives to a place.
Mesaya: Where are you taking me?
Tun: To a safe place
Mesaya: I want TO GO HoME!
Tun: You can't go home because the bad guys will know where u are!
Mesaya: I don't care. Take me HOME NOW!
Tun: No! Come out!
Tun drags Mesaya out of his car.
Mesaya: Let go of my hand!
Tun ignores her and drags her to a beautiful cabin.
Mesaya: Hey! Where is this?
Tun:A friend of Mines place
Mesaya: TUN! Take me home NOW! I wanna go HOME!
Tun calls to his father
Mr. T: Tun! Where are u? Dao ran away and her parents are really angry! YOU need to come Back NOW!
Tun: I can't dad! I'm at my friend's cabin. Hello? Hello?
Mr. T: Hello? Tun!
Tun: Tai! My phone is DEAD!
Mesaya: Give me your phone! I need to call Aunt Pom and Fah!
Tun: My phone is dead
Mesaya: Liar!
She grabs his phone and turns it on. It turned on then dead.
Tun: See? Told u it was dead
Mesaya runs into the cabin and looks if there are any phones. There were none.
Mesaya: Take me HOME NOW!
Tun: You can't!
Mesaya: Yes I can!
Mesaya tries to get the keys from Tun's shirt pocket.
Mesaya: Give me the KEYS!
Tun: what are u doing?
Mesaya: Give me the keys!
Tun: NO!
Mesaya chases Tun and they both fall on top of each other. They look at each other. Mesaya grabs the keys from Tun's pocket. She starts running to the car.
Tun: Mesaya! Come BACK!
Tun chases Mesaya and she opens the car door. Tun closes it and pulls Mesaya.
Tun: you really can't go
Mesaya: Why? Nee Let go! I don't want to be tortured by U!
Tun kisses her on the lips.
Tun: You can't go!
Tun steals the keys from her and walks back to the cabin.
Mesaya in her mind: What just happened? OMG I'm being! I almost got to go home! What did I just do? Did my heart softened?
Mesaya goes to the cabin. Tun sits down.
Mesaya: I...........
Tun: Here are clothes for u to change
Mesaya takes it. It was a long skirt and a shirt. She goes in to the restroom to change. Mesaya comes out.
Mesaya: Why do I need to change?
Tun: Do you want to wear that dress the whole time?
Mesaya: No
Tun: That's why you change.....
Mesaya goes outside and walks around. Tun runs after her.
Tun: Where are u going?
Mesaya: I'm going for a walk, wanna come?
Tun: Sure
They both walked around talking and laughing.
Mesaya: I like this air and it feels peaceful. It reminds me of my mom. I miss her.
Tun: What happened to your mom?
Mesaya: She died
Tun: Sorry for the lost
Mesaya: Thanks! It's ok
Mesaya sighs
Tun: Let's go back, it's getting dark
Mesaya: Ok
They both went back to the cabin. Food was ready for them.
Mesaya: Did you do this?
Tun: No I didn't. Oh I remembered my friend told a maid to do this
Mesaya: Where's the maid?
Tun: She probably left already
Mesaya: Oh then let's eat
They both ate. After they ate Tun takes Mesaya to a room.
Tun: This is your room
Mesaya: For now
Tun: Yeah for now
Mesaya: You can go out now. I want to sleep!
Tun: Ok good night!
Mesaya closes the door and goes to the bed. She sleeps and hears like something is hissing under the bed. She looks under. There was nothing. She went back to sleep. Then, the hissing come closer.
Mesaya: What is that sound?
She looks down and sees a big rattle snake slithering.
Mesaya: Ahhh!!!
She runs out of the room. Tun gets up and runs to Mesaya's room. Mesaya bumps into Tun and hugs him.
Mesaya: I'm scared!Help!
Tun: What is it?
Mesaya: There is a snake in my room! I'm really scared!
Tun: Really? Let me go see then!
Mesaya holds on to Tun tight.
Mesaya: No, don't go! Don't leave me alone here. I'm scared!
Tun hugs her.
Tun: Don't be scared ok?Come you can sleep in my room
Mesaya follows Tun and she sleeps on his bed. He sleeps on the sofa.
Mesaya: Uhhhh... Tun u can sleep on the bed too, but just get a pillow to separate our space
Tun: Are u sure?
Mesaya: Yeah I am. I trust u
Tun gets his pillow and makes a gap to separate them. They both sleep. The next day when Mesaya wakes up she was sleeping in Tun's arms.
Mesaya: What happened?
Then she remembered about yesterday night. Tun opens his eyes and Mesaya closes her eyes pretending to be asleep. Tun sees Mesaya sleeping in his arms. He smiled and kisses her forehead. Tun carefully moves his arms and tiptoe out of the room. Mesaya gets up and touches her forehead. She walks to the restroom and bumps into Tun.
Tun: where are u going?
Mesaya: Hong nam
Tun: Oh ok
Mesaya quickly washes her face and brushes her teeth using the toothbrush Tun gave her. Then she walks and sit on a sofa.
Tun: Are u hungry?
Mesaya: Not really
Tun: I'm cooking so wait for awhile
Mesaya: Ok, do u want me to help?
Tun: Sure
Mesaya walks to the dining room and helps him. Tun gets some powder and sprinkles it on Mesaya
Mesaya: Hey! What are u doing?
Tun: OH! Sorrry I was going to sprinkle it on the meat!
Mesaya cuts garlics and throw it at Tun.
Tun: What was that for?
Mesaya: I tried to put it in the pan!
Tun: LIAR!
Mesaya runs around the kitchen and Tun chases her. Then Tun grabs her hand and they both looked into each other's eyes. Tun was coming close to her to kiss her. Mesaya moved and kissed him on the cheek.
Mesaya: Let's go back to cooking!
Tun follows her. Mesaya cuts the meat and Tun fries it. After they finish cooking they ate.
Mesaya: Wow, Tun! You're a good cooker!
Tun: really?
Mesaya: It's good!
They both eat.
Tun: let's go to a place to cal home
Mesaya: Ok
They both left the cabin after eating.

In the car: Tun turns on the radio. Mesaya's favorite song came out. It was the song “ Tut Jai Mai Wai” by Bie Sukrit.
Tun: Do you know this song?
Mesaya: Yeah I like it!
Tun: really? I do too. Let's sing together!
Mesaya: No! I don't want to!
Tun: Come on!
Mesaya: NO!
Tun: Please! Come on just sing it once!
Mesaya: ok then
Tun: ready?
Mesaya: yeah
Tun: 1,2,3
Tun and Mesaya: Tut jai mai wai Ting tur mai long mai ro mchun pen arai piang kae kid hua jai gaw sun wun wai
Tub stops singing and stares at Mesaya sing.
Mesaya: gub tur kon nee chun gaw mai kow jai mai roo chun taung mauhn arai mai kow hua jai tua eng meaun gun
Tun claps.
Tun: Wow, you're a good singer
Mesaya: U lied to me. You didn't even sing with me!
Tun: I did for a bit....
Mesaya: This song reminds me of someone
Tun: Who is it?
Mesaya: Why should I tell u?
Tun: I think I already know....San
Mesaya: Yeah San.HAppy now?
Mesaya in her mind: Why don't u understand me? Of course it's u that this song remind me of
Tun drives and sees a phone booth. He gets out. He puts money in and calls to his dad.
Mr. T: Hello?
Tun: Hi dad!
Mr. T: Tun! Where are u?
Tun: I'm going to come home now
Mr. T: Yeah come and talk to Dao's parents. They are angry at you and Dao didn't even go home!
Tun: what? Dao didn't go home?
Mr. T: You need to come home now!
Tun: Dad! I love Mesaya! I have never loved Dao!
Mr. T: Don't tell it to me! Tell it to Dao's parents!
Tun: Ok dad I'll see you in a bit
Mrs. T: Who u talking to?
Mr. T: Tun, he's coming now with Mesaya
Mrs. T: What? Why?
Mr. T: Our son loves that girl and you can't stop him. He doesn't love Dao!
Mr. Thanapol walks to Dao's parents.
Mr. T: Tun is coming now!
Dao's mom: GooD!
Mesaya gets out of Tun's car and calls Fah.
Fah: Hello?
Mesaya: Fah!!
Fah: Mesaya are u ok? What about Tun?
Mesaya: I'm fine and ima come home
Fah: really?? What happened?
Mesaya: I was kidnapped by some guys because my dad told them that I would pay them
Fah: How can your dad do this?
Mesaya: I know. I'll see u in a bit and don't tell Aunt Pom about it!
Fah: ok I won't
Mesaya gets in Tun's car and Tun drives to his house.
Mesaya: Why are you taking me to your house?
Tun: Come!
He opens the door and grabs her hand. They get inside. Dao's parents were waiting for Tun. Everyone was surprised when they see Mesaya. Mesaya tries to make Tun let go of her hand but he wouldn't.
Mrs. T: Tun! What are u doing?
Tun: I want to tell u all that this girl next to me is the one I love!
Mesaya: What?
Dao's mom: What about Dao?
Dao walks in.
Dao: I'm nothing to him!!
Tun: Dao!
Dao's dad: What's going on?
Dao: MAE! PHO! Tun left our wedding because of this girl!
Dao starts to cry.
Tun: Dao, I never loved you that way. But you will always be a friend to me
Dao: I don't want to be friends! I want to your wife! MESAYA! I HATE U! YOU STOLE TUN FROM ME!!!!!!
Mesaya: NO, not true Dao! I didn't mean to! Sorry!
Dao: SHUT UP!
Tun: Dao, I'm sorry for everything!
Dao: I HATE U TOO! You pick this low class girl over mE!
Dao's dad: Dao calm down ok?
Dao: Mae! Pho! If I can't be with the one I love then that person must not get it either!
Dao takes a gun.
Dao's mom: What are u doing Dao? Put that away!
Dao: Tun, if I can't have u then no one should have u too!
Mr. T: Dao! Don't do that! We can Talk!
Dao: No! Tun doesn't want to marry me! This is the only way so I won't be hurt!
Mesaya moves away from Tun.
Mesaya: You cancelled your wedding?
Tun: yes because of u! I like and love u!I don't love Dao! I love u!
He kisses Mesaya in front of everyone even Dao. Mesaya runs out.
Tun: Mesaya! Mesaya!
Dao shoots up in the air.
Mesaya: Tun!
Mesaya runs back.
Dao: Tun u will have to die because u don't love me!
Dao's mom: Don't cause a sin DAO!
Dao's dad: Stop!
Tun: Shoot me then Dao! If u really hate me, shoot ME!
Dao: Don't challenge me TUN!
Mr. T: Tun, what are u doing?
Dao shoots Tun but Mesaya runs back and block Tun. Mesaya got shot. Tun catches Mesaya.
Tun: Mesaya! Mesaya! Are u ok?
Mesaya: T.. Tun....
Mesaya closed her eyes. Dao starts laughing.
Dao: Hahaha!!I'm so happy that Mesaya died! Haha.
Tun: Dao YOU!
Then there were polices
police: Dao put down your gun!
Dao looks back and see the polices
Mr. T: Tun take Mesaya to the hospital NOW!
Tun: Kap
Tun carries Mesaya to his car and drives to the nearest hospital. Polices surround Dao.
Dao: Don't come closer! Or I will Shoot U GUYS!
Police: U have been suspected of killing the guy San Chanapol. You will need to come to the police station with us!
Dao: HAHAHAH!! That's right! I killed that guy! He was a dirty BASTARD!HAha! I KILLED HIM!!AHHAHA!!
Dao's mom: How can u have such an evil heart?
The polices holds Dao and take the gun from her.
Dao: Let go! Mom and Dad HELP!
The polices arrested her and took her to the police station.
Dao's parents cried.
Dao's dad: She needs to go to jail for her sin!
Dao's mom: My daughter Dao

At The Hospital: After a couple of hours the doctor comes out. Tun is crying. He rushes inside but the doctor wouldn't let him go in.

TO BE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry No Preview!!
Wat u think will happen???
 

huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
omggg, sooo sad.
IHateDao!
Omgg, what is wrong with her? She killed Mesaya!
Can't she see that Tun doesn't like her, he loves Mesaya.
good job, lakornsrok.
thanks for the update, i missed you !
 

lakornsrok

sarNie Adult
thanks HJK!
i missed you too:)

Chapter 21 the last of Forever Love:)
Tun: Lie to Mesaya that you want to meet her at the Roses Garden ok?
Fah: But I never lie to Mesaya! And what if she doesn't come?
Tun: U have to make her come
Fah: O....ok then I can try
Tun: Other than that leave the rest to me
Fah: Ok when then?
Tun: Tomorrow at 6:00 p.m.
Fah: Don't worry, she will be there
Tun: Thanks Fah
Fah: Yeah you're welcome
Fah walks out. Tun goes for a walk and sees Mesaya's dad.
Mesaya's dad: Tun!
Tun: What are u doing here?
Mesaya's dad: I want to see Mesaya! I'm sorry!
Tun: Mesaya doesn't want to see u!
Md: Please! I want to apologize to her! Please let me see her!
Tun: You almost killed her and u want to see her?
Mesaya's dad starts to cry.
Md: I have to see her before it's too late!
Tun: Too late for what?
Md: I can die any day because the people that I owe money to are chasing after me. I want to tell Mesaya why I left her before it's too late
Tun: How can I trust U?
Md: I'm telling u the truth. I'm not lying, If I am u can kill me
Tun: Ok then I will let you see Mesaya
Md: Really? Thank U!
Tun: If u help me though
Md: Anything! At least I get to see her
Tun: Ok then,, come to Roses Garden tomorrow at 6:00 p.m. At the Cedar and Clinton street. You know where it is?
Md: yeah I went gambling there once
Tun: Ok good. Come and You will have to act like you're going to kill me. This is the only way that Mesaya will come. But you can't tell Mesaya this is just an act.
Md: Ok I got it! What if there are people looking?
Tun: There won't be any because I'm reserving the whole place
Md: Ok see u tomorrow then
Tun: yeah and hopefully u show how much u are sorry
The next day Tun calls Roses Garden.
Roses Garden Employee: Hello, Roses garden. May I help u?
Tun: Yes I want to reserve that place for the whole day tomorrow and make sure it's nice
RGE: your name please?
Tun: Tun Thanapol
RGE: Phone?
Tun: 458-9621
RGE: Ok then we will call u when we're ready
Tun: Thank u, Bye
Tun goes to the Jewels Store to buy a ring. He walks in and goes to the counter.
Tun: Can I look at a wedding ring for my girlfriend?
Jewels Employee: sure, here u go
Tun gets the diamond ring and looks at it.
Tun: I'll buy this one
Je: Ok
Tun pays for the ring and the Jewels Employee boxes the ring and gives it to Tun.
Je: Good luck on your proposal!
Tun: Thanks!
Tun smiles and puts the box in his pocket. Then he drives to Roses Garden. When he gets there, many people were decorating the place.
Tun: Make sure it's nice ok?
RgE: I know, we will make it pretty. Why do u need this place for?
Tun: I'm proposing to my girlfriend tonight!
Rge: Awwww you're so romantic! I wish I was her!
Tun: Thanks!
Tun gets in his car and drives home.

At Mesaya's House: Mesaya thinks about Tun.
Mesaya: What if he really waited for me? Tun sorry this is the only way that's best for both of us.
She flash backed to when she blocked Tun.
Mesaya: I'm happy that I got the chance to protect u. I hope that was our last time seeing eachother
It was 5:00 p.m. Tun puts on his tuxedo and and drives to Roses Garden. When he gets out of his car, no one was there. But the place was decorated nicely. Lights were hanged eveywhere lighting the place. Dinner was prepared on a table. It was 6:00 p.m. Mesaya's dad came and brought a rope with him.
Tun: Ok tie me up with that rope
Md: huh?
Tun: Tie ME UP!
Md: Ok!
HE ties Tun. Fah calls Mesaya to meet her at Roses Garden.
Fah: Hey Mesaya! Can u meet me at Roses Garden?
Mesaya: Now?
Fah: yeah and wear a dress! Put on make up too!
Mesaya: Why?
Fah: B... Because we should hangout more often that's why!
Mesaya: oh ok
Mesaya puts on a pink dress with diamonds on. Then, she puts on make up and wears her high heels. Tun calls Fah.
Fah: Tun?
Tun whispers in Mesaya's dad's ear. Mesaya's dad grabs the phone.
Md: Tell Mesaya to come or Tun will DIE!
Tun in the background: Don't tell Mesaya that I'm at the Roses Garden!
Mesaya's dad hangs up.
Md: How is that? Good?
Tun: NICE!
Md: what do I do when she comes?
Tun: you have to pretend that you're going to kill me ok?
Md: how?
Tun: uhhh get the knife on that table
Mesaya's dad gets it.
Tun: When she comes,pretend that you're going to kill me with it!
Md: Got it
Fah to her self: Tai LEO! What am I going to do? I have to call Mesaya!
Fah calls Mesaya.
Mesaya: Hello Fah? I'm ready!
Fah in a scared voice: Mesaya! You....... You......OMG!
Mesaya worried: What is it Fah? Calm down and talk slowly
Fah: Tun...he got captured by your dad and is going to get kill if you don't go help him!!
Mesaya: What? Tun is going to get kill? Where is he?
Fah: Roses Garden
Mesaya: Why is he over there?
Fah: IDK!I'll come pick u up and we'll go to Roses Garden together ok?
Mesaya: Ok hurry up though
Fah gets to Mesaya's house and they go to Roses Garden. It was pretty. Fah calls Tun. Tun tells Mesaya's dad to answer it.
Md: Hello?
Fah: Where are u?
Mesaya grabs the phone
Mesaya: Don't do anything to TUN!
Md: Mesaya?
Tun: Mesaya? Don't come! Go away! Let me DIE!
Mesaya: Don't worry Tun! I'll come help U!
She hangs up.
Mesaya: Let's go Fah
they get inside. It was beautiful. Mesaya runs and sees her dad and Tun. Tun was tied up.
Mesaya: Tun!
Tun: Mesaya! Don't COME!
Mesaya: Let Tun GO! I'm here! Let him GO!
Md: I'm going to kill him in front of u!
Mesaya's dad points the knife at Tun.
Md: If u come close, Tun will die
Mesaya: Dad, if this is the last thing I ask from u, would u do it for me?
Fah: Let Tun GO! Why would u do this to your daoughter?
Md: Because I love her
Fah: This is what u do for someone u love?
Md: Tun told me to do this so I can see Mesaya
Tun: Tai LEO!
Fah and Mesaya: What? Tun did this?
Md: yes.........I mean NO!
Mesaya looks at Tun angrily.
Mesaya: Is it true?
Tun looks away
Tun: Uhhh.. May I.......
Mesaya: I Don't want to hear it!
Mesaya's dad throws the knife on the ground and hugs Mesaya.
Md: I'm sorry Mesaya!
Mesaya pushes him.
Md: I want to tell u why I LEFT when ur mother died before it's too LATE!
Tun: Your dad is being chased by people that he owes money to
Md: When your mom was dying, she told me to take care of u. I couldn't do it because we were so poor that we didn't have any money to pay for your mom's hospital debts. After your mom died, I didn't want u to have a poor father like me. I didn't want u to feel bad having a father that Is useless and can't do anything to help. So I decided to leave.
Mesaya's dad and Mesaya cries hugging each other.
Mesaya: Dad, I will never think that. At least you are at my side, nothing will be better
Md: I'm sorry daughter. I thought u will think I'm a helpless father so I left. Sorry!
Mesaya: dad, sorry for everything I did to u
Md: It's all my fault. I understand!
Fah starts to cry too and hugs both of them. Mesaya's dad was leaving.
Mesaya: Why are u leaving me again dad?
Md: Sorry but I have to go far from here
Mesaya's dad leaves and Mesaya cries. Fah goes untie Tun. Tun walks to Mesaya.
Tun: Mesaya I want to.....
Mesaya: I don't want to hear
Tun: You have to give me a chance too
Mesaya: You lied to me using my father and you want me to forgive u?
Fah: Mesaya, you have to forgive Tun too. He did all these things just for u. He even reserved this place for u only! Isn't this enough?
Fah walks away.
Mesaya: Fah, wait for me! Fah!
Fah drove her car and left.
Mesaya: Fah! Don't go!
Tun follows Mesaya. Mesaya goes back to Roses Garden. She looks at the lights and the garden was filled with different colors of roses.
Mesaya: It's so pretty!
She picks a red rose and smells it. Tun picks a pink rose. Mesaya turns back and her red rose fell. Tun puts the pink rose on her ear.
Tun: You lOOK BEAUTIFUL TODAY!
Mesaya blushes. She feels guilty and doesn't know what she should do.
Tun: Mesaya, I'm sorry. Sorry for everything. I just wanted u to forgive me and for everything to be the same again!!BUt.......
Mesaya hugs Tun. Tun was surprised.
Mesaya: Sorry! I didn't know u will do this! I didn't want u to get hurt because of ME!
Tun hugs her too.
Tun: Mesaya! I LOVE YOU!
Mesaya pulls away and looks away.
Tun: What about u?
Mesaya: I......I.......
Tun starts to walk away.
Mesaya: I want to tel u that I LOVE YOU TOO!!!
Tun turns back and smiles. HE chases Mesaya.
Tun: You're trying to make me mad?
Mesaya and Tun falls to the grass. Tun look into Mesaya's eyes. He was about to kiss her. She closes her eyes. He kisses her on the cheek. Mesaya pushes him.
Mesaya: Why u trick me?
Tun: U want a real kiss?
Mesaya sits down on the chair.
Tun: Today, I prepared this for u
Mesaya smiles and Tun sits down too. They both eat.
After they ate, both of them looked at the stars together.
Tun: It's really beautiful today!
Mesaya: yeah it is
Mesaya closes her eyes feeling the breezy air. Tun holds Mesaya's shoulder. When she opens her eyes, Tun was coming closer to her. Their lips were really close. Then Tun kissed her. It was a long and 1st sweet kiss that they ever had. Then Tun moved away and holds Mesaya's hand. They both walked.
Mesaya: I will never want this night to end! I will remember it forever!
Tun: It will be like this forever if u are with me
Tun puts his arm around Mesaya holding her waist from the back. The Next morning Tun called Mesaya.
Mesaya: Hello?
Tun: What are u doing?
Mesaya: I just woke up
Tun: Let's go to a place together
Mesaya: Where?
Tun: You'll know, I'll come pick u up
Mesaya gets dress and goes outside. Tun was waiting for her. He gives her a bouquet of roses.
Mesaya: Wow! So Pretty! Thanks!
Tun drives to the beach.
Mesaya: Beach?
Tun: Yeah
Mesaya: Why did u take me here?
Tun: Don't ask, follow me
Tun puts a blindfold on Mesaya covering her eyes.
Mesay: Nee! WHAt are u doing?
Tun: Shhh!! Take my arm!
Mesaya holds Tun's arm and he walks her to the ocean. Mesaya can feel the waves. Then she removes the blindfold. She looks at the ocean. It was blue and pretty. There was a big heart made out of rose petals.
Mesaya:It's so pretty
She hugs Tun.
Mesaya: Did u do it?
Tun: N.......Yes for U!
Tun and Mesaya enters inside the heart.
Tun: Give me your hand
Tun holds both of her hands.
Tun: Mesaya, will you marry me?
Mesaya smiles happily.
Mesaya: Of course!
Tun takes out the ring and puts it on her finger. They both kissed. Suddenly, they hear clapping. They looked and there was a lot of people there. Mr. And Mrs. Thanapol, Aunt Pom, Fah, and other people were there clapping and smiling. Mesaya blushes.
She whispers to Tun: Did u plan this out?
Tun: What if I say Yes?
Mesaya: Then u will see
Mesaya starts hitting him.
Tun: hey Stop!
The others looked at them happily. Then Tun carries Mesaya and kisses her on the cheek.
Mesaya: Stop! It's embarrassing!! Ahh!!
Tun puts her down.
Tun: I will love you til I die!
Mesaya: I will love u til there is no me!
They both kissed again.
People: OOOOO!!!
Both of them laughed.
Tun: You will be my forever lOve only!!
Mesaya: I love U Tun!
They Hugged Looking at the Beach!!!

THE END!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for reading Forever Love!!HOPe u Like it!!Muahs!!Luv u!!!!!
If U wanna read Love is Possible/ Possible Love please tell me what part u on so I can send u the current part..Thanks FOR READING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!But ima not finish with LIP!!SO Please BE Patient Peepos!!!!!
 

huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
OMG! OMG! OMG!
can't believe it's already done.
what a wodnerful fanfic. I love Aof && Kwan!
Tun&&Mesaya forever! wow...,
they were so cute, kissing at the end.
haha, i lovee this chapter. so sad it's done, but wow...
haha :D i'm glad mesaya's dad told everything. :D
Dao won't be in the way anymore, yippeee.
btw, i wanna read LIP, geesh, update it soon.
fine, ill be patient. btw, take your time.
i lovee your fanfic :)

Love Is Possible Rocks !
 

mainhiathao

sarNie Granny
wow the ending is perfect, going to the ocean is a good idea. love the ending especially with two sweet kiss.
 

yoopeurtur

sarNie Egg
great fanfic
even though i never commented in the past
it was just because i was reading it off of huajaikaungtur's user
anyways can't wait to finish reading Love is Possible
im actually not sure what part i ended up on
so i might just read it over for the fun of it
hope to see it updated soon
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
this was a nice story. there were some times where I was mad that Mesaya believed San and misunderstand Tun, but I'm super happy that everything worked out. great job, i will start on Love is Possible as soon as I can. thanks for writing this ff ^^

by the way, did you forget to post ch. 13 and 18 here? Maybe I can't count lol.
 
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